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Ruby85 12-01-2010 10:02 PM

A Lost Soul - Sa16+
 
Hi y'all! This is my 6th FanFic! This is about of Voldemort having a Daughter (gasp) and her life as the child of He-Who-Mus-Not-Be-Named. As much as I would like to take credit for the wonderful world of HP, I can't, it is J.K Rowling amazing creation. Enjoy!
(Oh slight tweak, Peter got caught for betraying Lily and James and Sirius is free and well!)





Pre-Prologe:

Voldemort cradled his daughter. She was beautiful in every way. He tuned his head to his love. Rose smiled back at him.
'What shall we call her?' he asked.
'Mmmm, I like the name Scarlett.' she whispered.
'Scarlett it is then.' said Voldemort.
'I asked if my friend would be the God-Father.' said Rose.
'Sirius Black? Oh well, if you want.' said Voldemort, putting his arm round Rose, unaware Bellatrix watched with Envy.

A Few Days later, Voldemort knocked on Rose's door. There was no reply.
'That's odd.' he thought.
He gently pushed the door open, and saw the Horror that awaited him. Rose lay on the floor, still, wand in hand. He checked her pulse, hoping she was asleep. It was still. He bowed his head, and noticed something. He picked up a black, curly hair.
'Bellatrix.' he said.
The cot in the corner was silent, and for one heart-stopping moment, he thought the worst. He picked up Scarlett to find she was simply asleep. He rocked her, sighing with relief.
Bella would pay for this.

Prologue:

The street was dark, and the black shape of the Orphanage loomed over head, casting it's shadow on all in it's path. The only sound was a scabby cat, searching the dustbins for food. It lifted it's head at a pop, and walked over. It pressed itself against the mans legs, meowing for food. Albus Dumbledore chuckled and with one hand, pulled a fish out of thin air, and gave it to the cat, who looked pleased with itself as it slunk out of sight. There was another pop, and a witch with Emerald green robes appeared, striding over.
'Albus, is that really...' asked Minerva McGonagall.
Dumbledore put his fingers to his lips and indicated the pile of black blankets, through which gentle breathing could be heard.
'Yes Minerva. Meet Scarlett Riddel.' whispered Dumbledore.
'Where are we taking her? Not... here?' asked McGonagall, looking up at the Orphanage.
'No, I would take her in myself before giving her to this place. We are taking her to her God-Father.' said Dumbledore, walking over to Grimmude Place, and knocking on the door.
A man opened it, a man with shoulder-lenght black hair and blue eyes.
'Albus, Minerva, what are you two doing here?' asked Sirius Black.
He spotted the bundle of black blankets.
'No, No, please tell me she's not, anything but...' he said.
'Calm down Sirius.' said Minerva.
'Come in.' said Sirius, standing back to let them in. They sat in the living room.
'As you may not know, James and Lily, were betrayed, by their secret-keeper.' said Dumbledore.
Sirius clenched his fists.
'Wormtail.' he muttered.
'Exactly. But, after killing James and Lily, Voldemort tried to kill Harry, but was blasted back by some sort of magic, and destroyed. So, this leaves Harry with no parents, and Scarlett with no Father.' said Minerva.
'But what about Rose?' whispered Sirius.
'A Few Days before, Rose was murdered. It seemed, Bellatrix Lestrange envied the bond between Rose and Voldemort, and killed her, so she could try and win his love.' said Dumbledore.
Sirius put his head in his hands. Rose was dead, James and Lily were dead, Peter was in Azkaban for causing Deaths.
'What about Scarlett?' he asked, pulling himself together.
'She has no living relatives. If you will take her, then fine. Otherwise, I'll take her.' said Dumbledore.
'Of course.' said Sirius.
'Alright then.' said Dumbledore.
He stood up, and passed Sirius the bundle of Blankets. Sirius looked at his God-Daughter.
'Well, I think we need to leave Sirius and Scarlett to get some rest.' said Dumbledore, and with that they were gone.
Sirius lay on the sofa, still cradling his God-Daugter.
'Poor Girl.' he whispered, and son fell asleep.

Ruby85 12-05-2010 09:27 PM

Bleugh no replies. Ok, maybe if I post....

