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***My imagination falls into Astoria Greengrass and Draco Malfoy. But I changed some of the detailed parts of Astoria’s life. Instead of making her 2 years younger than Draco, I made her the same age as him. And also, instead of having an older sister, Daphne, I made her an only child. This is my first time making an actual fan fiction, so I hope you guys will like it.



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Disclaimer: All of the Harry Potter characters belong to JK Rowling herself. This is purely fan fiction and for reading pleasure. Also, some plots may be similar to JK Rowling so give her credit for that. I'm making it as ORIGINAL as possible but at the same time i want it to be a little bit familiar to you guys. Don't worry, it's a tiny bit piece of similarity so no need to go crazy for it.

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Chapter 1: A Stare

Astoria was late for her first class of the semester. As she took her seat in the first row, she tossed her Slytherin cape on her chair and fixed herself while waiting for their Potions professor. She was thankful that Professor Snape wasn’t there to begin the class yet. She noticed that ever since she came everyone kept staring at her.

“Am I in the wrong room?” she thought to herself. She looked around to make sure everyone was familiar to her. Beside her was Hermione Granger so that’s already a relief. Behind them were Harry and Ron bickering about the early announcement of the class prefect. She looked to her left and she saw the Hufflepuffs and behind them were the Patil twins. She slowly looked to her right and saw the Slytherins: Malfoy and his posse.

“Draco has been staring at me a lot lately. Is there something wrong with my face?” she said to herself but she couldn’t help blushing about it. Astoria has been secretive her whole life especially about her secret crush with Draco.

Then Professor Snape came in. He looked scary like the usual. “Good morning class” Snape said with his low voice. Professor Snape discussed their first lesson of the week. Like always, Hermione was the only student answering him. Everyone looked tired and lazy on the first day of class. As the minutes progressed the more everyone got tired and sleepy.

“Last term I noticed that some of you were a bit low on my class. Am I right… Mr. Potter?” Snape has been scolding Harry about his school work. Harry didn’t answer him though.
“Very well, as of now I am assigning partners. One would be the tutor and the other one would be the student with the low grades. Since I don’t want any excuses, your partners will be in the same house as you are in. If I called your name first then that means you’re the tutor.” Snape uttered.
Everyone looked unhappy with his plan. It felt like it was torture for both partners. Nevertheless, Snape began calling out names.
“Longbottom you’re partners with Weasley. Granger, Potter. Parvati, Bell” Snape went on with the Gryffindors then the Raveclaws and Hufflepuffs. The last batch of names he called were the Slytherins.
“Zabini, Crabbe. Parkinson…” Pansy were crossing her fingers, she wanted to be partners with Draco so that she could spend more time with him alone. “… Goyle. And that leaves Miss Greengrass to tutor Mister Malfoy.” Snape went to his cabinet. “I expect that at the end of this term both of you will learn from each other. Also, I need to see some progress with your grades. Sit beside your partners and discuss your tutoring schedule.” Everyone was still at awe with the partners, especially Astoria. “Now…” Snape continued. Everyone in the room paced to sit next with their partners. Astoria approached Draco and sat beside him. As she did, Draco gave her a smirk. Astoria blushed for a moment but didn’t let Draco see.
“Uhm, when would be a good time for us to study?” Astoria said shyly.
“I don’t know. How about discussing this matter at lunch?” Draco answered.
“Malfoy, you need to give me an answer so that I could manage my time as well.” Astoria turned to him.
“Call me Draco.” Draco replied.
“What?” Astoria raised her voice a bit.
“I said I want you to call me Draco and if it possible for us to discuss this matter during lunch time.” Draco leaned to her. Pansy stiffened up and looked at them both angrily. Astoria’s heart was beating faster and faster. Her face was just 3 inches away from Draco.
“Fine!” she played hard to get. “But rest assured that during lunch time we will be discussing how much time I will be tutoring you during on weekdays and weekends as well. Is that okay, Malfoy?” she fixed her books in order.
“Draco…” Draco added.
Astoria looked at him and smiled. “See you later for lunch, Malfoy.” Astoria stood up and went out.

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Chapter 2: Meet Ups

Astoria was already eating her lunch. She was patiently waiting for Draco to come and discuss about his plans for the study sessions in Potions class. As she was about to take her next bite someone sat next to her.

