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Old 04-29-2011, 11:12 AM   #101 (permalink)
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I stood at the end of the aisle, with Fred. He had asked me to be his best man. The music started and I saw Baylee come up the aisle, in a simple yet beautiful dress, holding Remus's arm. She looked so happy. Remus left her at the isle and I caught sight of Luna in the crowd, wearing her signature yellow dress and radish earrings. My heart gave a flutter when I saw her smile.
'Do you, Fred Weasley, take Baylee Lestrange...' said the Minister.
I saw Mrs Weasley crying in the crowd, along with Aunt.
'I now pronounce you, Husband and Wife.'
The minister priest waved his hand and the balloons burst into silver birds.
'It is now time for the bride and groom to have their first dance.' cried the priest.
Fred and Baylee took to the floor as the music, My Heart Will Go On, came on. After a bit, other joined in, and I felt a hand on mine.
'How about a dance Rylee?' asked Luna.
'I wouldn't miss it for the world.' I said, leading her onto the floor.
The music flowed round us as I was juddered when it stopped.
'Ladies and Gentlemen, it's time for the Father-Daughter Dance!'
I saw Baylee chuckle as Remus took her hand, as I'm already there by Lonestar came on.
But Halfway through, it all went wrong. Black streaks appeared as Death Eaters emerged.
'Sorry to gate crash, but we didn't receive invites.' hissed Mum.
She charged towards Baylee, who in turn ran towards her.
'YOU'RE NOT RUINING MY DAUGHTER'S WEDDING.' a voice yelled.
Dad emerged and began duelling Mum.
Wands emerged as duels began. I protected Luna, duelling others.
'Baylee! Where's Baylee!' yelled Fred.
I spotted her duelling someone else.
'She's over there!' I yelled back.
Fred charged over and with George, he duelled that person with Baylee. Afterwards, DeathEaters disappeared, and everyone was revealed to be okay, if not a little shaken. I saw Remus holding Baylee, who was white and shaking.
'It's okay, it's okay.' he was repeating.
Fred came over and wrapped his arms round Baylee.
'Is Everyone okay!' yelled george.
'Yes' and other such words came back.
'Thank god.' said Luna from beside me.
I wrapped my arms round her and she melted into my chest.


Remus breathed a sigh of relief. Sure, he was shaken, but everyone, most importantly Baylee, was okay.
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Old 06-03-2011, 09:52 PM   #102 (permalink)
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Life was ordinary for a while. Well, Ordinary for a watch. But one day, my pocket burned. I pulled out the red hot coin, and glanced at Fred.
'We're fighting.' said Rylee, coming in, holding his coin.
'Baylee, you should stay here.' said Fred.
'What, and let you go off battling, not knowing if you'll come back? Not happening.' I said firmly.
We sett off, and me and Rylee sat at our tables.
'But, there's Potter! Someone grab him!' shrieked Pansy.
In one movement, me and the Gryffindors, Ravenclaws and Hufflepuffs had stood up. I saw Rylee stand up, followed by Draco, then Crabbe and Goyle, then Zabine and then the rest of the Slytherins. Rylee was the only Slytherin that stayed. We joined up and went to duel. Sometime, we got separated. I was duelling when I saw it. Dad and Remus were duelling, and the death-eater shot a curse. Dad leapt in front and took the green curse.
'NO!' I roared.
'Rylee!' cried a voice.
I spun to see Rylee laying on the ground.
'No No NO!' i said, my voice rising to a scream.
I ran over, and shook his shoulders.
'No Rylee! Wake up! Please, just wake up!' I screamed.
'NO!' screamed a louder voice.
Mum came running down.
'My baby boy!' she was shouting.
I clung to his chest, still struggling to believe he was gone. I looked up at Mum.
'I'm sorry Baylee.' she whispered.
She opened her arms, and hugged me tight as I howled into her chest. I forgot she had tortured me, I forgot everything she had done, she was still my mother. I watched her as she went off into the forest. I carried Rylee into the hall, and lay him down next to Dad. I spotted the Weasley's all crowed round a body. I went over and pushed my way to the front.
'No.' I whispered.
Fred lay there, peaceful and still.
'No, not you too.' I whispered.
I dropped to me knees, clutching his hand.
'No, Fred.' I kept repeating.
I heard the voice of Voldemort echo through the hall, but I filtered it out. My heart was hurting, and I couldn't care about anything anymore.
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Old 06-22-2011, 03:59 AM   #103 (permalink)
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Hey, Ninja Hawk!!

Just read the whole story- what a terrific concept!! It's so cool to see Baylee and Rylee experience all 7 years of life at Hogwarts, having them woven into the stories we all know and love.

Kudos, sweetie!

