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Cassiopia Malfoy 05-24-2010 11:32 PM

Eyes of an Angel - Sa13+
 
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This story is dedicated to draco'sgirlraquel! and Miss Evi3e <3 they are such awesome authors and readers! I love you two!

My newest fan fic.. I randomly came up with the thought, Miles is Charlies son by the way.. My friend helped me with the plot, so even if she's not on Snitchseeker I'm saying thank you! Oh and I hope you like my song Down On Me :xd:

And a huge thank you to all my past, present and future readers, with out you guys I'd never continue with my strange ideas. You are the BEST! Don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

Disclaimer: I shalt never own Harry Potter, the gorgeous J.K.Rowling invented it with her magnificent brain!

I hope you enjoy reading Eyes of an Angel as much as I enjoy writing it!

Invisible
Confused
Teardrops
Curses
Shattered
Impossible
Hilarity
Mourn
Vulnerable
Destiny
Searching
Broken
Tracing
Unforgettable
Hopeless
Revenge
Dreamer
Timeless


Chapter One: Invisible

The brown eyed girl rested against the wooden chair in her parents kitchen, her black pen scratching fast along a yellowed piece of parchment, every now and then she'd pause to suck on the pen's tip in thought. She had already filled several pieces of paper quite like the one she was working on now, they lay in a neat stack next to her on the same mahogany table.

“ Dear Mischievous,

My newest dedication to you, has nearly driven my parents and brothers mad. I'm singing it out every other moment of the day but didn't get a chance to write it to you yet, I do hope you enjoy it.

I look around the world to see what there is to see
There's a whole big world that's welcoming me,

Woah! I can feel the love,
Woah! I can feel the love,
It's falling down on me,
Down on me, oh on me,

There's so much out there that I'm beginning to learn,
And very little I have have already have learned,
Give me a little and I'll give right back,
And I'll take my coat off and put in on the rack,
This is the way life's supposed to be,
It's supposed to come fast and upon you like the sea,
But it will give you great mercy,

Woah! I can feel the love,
Woah! I can feel the love,
It's falling down on me,
Down on me, oh on me,

I've lost my southern blues,
I'm up to the northern news,
I'm so happy I'd ask you to dance,
I'm so glad I'd take up a lance,
And become your night in shining armour,
And as the rain starts to fall I just want more,
Woah! I just want all of it, I want more,

Woah! I can feel the love,
Woah! I can feel the love,
It's falling down on me,
Down on me, oh on me,

It's falling down on me,
Down on me, oh on me...


Today is one of the BEST days in my live Mischievous, there are days like this when I wished you existed! You know, because, your paper, and I want to share this day with you! I really do. It's uh-maze-ling! So are you honey buns! Okay. Aunt Hermione and Uncle Ron are at the dinner, write to you later Myst, I love you and your uh-maze-ling-ness!

Mwha! Lily Luna Potter the uh-maze-ling.” The girl read aloud to herself before running over to the door and swinging it open, as soon as she opened the door she could tell something was wrong. Hermione's eyes were red and puffy, and Ron looked dead serious.” What?”

*** Two years later.

The same girl with hazel eyes had turned fourteen, the day before now. It had been two years since she heard her parents died in a car crash. She had grown up quite a bit over those two years, she now lived with her seventeen year old cousin, Miles Humphrey Weasley, Lily often described him as the sweetest thing to ever exist. Lily still wrote to her imaginary friend Mischievous, her only friend outside her family.

James and Albus lived with Ronald and Hermione, they hardly ever saw Lily now, she was quite and a year younger then Albus. Plus, both the boys were in Gryffindor, and Lily was in Slytherin, getting bored to tears by the non stop talk about Scorpius Malfoy and Rose Weasley who had been dating for the past two years, the school still thought it was the couple of Hogwarts.

“ Lily-pie. Is breakfast ready?” Miles called down the stairs to his cousin.

“ Ja, come and get it well it's still hot.” Lily yelled back up to him, jotting a few more lines to Mischievous on the same paper she used two years ago.”

“ Dear Mischievous.

I miss you dearly, I wish you existed! I'm in dire need of help, all the girls at school tease me because I don't have any friends, and definitely not a boyfriend. But, hell, who needs one? At least that's what I tell them, I'm secretly pining for a knight in shining armour to come and save me from this stupid, stupid, stupid life of mine! Gah, I've been longing to know what it's like to kiss someone, to feel there soft and tender lips against mine.. Okay.. Now I'm scarring myself with my mushiness and sappiness. And most likely you.

