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Old 01-20-2011, 06:38 AM   #186 (permalink)
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Hello Emily. I think it was great! It's a perfect way to show true love from Charlie to Christelle. Of course he would be the one to recognize Bobby. He made it his business to assure himself that she would be in his life for the rest of his life. I think because Charlie didn't know the guy as well as Christelle, he was able to recognize Bobby's profile (psycho) through his disguise. And plus, Charlie was the last one to see him. (When he hurt him at the Burrow) He probably recognized his evil laugh. Anyway, I think it's perfectly romantic for Charlie to save Christelle. Maybe the other way would have been more adventurous but, it would have been full of misery and heartache for Christelle, and I really don't think she was up to it. She was strong,, but, I think she was worn down too much for the story to be believable for her to find Charlie, and rescue him. So, I think this was the perfect way. It was wonderful.
One of my favorite parts:
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She knew it was driving Charlie crazy, but she just couldn’t. He never complained to her or anything. And so, he did the only thing he could think of to get her to feel alive again. He went to Ginny.

“Christelle Jeffries! If you don’t open this door, I will break it down!” came Ginny’s voice from outside the bedroom door. She heard someone argue with her before Ginny pounded on the door again. She wanted to hex Charlie into next week for sicking his sister on her. He didn’t fight fair.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
Great post Emily. I'll be watching for your next.
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