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Star Child 05-29-2010 01:47 PM

A Phoenix Sister - Sa13+
 
Just to remind you I don’t own any of these characters they are the sole property of J.K. Rowling.
Harry Potter and the Phoenix Sister
Chapter 1: I think I know you people

What would happen if the only thing you knew about yourself was a lie? Would you take on reality? Could you find it?

A room opened up filled with seats. Thousands of musky wooden chairs lined in rows that seemed to incase the unlucky person sitting between them. In the center of a deep pit stood proudly a stone throne threaded with chains.

Only two people sat in the chamber, one locked in the chair with chains like a wild demon with a tired face and the other had a scar shaped like a lightning bolt. He sat and stood one after another with an expression that seemed to scream “What’s so different with this person?” That was not the right question. It should have been, “Who does this person look like?”

“I’ll only ask this once,” droned Harry Potter in a tone that seemed to have never been spoken with before. “Who are you and do you have a story to go with this name, Jess Potter?”

At the sound of her name Jess Potter looked up at Harry with familiar hazel eyes. She looked nearly exactly like Harry except Jess’s hair like the jet black hair of both Harry and their father James mixed with a small braid of gold and read hair framing her face.

“For the last time I AM your sister and yes I do have a story to match,” Jess spoke with ringing authority that would have matched a tired caffeine drained politician better than this small, proud 11 year old.

“I was born 1 month before Lord Voldemort came on that dreaded night in Godric’s Hollow. I lived a weird life because I’ve been an animagus since birth. My creature was a phoenix so if I had been in my phoenix form during Voldemort’s for a lack of a better word slaughter then when I died I would have been reborn in the ashes. Also with no one to care for me it happened again and again,” Jess’s words seemed to be dropping an anvil on Harry’s head with every word.

Harry now had gone through quite a beating from Jess’s story, but now it seemed like it had brought clarity with it. He now had only one small task left to do. Tell everyone her story was true.

Light came bursting in through a door magically hidden as part of a wall. Shadows fell in by the hundreds and as voices carried with the sound of scratching quills. Both Potter’s hearts fell down while their dinners jumped up.

Harry all ready standing leaped gracefully into the pit toward Jess. Chains recoiled off of her as Harry ran forward. But it was too late. As soon as Harry got close enough to touch his sister the press rolled in on a disaster express.

Cameras flashed as Ministry personal tried to both look and control the oncoming wave of people. Harry grabbed Jess and tugged her toward the back exit.

Jess’s voice caught Harry’s attention as he tried to ram down the locked back door.

“ I said do you have a plan!” Jess yelled in his ear. She was looking at him with both fear and expectancy. Harry felt a lurch of anger as he realized that she was his problem now.

“No, ok I don’t. Do you have anything else to add to this situation?” Harry yelled back at her. To him his words caused a once proud face to show a new emotion…abandonment. Although it caused him to feel guilty he reasoned not to because he had only known her for minuets, and there was no time to feel sad now!

Jess recovered quickly, and spoke with frustration, “Yes I do have some words,” and on the same breath squeaked, “ Crap, crap, and more…”

But her sentence was cut off as the door opened and swift hands brought her in.

“Huh?” Harry asked dumbfounded with an expression that would have caused a riot of laughter elsewhere.

“Relax it’s just me,” said Ron Weasley calmly as the lights flickered on. “Now what’s the deal with her?” Ron asked questionably. “Now don’t tell me you believe that story.”

“Ron come on it is true. Why else would someone do this?” Harry replied. As those two were having a reunion Jess had slowly crept away to do something no one was expecting.

Thank you SO much for reading!!! This is my first fan fic. I'll post more later...hopefully....:eek:

Lily<33 05-29-2010 08:37 PM

Hey it's pretty good but I'm still trying to wrap my head around the whole harry has a sister thing haha :) PAMS!