But that's the sweet thing about you, you'll listen to my rants about how Scorpius is a git, my brothers are annoying, how I'm secretly longing for a guy friend, how I hate all the posh stuck up girls that where mini skirts at school and you don't give a damn for them. And you don't tell me Ohhhh Lily dear that's not nice! How I wish you where real.. How I wish I had my mother to tell me stories, to hold me close when ever I'm feeling down. Ah, those childish dreams of mine and how there sweetness surpassed me long ago with envy and doubt of the destroyed souls, I haven't the foggiest if I'm ranting to you or reciting poetry now darling!

Love Lily Luna.” Lily finished her muttering as she finished writing and Miles came down the stairs with a huge yawn right as she finished.

“ Hey darling, how's life treating you today?” Miles half grinned, half smirked at Lily who shrugged a little bit.” I know what you mean.”

“ Yea, somehow your the only one that understands me other then Mischievous.” Lily giggled slightly passing him a plate of pancakes.

“ Speaking of which, you need to get a friend Lily, I'm graduating this year. You need someone to listen to you, I'm not saying Myst isn't good enough for you, but it get's odd confiding in someone who's invisible and can't give you the advice you need.”

“ Invisible.” Lily murmured quietly, for some reason, to her the word meant so much more to her then not being seen. She spoke the word to herself repetitively in her head musing over it. For some reason, she felt, invisible...

Droo 05-25-2010 01:52 PM

Welcome to Epic and Adventure, be sure you read the rules, post often and have fun!

Amerleigh 05-25-2010 06:35 PM

WOW!!!
I was getting goosebumps reading that!
Seriously though, it's amazing, add more soon please? (:

:glomp:
-Amy xx
:albus2:

p.s. First Reader!!!
...And first stalker... .

Emileyn 05-26-2010 12:00 AM

I love your story!!! Second reader! YAY! :)
Quote:

Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy (Post 9383336)
Hermione's eyes were red and puffy, and Ron looked dead serious. What?

So saddd. :(
Quote:

How I wish I had my mother to tell me stories, to hold me close when ever I'm feeling down.
Once again, sad.
I'm not going to lie, I totally teared up at parts... It's an amazing start and I can't wait to see what happens! PLEASE PAMS!! :)

Cassiopia Malfoy 05-26-2010 01:34 AM

IT'S UP! *girly squeal*

Quote:

Originally Posted by Amerleigh (Post 9384938)
WOW!!!
I was getting goosebumps reading that!
Seriously though, it's amazing, add more soon please? (:

:glomp:
-Amy xx
:albus2:

p.s. First Reader!!!
...And first stalker... .

Ohmigosh! Thank you for reading!!!
I'll try and get some more up!

Oooh I have a stalker!

Quote:

Originally Posted by emilyblack (Post 9385875)
I love your story!!! Second reader! YAY! :)

So saddd. :(

Once again, sad.
I'm not going to lie, I totally teared up at parts... It's an amazing start and I can't wait to see what happens! PLEASE PAMS!! :)

Aww thaaaank you!
I'm sorry I made you cry *holds out tissue*
I already have a few plans as to what happens :shifty: hehe, I'll work on it!


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Originally Posted by Droo (Post 9384390)
Welcome to Epic and Adventure, be sure you read the rules, post often and have fun!

Thaaaank you! Your the best Droo!

Emileyn 05-26-2010 01:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy (Post 9386192)
I'm sorry I made you cry *holds out tissue*

*Takes tissue and blows nose* Thanks :) Please PAMS :)

Cassiopia Malfoy 05-26-2010 03:58 AM

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Chapter Two: Confused

Dear Missy,

I am currently in a heartbroken state! My mother was on her way home and she apparently crashed in to Mr and Mrs Potter, the parents of my arch-nemesis and killed all of them, including herself. Now, I'm all alone. I have no idea where my father is ever since he became a drunkard and my mother left him. I'm confused! I need help. I don't know how much longer I can take this.

With all the love I have left, Amanda. Mel. Davies.


A girl with long brown hair sealed the letter and tied it to her owl, she then clenched her hands in to fists and cried in to them, she had scratched her cheeks till red marks remained there, cried herself to sleep for years on end, she finally decided to write to her best friend Missy. She had been in this emotional wreck for two years. Ever since she turned twelve. Suddenly the radio started playing a song which Mel recognized, I run to you.

