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Wow Em...now you know how much I love your fanfic and I was actually looking for this in another thread.. only to find that it had been moved.. I couldnt believe my eyes.... this had actually been moved to the active FF section and I couldnt resist.. I HAD to read... and I have to say WOW Em!! Fantastic.. absolutely fantastic.. as Always!!!! I need more... I need more I tell ya.. I will be checking here everyday for a new chapter.. but please take your time. Here have some of this

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With that in mind, she turned her head skittishly, making sure nobody was watching. Once she was content with her plan, Ellouise shrunk backward into a shadow produced by a neighbours nondescript tree. "Here goes nothing..." she whispered to herself, so low that she could barely make out the harsh words. Bracing herself, Ellouise allowed the change to happen, the shift.. her world spun for all of a moment, nothing but the colour black behind her eyes. The scent of something sour, like sweaty feet, or decaying cabbage reached her shiny, wet nose. With a light snort, Ellouise, in wolf form, opened her large blue eyes piercing the dead of night.

Padded paws moving swiftly along the pavement, tail low but alert, ears pricked with anticipation, Ellouise moved forward, skirting along the edge of Karkaroff's property. Testing the wards was not a pleasant experience, the fur at the nape of her neck raised with anxiety, goosebumps tickled her underbelly. But after a few moments it became clear that no alarm had been raised, and that she still had her limbs in tact. All good things right? Feeling hopeful and exhilarated, Ellouise crept down the side of the red brick home. It was one thing to get this far undetected, it was another thing to get in, undetected. So now what? Should she spontaneously smash through a window? Dig her way in? This would take some figuring out, the only problem with that was she didn't have much time.
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Wow!! Yes that was short.. but what a short chapter it was.. AMAZING!! I cant wait for the next chapter.. and I agree with Eviee.. cant believe we have to wait THAT long!! But I guess we can if we must.. and I guess we must

But we understand that you have other things going on right now so we will wait patiently.. *waits* ............................................ done yet?! No?!.. oh ok.. back to waiting *waits*.......................................... how about now?.. No?!!! ok!!.. *waits*

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Having paused in the shadow of the towering structure, Ellouise waited, her mind racing a hundred miles an hour. If she changed back to her human form it would likely set off whatever wards Karkaroff had on the place, giving him enough time to make a get away... and she could not let that happen. No. She had to be stealthy about this.
Fortunately for her, Ellouise didn't need to figure anything out at all. The turning of a knob and the squeaking of the hinges sounded the arrival of the man himself. Karkaroff was sneaking out through the back of his own house?

Not wanting to waste the opportunity, Ellouise, pad-footed skulked up behind him, nostrils flares, teeth bared but not uttering a single sound. Once she was close enough behind him, she morphed back into her human form, whipping her wand out and aiming it at the grey haired, beareded mans juggular. The wards had gone off, a shrill shound penetrated the night, but in it's strange way, the world seemed completely oblivious to it. Only Karkaroff jumped at the sound.
"Don't twitch a muscle," Ellouise hissed in his ear, being so close behind him.

Karakroff didn't move. But beads of sweat could be seen forming on his forehead.
"I need to be somewhere," he said, as if she would care.
"Not anymore."
Ellouise heard him sigh, slowly he raised his arms indicating that he was not armed. Pressing the tip of her wand against his neck, she slowly moved around to face him and stare into his cold grey eyes. Traitor. Scum. Coward.
"What do you want from me?" he asked, getting straight to the point, his voice catching on his throught. Nervous? Ellouise didn't move, her hard stare remained fixed on his face as she watched his gaze trail down to her arm. If he so much as thought about over powering her, she would hex his face off!
"Your identity."
He seemed to be processing the information, his eyebrows narrowed in confusion slowly relaxed and his eyes turned to fear. "My... identity? What good would that be to you?"

He was stalling, Ellouise didn't like this, not to mention she was quickly running out of time.
"You don't need to know," she said.
Casting a quick glance over the mans shoulder, at nothing in particular, she gave the distant fence a nod. Karakroff turned, surprise etched on his face.

No, there wasn't anything there. But it was best if he was distracted.
Smacking the elder man over the head with a strong stunning spell. His limp body, as if in slow motion, fell to the ground.

Now it was time to act.
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Ooooh! Wonderful!
Of course I will always stick by (any) authors side when they can't post as often as they'd like or have awful writers block.
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First thing first, that blasted ringing noise had to be stopped, it was already doing her head in, and it would only have been worse in canine form. Directing her wand at nothing in particular, she gave it a wave whilst muttering "Finite."
With luck, it had worked. Of course she had expected something a little more challenging from a two faced death eater... but not everybody could be perfect.
Not hesitating a moment longer, Ellouise, wand in mouth, approached Karkaroffs unconscious body. "Thanks bud," she hissed as she bent down and removed a few strands of matted greasy hair. Didn't he ever wash?!

