Jocelynn, you know you said it isn't your favourite - well....it's mine!
I loved this chappie

Seriously
There was much more description and insight into how Gin feels. And the last bit was brilliant when they heard the thud.
Can I give a reply to the author's note? I think it should be a different little girl seen as Lily is the youngest, just make them have 4
Happy New Year
K xx