I run from hate
I run from prejudice
I run from pessimists
But I run too late
I run my life
Or is it running me
Run from my past
I run too fast
Or too slow it seems
When lies become the truth
That's when I run to you

This world keeps spinning faster
Into a new disaster so I run to you
I run to you baby
And when it all starts coming undone
Baby you're the only one I run to
I run to you

We run on fumes
Your life and mine
Like the sands of time
Slippin' right on through
And our love's the only truth
That's why I run to you

This world keeps spinning faster
Into a new disaster so I run to you
I run to you baby
And when it all starts coming undone
Baby you're the only one I run to
I run to you

This world keeps spinning faster
Into a new disaster so I run to you
I run to you baby
And when it all starts coming undone
Baby you're the only one I run to
I run to you.

Ya know. I wish I could have someone to run to. Mel fumed throwing the first thing that came in to her reach at the wall, her anger had been building up inside her. Living at a foster home because there was no one to take her in. Living as a complete wreck in life and everything else. She was never able to grow up as a child she thought, her father disappeared when she was young and Mel had to take care of her mother until she recovered, then she had to skip her first year at Hogwarts because of moving around and not being able to pay the rent.

AMANDA MELONY DAVIES! THERE IS SOMEONE HERE FOR YOU! Clarke called up the stairs to the Asian girl who slipped off her bed and headed downstairs. She was shocked to see who she saw.

Jacob. She breathed the word as if it was something that would make all her troubles go away.

Hey Mel. Jacob Pine smirked widely at Amanda and hugged her tightly. Let's go to Diagon Alley and get our stuff, I'm bored to tears. He then pulled her on to his back causing Amanda to laugh hard.

Thanks for coming Jake, oh yea. I did it, I wrote to Missy. Amanda Mel smiled fighting back tears of sorrow and joy, she was in total confusion, all the time. Even when she was with Jake who helped her a lot through out the years.

Glad I could be of as-YOU WROTE TO HER! YAY! I mean. Wow, that's.. That's really good of you. Jake chuckled then pulled her outside. Let's go, Marissa offered to drive us there. He said, referring to his older sister.

Marissa is always really nice. Mel fought back her feelings of confusion and followed Jake, trying not to feel so confused...

Disclaimer: I did not wright I run to you.. Lady Antabellum did. And it's a loverly song.

Amerleigh 05-26-2010 03:51 PM

WOWZA!
Again, very kinda sorta amazing!

Confuzzed about what happened to the Lily story though?
Ah well, it's still tip-top :)
LoveYou :glomp:
-Amy xx
:albus2:

Cassiopia Malfoy 05-26-2010 04:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Amerleigh (Post 9387498)
WOWZA!
Again, very kinda sorta amazing!

Confuzzed about what happened to the Lily story though?
Ah well, it's still tip-top :)
LoveYou :glomp:
-Amy xx
:albus2:

Thank you!

Oh, it's gonna keep switching between them.. Kinda like a double sided story :xd: I'm glad you enjoy it!

Ladybug 05-26-2010 04:31 PM

Im sorry it took me so long to read and comment! Gahh i feel bad!!!! Ahhh
Well firstly, THANK YOU! for dedicating it to me! :glomp:
The story is both sad and greatat the same time! Ahh i really wanna read more, i do i do! -nodds-
I feel bad for both girls...im gunna cry! :cry:
Evangeline
x

Cassiopia Malfoy 05-26-2010 05:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 (Post 9387622)
Im sorry it took me so long to read and comment! Gahh i feel bad!!!! Ahhh
Well firstly, THANK YOU! for dedicating it to me! :glomp:
The story is both sad and greatat the same time! Ahh i really wanna read more, i do i do! -nodds-
I feel bad for both girls...im gunna cry! :cry:
Evangeline
x

No problem, it's not your fault, everyone has busy lives.
Your welcome! :glomp:
Hehehe, thaaaank you! I'm working on the next chapter!
I feel bad for them to lol, *hands you a tissue*

Ladybug 05-26-2010 05:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy (Post 9387729)
No problem, it's not your fault, everyone has busy lives.
Your welcome! :glomp:
Hehehe, thaaaank you! I'm working on the next chapter!
I feel bad for them to lol, *hands you a tissue*

