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Old 08-31-2010, 08:36 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hello everyone! My name is Emma and I am back with a new story for you all It is called “I Never Knew” and it is a Romance story. The chemistry erupts between Hermione and Ron, Hermione and Harry, Jacqueline and Harry…whoa wait who?! That’s right I said Jacqueline. Who is this girl and where did she come from? Well you’ll have to read the story to find out . And expect a little Draco, he always knows how to make things interesting.

And let me note that the wonderful world of Harry Potter belongs to J.K. Rowling, characters and all. The only thing that is mine is the character of Jaqueline and the plot

Chapter One: Miss Jacqueline

“Hermione dear…” Mrs. Granger sighed as she entered her daughter’s room. Her daughter was packing to go to the Weasley’s house. It was almost time to return to school.

“Yes mum?” Hermione asked as she forced her trunk shut. “What is it?”
Hermione turned towards her mother who looked devastated.

“Mom what happened?” Hermione asked more seriously. Her mother never looked this nervous before, except for maybe the time when Hermione cooked dinner using magic. There were knives flying everywhere.

The doorbell rang.

“Oh look honey that must be Harry” Mrs. Granger said as she jumped up from Hermione’s bed and ran towards the door.

“Mom!” Hermione cried as she watched her mother run out her door. She always did that. Every time she wanted to say something important or life changing she would find one way or another to procrastinate.

Harry was suppose to meet Hermione at her house before they both went to the burrow. This was the first time Harry has ever done this and Hermione didn’t know why. He wouldn’t tell her no matter how much Hermione threatened him.

“Hello Harry! It’s so nice to see you” Mrs. Granger could be heard saying at the front door.

“Hello Mrs. Granger. How are you?” Harry replied coming inside.

Hermione ran down the stairs two at a time only to trip and stumble into Harry’s arms at the bottom of the stairs.

“Whoa!” Hermione said as she fell into his arms. “Nice save Harry. Thanks!”

“Hello to you to Hermione” Harry smiled as he helped her up onto her own two feet.

Just then Mr. Granger arrived from work. As he entered the house he kissed his wife on the cheek, hugged Hermione and shook Harry’s hand. Then he looked at Mrs. Granger and asked, “Well?”

Mrs. Granger frowned, “No.”

“Well she’s in the car. It’s now or never.”

Hermione and Harry exchanged looks of pure confusion. What was going on?

“Hermione darling I expected your mother to have told you in a gentle way before I got home but I see that didn’t happen. So here we go…Hermione in the car outside is a girl named Jacqueline. She is your sister honey. She was born a year after you making her a year younger than you. When she was born your mother became very sick and we just couldn’t afford to take care of both of you. So I, your mother refuses to take credit on this decision, decided to have your Aunt Rosalie take her and have your aunt raise her.”

Hermione stopped her father, “What happened to gentle?”

“I’m sorry honey…but you know I like to have things said and done.”

Hermione went over to the window and peeked behind the curtains. Outside her father’s car was a girl Hermione’s height. She was a slender girl with honey colored hair down to about her waist. She had her hair done in beautiful curls and she had bangs going across her forehead, the perfect length right above her eyebrows. She was just standing there…waiting.

“I remember her” Hermione whispered. I was a year old when she was born…I remember aunt Rose coming to pick her up and then I never saw her again…you two told me we were babysitting her for aunt Rose…you two told me she was a neighbors daughter…and I believed every single story you two made up” Hermione said trying not to cry.

Hermione felt terrible. She had met her sister sixteen years ago and she had forgotten about her. Her parents had taken her away from her and had hidden her.

“Is…is she like me?” Hermione asked.

“Yes sweetheart” Mrs. Granger said walking over to Hermione and holding her. “She is a very bright witch just like you. However she was sent to school in France and we had her transferred to your school, Dumbledore helped a lot.”

“So there’s two of you now?” Harry asked with a smile. “Great!”

“Shut it Harry” Hermione laughed. She walked over to Harry and stood next to him. “Well bring her in.”

“You’re not upset are you darling?” Mrs. Granger asked.

“No…I just wish we hadn’t spent so much time apart” Hermione answered.