Star Child 05-29-2010 09:05 PM

Phoenix sister: chapter 2 - attached by who knows what
 
[COLOR="rgb(72, 209, 204)"]thanks so much for reading. PLEASE leave a comment [/COLOR]:hpbroom:
Chapter 2: Attacked by who knows what

As Harry was explaining everything to Ron, Jess had shifted into her phoenix form. She dove as they screamed … and swore. Soon the best mates were clutching each other as the phoenix landed on a nearby chair one moment, filling the musky room with high squeaks, and then the bird was Jess throwing her head back laughing. She swept the dust off the table with her long hair. The dust flew through the air and landed onto Harry and Ron.
“I believe her story now!” Ron squealed ears turning red as always. “I think,” he added with an amused expression as Jess and Harry simultaneously snorted with laughter.
Jess filled with hysterics and snide remarks glanced at the grandfather clock located just behind Ron and Harry. At the same moment she fell to the floor asleep. Harry confused and tired glanced back at the clock which read 3:02 am.
“OH, brother,” Harry thought and shook his head as he now glanced at the sleeping Jess. “OH, sister!” Harry rethought as now he realized again he was responsible for her.
The door creaked open as the Minister of Magic (Kingsley Shacklebolt) stepped into the small, spare room.
“Guessing by your expression you must believe her,” Kingsley said with a low reassuring tone.
“In my defense,” Harry began, “ stranger things have happened.”
Do you like it so far?

Lily<33 05-29-2010 10:43 PM

I like it but I was wondering how old everyone is and has the trio graduated yet? Has harry become an auror? I have many questions but one request...PAMS!

Star Child 05-29-2010 10:46 PM

thank you guys so much for reading and post comments please

Star Child 05-29-2010 10:48 PM

Chapter 3: how to explain my sister

The Weasley’s home or the burrow as once again filled to the brim with people. Jess was gazing into the Weasley’s garden where George was lobbing gnomes over the garden hedge. He had gone out there just to find to find a place to move his arms.
Harry was once again explaining Jess’s story, and even though it might have been better for jess to explain it herself she out right refused after George had laughed right to her face.
Mr. Weasley and Percy both seemed to be absorbing Harry’s every word. They ( Percy & Mr. Weasley) had just gotten home from the Ministry when they say Jess sitting pretzel lapped at the kitchen table. She had been entertaining Ginny by switching from human to phoenix form at the mention of anything bird related.
“Oh! I’ve already heard this joke,” Ginny replied to Jess.
“Alright I give up. How have you already heard all these jokes?” Jess was visibly fuming. Her face now looked as read as the jacket Ginny had lent her. It was too cold to be late August.
“How do I know you ask. A little birdie told me!” Ginny was already laughing even before Jess grew feathers.
Even though Ron had already seen Jess transform into a phoenix. He still jumped. They all did even though it only lasted a minuet or two. You just had to look at them to see that they belonged in the same world.
Harry completed his story but he still felt like they were still wondering. “Is it really all that insane,” he asked himself. He stole a glance at a feather still in its descent to the floor. “Yes, yes it was insane, but that’s just my world.”
Do you guys like it? Soon I'll post the rest so any questions probably will be answered then:voldie1::voldie1:

Lily<33 05-29-2010 10:59 PM

yes,yes it was insane but that's just my world

^^^i LOVE that quote because it is SO true haha so tell me a
is Jess going to hogwarts this year and is ginny as well?

Star Child 05-30-2010 02:02 AM

Ok, just to clear things up-
this is happening months after Harry defeated Voldemort in the 7th book
Jess was born a year after Harry although she has been reborn so instead of being 17 she is 11. I was going to explain this later but I don't want anyone to be confused.
thank you for reading :)

Lily<33 05-30-2010 03:28 AM

Thanks for explaining! And I really do LOVE this FF!