“I thought this was a lunch date?” Draco uttered out.
“Was it? I didn’t catch that.” Astoria tried to play it cool.
“Have you been waiting?” Draco smiled at her. It was the first time she ever saw Draco smiled. Well, she has seen him smile and laugh but never with people he barely talks to.
“Of course I’ve been waiting. You specifically told me that we will discuss the study matter this lunch or have you forgotten?” Astoria was annoyed every time Draco acts so arrogantly.
“I’m here now.” Draco moved closely to her but Astoria refused.
“Do you want that every weekdays we study for 2 hours and then on weekends we study for 5? Astoria said.
“Sure. Common room?” Draco asked.
“It’ll be too noisy. You wouldn’t concentrate that much. I know a place.” Astoria replied.
“Not the library, I can’t stand mudbloods!” He said while looking at Hermione at the next table.
“Don’t worry, it’s not the library. It’s at the Hogwarts lake. I usually study there.” Astoria looked at Draco hoping to see if he liked the idea. Draco look a little hesitant as he keeps staring at his friends and to Astoria.
“Look Malfoy, I’m not going to let you choose this over your friends but I am willing to help you with studying. Professor Snape trusted me to teach you so I hope that you would also trust me.” Astoria interrupted him.
“Astoria call me Draco. Yes, I’ll meet you there after class.” Draco spoke.
“O-okay. I’ll be… waiting.” Astoria stood up and left the Great Hall.

After class Draco went to see Astoria at the Hogwarts lake. He saw Astoria reading a book, possibly waiting for his arrival. Astoria saw him approaching. She put down the book she was reading and took out the Potions book. Draco sat down next to her and took out his book as well.
“Before we begin” Astoria started. “Let’s make a promise, if you can pass the exam Professor will be giving us next month, what would you want in return?” Astoria curiously asked. Draco laughed at the idea. “It’s not funny. If I can motivate you through what you want, it might make your grades higher.” Astoria felt ashamed she said her idea in the first place. She wanted to just bang the book she was holding on her head. Draco didn’t answer her though. He was also thinking of what he would want if ever he gets a high grade on Snape’s exam.
“Keep it. In due time, tell me. Let’s start.” Astoria opened her book to chapter 1 of the book.

They kept meeting up after class to study for Potions. Astoria saw a great side of Draco. He’s not mean at all. He was fun to be with and he makes her laugh all the time. Draco was a gentleman to her. He would carry her books after they finish studying or he would bring her some refreshments. Astoria was actually surprise to this normal side of Draco, it made her even like him more. They meet almost everyday and as the days progressed, the exam for Potions got nearer.

“Draco…I’m not going to lie, we’re a little bit late with the studying. Professor Snape included another 2 topics for the exam and with a week left…” Astoria shuffled through the pages of her book.
“You’re saying that I’ll fail his class?” Draco interrupted her.
“I didn’t say that. You’ll cram and that’s not good.” Astoria worried.
“The Yule ball is after 2 weeks right?” Draco randomly asked her. Astoria froze for a moment. She was wondering if Draco had any plans in bringing Pansy to that ball.
“Yes. Why?” Astoria didn’t want him to open anything about Pansy. She never liked Pansy at all.
“Tell you what, if I rank a place in Snape’s bloody exam will you go to the ball with me?” Draco smiled. Astoria’s heart was going crazy. She wasn’t expecting for this to happen at all. She calmly pressed her chest and turned to Draco “Deal.” And they both resumed to study.

Finally the day of the exam came. Everyone was ready enough to take Professor Snape’s exam although he was known for making one of the hardest exams at Hogwarts. The Potions room was very silent. All you could hear are the quills of the students making that screeching sound when they write. Snape was roaming around the room making sure that no one was cheating. When the exam finished everyone looked devastated. Some were discussing their answers, some were just simply tired.

