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crookshanks_kitty · 03-08-2011, 06:23 AM

Oh.my.god! This is amazing! You're first chapter has a very good start. It is very intriguing and keeps the readers interested to the very end.

Now I'm curious to know how the girl get dissapeared, will someone find out about her condition, and HOW does Scorpius sense her presense??? Interesting to see that you actually included him in your story. It's nice to hear about characters that have not been covered much in the book.

So here I am, you can officially count me as one of your readers.

PAMS! (please?)

03-08-2011, 06:23 AM	#3 (permalink)
crookshanks_kitty Firecrab Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 795 Hogwarts RPG Name: Parmis Fifth Year	carrot lover (not) // torturously friendly // secret spy // HP nerd // <3 sparkles // who am I? Oh.my.god! This is amazing! You're first chapter has a very good start. It is very intriguing and keeps the readers interested to the very end. Now I'm curious to know how the girl get dissapeared, will someone find out about her condition, and HOW does Scorpius sense her presense??? Interesting to see that you actually included him in your story. It's nice to hear about characters that have not been covered much in the book. So here I am, you can officially count me as one of your readers. PAMS! (please?)