Originally Posted by steflegan

You had better keep writing this story!!!!! I am so hooked! I've always wanted to see a kind of forbidden romance between Draco and Hermione, and I've always wanted to see a softer, more vulnerable side of Draco. The Voldemort-dream scenes are chilling- I love them! Can't wait to see you develop them.

I know you've freaked out before when you felt you had nothing new to offer- please don't feel that way. Story writing is a process- sometimes you can see the whole story beginning to end and just need to fill in the details, and sometimes the story unfolds even to you as you write it.

You've got Ron down just perfectly- I think we can all see him reacting exactly as you've written!

I've been laughing at myself because I find myself blushing along with Hermione... could be my forever-long crush on Draco coming out.

Are you going to develop more with Draco's relationship to his mom and dad? I once pictured an argument between them where Lucius says "You baby that boy!" to which Narcissa retorts "And you bully him!" I'd love to see the relationship dynamics between all three of them.

And if that's not the direction you take your story, that's totally cool- maybe I'll get up the guts to post a story myself!

Anyway- fantastic work! Keep it up!