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01-15-2010, 07:08 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Love is But a Feeling-Sa13+ Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Hey guys, I'm Evangeline or Eviee for short..This is not my first fan fic on SS, but I really do hope this is my best one so far. Well before I start, I'd like to say a few thank you's.
First, to ChloeeChloverr for coming up with the title to this story, when I couldn't think of one good enough.
Secondly, I'd like to thank D.A Forever for giving me the quote (that's in my story) when I asked for a good quote to do about love from a book.
Lastly, I'd like to thank all those that read this (though it probably would sound better at the end of the story) but I think it's nice to say thank you now. Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters in this story, they all belong to none other then J.K Rowling. The quote that I mentioned earlier was written by Nicholas Sparks in his book, A Walk to Remember. Credit to Sarah, Down The Rabbit Hole <3 CHAPTER GUIDE!!! Chapter One , Chapter Two , Chapter Three-Part One , Chapter Three-Part Two , Chapter Four , Chapter Five , Chapter Six , Chapter Seven , Chapter Eight , Chapter Nine , Chapter Ten , Chapter Eleven , Chapter Twelve , Chapter Thirteen CHAPTER ONE
Her book slid from her sweaty hands and onto the floor, with a loud bang!Hermione jerked awake at the sound and sat up from where she had been slumped awakedly, asleep. Rubbing her tired eyes she leant down and picked up her book. Looking at her book she glumply noticed a page of the book had been bent in a strainge way, so that it underlined another line of that page. 'Love is always patient and kind, it is never jealous. Love is never boastful or conceited, it is never rude or selfish. It does not take offense and is not resentful. Love takes no pleasure in other people's sins, but delights in the truth. It is always ready to excuse, to trust, to hope, and to endure whatever comes'
The line reminded Hermione of something, although she couldnt remember where from. It nagged at the back of her head as she stood up. Placing the book lightly on her desk she made her way to the small window of the room. Looking out into the street below. The street was still dark, with blue patches across the sky where the sunlight fought against the night.
Curling up, she placed her head on her knees. Letting her finger trace small patterns on the window. Birds swooped past the window, carrying their breakfast's, and the first sign of people came to life. But although all this was happening Hermione was trapped in her own thoughts.
Hermione had come to the conclusion that love was just too different for her to understand. It was something not even a book could explain to her. What if I had already found love? she asked herself, for the hundredth time that holiday.
Sighing to herself, she came back to earth, noticing first a boy about her age walking past her house. His blond hair blowing in the breeze, his pale skin glisterling in the early light. Hermione watched him past by, not looking left or right, and turn the corner at the end of the street.
Sighing again, she stood and walked toward her bedroom door, heading for breakfast. So what did you guys think? It isnt much I know but...I hope to get a few people to read this before I post the next chapter...fingers crossed!
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
Beware.
Last edited by Ladybug; 06-12-2010 at 07:36 PM.
Reason: Doing Chapter Guide
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01-17-2010, 09:28 PM
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| Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla Reeser Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
FIRST READER!!
Great Start!
I love how you describe everything so perfectly!
PAMS PAMS PAMS!!
Jess(:
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01-17-2010, 10:09 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Battle School. [:
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Rosalie Wayland Second Year | || Random Moments, Random Times - Sa13+ || Slytherin's Curly-Haired Beauty(:
Whoa..!
Myserious stranger love..!
Love it(:
PaMS!
~Courtney~
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01-17-2010, 10:39 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
Posts: 2,232
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8) This story is great PAMS PAMS |
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01-18-2010, 01:44 AM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
Blonde hair... *suspicious*
AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME!!!!!!! I love it |
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01-18-2010, 03:22 AM
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| Formerly: Lily Lupin Mooncalf
Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: New Zealand <3
Posts: 7,987
Hogwarts RPG Name: Ava James First Year | Facinelli<3 RP Sweetheart
Haaaaaaaaaaaai. I lovve this, it's wonderful. Interesting story. Quote:
Love is But a Feeling-Sa13+
First off, I like the title. It's really cool. xD Quote:
'Love is always patient and kind, it is never jealous. Love is never boastful or conceited, it is never rude or selfish. It does not take offense and is not resentful. Love takes no pleasure in other people's sins, but delights in the truth. It is always ready to excuse, to trust, to hope, and to endure whatever comes'
Aw, this is such an amazing quote. Quote:
Sighing to herself, she came back to earth, noticing first a boy about her age walking past her house. His blond hair blowing in the breeze, his pale skin glisterling in the early light. Hermione watched him past by, not looking left or right, and turn the corner at the end of the street.