Mehh, Exams :cry:
:glomp: :D :xd:
Emotion after emotion! I likey!!!
Your most welcome, ohhh i cant wait to read mroe
Awww, means that the characters are not robots, but there own person. Good good writing skills ;)
*takes tissus and dabs eyes*

Whats your name sorry? I might but a link to your profile in my siggy :)

Cassiopia Malfoy 05-26-2010 05:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 (Post 9387747)
Mehh, Exams :cry:
:glomp: :D :xd:
Emotion after emotion! I likey!!!
Your most welcome, ohhh i cant wait to read more,
Awww, means that the characters are not robots, but there own person. Good good writing skills ;)
*takes tissus and dabs eyes*

Whats your name sorry? I might but a link to your profile in my siggy :)

Exams sound evil,
I like non robot characters! I think I read about one a while back and I was just like. EEEEEK! Thank you again.
My names Gabriella :xd:

Ladybug 05-26-2010 06:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy (Post 9387759)
Exams sound evil,
I like non robot characters! I think I read about one a while back and I was just like. EEEEEK! Thank you again.
My names Gabriella :xd:

Yeahh they are! I have a science exam friday, then after half term like 2 french, 2 english, 2 maths and a tech exam....gahhh TOO manyyy!!!! :(
Yeahhh makes them good characters and good reads :)
Ohh, im Evangeline ;) Shall add the link within the next week hopesfully :D

Emileyn 05-26-2010 10:10 PM

Great post!!!! I loved it! So is Amanda Melony Davies related to Roger Davies??
PLEASE PAMS!! :)

Cassiopia Malfoy 05-26-2010 11:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 (Post 9388056)
Yeahh they are! I have a science exam friday, then after half term like 2 french, 2 english, 2 maths and a tech exam....gahhh TOO manyyy!!!! :(
Yeahhh makes them good characters and good reads :)
Ohh, im Evangeline ;) Shall add the link within the next week hopesfully :D

Gah! I feel bad for you, I have to learn German because apparently puppies pay attention more to that then English and my family is getting a Bernese mountain puppy which I have to train with my brother.
Ooh, thank you! I'm honored

Quote:

Originally Posted by emilyblack (Post 9388633)
Great post!!!! I loved it! So is Amanda Melony Davies related to Roger Davies??
PLEASE PAMS!! :)

Yes, Roger Davies is her daddy. :D

Working on it, glad you like it!

And thank you.

Lily<33 05-27-2010 05:45 AM

Great FF so far I'm subscribing pams! Pams! Pams!

KatielovesHP 05-27-2010 01:37 PM

I really like this!!! Well done Gabriella!!!

Cassiopia Malfoy 05-27-2010 02:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SarahLestrange (Post 9389733)
Great FF so far I'm subscribing pams! Pams! Pams!

Thank you!

Quote:

Originally Posted by KatielovesHP (Post 9390161)
I really like this!!! Well done Gabriella!!!

Thaank you Katie! :glomp:

Ladybug 05-27-2010 04:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy (Post 9388786)
Gah! I feel bad for you, I have to learn German because apparently puppies pay attention more to that then English and my family is getting a Bernese mountain puppy which I have to train with my brother.
Ooh, thank you! I'm honored

Aw dude, that sucks. Ive learnt English, well i am. But French i took as an option after year 9. Thought it'll be cool...haha wasnt!
Ahh you honoured me first, so i though, Heck lets honour her back because she's the best! :loved: :glomp:

Cassiopia Malfoy 05-27-2010 06:07 PM

I've learned like tiny tidbits of French. Like, hi, hello, goodbye, big, small and I think that's it!

Cassiopia Malfoy 05-27-2010 06:50 PM

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This chapter is dedicated to the wonderful writer and dedicated reader~KatielovesHP


Chapter Three: Teardrops

My breaths were ragged and it almost masked the faint, heartbroken sounds of my choked sobs in my throat, long overdue for the memories that would be eternal in my soul, my parents perfect and immaculate memories. There faces, which I thought I would never gaze upon again, the sorrow building up inside of me for my bitter last words to my wonderful, yet imperfect father. No one was perfect, but memories could be.

I leaned over the small sparkling rive which ran fast and true as if the devil himself was right behind it, it swept gracefully and swiftly across the soft sandy banks and water grass beneath it's cold body, a young and tiny black water bug skipped along the shining surface of the water, and a small tadpole barely visible flitted around in circles chasing it's own tail, the sight almost made me laugh, but I was so near crying it wasn't possible.