The next day Snape finished grading their exam. He dashed inside the Potions room and stood in front. He looked at his students seriously, everyone panicked in silence.
“I’m very disappointed, only 8 students passed my exam.” Snape started. You can already see Ron defeated when he heard what Snape said. “Granger! Was again the highest in the exam with only 2 mistakes. Zabini comes in second. Fletchley. Greengrass. Parvati Patil. Abott. Thomas and Malfoy.” Snape turned to Malfoy while Malfoy flashed a smirk. Everyone else felt stressed. Snape was also known for being biased to the Slytherins.
“Professor, did you just say Malfoy ranked 8th?” Astoria was surprised hearing Snape call Draco’s name. She knew Draco was not an idiot but she never would’ve thought he could pass the exam.
“Yes miss Greengrass. You’re tutoring skills is working on mister Malfoy.” Snape took out his wand and started his lesson. The whole time he was discussing Astoria couldn’t believe it still. Was Draco tricking her all this time? Astoria knew that Draco was having a hard time in some parts while she was tutoring him. She was happy that he did pass because she gets to be his partner for the ball but she was just completely surprised.

The school bell rang and the lesson ended.

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Chapter 3: Yule Ball


Draco and his friends were at the common room alone. They were discussing about the Potions’ exam results.
“Congratulations Draco!” Pansy stated.
“Yeah, that was really surprising Malfoy.” Said Crabbe.
“So what’s up with you and Greengrass?” Blaise asked and everyone teased except for Pansy. She smiled a bit but she hated the topic.
“You guys really look good together. Does she know?” Goyle began asking questions.
“About what?” Draco looked at him.
“That you like her?” Goyle replied. Draco didn’t answer but he smiled. Pansy was just silent. She stared at Draco with her heart crushed. She has yearned for Draco ever since and knowing that Draco has feelings for Astoria just makes her want to cry.
“Hey, Pansy’s roommate with Astoria. Does Astoria ever talk about any guys in the Slytherins?” Blaise asked her.
“She barely talks to any of the girls. She’s weird.” Pansy bashed.
The door opened and they all stopped talking. Astoria came in while reading a letter. Malfoy’s friend looked at each other and smiled but Astoria didn’t see them. She just walked straight to the girl’s dormitory.
“At least you have a date for the ball. I don’t have one yet.” Blaise continued.
They continued talking about the upcoming Yule Ball and Pansy just felt heartbroken. She stood up and excused herself. She paced out of the room and went to the bathroom. Pansy held on to her tears for awhile and when she was already alone she couldn’t help it but cry.

The following day Draco saw Astoria at the Great Hall eating breakfast. It was a Saturday. Draco ran to sit beside her.
“Are you ready for next week?” Draco asked.
“I’m not great with parties, Malfoy.” Astoria rolled her eyes.
“You promised.” Draco stared at her.
“That’s why I’ll go, Malfoy. Because I promised.” Astoria assured.
“So when will you start calling me Draco?” Draco added.
“Just because you call me by my first name doesn’t mean I have to call you by your first name too.”
“But I’m the one who’s insiting—“
“Well, I’m insisting too!”
They’re arguing like a couple but still, Astoria calls him Malfoy. The day of the Yule Ball finally came. Everyone was ready for this. The boys wearing their suits and the girls are all glam up. Draco was waiting for Astoria. A few minutes later, Astoria approached him. She was wearing a black cocktail dress. Her hair was straight and very formal. She looked a bit shy and didn’t say a word.
“You look beautiful.” Draco whispered. Astoria blushed and they walked in to the Great Hall for the ball.

The night was magical. They danced. They mingled. They laughed. Astoria, being an introvert, was actually having the time of her life. They just both looked happy and content. After dancing, they sat down for awhile to rest their feet.
“I thought you never liked parties?” Draco leaned to her.
“Well, this would be the first.” Astoria answered him back. They both shared a smile for awhile.
“Would you like to go outside for some air?” Draco offered his hand to Astoria.
“Okay” Astoria agreed.
The corridors of Hogwarts were really silent at night. The noise you can only hear is the one coming from the Great hall. Draco and Astoria walked hand in hand around Hogwarts until they reached the Hogwarts covered bridge.
“Thank you Astoria, for the tutoring. I’ve studied a lot lately because of you.” Draco started.
“You’re actually smart Draco. You’re not just very fond of studying that’s all.” Astoria looked at him.
“I like you, Astoria. I like you a lot.” Draco went nearer her.
“Huh? What? He doesn’t like Pansy?” Astoria thought to herself. This was actually happening to her. Draco… confessing for the first time. She wanted to smile. She wanted to cry. She was confused whether she’s happy or hyper.
“Why?” she had nothing else to say. She couldn’t think of words to construct.
“Because when I’m with you, I feel like I’m just Draco. No pretenses, no reputation, nothing fake.” Draco leaned to her close enough to kiss her.

