Hello Sophie. I was so happy to see you wrote more. I loved the chapter, and of course the reason why is that your writing is so expressive. I can feel Ginny's excitement of going home and on to Rome. I can feel her worry building as she looks for Harry. I could feel her heart drop when she saw his bed made and not slept in, I can feel her anxiety when she finds out he is with Dumbledore for whatever reason, and I can also feel her relief to know he is safe sense he is with Dumbledore. But, also at this point she is worried because it isn't like him to not say anything to her about having to go. The thing that worries me the most is;
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But Ron and Hermione didn’t have the look of wonder that I had. They looked worried and scared every time I said Harry’s name. They were keeping something from me. I just knew it!
Now, Sophie, please.... study hard and do well on your exams, then get right back to this and let us know what is going on! I'll be waiting for your next chapter.