Mr. Granger walked out to the front yard and picked up Jacqueline’s luggage. “Come on in Jackie” Mr. Granger could be heard saying.

Jacqueline walked in ahead of her father and hesitated at the door. She caught Hermione’s eye and then she looked over at Harry. Jacqueline had hazel eyes, she had their dad’s eyes.

“Honey this is Hermione, your sister” Mr. Granger said pushing his second daughter closer to Hermione.

“Dad don’t force her. This is probably really uncomfortable for her” Hermione said.

“If you don’t mind I’d like to go to the bedroom I’ll be staying in” Jacqueline whispered.

“Alright sweetie, come on” Mrs. Granger said as she led her daughter to her bedroom. Mr. Granger followed them up the stairs.

Hermione and Harry were left downstairs.

“Wow…some news you received huh?” Harry laughed.

“Yeah…I guess I’ll have to watch over her at school now huh? So creeps like Malfoy don’t get involved in her life.”

“Yeah…I suppose. Should we let her settle in before we go talk to her?”

“Yeah” Hermione sighed. “I still need some time to digest all this.”

Harry pulled Hermione into a hug and said, “Everything’s going to be okay. She seems like a very nice girl.”

Hermione rested her head on Harry’s chest. “I just hope she isn’t any trouble…”

Tada! So what do you all think? I hope you all enjoyed the first chapter of "I Never Knew."

Much Love,
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Hello, Emma! I made it safely to the thread without too much direction loss. I was afraid I was going to have to ask you for the link.

Anyways, mystery is always good so I can't wait to see exactly what happens in the next part of the story with Jackie. Are you going to go into more detail about why she had to leave? *looks around hopefully* And I'd love to know more about Jackie's past as well, what she did with her aunt all this time and her schooling in France. You've got a good plot so if it keeps developing well enough in the next few chapters, you'll be in good shape!

However, my only concerns were the typos, tense changes, and slight POV changes. *runs and hides* They were just a bit distracting to the overall story; however, that may be just be me since I'm a bit of a grammar freak. You can totally ignore me if you want. I won't mind. Anyways, I loved the first chapter and I'd love to see you write more. Wow, I left a long review...I should just stop typing now.
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Hahaha I love it!
Especially the Aunt Rosalie part
And I get a feeling that Draco is going to get involved with Hermione's sister!
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Hello, Emma! I made it safely to the thread without too much direction loss. I was afraid I was going to have to ask you for the link.

Anyways, mystery is always good so I can't wait to see exactly what happens in the next part of the story with Jackie. Are you going to go into more detail about why she had to leave? *looks around hopefully* And I'd love to know more about Jackie's past as well, what she did with her aunt all this time and her schooling in France. You've got a good plot so if it keeps developing well enough in the next few chapters, you'll be in good shape!

However, my only concerns were the typos, tense changes, and slight POV changes. *runs and hides* They were just a bit distracting to the overall story; however, that may be just be me since I'm a bit of a grammar freak. You can totally ignore me if you want. I won't mind. Anyways, I loved the first chapter and I'd love to see you write more. Wow, I left a long review...I should just stop typing now.
You are very opinionated...And I love it! Thank you so much for being honest

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Hahaha I love it!
Especially the Aunt Rosalie part
And I get a feeling that Draco is going to get involved with Hermione's sister!

My dearest cousin Thank you!
And yes Draco will be getting involved with someone...but don't be so sure it's with Jacqueline now.


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You know you did scare me for a second there! I thought I was being confronted about something!
Well Jacqueline I'm glad you are enjoying the story!

I love the fact that I have so many readers
I will post soon my lovely readers I promise!

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I read this the other day but my sister was annoying me so I didn't get a chance to comment. So, sorry for being late!!

This was really good, I can see so many different plot developments in my head!!

Keep writing, nice job

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This was really good, I can see so many different plot developments in my head!!

Keep writing, nice job

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Yes sisters can be so annoying haha But you gotta love them.
Next post will be up today I promise!

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Chapter two my lovely readers!
I know it's a little late but it's finally up!