Star Child 05-30-2010 08:55 PM

Chapter 4
 
Chapter 4: I didn’t expect to be here
“Come on Jess let’s go,” Harry called motioning her with a flick of his wrist.
“Where are we going?” Jess whined
“We are going here,” Harry replied. He pulled out some spare parchment and quill. “Now memorize this address,” Harry whispered shoving her the note.
The Headquarters of the Order of the Phoenix may be found at number 12 Grimmauld Place, London…”
“…what the bloody h*** is the Order of the Phoenix?” Jess cried. He could tell she hated being confused.
“Well,” Harry began, “it’s an old society created to take down Voldemort. But now he’s gone so it’s my house,” Harry ended simply. “Come on we’ve got avapporate,” Harry shuddered momentarily at the thought of avaparation. He still hated the feeling of being squeezed through a small tube even though he has his license.
“Oh,” Jess said still confused. “How come it’s yours?”
“Well,” Harry began, “Ok lets go!” Harry said loosing his temper. Then he grabbed Jess’s arm for a brief moment, and let it go once they reached the Black’s front steps.
Harry went and held the door open wide. Jess’s eyes widened as she stepped in. Glancing around the kitchen she was in aw. But what else could you expect from someone who lived their life as a bird.
They heard a short scuffle and out pops Kreatcher. Poor kids, it scared them to death.
“Is this a new blood traitor friend Master has found?” Kreatcher asked his voice deep and raspy. Upon hearing this Jess turned pale white from fear, and then read with embarrassment.
“Kreatcher,” Harry scolded, “this is Jess Potter, my sister!” Kreatcher’s eyes grew wide from shock. He bent down to beat his head on the floor, but before Harry could reach down and yank him off the ground he froze.
Jess’s finger was pointed strait at Kreatcher’s forehead. “Stop it now,” she ordered. Jess didn’t sound childish or scared. She sounded powerful.
Once Kreatcher had lifted himself off the ground he proceeded in bowing, but when he didn’t stop Jess merely raised her eyebrows. Kreatcher slowly backed away from her cold expression. And where he went Harry had no idea.
“How did you get this house?” Jess asked and her eyes pierced through his. It scared the bleep out of him.
“Our god father grew up in this house. His name was…” Harry continued his tale and sat down at the kitchen table. He hoped that all of his stories didn’t overwhelm the poor kid, but he didn’t have to worry.
She didn’t interrupt she just watched him. Part of Harry kept talking and the other was just trying to understand her. How did it feel to know how much of your life you missed. He missed 11years if you didn’t count his first, but his memory couldn’t recall his first year of life. It always felt like he missed something.
Her life kept starting over. She missed those simple years for her 11 years had been pulled and stretched into 17 years of living on the streets alone. She could never meet those who would have cared so much for her; mum, dad, Sirius, Lupin, Tonks, Dumbledore, Dobby… The list could go on.
“Wow, I missed that much,” Jess whispered and her voice brought him back to reality.
“Don’t worry,” she was actually sad she missed all the drama. Harry continued, “Some big problem is gonna come up,”
Jess and Harry exchanged grins. Jess looked at Harry’s scar wondering if she could ever overcome the legends he had preformed. With the friends that helped him and would continue to help forever.
While Harry looked at Jess’s phoenix braid. It showed the Gryffindor colors red and gold. She showed more courage than the entire house combined because she did things regardless of if she wanted to and regardless of what was easy. She did it because it had to be done and no one else would or could do it for her.
Both of them didn’t know why but they were proud of the other. More importantly they were proud they had found each other.

Thanks for reading. Post a comment. Sorry for any mistakes in grammar or spelling or...:*ops:

Lily<33 05-30-2010 10:10 PM

Aww...that was SO sweet I LOVED IT!!! PAMS and sorry about not replying as fast as I had read it because I was half way through the post and my computer crashed so I had to wait(what seemed like FOREVER) and then re-read that half and the last half of the post...but anyways PAMS!
~Lauren~

