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I couldn't help but submit another story! I just got another idea and knew I had to submit it, so here it is. It's kind of like A Cinderella Story, but with a few tweaks here and there. Hope you enjoy it. 
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Rose Weasley ; Albus Severus Potter ; The Fat Lady, Scorpius Malfoy ; Lily Luna Potter ; Hugo Weasley ; George Weasley ; Ron Weasley ; Hermione Weasley (Granger) ; Harry Potter ; Ginny Potter (Weasley) ; Molly Weasley
- J.K. Rowling
Professor Quinn ; Elizabeth Carter ; Jen, Derek Turner ; Kelly Zambini ; Lloyd Goyle ; Herald Crabbe ; Poppy Parkinson ; Caretaker Xander ; Professor Linden ; Andrew ; Catalin ; Jenn ; Cameron Spinalie
- ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫ PLOT - ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫ STORY BANNER: Anna Banana - You did an awesome job Anna!
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I know some people hate having to look through tons of comments for new chapters (i know i do) so here are the links to each chapter! Chapter 1--Chapter 2--Chapter 3--Chapter 4--Chapter 5--Chapter 6--Chapter 7--Chapter 8 Chapter 9--Chapter 10--Chapter 11--Chapter 12--Chapter 13--Chapter 14--Chapter 15--Chapter 16 Chapter 17--Chapter 18--Chapter 19--Chapter 20--Chapter 21--Chapter 22--Chapter 23--Chapter 24 Chapter 25-- Love Is Dangerous Chapter 1: Young Love Stinks Rose Weasley sat in Transfiguration doodling in her notebook, completely oblivious to what the professor was saying. The lined paper was covered in hearts, a few with writing in it. Some said D.T + R.W, or Mrs. Derek Turner.
Rose and Derek had been dating since their fifth year, and Rose really thought she had found the one, the one for her. “Ms. Weasley? Ms. Weasley! Kindly pay attention to the class. You can doodle how much you love Mr. Turner later.” Professor Quinn said turning back to the chalkboard. Rose blushed, her cheeks matching the color of her hair. “Sorry professor.” She replied closing her notebook. She was glad that Derek wasn’t in the same class as her. He was seven floors below her in Potions.
The bell rang ending the day of classes. Rose grabbed her things, putting them away in her bag. She slung the bag onto her shoulder and left the room for the Gryffindor Common Room. As she walked down the corridor her cousin Albus came out of an empty classroom. Rose smiled at him and asked, “Hey Al. Had a good day?” Albus returned the smile. “Yeah, it was pretty good. Glad the weekend is starting.” He replied sighing. His day hadn’t been that great. He had just finished making a fool of himself in front of Elizabeth Carter.
Rose nodded. “Yeah me too. Finally get to spend time with Derek.”
“Must be hard to find time together. Since he’s in Ravenclaw and all. What’s worse is that it’s N.E.W.T year.”
Rose nodded again, but smiled. “We made time in our busy study schedule for a date tonight.” They arrived outside the Fat Lady’s portrait and Al gave the password before replying. “Oh that’s nice.” Rose and Albus walked through the portrait hole into the cheery common room. They said goodbye and went off towards their own dormitory.
Rose set her bag down next to her bed and flung her wardrobe open. She sorted through her closet, looking for a dress to wear. She pulled a green one out and put it on with black capri tights that went up to her knees. She found matching heels and pinned her hair up.
She looked herself over in the mirror and grabbed her purse, leaving the dorm just as one of her roommates came in. “Going somewhere Rose?” She asked smiling. “Hey Jen, got a date with Derek.” Rose replied. “Well have fun then.”
Rose closed the dorm door and went down to the entrance hall to wait for Derek. He arrived a few minutes later, a small smile on his face. He looked at Rose and said, “You look nice.” Rose smiled back and twirled around, showing her dress off. “Why thank you. Shall we get going? My treat tonight.” She asked holding her purse up. Derek nodded simply and took Rose’s hand.
They walked to Hogsmeade, talking about how their day had been and how they hated having so much homework. Finally they arrived at the little village, making their way over to the new restaurant, Madam Florres’s Kitchen.
The little house elf seated them, giving them their menus. Through the entire evening Rose felt that Derek was a little distant from her, not his normal talkative self. She decided to let it pass, he would probably tell her later, she thought smiling at Derek. ••• “I had a good time Derek.” Rose said as the two arrived outside the portrait hole. Derek nodded and turned ready to leave, but Rose grabbed his wrist, forcing him to look at her. “Derek what’s going on with you?” She searched his hazel with her brown ones. They were the only trait that she had inherited from her mother.
