Hello ~Otty.
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A stupid house elf got the better of ten of the schools finest wizards? More like wiznots!”
1. It was Dobby; a successful rescue/ escape is what he planned and it's what he did. 2. Damian didn't stop the breakout either, so... should he expect the same punishment as his men?
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“That’s miss Mercy Excess Vex please.”

What a name! No wonder she's evil!
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The girl smiled as she saw a bodiless long white furry arm waving the smoke away from its face. Next the goggled face of a tall fat polar bear looked out and grinned at her. She would have run into the bear’s embrace but the creature had dropped on all fours and ran at the girl slamming into her and picking her up in his arms he threw her in the air and caught her on his back.
I love polar bears! Moonshadow reminds me of another polar bear in another story I'm ashamed I read, and I won't honor with mention of it's title. But, I loved the polar bear in it also.
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It was all fun and games right now but wait until Holly found out what was going on with Christmas.
Oh boy! The fun intensifies!

Great post ~Otty! I'll be watching for the next.