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10-16-2011, 02:08 AM
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| | Jarvey
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|  My One True Love - Sa13+
I just thought that we should hear from a voice we don't usually hear from. Also, this is based on the movie version, so don't be confused.
Also, this is a one-shot. I couldn't decide, but now it's official! ONE-SHOT!
Also, all these characters, concepts, settings, etc. belong to the wonderfful and magical J.K. Rowling.
My One True Love
The air was tense. You could hear a pin drop even on the muddy grass in front of the stands. We were all waiting; waiting for one of the champions to walk out of that maze triumphant.
Suddenly, there was a crack, and there was Harry, holding the cup, and he was lying over Cedric.
The band began to play. At first I began to cheer, for both Harry and my boyfriend had won.
But then, I realized just exactly why Harry wouldn’t let go of Cedric when I heard Fleur Delacour scream from over by the Beauxbatons stands. Cedric was just lying there. I couldn’t see a twitch of a finger, or even the exhaling of breath. My beloved Cedric was… oh I can’t even bring myself to say it!
Harry was shrieking the entire time, “Voldemort’s back! Voldemort’s back!”
I, along with all the others in the crowd, stared in confusion.
I then saw Mr. Diggory running out of the stands in mere shock. “THAT’S MY SON!” he continued to scream. “THAT’S MY BOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
I, myself couldn’t comprehend what was happening. For now it seemed that my life was over. I took a breath to see if my lungs still worked, and they did. But why did they? Why wasn’t I dead, along side him, facing the future of whatever comes after the end?
At this moment, I ran from the seats, and went down to him to check if it was true. I felt for his heartbeat.
Nothing.
I then did the only thing I could think of; I kissed him. His lips were as cold as ice, and gave no motion to reply. His eyes didn’t close as I embraced him, and he didn’t even seem to notice I was there. His stormy gray eyes just stared straight ahead, never to see the stars in front of them again.
Now I had to burst into tears. Cedric was dead. I could see no way around this. There was nothing I could do but sob until my heart stopped itself.
Mr. Diggory and I, arm in arm, followed the men carrying Cedric down to the castle, for Fudge believed that there were too many people, that they shouldn’t see the body.
But I disagree. Everybody should have to see the true evil of Lord Voldemort. That he would dare to kill such a beautiful person as Cedric Diggory; my one true love.
THE END!
Last edited by XenoLongbottom; 10-21-2011 at 09:02 PM.
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10-19-2011, 03:02 PM
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Hello and welcome! Since this is a one-shot, I will leave it here for a week or so so that you can get comments, but I think you should expand! Write about what Cho felt in the days that followed 
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10-19-2011, 07:33 PM
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| | Jarvey
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Changed my mind! I'm gonna try to write more chapters to this! If it doesn't work out, I'll add the end after it again.
Give me your thoughts about whether you would rather keep this a one-shot, or if you'd prefer to hear a million more posts about Cho's emotions!
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10-20-2011, 04:41 AM
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I liked it, my legs got goose-pimply! I think you should post more 
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10-20-2011, 09:13 PM
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| | Gnome
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The imagery was really good. Great job on this, Sarah ^.^ I personally think it's perfect as a one-shot, but maybe it would be even better if you continue. Your choice  | |
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10-21-2011, 09:03 PM
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| | Jarvey
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I decided to make this a one-shot! I started a second chapter and it was really crummy! So, one-shot it is!
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11-12-2011, 04:37 PM
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Most people wouldn't think to write from Cho's point of view. Nicely told. So sad that Cedric died  | |
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11-12-2011, 04:45 PM
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| | Jarvey
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Originally Posted by LoonyLupin99  Most people wouldn't think to write from Cho's point of view. Nicely told. So sad that Cedric died Thank you! I always try to look from other charcater's points of views. One of my favs to do is Charlie! I lv Charlie cuz we only see him once or twice in hte books and we don't even see him in hte movies. A lot of peepl forget about Charlie! | |
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12-13-2011, 04:05 PM
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| | Imp
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Cool!!!!!!!
It's perfect as one shot
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