I saw mother natures gift of divine beauty around me in the massive trees, the thick thorn bushes and the tall and lean firs. It was a gift mother nature granted to this land thousands of years ago, just like fourteen years ago she granted the unwanted yet accepted all the same, the gift of magic and the gift of hopelessness. Yes, I was hopeless, at everything I tried to do, but then I didn't even try my best to complete the nearly impossible tasks in front of me.

I reached towards the depth of the cool water with my tiny pale hand the contact of not only made ripples of sadness in the water but also rippled through out my body just under the skin tearing up any reflection of my parents, making the gaping hole in my heart bigger and deeper, shadows seemed to flood my eyes as my sight blurred, then I felt something moist, salty, pure and chaste, yet full of sorrow, roll down my cheek and off my ruby re lips into the stream creating yet another ripple, soon more followed.

I then felt the heavens open up there eyes and I could almost hear it's wails as they wept with me, as our troubles turned into the most indescribable thing in the whole world excluding the forlorn and disgustingly abandonment of love, they formed in to something which I should have never produced, something which made me feel weak, they formed in to teardrops. There was no single mind like mine in the world feeling this way, I knew it before my sorrows formed into Teardrops.

*** Longbottom Mansion


Septimus. Let's go. Skar called to his friend, getting annoyed. Your going to miss the rain. He then added, both of the boys loved rain.

I'm coming you stupid prat! Septimus Snape ran down the last flight of stairs in Longbottom Mansion where he was staying with his best friend, Skar Longbottom. He pulled his dark grey hoodie over his head before stepping outside in to the torrent's of rain.

I love rain. C'mon, let's take a walk in the woods. And maybe we can go swimming in the small stream. Skar joked punching Septimus. Who shoved him in response.

I love it more then you do, cause you love Jamie Lyre Frost. Septimus teased in response. Earning himself another punch.

Miss Frost to you, and if you ever try and insult her- Skar was cut off by Septimus.

I wasn't going to insult Miss Frost! Calm down mate. Now let's go, before your dad comes home and murders us brutally and then your mom is going to throw a fit when she comes home. Isn't weird staying home with your sister Alice all day, alone? Septimus asked as the two boys entered the forest, already completely drenched.

You better not have. Skar muttered dangerously. Nah, I'm used to it, though when I was younger mum and dad had Mrs Frost baby sit us.

I bet you enjoyed that. This time Septimus was able to dodge the blow aimed for his head. JUST KIDDING! He gasped running away towards the stream, he almost ran in to a young girl with red hair crying by the stream. Woah, are you alright? He asked immediately, not recognizing her at first.

SEPTIMUS YOU STUPID IDIOT! Skar shouted at his friend then slowed down seeing Lily Potter. Lils! Are you alright? He repeated Septimus' words with out even realizing it.

I'm.. I. I'm fine. She managed to say, but sobbed harder. Why in the name of Merlin was she affected now by her parents death, and why was she found by Septimus and Skar?! Lily barely noticed how dizzy and light headed she was feeling, or how cold she was. Until everything went black for her.

Damn! Septimus muttered as Lily fainted, immediately he scooped her up in his arms and started carrying her back towards the Longbottoms home, trying to ignore Skar's laughter. Shut up! Your not helping.

Yea, but your carrying. Lily. Potter! Skar broke down in to a uncontrollable fit of laughter.

That's because you have the brains and no brawn so you can't carry her, yet I. Do quidditch, which makes me strong and muscular. Plus I naturally have brains. Septimus snapped at Skar, and kicked his shin.

OUCH! That freaking hurt! Skar yelped.

Open the door git. Septimus rolled his eyes at his best friend.

Oh yea, I got it. Lay her down right her on the couch. Skar glared at Septimus and went to go find Alice who was hoping to be a healer...

Lily<33 05-27-2010 07:26 PM

Great post I LOVE IT haha snape carrying potter?!?! Wow things in this world have gotten a little twisted haha anyways...PAMS!

Ladybug 05-27-2010 08:24 PM

Ohh i love it!
Good chapter
She fainted? Wha--what..i wanna know more!
PAMS!

Emileyn 05-27-2010 09:59 PM

That was awesome!!!! I loved the new chappie! Please post ASAP so we can find out more! :)


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