that was cool but i dont like his dad

still no post? I'm hardly waiting to see what happens

OMG! *Sob*I thought this was supposed to be a comedy!*Glaring at Sirius_Padfoot* lol...jk...*Jumping on random duck and flying off to go kill Remus' dad*
lol
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~~Claribell

it is a comedy, there's just some serious stuff happening every now and then, the comedy will return soon, and I'm sorry to say that I can't post right now 'cause I'm going somewhere in a few minutes so I really don't have the time right now, sorry

That's ok you will post soon as you can we understand

I'm going to be leaving in two-three days and I won't be back in two or three days, so here's a post

Remus's Father Part 3

On the day Remus and Sylvia were going back to Hogwarts, their mother stopped by for only a little while to say goodbye, their father didn't seem very angry with her for taking the kids away without telling her although she did have difficulty hiding some bruises on her arm.
"Don't worry," she told them, "I'll be fine." she picked up some Floo powder and said, "I'll see you on the holidays, I love you." Sylvia smiled and waved while Remus half smiled and waved glumly. When their mother was gone, Sarah said, "You two better get going or your teachers will worry. I'll see you on the holidays." Sylvia took some Floo powder and said "Hogwarts!" and dissapeared in the flames. Remus followed her and said to Sarah, "It was great seeing you again."

When Remus and Sylvia were back at Hogwarts, they went into the Great Hal to meet their friends for lunch. Remus saw James, Sirius, Peter, Keely, and Lily at the Gryffindor table and walked over to them. When he sat next to Keely, they looked at him and Sirius said, "Bloody h*ll! What happened to your face?"
"What do you mean?" asked Remus. Lily took out her pocket mirror, opened it, and handed it to Remus. Remus looked a his reflection and saw that he had a bruise under his left eye.
"It's nothing." Remus said as he handed it back to Lily, "I was just in an accident."
"That's no accident!" said James, "What happened to you?"
"My father just had a bit too much to drink, that's all."
"So what, he just went and hit you in the face?" asked Keely, "Why would he do that?"
"I told you, it's nothing." said Remus. He started to put some food on his plate and started to eat quickly to avoid talking. The others were still inconvince but they left him alone.

sorry that you guys had to wait so long, but I promise I'll post more soon

Ah poor Remus!! I hope something terrible happens to his dad. That bad man Anywayz...Great post!
Cant wait for the next one!!

*Steph*

oookey.. his father had a "bit" too much drink? o_O

Poor Remus, sad about his evil father.

yeah, I'm evil that way for doing that to my characters

Chapter Six: Learning about the Future

After lunch Keely, James, Sirius, Remus, Lily, and Peter went into the common room.
"We've got something that's both weird and wicked to show you." Lily told Remus and she and Keely went into the Girls Dorm. When they got back, they were carrying a bowl with crystal clear water inside it and set it down the table.
"This is the Water of Time Lily and James told us about," explained Keely, "It will show us anything that will happen in our future."
"When did you look inside it?" asked Remus.
"When you were gone," said Keely. She leaned towards Remus and whispered in his ear, "And you don't have to worry, it didn't show them anything about your condition. And I didn't tell them either." she leaned back and said, "We're going to see what else is going to happen in our lives."
"What do you know?"
"We've only went into it once," said Sirius, "And the only thing we found out about was that we're all going to have kids."
"Who's with who?" asked Remus.
"We don't know yet," said Keely, "But we definetly know that Lily and James are going to be together if they're going to have kids." Lily and James scowled when she said this.
"Why don't we just get inside it now, I'm sure Remus is really anxious, aren't you?" Lily added looking at Remus. He nodded and Lily said, "Bend forward and habe your face touch the water, then let the water do it's magic." Remus did what he was told and put his face into the water. When he did, his feet then left the ground and he was pulled into the bowl. He suddenly fell onto the ground outside. He looked around and saw that he was in a forest at night. Lily, James, Sirius, Keely, and Peter fell next to him and James asked, "Where are we?"
"We can't be near the castle." Keely answered, frowning.
"Shhh!" Peter said and everything was silent until, "I hope the others are okay." They looked around and saw three dark figures sitting by a tree. James looked closer and saw that it was his son, Harry and his friends, one was the redhead from the first time he went into the water the other was a bushy haired girl he's never seen before. The only change in them was that they were now fourteen instead of eleven.
"They'll be fine." said the redhead.
"I wonder what's going on." said Keely.
"There's probably an attack from where they are or something."
"Hello?" called Harry. They paused and Lily whispered, "I thought they couldn't see or hear us."
"Who's there?" asked Harry. James, Lily, and the others stood where they were without making a sound until-"MORSMORDRE!" and into the sky came a light that took shape in the Dark Mark.
"We should go." said Keely as she held onto Sirius and Peter and they dissapeared. Lily followed suit and held onto Remus and James and they too dissapeared

Until what!! I need to know what happens
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sorry, I had to cut off cause I wass typing most of it at my mom;s work and she made me get off. But I already edited it and put in what happened, enjoy the last part of it

hi that was great plz post more quick

new reader! =]
I LOVEEE THE STORYY!
please do continue. it's one of mi favorite marauder's story. =D

New reader.
I like the story!! Please!! PAMS!!!

Pams!!!!

That was great

so sorry that took so long!