Oh, intriguing.
- Ana
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01-18-2010, 05:15 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron FIRST READER!!
Great Start!
I love how you describe everything so perfectly!
PAMS PAMS PAMS!!
Jess(: Hey Jess...congrats being the first reader
Thanks...it all just came to me, glad you liked it Quote:
Originally Posted by xCoUrTnEyxLoVeSxToMx Whoa..!
Myserious stranger love..!
Love it(:
PaMS!
~Courtney~ Hey Courtney, I love mysterious stranger love. Lol
Glad you like it Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) This story is great PAMS PAMS Thanks, glad you liked it, next chapter soon Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy Blonde hair... *suspicious*
AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME!!!!!!! I love it Haha, you make my laugh.
Lol i love cliffy's but next chapter soon, so your not all pulling your hair out! Quote:
Originally Posted by Lily Lupin Haaaaaaaaaaaai. I lovve this, it's wonderful. Interesting story.
First off, I like the title. It's really cool. xD
Aw, this is such an amazing quote.
Oh, intriguing.
- Ana Hey Ana, welcome
Thanks, very interesting
I love the title, but as i said above ^^ i didnt come up with it, ChloeeCloverr did. But thanks
I love the quote soo much i put it on my bedroom door!
More soon Thanks to all my readers, your all the best. I shall be posting chapter two soon. And i shall get the banner up, when its made smaller. Seemed it was too large
Evangeline
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__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
Beware.
Last edited by Ladybug; 01-18-2010 at 06:16 PM.
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01-18-2010, 06:27 PM
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| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
he good start waiting for more...Blonde hair...am i thinking what you are thinking? |
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01-18-2010, 06:31 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by harita he good start waiting for more...Blonde hair...am i thinking what you are thinking? Haha, thanks for reading
Ohhh what were you thinking???
next chapter soon
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
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01-18-2010, 08:20 PM
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| Grindylow
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In My Mind..
Posts: 14,126
Hogwarts RPG Name: Waz Kensington Fifth Year | Kermit The Frog ★ l Team Warren l MarkThomasRhodes ♥
Niceee one Eviee
__________________ ♥ Warren Ashley Kensington ____________ Mark Thomas Kensington ♥ Everyone knows a Kensington The Family sticking together like true Kensingtons |
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01-18-2010, 08:29 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by WarrenBLUDx Niceee one Eviee Awww thanks Warren for reading...chapter 2 coming up in the next couple of days!!!
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
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01-19-2010, 12:23 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Missouri
Posts: 1,534
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Adams First Year |
Aww! Thats an awesome story! PAMS! I love it! New Reader!
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01-19-2010, 09:39 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In my head
Posts: 237
Hogwarts RPG Name: Layla Amorina Fifth Year |
New Reader! I love the not-so-mysterious-stranger(: PAMS!!!
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01-19-2010, 10:15 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by PotterGirl714 Aww! Thats an awesome story! PAMS! I love it! New Reader! Hey Welcome. Im soo glad you liked it! And thanks Quote:
Originally Posted by dracos.girl New Reader! I love the not-so-mysterious-stranger(: PAMS!!! Hey Welcome to my story!
See you figured it out? Lol well the banner gave it away i guess
Thanks for reading Ok Guys Next Chapter Sometime tomorrow, just have to finish the last little bit! Thanks again all!
Evangeline
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__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
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01-19-2010, 10:37 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
YAY!!!!!!!!! |
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01-20-2010, 07:23 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Well like i promised here's the next chapter. Hope you like it, and post
I hope its a good as the first chapter! And im sorry its short! im trying to make them longer Chapter Two
He had to get away, as far away from those stupid rules as he could. The fresh air would do me good, he thought, not that he really cared, as he wound himself through the maze of houses. He didn't care it wasn't even light, or proper morning, should i say. He didnt even know where he was going!He roamed the street for hours, not really seeing where he was going. His body moving practically on it's own.
He didn't come back to earth until he had stepped into a deserted park, its equipment vandelized. Children, he thought impatiently, sitting on the less vandelized swing. Not knowing what her was going to do, his sixth year at Hogwarts was going to be pointless to him as any other! He knew it!
