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Originally Posted by
Connie
Hello Emily. I think the story ended perfectly for a sequel if you decide you're going to do one. If not then we can sort out all kinds of scenarios for them ourselves. But I think you'd be the best one to plot that story for it to be the best.
Thanks, Connie
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As for this one:I really love the way you showed him here. He didn't come across trying to sound all knowing, and everything was planned to happen the way it did. He thinks it's funny that the one unplanned thing that happened was his undoing. And that is what really happens in instances of mischief and madness. They become arrogant and think they are untouchable.
Ah, yes, I agree; they really do seem arrogant and what not, but Bobby will admit to things, and he never gives up...
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This part sent shivers up and down my spine.
Really? I almost took it out because I thought people would think it sounded stupid... :Erm:
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Great story Emily. And you can call it a success by my accounts also. I'll be watching for your sequel.
Thanks, Connie
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Originally Posted by
harita
wow...now that was quite an end...with Bobby back...cool...

loved you writing...keep writing more of it...
Thank you, Harita! I think I will...
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Originally Posted by
KatielovesHP
Love you too!!

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This is the most evilist cliffie I have ever read!! *grr*
Hehehe, I didn't think you guys would like that...
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I can't believe I missed so much but I had loads of homework and stuff that I don't enjoy but I never gave up on this
Well, that's good to know, and no worries, I understand
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You're such a good writer!!
Thanks, Katie
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Originally Posted by
Morag
Emily, I still personally do not know what to say. I'm still pretttty shocked. You posted the Epilouge way to soon for me cause I've not been on as much but I am still....like...OMG!!!
But I thought I should let you know that I can now speak so its just to tell you that it was AWESOME!
Your a star!
Keep writing Dear!
Thanks, Sophie
So, it seems everybody wants a sequel, to find out what happens, and after much consideration and playing around with the end of the story, I think I'm going to give you one... But would you guys mind if I still used this thread, since I don't feel like starting a new thread and coming up with a new title?
Annnndddd, I would back up to them just arriving at the Burrow that day...
Let me know what you think!