Star Child 05-31-2010 10:31 PM

Chapter 5
 
Chapter 5: Once Again Adjusting
Now it was nearly 7 in the morning, and Jess could barely sit upright.
“Alright, lets get you to bed,” Harry instructed. It felt strange was he held onto her shoulders and steered her up the stairs. When they came across the second story hallway there was two doors; one door led to Sirius’s room which Harry was using and the other was Regalus’s room that Kreatcher was supposed to be clearing out.
With another yawn Jess grabbed the doorknob to Regulas’s room and stepped inside. To Harry’s surprise the room was relatively clean. All the dark artifacts and pictures were piled into cardboard boxes which were scattered all over the room. Besides those and a 4 poster bed and a lone picture hanging on the green walls it was empty.
Jess walked up slowly to the picture and anxiously reached out for it. When she grabbed hold of it and pulled nothing happened. Jess scrunched up her nose and yanked again but still the picture remained stuck.
“Oh, sorry it must have a permanent sticking charm on it,” Harry droned as he moved the cardboard boxes into a corner with a flick of his wand.
“Weird,” Jess replied reaching out to touch the motionless picture again, “I thought wizard pictures can move?” she asked as she turned her head to see Harry staring at the picture.
“Yeah they can move,” Harry answered, “that can’t be. It shouldn’t be. Sirius and Regalus, TOGETHER?” But it was. The picture undoubtedly was the two brotheres arms slung over the other’s shoulders, smiling. They appeared to be four or five. Way before magic would have appeared.
“I don’t get it aren’t they brothers?” Jess’s question brought Harry back to reality.
“Well, they were brothers, but they absolutely despised each other. This one,” Harry said as he pointed to Sirius, “is our godfather,”
“This was his house right,” Jess wasn’t asking it like a question. She already knew the answer.
“Jess, this was his house. I inherited it when he…um…died,” Harry spoke calmly as her eyes started to water, “Come on Jess,” Harry kneeled down on the ground so that they were almost eye level with each other. He then placed his arms around her and gave her what was almost certainly her first hug.
“He was exactly like you, you know,” Harry pulled out of the hug and smiled trying to reassure her. “He was always causing trouble.”
Now Jess was laughing so Harry stopped being so serious and yanked her up by her ankles laughing.
“Now its late or rather early and your going to bed, ok?” Harry gently tossed her into the 4 poster bed smiling.”
“I have no say in this matter do I?” Jess asked not seeming to care.
“None at all,” Harry replied but Jess was already asleep. “Night Jess, sweet dreams,” He whispered to her as he laid a blanket over her which he found on the floor. Jess seemed pretty comfortable for someone sleeping fully dressed and onto of the covers.
Harry slowly backed out of the room and shut the door quietly so that he didn’t wake Jess. He slowly turned around and found himself nearly tripping over Kreatcher.
“Kreatcher, what are you doing here?” Harry asked though he barley made a sound.
“Kreatcher has brought young Mistress some new things,” Kreatcher answered and he seemed sincere. “Should Kreatcher put young Mistress’s things in that room?”
“Yeah sure, if your quiet. Yang on HER things in HER room?” Harry whispered dumbfounded.
“Of course. These are clothes from past mistresses, cousins, and such. As for young Mistress’s room, where else should young Mistress stay? This is Master’s and young Mistress’s home,” Kreatcher replied somewhat comfortable with the future of many black family heirlooms.
“Yes Kreatcher, now put them in Jess’s closet…quietly,” Harry ordered calmly and hopelessly confused. He ignored the feeling because it had been a very long day and there was going to be an even longer one tomorrow. Perhaps, just maybe Kreatcher was happy, and despite Hermione’s pleas Kreatcher was very happy just taking orders.

Star Child 06-02-2010 01:57 AM

Chapter 6
 
Chapter 6: Planning for Disaster
“Morning Jess,” Harry said. Kreatcher was already serving breakfast on the dinning room table. Jess was staring wide-eyed at the sizzling bacon while light was pouring in through the window opposite Jess.
“Oh, hello,” Jess muttered finally taking her eyes off the food.
“Sit Master, the food will be ready soon.” Kreatcher commanded as he ran into the other room and came back carrying a stiff envelope and the Daily Prophet.
“Thank you Kreatcher,” Harry said as he reached out to take the envelopes. But Kreatcher refused and Jess got handed the envelope. Harry reached over and quickly grabbed the Daily Prophet before Jess could see the front page. She seemed however preoccupied since Kreatcher had piled SO much food onto her plate. Her head didn’t even clear the stack of pancakes.
“THANKS KREATCHER!” Jess screamed and it was clear she was laughing. A hand holding a fork came into sight above her breakfast, but that was all Harry could see.
One by one the stack was decreasing until Jess’s eyes could be seen over the plate.
“So… Harry what’s on the newspaper you don’t want me to see?” Jess inquired as the pancakes kept shrinking.
“Stop eating or your gonna get yourself sick,” he scolded with fake frustration.. The plate was then taken away by Kreatcher.
“Bravo, you are excellent at changing the subject, but what does it say?”
Harry cleared his throat loudly, “You don’t want to hear this,” he warned.
“Just read it.”
“Ok,
The Caged Bird Sings by Reeta Skeeter
In the early hours of yesterday morning I received word that our own hero Mr. Harry James Potter, whom I’ve come to know personally, meet with a mysterious visitor that no one seemed to recognize.
I of course went to confront Mr. Potter only to discover that this young visitor is none other than a relative of Harry’s. They both fled the scene.
A good friend of mine later filled me in on something close to a miracle. The young relative was in fact an illegal animagus and Harry Potter’s sister…”
thanks for reading, sorry about any mistakes :*ops:

Star Child 06-03-2010 10:20 PM

Chapter 7
 
Chapter 7: This will not end well
“Wow,” Jess stated simply.
“That’s all you have to say. Someone told her and you say nothing.”
Jess looked directly at Harry and slowly started to stare him down. “What? Was I supposed to stay a secret forever?” She asked as she stood up loudly and stormed out of the room.
Kreatcher entered the room nimbly and got out of her way. “Young Mistress wishes to be left alone,” Kreatcher stated and he firmly blocked the doorway.
Harry knew he was right.
* * *
No more waiting, “Jess can I come in?” Harry asked outside Jess’s room which was once Regulas’s room. It had been an hour and Harry although new to family issues he knew he should check on her.
He peeked his head inside and there was Jess just sitting on the bed. “Hey Harry,” she called still unmoving.
“Jess, you know I didn’t mean it like that,” Harry defended. “I don’t like it when people recognize me and act like they know everything. I just… wanted you to have something better than I did.”
“Oh, ok,”
“Wait that’s it?” Harry asked astounded, “Wow parenting’s easy!” he sat on the bed next to Jess. Who still didn’t seemed at ease.
“So…” Jess pried, “ What were your plans?”
“Nothing, just…WORK!” Harry yelped leaping off the bed. “I’ll be back. I just need to grab some things from my office. Work that I need to do.” He explained after seeing her amused expression.
“Wait, won’t people recognize you?”
“Nah, I’ll just take the floo powder right to my office. No press or anything will be there,” He answered. “Hopefully,” he added out of earshot.
:evillaugh thanks for reading. PLEASE POST A COMMENT. I'll post again soon.

Star Child 06-05-2010 10:34 PM

sorry i'll post soon. i'm busy with going to graduation parties. :sfight::swfight:

Star Child 06-06-2010 05:50 PM

Chapter 8
 
Chapter 8: Well this is bad
Harry stepped out of the grand fireplace and into his office. No one was even near it as far Harry knew. “I’m just gonna grab a few case files and leave a note and go home,” he muttered to himself.
“Harry?” a voice asked from the doorway.
“Oh, Hermione it’s just you,” Harry let out a sigh to relief. “Listen I was never here.”
“Harry you have a lot of explaining to do. I was only here for 5 minuets for a press meeting. By the way I got the promotion. You are looking at the new Vice President of Media Affairs. Anyway, I was being pummeled by questions. What are you superiors saying?” Hermione ranted.
“I don’t know I haven’t seen them,” Harry replied. “Can you please do your job and try to control this mess,” he pleaded.
“I have, but we need to get you and Jess in here to talk,”
“Fat chance of that happening. She’s just a kid.”
Hermione was growing redder and redder. “Listen you are going to take her to my office in one hour or I can go and see if Reeta Skeeter wants an interview,” Hermione threatened.
“I’ll see you soon,” Harry reassured.
Sorry i was late posting this:*ops:, and sorry it was short. please leave a comment and try taking the poll. i want to hear from you

Lily<33 06-09-2010 01:57 AM

hey sorry i havent posted in a while but i was grounded...love the whole hermione threat thing haha PAMS! oh and no worries about it being short just keep on writing :)

Star Child 06-11-2010 04:16 PM

Chapter 9
 
Chapter 9: To hell with it
“Jess,” Harry called up the stairs, “I need you to get down here for a second,” He had just returned from the Ministry and he had been imagining the reactions when people meet Jess.
“Hey Harry, what do you need?” Jess asked. She was standing on the bottom step because then she and Harry were the same height.
“Um.. You know how some people got a hold on your story,”
“Yeah, what’s going on?”
“Um…” Harry restarted. “They need to meet with you to smooth things over. So take a shower get dressed and be down here soon. Ok?” Harry sputtered.
“Right Harry,” Jess answered.
“Jess,” he blurted, “These people are my bosses, and if you could just…”
“Tone down my lovely personality,” Jess finished, laughing. “I’ll be right back,” she assured as she climbed up a few steps. “And Harry, you realize how badly this is going to turn out.”
But before he could grasp what she had said, Jess had sprinted up the stairs.
“I’m not dressing up you realize.”
:*ops:thanks for reading, PLEASE post a comment i really want to hear from you guys. i post more soon promise