Scarlett Riddle felt pretty miserable. She looked once more at the raging dover sea that spread out on front of her like a blanket.
'Why?' she whispered.
She had been whispering this word for the past few hours. She lay down and leaned over the cliff, brushing her finger on the white chalk-like rock, blowing it over the sea. Her neon blue hair flew out of its band and across her face. She took a streak, and looked at it with interest. She let it fly again, it's colour a sparkly gold. She gave a small smile. It was the first time she had smiled since she left home, after finding out her father was the Darkest Wizard of All Time.
'Scarlett?' called a voice, a strange, unfamiliar, squeaky voice.
Scarlett turned round, to see a small, water-eyed man, in stripy robes.
'It is you! Oooo! I'll get a great reward for bringing you back.' he squealed.
She had seen this man, on the wanted posters.
Peter Pettigrew.
'Oh yeah? Well, you ain't getting that reward today.' she said, and ran past.
Peter tried to grab her, but his hand closed on thin air.
'Scarlett! Come on I won't hurt you!' he called, running after her.
'Too bad! I will!' she cried as he caught her.
She disaparated, but could still feel his grasp on her shirt. She emerged, back in london, Peter still clinging to her shirt.
'Get off her!' yelled a voice, and Peter was thrown off her.
Scarlett looked to see Harry Potter.
'Scarlett? You ok?' asked Harry running over.
'You're speaking to me?' she asked in surprise.
'Yeah, why wouldn't I?' asked Harry.
'Oh just the fact my father killed your parents.' she said.
'So? Doesn't mean you're a killer.' said Harry, helping her up.
The turned to see Peter getting to his feet.
'Scarlett. Come on, time to go home.' he said.
Scarlet looked behind her at 12 Grimmude Place.
'I am home.' she said, and she and Harry raised their wands in union.
'STUPEFY!' they yelled and Peter just disaparated in time, as two red beams of light flew at the place where he had been moments before.
A door opened behind them and footsteps were heard. Harry and Scarlett turned round as Sirius engulfed Scarlett into a big hug.
'Ow, I can't breath!' gasped Scarlett.
'Where have you been! I've been worried!' whispered Sirius in Scarlett's ear.
'Out.' said Scarlett.
'Let's get you inside.' said Sirius, pulling Scarlett inside.
She waved at Harry who was grinning.
'You wouldn't be smiling if you were me.' Scarlett said as the door shut.
'Where were you! I was worried out of mind!' said Sirius, his hands on her shoulders.
'Out.' She repeated.
'That isn't good enough!' said Sirius.
'Well, it's works for me.' she said.
'You're not talking to yourself.' said Sirius.
'Good, because otherwise I'd be nuts.' Scarlett said stubbornly.
'Don't talk back to me Scarlett Rose Sirius Remus Tom Riddle'
'Oh Lord, the full name, here we go.' said Scarlett sarcastically.
'Look! I was worried! You just disappeared! I didn't know where you had gone, I mean, look what almost happened to you if Harry hadn't stepped in.' said Sirius.
'I'm 13 Sirius!' Scarlett said and stormed off into the living room, throwing herself down onto the sofa.

z999993 12-05-2010 10:00 PM

First! Haha love it Ruby! I read the first sentence of the pre-prologue and was going 'woahhh. Never read a fanfic like this before." PAMS! ^_^ Why did Scarlett disappear, I wonder.... Post soon! :glomp:

malfoygrl 12-05-2010 10:08 PM

Ohh!! :) I love it!! :)
Scarlett seems nothing like her dad o.O Maybe that's a good thing..?
Anywhoooo PAMS!!

xxSara

Ruby85 12-06-2010 09:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by z999993 (Post 9994525)
First! Haha love it Ruby! I read the first sentence of the pre-prologue and was going 'woahhh. Never read a fanfic like this before." PAMS! ^_^ Why did Scarlett disappear, I wonder.... Post soon! :glomp:

She left because she found out her Father was You-Know-Who

Quote:

Originally Posted by snapesgrl (Post 9994571)
Ohh!! :) I love it!! :)
Scarlett seems nothing like her dad o.O Maybe that's a good thing..?
Anywhoooo PAMS!!

xxSara

Yeah, defiantly a good thing....


