Heather!

Wow! I just commented on your last chapter in time! Another great chapter, Heather! I thoroughly enjoyed Ella's reaction after she woke-up from fainting. Your descriptions were very vivid and not too over the top. I can just see Ron's mouth hanging open as Ella runs past them, and Harry's raised arm as he tries to stop her to talk...

I'm glad you chose to include Ginny in Ella's little secret. I always liked her and felt her to be rather level-headed. I can't wait until Hermione starts to delve into Ella's biological mother's past.

I was happy to see that you softened Snape's image up a little bit. We all know from reading the book that he has one, and it's nice that he is going to share it with his 'daughter'. I think this relationship is really going to do a lot for Snape's character. It was easy to see that he really does love Ella, although the circumstances may prove it hard for him to show them. I like that he revealed to Ella his desire to be with her. Hmmm. again with the similarities though... Will Ella actually get to spend the summer with Snape? I mean, Harry never got to summer with Sirius...

Lastly, SIRIUS AND JEN ARE GOING TO HAVE A BABY!!! I can't wait for that to happen. Will it happen during the story? Will you focus on it at all? I can't wait!

A very informative chapter, Heather. I look forward to the next one. I need to read about Ella's adventures during the upcoming exam, and I always enjoy your take on the retelling of Harry's antics. Somehow, you always make them a little more interesting!

Great work,
Katie