Another year of tag-along friends, annoying younger years, and worst of all....those three, he thought angerly, his mind lingering on one person in particular. He didnt like her, end of, but her could bring himself to call her horrid names liked her used to, it just felt wrong to him.He sighed 'i guess i grew up' he thought as he stood up. The park boundries had filled up as he sat there, the parents and children looking dumbfunded at all the destroyed playing equipment. Some were even crying, he didnt like it. He himself was getting weird looks by some of the mom's, there eyes blaming him. He left as quick as he could, before they blamed him outright.
It wasn't long before he found himself in a deserted street. He knew she lived here somewhere, he quickened his pace wanting to get out of there as soon as his legs would carry him. A door opened a little further down the street from him. She stepped out, the one he couldnt bare to see. The boy looked left and right, for the first time that day, for somewhere to hide. It was too late, she had already seen him, she was walking closer. He looked at his feet. "Malfoy" She said, hatred in her voice. He knew he deserved it, looking up he responded "Hermione" Smiling a little at her surprised face.
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
Beware.
Last edited by Ladybug; 04-12-2010 at 08:34 PM.
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01-20-2010, 09:09 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
Posts: 2,232
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Wow great post PAMS PAMS !!!!
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01-20-2010, 10:04 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 400
Hogwarts RPG Name: Monica Brennan First Year | RED VINES!! * AVPM
New Reader!!! Oooo i luv it!! PAMS
sammy
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01-20-2010, 10:20 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In my head
Posts: 237
Hogwarts RPG Name: Layla Amorina Fifth Year |
Great post!! PAMS!!
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01-20-2010, 10:51 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Los Angeles, CA, USA
Posts: 317
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Antonia Dillinger Sixth Year | NY Yankees Love! I just finished reading both chapters of your cool story, Evangeline. Looking forward to reading the next upcoming chapter.
P.S. What does "PAMS" stand for? Anyone can answer, by the way. |
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01-20-2010, 11:25 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In my head
Posts: 237
Hogwarts RPG Name: Layla Amorina Fifth Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by DracoMalfoygirl12 I just finished reading both chapters of your cool story, Evangeline. Looking forward to reading the next upcoming chapter.
P.S. What does "PAMS" stand for? Anyone can answer, by the way. Post Alot More Soon I had to look it up when I first started reading FanFics
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01-21-2010, 12:26 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Los Angeles, CA, USA
Posts: 317
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Antonia Dillinger Sixth Year | NY Yankees Love! Quote:
Originally Posted by dracos.girl Post Alot More Soon I had to look it up when I first started reading FanFics Oh, okay. That makes sense. Thanks, dracosgirl.
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01-21-2010, 01:58 AM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY'Z! DRAAACOOOOOOO! Knew it! lol... pams?
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01-21-2010, 02:11 PM
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| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
ha i was thinking the same as you Evangelina!!! ...good going...pams...
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01-21-2010, 05:50 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) Wow great post PAMS PAMS !!!! Thanks, glad you liked it. I wasnt sure this was as good as the first, but it seems it was Quote:
Originally Posted by potionsmaster22 New Reader!!! Oooo i luv it!! PAMS
sammy Hey Sammy, Welcome
thanks for reading, more soon Quote:
Originally Posted by dracos.girl Great post!! PAMS!! Thanks, shall post more soon. Ohhh im glad so many people are reading! Quote:
Originally Posted by DracoMalfoygirl12 I just finished reading both chapters of your cool story, Evangeline. Looking forward to reading the next upcoming chapter.
P.S. What does "PAMS" stand for? Anyone can answer, by the way. Quote:
Originally Posted by dracos.girl Post Alot More Soon I had to look it up when I first started reading FanFics Quote:
Originally Posted by DracoMalfoygirl12 Oh, okay. That makes sense. Thanks, dracosgirl.
P.S. Just for the record, I'm Draco Malfoy's girl. ;D Dracogirl: I thought it meant Please Add More Soon.
Sort of the same hing i guess
Glad you both are reading. I hope to post more soon.
Welcome Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY'Z! DRAAACOOOOOOO! Knew it! lol... pams? Haha *helps stand up after fainting*
What gave it away??
Shall add more soon i promise. Dont want to keep my readers waiting
Thanks for reading Quote:
Originally Posted by harita ha i was thinking the same as you Evangelina!!! ...good going...pams... Hey, Thanks. Im glad soo many people are reading! I didnt think i was that good at writing.
Shall post more soon, i really want to here what you say! Ok Guys, I shall try and post on Sunday!!!
But i most probably wont be posting again(if i do post on Sunday) till Sunday next week, beacuse im veryyyy busy next week!!!
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
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