Scarlett sat on the sofa, tears running down her face. Sirius came in and sat next to her.
'I was worried. You may be 13, you may be talented at Magic, but it won't stop me worrying. I'll still worry about you when you're 25, and I'm... well, I'm an old man.' he said, putting his arms round her.
He gently pulled her onto his lap, her head resting on his chest. She sniffled, nestling her head in his chest.
'Sorry.' she whispered.
'It's ok. Maybe I just over reacted.' said Sirius, stroking her hair.
'Sirius?' asked Scarlett. 'Can I ask you something?'
'No, you're not getting a FireBolt. Well, maybe for your birthday.' said Sirius with a grin.
'No, not that. Umm, who was, my mother?' She asked.
Sirius's grin faded.
'Your mother.' he said. 'Was a beautiful, talented, witch. And a metamorphmagus.' he added, glancing at Scarlett's sparkly gold hair. 'She was uncommonly kind, but very fiery. Wouldn't back down to anyone. She would argue her case until you were forced to surrender. I see so much of her in you. She was called Rose'
Scarlett took a lock of hair, and turned it to it's natural colour, a almost-red ginger tone. Hence her name.
'What happened to her?' Scarlett asked.
'She was killed, by Bellatrix Lestrange.' said Sirius.
Scarlett knew, in her heart, she would make Bellatrix pay for killing her mother.

Hera 12-08-2010 02:51 AM

Wow this is different. PAMS :)

malfoygrl 12-09-2010 01:07 AM

Ohhhh!! I love it!!
I hope Scarlett kills Bella :D ...
I love this story and can't wait for moreee
PAMS!!!

xxSara

bookwormfairy 01-06-2011 09:08 PM

nice story!!!!

Ruby85 01-09-2011 09:24 PM

Good grief, talk about loyal readers!

Scarlett sat on the train, curled in on herself. She always arrived early, usually about half an hour before it set off. Meant she didn't have to take all the stares and whispers, and could find a carriage on her own. It was only now she understood why they stared at her. She looked up and saw a man get on the train. At first she thought it was the conductor, but as it turned round to look at her, she found herself looking in the face of her other God-Father.
Remus Lupin.
'Scarlett! What are you doing on the train so early?' he asked, coming into her carriage.
'No reason in particular.' she said. 'What are you doing on the train?'
'Umm... I got a job, as the Defence Against The Dark Art's Teacher.' he said, siting next to her.
'Nice one.' Scarlett said.
'What's up?' he asked gently.
'Nothing.' she said quickly.
'No, there is something up. I know you.' Remus said.
He looked right into her eyes.
'Oh, just my father.' she muttered.
'Ah. When did you find out?' he asked gently.
'Over the summer.' she said, tears leaking out.
'Come here.' he said, putting his arms round her, and wiping her eyes with a tissue.
'I'm just over crying nothing.' she said, trying to pull herself together.
'No, it's alright to cry.' he said.
'No seriously, the kids are gonna start coming soon. I can't let them see me crying.' she said.
She leaned back in her seat, listening to all the parents saying goodbye to their kids. Every goodbye, every 'Love you' felt like another cold shard into her heart, until it was nothing but ice. She sighed, wondering what was going to happen this year. They never seemed to have a normal year. Suddenly, her vision went blurry.
'Oh no, here we go again.' she thought.
She had these visions, of the future. She screwed up her eyes, and saw it.

Scarlett Riddle stood in a graveyard, facing her dad, whom she had just watched being reborn.
'Dad?' she whispered.


She shook her head. The train set off, and she paid no attention to the conversation. She was jerked out of her thoughts by the train stopping.
'Why are we stopping? We can't be there yet.' said Hermione.
Harry looked out the door, and Scarlett looked out the window, as the train jerked and Harry was thrown back into his seat.
'I dunno. Maybe we've broken down or something.' he said.
The lights went.
'Ouch Ron, that was my foot!' said Hermione.
'What's going on?' Scarlett asked.
Suddenly, everyone just seemed to crowd into their compartment.
'Quiet!' said the hoarse voice of her God-Father.
'Thank Merlin.' Scarlett whispered.
He stood up, and faced the dementor that entered. Suddenly, Scarlett heard, terrible things.