Learning about the Future Part 2

After Lily, James, and Remus ended up back into the common room, James asked, "What was that about?"
"I don't know!" answered Sirius, "Evans, what do you think?"
Lily looked at him and said, "I don't know what it was!"
"You're kidding!" exclaimed Keely.
"You're supposed to be the smart one!" exclaimed James. Lily and everyone else stared at James and he said, "Well...er...she gets better grades than the rest of us. Besides Remus of course."
"Well, whatever it was, it had to be a bad thing." said Peter.
"What makes you say that. Pete?" asked Keely.
"Before we left, I could've sworn I heard screaming."
"Yeah, I heard it too." said Lily.
"I just hope that they'll be okay." said Keely.
"Who?" asked Sirius.
"Lily and James's son and his friends of course!" said Keely.
"I'm sure they will be." Remus said reashurringly to Keely. James and Sirius glared jealously at Remus as Keely gave him a kind smile, the kind of smile that she's never given either of them before, but she and Remus ignored them.

During the next few days the group never said anything else about what they saw in the Water of Time until James wrote a note to Lily during Transfiguration.

Lily, I've been thinking.

Really? I never knew that you even had a brain

Ignoring that. I've been thinking about our trips to the Water of Time and about how we're going to have kids.

Don't even remind me

Once again, ignoring that. It's just kinda weird thinking about it. I mean, we're hardly acting nice to eachother, we're mostly giving insults to one another and everything

I've been thinking about it too. Maybe Dumbledore made a mista-

"Evans! Potter! Pay attention!" snapped Mcgonnagle. Lily and James didn't write another note to eachother for the rest of the lesson.

Ignoring that
That cracked me up! Great post! Cant wait for more!!!!
PAMS!

*Steph*

That was great I can't wait for more

New reader!!!!

Great idea....it's kinda weird though, seeing the future....

and btw, Lily knows Snivellus before James does, right?

anywho, POST SOME MO'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! brilliant!

Oh yeah, I forgot about DH, but I'm sorry, no. She doesn't know him before school in my story.

Chapter Seven: Severus Snape

When Transfiguration ended, Lily, James, Remus, Sirius and Peter left the classroom and James asked Lily, "Lily, what if Dumbledore didn't make a mistake? What if we are going to be together, get married, have kids, and die for them?"
"It's kind've scary just thinking about it!" said Lily, "Can we please stop talking about it?"
"Fine." They met Keely outside the Great Hall for dinner and she said, "I'm so glad Potions is over! I thought it would never end!"
"Why, what happened?" asked Sirius.
"Slughorn had everyone get partners and when there was nobody left, I had Severus Snape!" James and Sirius's eyes opened with shock and Lily asked, "What's wrong with that?"
"Lily, the kid's a freak." said Keely, "And he's in Slytherin, can you find nothing wrong with that?"
"Just because he's in Slytherin doesn't mean there's something wrong with him!" Lily said defensivly, she looked at Remus and said, "You think that too, don't you Remus?" Remus didn't answer, he just shrugged and said, "Lily, maybe Keely's right."
"I can't believe what I'm hearing!" Lily strided angrily away from the group and into the Great Hall. She didn't see where she was going so she accidently ran into someone. She looked at the person she ran into and said, "I'm sorry about that, I should've been more careful." She suddenly saw that the person she ran into was Severus Snape. The books he was holding fell out of his arms and onto the floor. He bent down to pick them up, "No, the fault was mostly mine, I was too busy with these books." Lily bent down to help and asked, "Why do you have so many?"
"I have a lot of homework, especially in Potions. It's not exactly my best subject." Lily picked the remaining books off of the floor and handed them to Severus, "I can help you with it, it's one of my best subjects."
"That'd be great," said Severus, "Only one problem though."
"What?"
"I don't even know your name."
Lily smiled sheepishly at him and said, "I'm sorry, I forgot my manners. My name is Lily Evans. I already know who you are, though; Severus Snape. I've heard about you."
"I suppose what you've heard about me aren't exactly kind. Am I right?" asked Severus.
"I'm sorry to say it's true." said Lily, "But I never really believe in any of it."
"That's good. So about you helping me in Potions, I'd appreciate that. Tomorrow will be a great time since it's Saturday."
"Okay, tomorrow after breakfast by the lake. Think you can make it?"
"I think I can. It was nice meeting you. And thanks." Severus walked out of the Great Hall while Lily walked over to the Gryffindor table. To her surprise, James, Keely, Sirius, Remus, and Peter were already there.
"We saw you talking to Snape." said Sirius.
"Why? Is that such a crime?" asked Lily
"Yes." Sirius simple said. Lily ignored this comment and Keely said, "Hey. James. It looks like you got some competition!"
"It's just Severus Snape, Keel." said James. Lily ignored the group. Remus leaned towards Lily and whispered, "I think Keely might be right, though."
"Remus, what on earth are you talking about?"
"Well, I've seen the way he looks at you and I can tell it's a look of longing." Lily couldn't ignore this comment, she suddenly remembered how Snape sometimes looked at her when they were in classes and couldn't help but think that Remus was right.

i missed so much! pams, bree! totally loves how this is going~!

New reader and this story is SO cool!!!! pams!

OMG that was great!!!!!! Lily and Snivellus.......awww. JK!

Post more soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!