Derek sighed taking Roses hands in his. “Rose, I…I don’t know this – uh – relationship.” He began, unsure on how to say what he was trying to say. “Rose I love you, but I can't…we can’t go out anymore.” Derek finished, letting go of Roses hands.
Her brown eyes were swimming with tears that Rose couldn’t keep them from sliding down her face. Derek was breaking up her? She looked at him, furious and yelled, “Derek you don’t tell a girl you love her and then dump her!” Derek shrugged and walked off to his own common room.
Rose stood there in the empty corridor, tears streaming down her face. The Fat Lady looked down at the young, crying, red head. She clicked her tongue and hiccupped. “Young love,” Hiccup. “So…sp dangerous.” Another hiccup. Rose turned to face the painting. “Oh shut up you drunk old hag!” She then began running, where? She didn’t know, just as long as she was far from that horrid spot.
She ended up outside, by the lake. Rose sat down by the edge of the water, taking her shoes off. New tear formed and fell down her cheeks. ‘This can’t get any worse!’ She thought sobbing. ________________________________________
Well there you go! What do you think? I need FIVE people to comment for the next chapter! Five DIFFERENT people!
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New reader here and I absolutely love your fic!!!
Scorp is sooo sweet. I can't wait for more
PAMS!!
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01-02-2010, 07:26 PM
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| | Ramora
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| Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco Quote:
Originally Posted by lilyvictoire New reader here and I absolutely love your fic!!!
Scorp is sooo sweet. I can't wait for more
PAMS!! YAY!  Another reader. Well welcome to our little fan family here. I hope you enjoy it. And I will be PMing you everytime there is a new chapter up!  I haven't had a new reader in forever!
Marcy
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01-04-2010, 11:50 PM
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| JALIA♥|| Pat&Vanessa♥ ||DAN CER|| [The future Mrs. Efron] || Miss OCD chick  That last line was HILARIOUS!! Great new chappie! Update soon! PAMS!!!!!!!!
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01-06-2010, 03:20 AM
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| Last chapter! :( Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco Okay, here's a long awaited chapter. I know I promised I post last week, but I got caught up in getting ready for school again. And I'll be a lot more busy now too. My middle school is getting us 8th graders ready to move into high school so there are tons of things we need to do. Anyway...! Here's the chapter. Hope you like it.
__________________________________________________ __  Chapter 25
The One-Eyed Witch
After Christmas, everyone seemed to be a lot more happy. It was the first day back at Hogwarts, and everyone was talking about how their Christmas had gone. It was around 10:50 and Rose was up in her dormitory, trying to decide what she should wear to her meeting with Scorpius. Not that it really mattered really, but she had to look didn't she? Of course! Deciding on skinny jeans and a tee shirt, Rose left her dormitory and down to the common room.
"Where are you going?" Albus asked looking up from a chessboard. One of his pawns moved forward and stabbed Hugos. "She's probably going down to meet with her "boyfriend" so they can make kissy faces at each other." Hugo said making his own kissy face. Rose rolled her eyes and hit Hugo's arm hard. "OW!" Rose stuck her tongue out at him, said good bye, and walked out the portrait.
She walked down to the third floor. He was already there waiting. She took deep breath and walked over, clearing her throat. Scorpius turned around and smiled when he released who it was. “Hey.” He said running a hand through his hair. “Uh, hey. So what did you wanna talk about?” Rose asked. “Well I just wanted to let you know that I really like you….a lot. And I don’t care about what Poppy says about you. Your…perfect.” Scorpius said smiling.
Rose stared at him. What did he say? That he liked you! Duh. “You-you like me?” Rose asked, her voice barely a whisper. Scorpius nodded his head slowly. “Well I…I like you too.” She said, a big grin spreading across her face. A silence fell between them, until Scorpius finally pulled Rose into a hug. They stood there, in each others arm. Suddenly the sound of someone walking towards them had them separate.
And then Poppy Parkinson came around the corner. She stopped when she noticed Scorpius and Rose standing there. Rose and Scorpius looked at each other and then at Poppy. Her face was turning a bright shade of red. She stomped her foot and turned on her heel, walking back to wherever she had come from. Rose and Scorpius waited for the sounds of Poppy’s footsteps fade away before bursting out into laughter. “Well, I’ll see you later.” Rose said. “Yup, tomorrow in Potions.” Scorpius said.