'You, you stole the heart of my one true love.'
'I didn't know! I didn't Know!'
'AVADA KEDAVA!'
'Now, to take care of the child... hang on, someone's coming.'
'Rose? Oh No, no, Rose. Scarlett!'


She shuddered, and passed out.

Lily<33 01-09-2011 10:47 PM

That's pretty intense, but I love it. :) can't wait to read more :)
*lauren*

z999993 01-09-2011 11:04 PM

Yep definitely intense.... But Awesome!!! PAMS ^_^

malfoygrl 01-10-2011 03:00 AM

WHOAAA!!
Intesne! :) I love it!
xxSara(:

Dead_As_You 02-06-2011 07:03 AM

*sneaks into the Lost Souls..*

hehe its awsome :D and intense!!

Hera 02-06-2011 07:52 AM

yay another post! :) can't believe I didn't see it sooner.
PAMS!

ThePureBloodPrincess 03-07-2011 07:58 PM

Ooooh! What an interesting story! I love it! :D

steflegan 04-07-2011 05:52 AM

OH MY GODRIC!!! :faint:

I'm a little slow sometimes, and so I just noticed your ff. Oooooohhhh! Love the concept, want Scarlett to be ok. Are the kids going to be mean to her because of who she is? Is my home boy Draco gonna factor in at all?

Why is it that in all our ff's Bellatrix must just die a horrible death? Other than the fact that she's psychotic and evil, I mean. But we have to put her in, don't we?

This is awesome, and I can't wait to see where you take it.

PAMS! NOW!! :couchbana

Ruby85 04-20-2011 05:36 PM

Okay, I'm really sorry I didn't post sooner. My gran just died and I've been in shock for a while.

'See anything yet?' asked Hermione.
'Yeah, a large, big, black, greasy bat. No, hang on, that's just Snape because we have potions next.' Scarlett replied.
'This is a load of rubbish.' said Hermione.
'And you took this why?' Scarlett asked.
She put her head on the desk, ignoring her tea leaves. She felt a hand on her shoulder and saw the White-blonde hair of Draco.
'Oh, hey Malfoy.' she said.
'You okay?' he asked.
'I've been better.' Scarlett said with a small smile.
The bell went and they headed to potions. Sliding into her seat next to Harry, she stared at the instructions on the board. She found Potions boring, if not tedious.

The bell finally went for lunch. Sarah walked out and sat in her regular place between the Weasley twins.
'Hello.' she said.
'Hello.' they said in union.

z999993 05-02-2011 03:40 AM

Oh my gosh!! I'm so sorry :glomp: I completely understand for the delay. Take your time with your next update. BTW I loved the little part you added! ^_^ Hehe I love Draco. And the twins. And well everyone for that matter! ^_^ :glomp:

Hera 06-29-2011 12:23 PM

Last Updated: 21/04/2011

Hera 07-01-2011 02:50 AM

Reactivated on authors request.

Ruby85 07-13-2011 06:25 AM

Ooops, haven't been posting! Naughty me!

Scarlett gave her potion a stir. Potions was boring, and easy. Snape swept passed, stopped, then walked back over to Scarlett.
'Are you okay?' he asked in an undertone.
'Been better.' She replied quietly.
'Why what's up?'
'Found out who my father is.'
'Ah. Don't worry. As long as you're in the castle, you're safe. And I'm sure Black is becoming protective.'
'That's an understatement.'
Snape gave a low chuckle. Scarlett was one of the few that could make him laugh. He swept off to bother Draco, and Scarlett gave her potion another stir absentmindedly.

Soz, got school

HarryPotterQuidditch 07-19-2011 03:09 AM

Keep up the good storytelling. I like how Voldemort's daughter is nothing like Voldemort. BTW, I'm guessing she's in Slytherin, right?

newtscholar8 07-19-2011 05:38 PM

Wow! I am super intrigued!
Keep it coming !


-Heather

Jessiqua 08-03-2011 01:33 PM

I love this :D can't wait to hear more

LoonyLupin99 10-15-2011 12:23 AM

Never would've thought to give Voldemort a daughter. You went with a really great idea and the story is good!


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