Chapter Two: The Truth

“Hermione come on” Harry sighed as he tugged on Hermione’s sweater. “It’s been over four hours. Jacqueline has already settled in and everything!”

“Harry stop!” Hermione whined. “I’m just not ready!”

“Why not? She’s your sister for crying out loud” Harry said. “Fine stay here and be a rude sister. I, on the other hand, am going to go and talk to her and become her friend…maybe even more than that.”

Hermione’s head shot up from her pillow just in time to watch Harry wink and walk out the door.

“Potter you stay away from my sister!” Hermione snapped, jumping off her bed and running after him.

“Awe Mione come on! She’s beautiful! And I’m the chosen one, which means that she could be my chosen girl.”

“Harry you sound ridiculous” Hermione said rolling her eyes.

“Someone sounds jealous” Harry smirked.

Hermione was just about to smack Harry on the head when Jacqueline opened her door right down the hall. She had changed into different clothes. She was now wearing jeans with a purple top and her hair was up in a messy pony tail.

“I’m sorry I don’t mean to interrupt but can you keep it down just a little?” Jacqueline asked quietly. She looked upset.

“I’m sorry Jackie” Hermione said. “We were on our way to give you some company but Harry stinking Potter over here loves to make a dramatic entrance.”

Jacqueline smiled, “It’s okay Hermione. I’m sure Harry has his reasons. I mean it’s not every day a guy talks about how pretty I am right in front of my door. Come on in.”

Jacqueline walked away from the door to allow Hermione and Harry to walk in. Jackie had settled in already and she had a mess of textbooks on her bed.

“I read a lot” Jackie blushed as she picked up her books to make room for them to sit.

“So does Hermione” Harry said. “But don’t worry once you come to Hogwarts and hang with Ron and I you won’t have much time for books.”

“Really now?” Jacqueline laughed. “I’m sorry but my studies come first. Back in France our Headmistress would make us have at least 6 to 9 hours of studying per week. I’ve gotten use to it, which is why I read so much.”

Hermione watched as Jacqueline set her books down upon a desk.

“Say Jackie?”

“Yes Hermione?”

Hermione stood up and walked over to the window. There was something her sister wasn’t telling her. There was something strange about her parents deciding to bring Jacqueline home after sixteen years. And how in the world did Dumbledore get involved? He usually only got involved in Harry’s life…

“You were forced to come home weren’t you?”

Jacqueline looked at Hermione and then whispered, “I’m not allowed to talk about it.”

“Why not?” Hermione demanded. “Did Dumbledore tell you not to tell anyone? Is he making you keep it to yourself until something happens?”

Jacqueline remained silent.

“Mione what’s going on?” Harry asked.

“Harry don’t you see? Jacqueline is involved in something that has Dumbledore worried! That’s why he brought her to Hogwarts, so he could keep an eye on her!”

“What are you saying? That she’s a criminal or a dark wizard or something?” Harry laughed. “Hermione come on!”

Hermione stomped her foot. “I knew you would laugh at me! But I know something’s up here and it’s not anything good!”

Hermione walked up to Jacqueline and said, “I’m going to find out what you’re hiding.”

Jacqueline was in tears. “Hermione please, if I could tell you I would. But you’re right! Dumbledore told me not to say anything. I just can’t!”

“Do mom and dad know?”

“No...they don’t.”

“I will never have one normal year at Hogwarts will I?” Hermione said. “I’m not going to play babysitter with you Jacqueline.”

“No one ever asked you too Hermione” Jacqueline snapped. “You are so over dramatic. Jumping to conclusions as if you know everything. Well guess what Hermione you don’t know anything. Just because you’re the oldest does not mean you have the liberty to treat me like I’m a bad person. You were never there while I was growing up…I barely found out things I never knew about myself!”

Hermione was ashamed, Jacqueline did have a point.

“Then what’s the truth?” Hermione asked. “Why are you here now? What does Dumbledore want with you?”

Jacqueline looked away from Hermione and turned to Harry who was standing by the door, leaning against the door frame.

“Dumbledore will tell you when he’s ready…both of you…” Jackie sighed. “Now if you two don’t mind I wish to be alone.”