Weaving her slender arms beneath Karkaroffs, Ellouise attempted to drag his limp form to the shelter of the house. Only, she wasn't very successful. She continued to heave the body along the ground, determination etched in her brows. It had suddenly occured to her though, that she was a witch, so there was no need for the heavy lifting.
"Mobilicorpus," she recited, guiding Karkaroffs body through nthe air with only her wand. Much easier, much more efficient. Once inside she bound him to a chair and hurried up the flight of stairs to where she hoped to find a bedroom... and clothes.

Having reached the landing on the second floor, Ellouise peered down the corridor. All the doors were closed except for the one at the very end. A low light filtered out illuminating the dust particles dancing on the air. She wasn't sure what made her do it, but Ellouise found herself tiptoeing toward the room, her back flat against the wall, and wand in hand extended in front of ... kjust in case she had to blast something to pieces. It could happen. There was no sound coming from the room, and the small light flickered gently like a candle in a light breeze. Gritting her teeth, Ellouise pushed the door open with the tip of her wand, her eyes searching each corner and every shadow before entering.

Sure enough it was a bedroom, dusty, disorganised and musty. There was nothing really defining about the space, nothing that really spoke to her about the kind of man Karkaroff was. Moreso it simply told her that he was... lonely. Alone in the world. Perhaps that was his motivation in the war? To seek revenge on those that were happy, on those that had families. Like her family. Advancing toward the wardbrobe, Ellouise pulled it open and without looking properly, selected one of the mans black robes with plain silver buttons. She held it up to her nose briefly before throwing it down on the bed and taking off her own clothes. Goosebumps rose on her skin, her heart was steadily increasing it's pace. This is it, she thought as she pulled on the loose fitting mens clothing.

Trying not to trip on the too-long hems, her belongings in one hand and her wand in the other, she trotted downstairs. She was almost ready.Going into the kitchen, Ellouise took two glasses from the cupboard. Glass clinking against glass, she placed them down on the counter next to each other, and moved to retvieve a small flask from her other pockets. Carefully she poured the contents evenly into the glasses. The goopy, sluggish, greenish-brown substance wreaked of old gym socks. Nose scrunched up in protest, Ellouise took the hair she had pulled from Karkaroffs greasy head and dropped it into one of the glasses. It frothed and bubbled, hissing at her as it changed to a murky maroon colour. "Gross."
Next, she pulled a couple of strands of her own hair out and dropped it into the other glass, it too reacted in the same way as the other, but turned a strange shade of yellow.

And that's all for now. More next week!
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Now it was time to move and set the wheels in motion. Striding through the kitchen to where Karkaroff's limp body was tied to a chair, she set down the glass which contained the mans greasy, filthy dna. "Now, open wide," she said in a sing song voice, using her free hand to lift up Karakroff's chin and open his mouth. Pouring the yellowish gluggy substance down his throat, wiping the excess into the too long sleeves she was wearing, Ellouise waited. It only too a few seconds to see a considerable shift in the mans appearance, and soon enough, Ellouise was looking at her own reflection. Mind, it was an unconscious reflection.

"No time to waste," she muttered, picking up the second glass from the floor and taking it to the kitchen. Leaning against the smooth, cold counter, Ellouise examined the maroon liquid. This was going to taste foul. In one swift and very painful motion, she closed her eyes and downed the think bubbly mixture. It was like death, in liquid form. There was something rotten about it, it reminded her of jack-o-lanterns that have been left out for too long, the once sweet taste turned sour and bitter... gagworthy. As if the taste wasn't bad enough, the way it made her feel was even worse. Ellouise squinted at her hands, still waiting for her vision to adjust and correct itself. Bumps and lumps could be felt shimmying along her arm, through her legs, across her chest. It was almost like an internal earthquake. It was tearing down her internal structure and reformatting it into something repulsive and undesirable.
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I just realised I still love Ellie!! as my favourite charrie do keep her safe!!

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She hated herself. Without having to see her reflection, she knew what she looked like. Ellouise only had to close her eyes to see the man that she now resembled. The lines that were etched in his face, the grey hairs sprouting from his ears and nostrils.
Shuddering, Ellouise roused herself from her thoughts. It was time to get going. Working swiftly, and with a new found grace, Ellouise/Karkaroff checked the tethering binding the Karkaroff/Ellouise to the chair and pocketed her wand in her suddenly well fitting robes.
"Ciao," she mused under her breath as she was about to apparate to another location. It was about time to set the wheels in motion.