I am so sad that Baylee just lost her true love. *weeps*

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'Baylee?' asked a voice.
I ignored them, laying on Fred's chest.
'Baylee, please.' another one spoke.
Again, I ignored it. There was a motherly sigh.
'She's not moving.' said a small voice.
'I personally can't blame her.' said another.
I recognised them, but I made no movement. I heard footsteps.
'Baylee?'
This was a young woman's voice.
'Tonks, what is it?' asked a voice, a strong male one.
'She not moving, or answering.' said a motherly voice.
I heard a familiar sigh, then strong arms picked me up. I made no resistance. I saw no reason.
'Baylee?' whispered Remus's voice in my ear.
He carried me outside, and sat on the stairs, still cradling me.
'Baylee? Please say something.'
'Who killed them?' I asked.
'Who?'
'Who killed Fred? Who killed Dad? Who murdered my brother?'
Anger was bubbling up inside me.
'Baylee, calm down.' said Remus, his arms tightening round me.
'No Remus! Not until I hunt down who killed my family, and give them the same treatment!'
I was on my feet by this time.
'Dolohovo.'
I read it in his face. I heard twigs snap and spun round, to see Hagrid carrying Harry, who was dead.
'NO! NO NO NO!' I screamed. 'HARRY!'
I ran towards them, wand-less. I didn't care. All I cared was causing Voldemort as much pain as physically possible. It was them all the raw anger, pain, depression and fear that I had bottled up over the years burst out of me, knocking them all off their feet. I leapt on Voldemort, punching him and kicking him with my bare fists and soft trainers. I was haled off by other Death Eaters, and I saw Dolohovo.
'YOU!'
He smirked.
'Getting ready to join Daddy, Rylee and Freddie?" he taunted.
I glared at him, concentrating hard. He fell to the floor, kicking and screaming, and I used Crucio on him wand less and non verbal.
'Baylee!'
I was suddenly looking at Mum. She stared in my face, cupping my chin.
'I'm scared.' I whispered.
'You've been so brave.' she whispered.
They pulled me away and I was made to face the crowd.
'Baylee is about to demonstrate what happens to all those who will break the new rules. Any last words?' called Voldemort.
'Sonorous.' I thought.
'I have a few. We have all fought bravely. We have all lost, we have all suffered pain, physically, mentally, and in our hearts. I have three last words. DUMBLEDORE'S ARMY FOREVER!' I screamed the last three.
'AVADA KEDAVRA!'
I heard Mum's cry as I hit the floor and it all went black.
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Is that it??? Oh my gosh it was still amazing! Good job!!!
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No! Don't worry!

I gently opened my eyes.
'What?" I murmured.
It was very white. I blinked, and it cleared. I sat up.
'Very fluffy, a bit to much for my taste.' I announced.
'Well, we can't all have your way.' said a familiar voice.
I spun to see Sirius.
'Sirius!' I cried, scrambling to my feet and rushing into his open arms.
He hugged me tight, so tight, like he could never let go.
'You've been very brave.' he whispered.
I heard footsteps. Arms took me from Sirius, holding me tight.
'My baby girl.' a deep voice murmured.
'Daddy.' I whispered, burying my head in his chest.
'Baylee?' asked another.
I craned my neck to see Rylee.
'RYLEE!' I yelled.
We ran towards each other, and hugged each other so tight. Tears poured. But it wasn't Rylee crying.
'hey hey, I'm the one who crys.' he whispered, stroking my hair.
I couldn't stop myself. He wrapped his arms round me tight until I reached the snorty-trying-to-stop stage.
'What are you doing here?' he asked.
He held me at arms length.
'You need to be down there, with Remus.' he said.
He put his hand in his pocket and they all stood opposite me with Rylee. He sprinkled some dust on me, and Sirius gave me a hug.
'What? No! No! I don't want to leave!' I cried.
'Be Brave Baylee, Be Brave.' Sirius whispered as I faded and blackness surrounded me.

Grass stuck up my nose. I could hear screams and shouts round me. The war had continued. I pushed myself up. I saw Remus duelling Dolohov. He disarmed Remus, who made no attempt to get his wand back.
'Ready to be reunited with Baylee, Daddy and Daughter?' Dolohov smirked.
Remus looked at the floor as Dolohov began to say the curse.
'NOT ON MY BLOODY WATCH!' I yelled. 'AVADA KEDAVRA!'
It hit him square and he flew into a tree, moving no more.
'Baylee!' cried Remus.
'That felt good.' I said.
Remus hugged me tight.
'Don't go making a habit out of using it.' he whispered.
I clung to him, as he rocked me, both of us oblivious to the battle. He never seemed to want to let me go. I wiggled after a bit.
'Mmm, Dad? I mean, Remus...' I said.
'No go on with Dad.' he said.
'Okay, Dad? We're kinda still in the middle of a battle?'
He let me go, and grabbed my hand as we ran off to fight. I saw Mum.
'Baylee!' She screamed. 'You're alive!'
'No, I'm a ghost!' I called.
She gave a laugh as I turned to fight some more Death-Eaters.
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Awwww. I luv it!!!! Great job.
Remus is so good to Baylee. Hehe... nudge nudge... Dad. <-- I loved that part!
keep it up. You're doing an amazing job.
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Oh wow, hunny! Oh, God- Rylee, Fred, her dad: horrible!!

Then thinking Harry was dead too- no wonder Baylee snapped.

But she saved Remus!!! And she saw Sirius!!!

Great posts, hon! PAMS PAMS PAMS!!
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