Hermione nodded and headed for the door, “I’ll be in my bedroom if you need anything…I’m sorry.” And with those last words Hermione left, pushing past Harry.

Harry reached for Hermione’s hand but she pulled away.

“Ugh” Harry moaned slamming his hand against the wall. “Listen Jacqueline…I don’t mean to sound rude but if you’re here to make Hermione’s life miserable you might as well get out of here.”

“I’m her sister Harry…I’m not here to hurt her. As a matter of fact I’m not here because I discovered I have a long lost sister…I’m here…because of you.”

Harry looked at Jacqueline, “What the heck do I have to do with you?”

“For one…” Jacqueline said walking towards Harry, “You are trying to get my sister to like you. My sister, my business. Secondly…you’ll need me a lot more than you can image in the next few years.”

Harry didn’t know what to say. Who was this girl? Harry figured she was important because Dumbledore went through all that trouble finding her. But Harry had no idea how he would need her.

“Dumbledore will explain it to you soon. I don’t like what he’s told me…I’d give anything to walk away from it. But my life depends on you…”

Harry laughed. “This is some joke isn’t it? Oh wow…well if you don’t mind I’m going to go comfort your sister now. Have a nice evening Jacqueline.”

“Harry!” Jacqueline reached out for Harry’s hand and pulled him back. “Don’t think of it as a joke…once you understand I know you won’t let anything happen to me…or at least you’ll try to prevent anything from happening to me.”

“Let go” Harry whispered. He pulled away and walked off to Hermione’s room. At Hermione’s door he turned back just in time to see Jacqueline’s door close and hear someone cry in frustration.

There you all go I hope you all enjoyed!

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Wow!!
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Great job!! This is so interesting!!

I am very curious to find out what Dumbledore is wanting from Jackie and Harry!!

Hmm...*thinks so much, brain hurts*

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Great job!! This is so interesting!!

I am very curious to find out what Dumbledore is wanting from Jackie and Harry!!

Hmm...*thinks so much, brain hurts*

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Well don't think so much haha because what if you have a headache when I post chapter three up? Then all you'll want to do is sleep and not read! *gasp* haha

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Interesting story I can't wait to see where you take this. And I'm very curious about what Jacqueline has to do with Harry and what not... Please PAMS!
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Haha I cannot wait to see where I take this story either. I have ideas and then while I'm writing I think of new ones and change up the whole thing So it's pretty anticipating for me as well
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WHOAA!!! This story is good!! Just wondering how old are Harry and Mione in this FF?
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Harry and Hermione are both 16 in this story and Jacqueline is 15 turning 16.

Thank you I am glad you are enjoying my FF!

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Ahh dude! I LOVE it!!!
Hahaha i can totally see Hermione's sister falling for Harry even though he like Hermione.
BUT what about Ron??!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Ahh dude! I LOVE it!!!
Hahaha i can totally see Hermione's sister falling for Harry even though he like Hermione.
BUT what about Ron??!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
I am glad you are enjoying this story so far It makes me happy that so many people are happy with my FF. And don't worry hun, Ron is going to show up really soon.

Now I know I was suppose to post the third chapter on Sunday but I have been super busy with college stuff and I barely got time today to continue with my story and it's 12:41 AM my time so you all get the picture right?
I'm sorry it took me so long but here it is my readers Chapter three!

Chapter Three: Surprise!

“Hermione wake up” Harry whispered, gently shaking her. “Your mom has breakfast ready for us before we all leave to Rons.”

Hermione turned to see Harry standing next to her bed, fully dressed.

“Harry? Where did you sleep?” Hermione asked getting up. She waved her wand and with one swift motion her bed was made.

“In the living room on the couch” Harry responded. “I headed downstairs after you fell asleep.”

Last night Harry had spent most of the night convincing Hermione that Jacqueline’s arrival was something good to look forward too. After what seemed like ages Hermione ended up agreeing with Harry and fell asleep.

“Oh. I need to take a quick shower. Have you gone to wake up Jacqueline?” Hermione asked gathering her clothes.

