Hello Emily. I think the story ended perfectly for a sequel if you decide you're going to do one. If not then we can sort out all kinds of scenarios for them ourselves. But I think you'd be the best one to plot that story for it to be the best. As for this one:
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And that left the club, which really was a matter of circumstance. Bobby had admitted he hadn’t planned that one—that it just happened.
I really love the way you showed him here. He didn't come across trying to sound all knowing, and everything was planned to happen the way it did. He thinks it's funny that the one unplanned thing that happened was his undoing. And that is what really happens in instances of mischief and madness. They become arrogant and think they are untouchable.
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“I couldn’t sleep. I feel like something bad is going to happen today. And I keep hearing somebody laugh meanly,” she whispered with round eyes.
This part sent shivers up and down my spine.
Yes, in my opinion I think we deserve a sequel written by you, and not our imaginations.
Great story Emily. And you can call it a success by my accounts also. I'll be watching for your sequel.