As Rose walked away, she thought of how these four months had gone. All the ups and downs she'd been through. And now...everything was just perfect, just perfect. __________________________________________________ THE END
Last edited by MarcyMoo; 01-14-2010 at 11:56 PM.
Reason: added some few things
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01-06-2010, 03:23 AM
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I think it was so darling sweet and cute!!!!!!!!!
Pams, great job Marcy
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01-06-2010, 03:28 AM
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That was so cute Marcy! I LOVE the way Scorpius started. Hugo was funny. Poppy was how she always was. Hee hee. That was adorable. I'll soon be getting ready for high school too. Seeing as we're both 8th graders. Hope to read more soon. PAMS!!!
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01-06-2010, 03:40 AM
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| Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy I think it was so darling sweet and cute!!!!!!!!!
Pams, great job Marcy Aww, your sweet.  Thanks!
Marcy Quote:
Originally Posted by DracikinsLuver4321 That was so cute Marcy! I LOVE the way Scorpius started. Hugo was funny. Poppy was how she always was. Hee hee. That was adorable. I'll soon be getting ready for high school too. Seeing as we're both 8th graders. Hope to read more soon. PAMS!!! Thank you!  I try to make Hugo as funny as I can, i just take whatever my brothers say and throw it in here.  Im glad I'm not alone with all this high school stuff.
Marcy
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01-06-2010, 03:49 AM
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That was so so sweet! Aww they hugged! I am so happy for them! haha poppy! PAMS!
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01-06-2010, 04:29 PM
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| | Murtlap
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Krystall First Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫
He was already there waiting. She took deep breath and walked over, clearing her throat. Scorpius turned around and smiled when he released who it was. “Hey.” He said running a hand through his hair. “Uh, hey. So what did you wanna talk about?” Rose asked. “Well I just wanted to let you know that I really like you….a lot. And I don’t care about what Poppy says about you. Your…perfect.” Scorpius said smiling. Rose stared at him. What did he say? That he liked you! Duh. “You-you like me?” Rose asked, her voice barely a whisper. Scorpius nodded his head slowly. “Well I…I like you too.” She said, a big grin spreading across her face. A silence fell between them, until Scorpius finally pulled Rose into a hug. __________________________________________________ _______. That was one of the weirdest experiences ever. I am not kidding that is the exact conversation that happened when I got together with my boyfriend six years ago. No exaggerating that is exactly how it happened...with different names of course lol. So weird!! I couldn't have written it better myself haha.
Good chapter! PAMS!!
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01-06-2010, 10:53 PM
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Awe, that was too cute. Poppy needs to get off her high hippogriff and realize Scorp will never be hers. Fantastic as always! Please PAMS (:
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01-06-2010, 10:59 PM
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| | Ramora
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| Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack Awe, that was too cute. Poppy needs to get off her high hippogriff and realize Scorp will never be hers. Fantastic as always! Please PAMS (: But Poppy's way to positive to get off. She'll stop at nothing. She WILL get Scorpius Malfoy, one way or another. Quote:
Originally Posted by lilyvictoire That was one of the weirdest experiences ever. I am not kidding that is the exact conversation that happened when I got together with my boyfriend six years ago. No exaggerating that is exactly how it happened...with different names of course lol. So weird!! I couldn't have written it better myself haha.
Good chapter! PAMS!! Really? Wow...never thought that would happen!  But thank you for commenting!
Marcy
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01-07-2010, 12:36 AM
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Originally Posted by ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫ “Well I just wanted to let you know that I really like you….a lot. And I don’t care about what Poppy says about you. Your…perfect.” Scorpius said smiling.
This has got to be my favorite line in this chapter!
-- If only boys actually said that to me.
I'm very jealous of Rose right now. 
I wonder what Ron and Hermione might say once or if they find out Rose is with Scorpius.
Oh no, wait!
I really really really wonder what will happen once Draco finds out.
Lovely chapter MarcyMoo!
PAMS
PAMS
PAMS
PAMS
Jess(:
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Originally Posted by ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫ But Poppy's way to positive to get off. She'll stop at nothing. She WILL get Scorpius Malfoy, one way or another.  WHAT! NOOOOOOOOO!!! *brutally murders Poppy*
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01-07-2010, 09:23 PM
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aw...that was cute...and i am so glad that Poppy syomped off from there...hehehehe...and Hugo is so much of the real little brother with his comments...waiting for more...