Harry shook his head. He didn’t tell Hermione what had happened between him and Jacqueline yesterday. He didn’t want her to know anything until he knew what was going on. Hermione finally had a sister, the sister she had always wanted in her life, and he wasn’t going to ruin it for her…he loved her to much to do such a thing.

“Can you go do that please? I’m sure she’s packed and everything, all she had out yesterday was her books.”

“Sure Mione” Harry said heading for the door.

“Thank you Harry” Hermione smiled stopping him and giving him a quick kiss on the cheek. “You, my friend, are a life saver! I know my parents expect me to help her out and all morning to night and I will, just after a shower.”

And with that Hermione ran off towards the bathroom.

Harry watched her leave. “Friend…that’s all I’ll ever be to you isn’t it?”

Harry sighed and headed for Jackie’s room. He knocked once, then twice. When there was no answer Harry opened the door expecting to find her fast asleep in her bed but was surprised to see that her room was empty. Her belongings were gone and her bed was made. It looked as if she was never there.

Harry closed the door and went downstairs into the kitchen. Mr. Granger had already left for work and Mrs. Granger was in the kitchen reading the paper. He looked around for Jacqueline and nothing.

“Mrs. Granger?” Harry asked.”Where’s Jacqueline?”

“She left last night Harry” Mrs. Granger responded, clearly upset. “She wanted to go back to France but Dumbledore came and took her to Hogwarts early.”

“Dumbledore was here?”

Harry was surprised. Usually Dumbledore came looking for him. If Jacqueline had something to do with him shouldn’t Dumbledore be getting him involved too?

“Yes Harry, now is Hermione ready? Mr. Weasley will be arriving in about an hour to take you two to his house.”

“I’ll go check” Harry said as he left the kitchen, Mrs. Granger was no happy camper this morning. He ran back upstairs and called for Hermione.

“Yes Harry?” Hermione said opening her bedroom door fully dressed and ready.

“Looks like your problem is gone” Harry said referring to Hermione’s comment from last night, ‘She’ll be nothing but a problem to me at school.’

Hermione looked at Harry in shock, “What?”

“You know it’s kind of funny how you knew exactly who I was talking about. Well yeah, Dumbledore came to get her as she tried to make a run for it.”

“She wanted to go back to France? Well I wouldn’t blame her, I treated her pretty bad yesterday” Hermione sighed.

“I don’t think it was you that had her running” Harry mumbled.

Hermione however did not hear Harry as she descended the stairs into the kitchen. And at a quarter past eight Mr. Weasley arrived to escort Harry and Hermione to the burrow. With Voldemort rising to power it was no longer safe to travel alone, especially for Harry.

“So Hermione” Mr. Weasley said as they made their way towards a hidden port key. “I hear you’ve discovered a long lost sister.”

Hermione looked at Mr. Weasley surprised, “How…?”

“Dumbledore” Mr. Weasley smiled.

“Why is it that Dumbledore tells the entire world what’s going on besides me!?” Harry snapped.

“Ah yes well maybe he’s waiting to talk to you and Jacqueline alone” Mr. Weasley said.

Harry and Hermione stopped walking. They had arrived at a hill and Mr. Weasley was searched for the port key among the bushes.

“I’m sure it’s here somewhere,” Mr. Weasley said, bending over bushes. “Can you two look over…?”

Mr. Weasley stopped talking as he caught Hermione and Harry looking at him with curiosity.

“Oh dear” Mr. Weasley moaned. “I’ve said too much haven’t I? Look you two I am not going to say anything else about Jacqueline and whatever she’s involved in. That is Dumbledore’s business to tell not mine, and yes Harry that is why he has been telling everyone else but you because it’s his business to tell and he just hasn’t chosen to tell you yet. Now both of you look for the port key, we are twenty minutes behind schedule and Molly will be worried.”

Harry frowned and went over to a bush. Mr. Weasley had never been so demanding before. “Found it,” Harry sighed as he kicked a boot out from under the bushes.

“Excellent!” Mr. Weasley smiled.

Within seconds Harry and Hermione landed with a thud in the Weasley’s backyard while Mr. Wealsey floated to the ground.

