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GodGirl13 · 04-22-2011, 07:47 PM

This is a great story idea!! I love Harry Potter and Percy Jackson stories, so this is the best of both worlds for me. One thing that might make it better, though, is not to use so many run-on sentences. But it's really good so far!

~Noelle

04-22-2011, 07:47 PM	#4 (permalink)
GodGirl13 Fire Slug Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: In the TARDIS Posts: 144 Hogwarts RPG Name: Emerald "Emmy" Jane Fallows First Year	This is a great story idea!! I love Harry Potter and Percy Jackson stories, so this is the best of both worlds for me. One thing that might make it better, though, is not to use so many run-on sentences. But it's really good so far! ~Noelle