Lily<33 06-14-2010 07:31 AM

Love the chapter! PAMS! :D

Star Child 06-15-2010 04:02 PM

Chapter 10
 
Chapter 10:
“Harry!” Jess called from upstairs.
“What?”
“Why is it that every single piece of clothing is covered in owl poo?” Jess asked. She had come back down the stairs in the same clothes Harry had first meet her in. Which were filthy, and that was as kind as he could put it.
“I don’t know,” he retorted.
A single knock came from the door. “Harry, its me Hermione. Let me in,” she commanded.
“Hello, Harry,” Hermione called from the other room (most of his friends had keys). “Listen I brought some things over for Jess,” she pulled out a large trash bag filled to the brim with clothes.
“Thank you!” Jess squealed. “Here let me take that,” she ran upstairs so quickly some items of clothes were scattered across the floor.
“Harry get her changed quickly, and I’ll meet you there,” Hermione ordered. Then her wand started buzzing. “Oh crap, I’m late… and your late too so get to the Ministry as fast as you can,” she was already halfway out the door.
Harry looked down at the floor. The clothing items….were….um…more private undergarments. He’d tell Kreatcher to pick them up later.
“Alright Harry lets go,” Jess commanded. She was wearing a light purple blouse, a black skirt, and here long hair was let down. She was presentable. Well better than she was before.
The pair left and Kreatcher was still picking up groceries so the house was empty. That was until a Mr. Ron Weasley came, looking for Harry.
“HELLO, anybody home?” Ron yelled up the stairs. His eyes strayed to the forgotten ‘clothes’ on the ground. “Hermione?”
:eek:thanks for reading. I'll post more soon promise. :r/hr:

Star Child 06-19-2010 09:20 PM

sorry i promise to post more soon
:)

Lily<33 06-20-2010 06:34 AM

Ooooo this could turn really bad...like Ron could think that hermione and Harry are sneaking off together oh and question are hermione and Ron married or just dating or even together? Anyways great posts! Hope you PAMS!

Star Child 06-21-2010 10:08 PM

Chapter 11
 
Chapter 11: A HUGE misunderstanding
“Jess, when I tell you to run I want you to listen,” Harry commanded. “My office is on the 2nd floor, and I work for the Department of Magical Law Enforcement. I’ll create a distraction and you head right to the lift,” he pointed to the right of the gold statue. “If I don’t come up with you look for the wooden door, and if anyone asks tell them…”
“I’ll tell them that my older brother is having a meeting with an auror because he broke the law, and I’m carrying a message for him,” Jess recited.
“Sure…lets go with that.” Harry breathed out slowly and took a step into the shinning light.
“Mr. Potter!!”
“Harry look over here!!”
“Do you understand that there are rumors circulating about a lost sister?”
“Do you have a lost sister?”
“Listen!!” Harry bellowed, “No comment,” He strode right toward the lift. “And if you keep chasing me you’re going to understand why I’m an auror at the age of 18. Now back away!” He entered the contraption just as the doors slammed shut.
The lift began its climb to the 2nd floor with both Potters inside. Along with a furious Weasley.
“Oh, hello Ron,” Jess turned toward him. “I didn’t even know you were in here.”
“Hey mate, are you going to the press conference?” Harry inquired.
“No,”
“If you’re looking for Hermione she’ll be at the conference with us,” Harry stated.
“Yeah, you guys are spending a lot of time together,” Ron said.
“What are you talking about? It’s you and Hermione that have been inseparable since you started dating,” Harry replied.
“Well you seem to be getting really close to her,” Ron insisted.
“Wait a second back up,” Jess held her hands up. “One of you lunatics got a girlfriend?” Jess questioned.
“One of us thought they did,” Ron muttered as he thrust his fist onto Harry’s nose.
Yeah sorry i haven't been posting lately, but i was visiting my relatives (shout out to Claire). As this has been pointed out to me i don't have perfect grammar when i write so SORRY. Feel free to comment and take the poll. Thanks for reading.

samthehpfreak 06-22-2010 11:41 PM

i just read all that and all i can say is ... WOW it's really good :D keep up the good work :D

Star Child 06-27-2010 10:52 PM

sorry i promise to post more soon....by the way i lost the game


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