“Still haven’t learned?” He laughed as he reached the ground.

“Arthur there you are!” came Mrs. Weasley’s voice from within the house. “I was worried sick!”

Mr. Weasley sighed, “Told you.”

Mrs. Weasley came running out the back door to embrace her husband. She then looked down and noticed Harry and Hermione on the floor.

“Harry my dear boy!” she smiled as Harry stood up. “You are much too thin, it’s a good thing you came here a few days before you left to Hogwarts. I’ll have you looking fuller than ever! Hermione dear how are you?”

“Thanks Mrs. Weasley” Harry smiled. “Just what I need, twenty pounds under my belt.”

Hermione laughed as Harry helped her up. “I don’t think Ginny likes her guys chubby.”

Harry frowned. “Hermione how many times do I have to…?”

“I know Harry, I know. I was joking.”

Harry had no intentions with Ron’s younger sister. However, Hermione thought otherwise and it bugged him.

Stupid Hermione” Harry thought. “For such a smart girl she is completely blind to the fact that I’m in love with her.”

“Ronald as you know is still asleep. That boy has grown a lot over the summer and all he seems to do is sleep and eat occasionally…he doesn’t seem to be hungry lately” Mrs. Weasley muttered to herself as they entered the house.

Hermione and Harry decided to head upstairs as Mrs. Weasley busied herself with breakfast. Mr. Weasley had settled down at the table with the Daily Prophet.

“Hermione…can I ask you something?” Harry asked as they went up the stairs.

“Yeah Harry?”

“How…how would you feel if I asked you out?” Harry muttered.

“Whoops!” Hermione said as she tripped.

“Are you okay?” Harry asked.

“Yeah, I’m fine. Sorry Harry I didn’t catch what you said” Hermione said as she got up.

“I…I was just asking you what you would think if…if I asked Jacqueline out.”

Hermione stopped dead in her tracks. Harry passed her on the stairs and turned around as he reached the top floor. “Well?”

“I…I think you two would make a great couple” Hermione smiled.

“Great “Harry smiled. “Thanks for the approval Mione. Now I’m going to get some rest, see you in a bit.”

And with that Harry entered Ron’s room and shut the door. He was grateful that Ron was such a heavy sleeper as he threw his bag onto the floor and kicked it.

“Why Harry why!” Harry snapped. He had the perfect opportunity to ask Hermione out and he instead went and asked Hermione for permission to date Jacqueline.

“I swear you are the biggest idiot alive Potter!” Harry whispered as he threw himself onto the extra bed that was set up for him.

“I disagree” came a voice from underneath Ron’s pillow. “You are the biggest lunatic alive.”

Ron turned over and said, “Good morning to you too mate.”

“Sorry Ron I didn’t mean to wake you” Harry frowned.

“It’s alright” Ron said sitting up. “I need to talk to you anyways.”

“What’s up?” Harry asked.

“So last night Dumbledore stopped by the house and introduced us all to Jacqueline. Let me just say she is very good looking” Ron laughed. “But anyways, after the introductions were done with Dumbledore asked if he could have a private talk with Mum and Dad. Well you know we all left but that didn’t stop Fred and George from using a new product they have for their joke shop. It’s this type of powder that makes the walls of an entire house paper thin. Well anyways we could hear everything Dumbledore was saying…and I know Dumbledore made us swear to not tell you because we got caught afterwards but I have to tell you what was said.”

At that moment Harry didn’t know whether he wanted Ron to continue or for him to stay quiet. Harry wasn’t sure if he wanted to know what he and Jacqueline had to do with one another.

“Jacqueline is your…”

Just then there was a knock on the door that made both of them jump.

“Ron? Harry? Mum says breakfast is ready” Ginny could be heard saying as she descended the stairs to the next floor where Ginny’s room was located. That was also where Hermione would be sleeping for the next few nights.

“Ron tell me what you were going to say” Harry said as Ron began to get up.

“After breakfast mate come on. I think this information is not something you should take in on an empty stomach.”

And within five minutes Ron was ready and out the door.

There you go I hope you all enjoy!

Much Love,
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