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01-07-2010, 10:18 PM
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫ But Poppy's way to positive to get off. She'll stop at nothing. She WILL get Scorpius Malfoy, one way or another. 
Marcy haha. That's Poppy talking, right? (: I'd like to see her try(:
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| | Ramora
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| Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco Quote:
Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron
This has got to be my favorite line in this chapter!
-- If only boys actually said that to me.
I'm very jealous of Rose right now. 
I wonder what Ron and Hermione might say once or if they find out Rose is with Scorpius.
Oh no, wait!
I really really really wonder what will happen once Draco finds out.
Lovely chapter MarcyMoo!
PAMS
PAMS
PAMS
PAMS
Jess(: I know right? Why cant boys be more Scorpius? As for what their parents think, I'm deciding if I should make a squel with that little problem. So yeah.
Thanks Jess!  ,
Marcy Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy WHAT! NOOOOOOOOO!!! *brutally murders Poppy* Quote:
Originally Posted by harita aw...that was cute...and i am so glad that Poppy syomped off from there...hehehehe...and Hugo is so much of the real little brother with his comments...waiting for more... I know right. I try to make hugo as funny as possible. Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack haha. That's Poppy talking, right? (: I'd like to see her try(: Sure....you think that... mwhahahaha! |
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#217 (permalink)
| | Ramora
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| Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco IMPORTANT! After a lot of thinking, I've decided that Chapter 25 was the last chapter of Love Is Dangerous. 
Now I'm sure some of you might ask why. Well here are some reasons: - I have writers block...again.
- I'd like to start writing something new
- I'm busy with school. We have the Constitution Test coming up soon and I need to pass it so I graduate.
- There's more, I just can't think of anything!

But look on the bright side: - I might write a sequel
- We've had a great time writing and reading this
- This is my first story that I've ACTUALLY finish!
 - I'm still gonna write!
So I'm going to keep this up, because I still have somethings I wanna post, and so you can comment and I can reply and stuff. I'll PM a mod sometime next week.
Thanks,
Marcy!
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WHAT!!!???? I can't believe you're ending it, but I guess it was a pretty good ending. The story was amazing and I hope you decide to write a sequel... Let me know if you do please, so I can definitely check it out... Thank you for the quite enjoyable story to read! Oh, and good look on your test! (:
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01-15-2010, 02:38 AM
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Awwwww I can't believe you're ending it!
But I totally understand about it all, I hope you write a Sequel!!!
Iwubyou. <3
Jess(:
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*GASP*  It's over!  Oh well. It was awesome well it lasted, thanks, I hope you write a sequel
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MARCY! Finally, I've caught up just in time for you to finish it.  Haha, I seem to do that quite a bit.
I really loved reading this, it was a lot of fun, and I'm just sorry that I stopped reading.  Even though I am sad it's ending, it's a very nice ending, and it's cool when you get to see FF's finish.
This has also made me feel like writing something of this era, even though I want to finish my marauder story before I put anything else on SS, and I have something else in mind for my next FF.
But maybe I'll start to write one for myself and put it on SS someday.
Love you. Ana.
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Alright Marcy get going with your Examinations...and all the very best for them... 
and as of your fanfiction and soon to come fanfictions we will be waiting...  ... |
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I loved reading this! It was so sweet! I will read everything you write! Farewell Love Is Dangerous!
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| Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco Thanks for the lovely commets guys! Love Is Dangerous, will return! I promise!
______________________________________________ CHARACTER OWNAGE - (In order of appearance)
Rose Weasley ; Albus Severus Potter ; The Fat Lady, Scorpius Malfoy ; Lily Luna Potter ; Hugo Weasley ; George Weasley ; Ron Weasley ; Hermione Weasley (Granger) ; Harry Potter ; Ginny Potter (Weasley) ; Molly Weasley - J.K. Rowling
Professor Quinn ; Elizabeth Carter ; Jen, Derek Turner ; Kelly Zambini ; Lloyd Goyle ; Herald Crabbe ; Poppy Parkinson ; Caretaker Xander ; Professor Linden ; Andrew ; Catalin ; Jenn ; Cameron Spinalie - ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫ PLOT - ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫ STORY BANNER - Anna Banana - You did an awesome job Anna!
If I missed any characters, they probably belong to J.K.
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