Before she had time to so much as blink, there was a loud cracking noise and two men she didn't recognise apparated beside her.
"Karkaroff," one of them greeted, nodding.
Ellouise wasn't sure how she ought to respond, so she settle with a curt nod, her eyes fixating on the other man who seemed to be taking an interest in the limp body tied to the chair. Her body.
"Leave her be," she growled, eyebrows narrowed dangerously. "She'll get what's coming to her later. Right now I have business to attend to."
Ellouise was rigid with fury, but was both surprised and impressed at how well she seemed to be taking on the role of greasy, stupid, death eater.
"Yes... sir," replied the man, inching away from the chair.

Even with her new found confidence and bravado, she still had to proceed with caution. How much of her 'business' did two men know? How well did they know the real Karkaroff? A small voice in the back of her head nagged at her, 'you're in too deep'.
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Ellouise/Karkaroff stood quietly, lost in thought for the moment, and the two men didn't seem perturbed in the least. Perhaps the voice in her head was wrong, perhaps she wasn't in too deep, yet. Blinking, she narrowed her brows at their patient expressions. "Well?" she asked. They were clearly there for a reason, and they still hadn't suspected she wasn't the real Karkaroff, this was surely a good sign.

The nosy one that had been snooping around her body stepped forward, offering an oddly unnerving smile. "Everything's ready... for the move," he answered, a glint of excitement in his eyes. Ellouise's insides tightened. So this was it... this is what she had waited for.
"Good, no time to waste then," she added, still unclear as to how she ought to be behaving.
The two men exchanged looks before turning to Karkaroff/Ellouise.
"Should we bring this one?"

Ellouise considered this for a moment. She hadn't planned on taking him with her, but if these men thought they ought to, then perhaps she should agree. And it could somehow serve to be an advantage.
"Lock her up will you? I'll deal with her later."
The men nodded, one untying the body before they both lifted the body off the chair, holding it upright.

With a loud cracking sound, the men and her body were gone. Gone, as quickly as they had come.

Ellouise/Karkaroff inhaled deeply, she'd been holding her breath without realising and the burning sensation in her... his chest, was intense. A part of her wondered whether the men suspected foul play, or whether letting the body go was a bad move. But she didn't have the luxury of time to panic right now. No, she had to get moving... they were expecting her.

She knew what she had to do now, where she had to go, the only question that remained was where exactly was she expected to be? The Ministry wasn't a small establishment after all, and among all it's floors, corridors and rooms it would be anyone's guess.
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OMG! I'd written a post! And SS ATE IT! *is horrified* So... this is my lame and deflated attempt at re-creating it. It's really not even half as good as the other one was. *dies*
Thanks lovelies for reading! ... Heh, she may be a little out of her depth.


Giving in to her gut feeling, the adrenalin giving her strength, Ellouise proceeded to the Ministry. If you don't know where to start, then it's always best to start from the beginning, and it was this advice that Ellouise took in arriving to the Ministry. Soon after departing Karkaroff's home, she found herself in the cavity of the establishment... the Atrium. It was cold, dark and smelled of all things nasty. If she hadn't known she was walking straight into danger, then she would have been alerted to it by its atmosphere. The tiles beneath her feet were slick, and judging by the dark shade and putrid smell... it was blood.

"Ooohh sir, you're here sir." Came the voice of a hooded young figure. The male voice was not yet developed, and if she were to hazard a guess, she'd have figured the boy was around her age. Ellouise pitied him, for being a part of this... pitied his misfortune, or perhaps his stupidity.
"Mmhhmm," was all the reply she could muster.
She felt out of her depth, every muscle in her body ached to get away from the place, but her heart kept her where she was.
"W-we-we thought..." started the boy, his pearly white skin visible through the folds of black fabric that threatened to drown his small frame.

"Thought what?" she asked, her voice manly and raspy enough to pass for the aged man she impersonated.

The figure hunched over slightly, was he afraid? At any rate, Ellouise wasn't able to evaluate him for long enough before he turned and headed toward a long corridor she'd barely noticed off to the left.
"... thought you were... done for," he finished.

Done for? Why would Karkaroff have been done for?
Somewhere in the distance behind them, screaming erupted. The sound cut through to her core like a knife through butter. It sent chills up her spine.
She hadn't replied, because after all she didn't know how to reply. This wasn't an issue though, as far as she could tell, the boy wasn't expecting a reply.
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