Astoria finally gave in and they both kissed.
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i've changed my minds. I added some chapters and an epilogue at the ending of this story. I just made the story draft the other day and well it felt short for only 7 chapters. I'm not really a great fan fiction writer but i enjoy my first one. so i hope you guys would like it.

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Chapter 4: Happy Thoughts


They finally kissed under the moonlight. It might be a little cliché but neither one of them would have thought about the place and the time. The scenery was perfect. The wind flew back and fort, no one was staring. It was a peaceful moment.

Their lips separated and none spoke a word. Draco knew that he made the right decision and Astoria knew it was a dream come true. They were both speechless but they keep staring at each other waiting for a conversation to come. Only the wind was speaking. It was a bit cold that night and Astoria wasn’t wearing anything thick. Draco being a secretive gentleman, took out his coat and gave it to Astoria.
“thanks” she finally spoke.
“You’re mine now, this is the least I could do.” Draco stroke her face gently. Astoria blushed. “Come. They might look for us if we stay here any longer.” Draco hold her hand and they walked together.

When they came back to the great hall, Crabbe approached Draco. “Malfoy, were going to the common room now. The quidditch team is celebrating tonight.” Draco wants to go to party but he knows that Astoria doesn’t like parties especially “hanging out”.
“Go! Have fun. I’ll just stay here for awhile.” Astoria insisted.
“You sure?”
“Yes, Draco.” Astoria said. Draco smiled widely this time.
“You called me Draco.” Draco whispered to her ear. He gave Astoria a kiss on the cheek and left the party with Crabbe.

Astoria was now alone. She sat at the party with multiple feelings running through her mind. She kept smiling and looked like a complete idiot.
“What’s wrong with her?” Ron uttered to Harry.
“Dunno, probably something happened to her tonight.” Harry answered.
“I can hear you, you know?” Astoria looked at them. Ron was scared of Astoria ever since their very first year at Hogwarts. Harry only talks to her during Potions class because they sit near her. “I’m just glad that I get to rest” Astoria continued.
“She probably bumped her head because partying is not ‘a rest’” Ron whispered.
“Shut up Weasley!” Astoria heard him again. “You’re lucky I’m in a good mood Ron. And that, unlike our other classmates I’m not prejudice.”
“Yeah, I feel so much better now.” Ron sarcastically said.
“You’re in a bad mood, are you?” Astoria deduced.
“Bloody no.”
“You’re jealous Hermione is going out with a different person!” Astoria smiled. “It’s not that hard to ask her to go out with you. She may be smart but she’s normal, Weasley.” Astoria stood up and left Harry and Ron alone in the table.
“I can’t believe I’m taking advice from someone who barely has any friends in school!” Ron said.
“She’s right you know.” Harry spoke. “besides, she’s probably having a relationship right now. She’s been smiling the whole time.”
“What makes you think that she’s in a relationship, Harry?”
“Well, that was Malfoy’s coat she’s wearing.” Harry smiled.

Back at the Slytherin’s common room the guys were talking a lot and drinking a few butter beers.
“Quidditch practice will not resume anymore. Bloody McGonagall told us that Quidditch will have to be postponed due to the weather.” Marcus hissed.
“Either that or she doesn’t want her Gryffindor pixies to get cold and freezing. Babies!” everyone laughed.
“Guys, the only way to beat the Gryffindors is to destroy Potter. We need some sort of diversion.” Terence uttered.
“or a weakness.” Marcus said while looking at his teammates in a greedy way.
“Are they together with that filthy mudblood?” Lucian snapped his fingers in excitement.
“No idea, but they seemed to be together most of the time. Who wants to be with a mudblood anyway? Pathetic!” Terence added.
“GUYS!” Blaise shouted. “We can defeat the Gryffindors anytime of the day but now is the time to celebrate.”
“yeah! Let’s drink to that!” Adrian raised his glass and everyone drank together.
“Speaking of such, Draco has been smiling the whole time we came in. I bet it has something to do with Greengrass huh?” Terence said and everyone turned to Draco, waiting for his answer.
“Shut up, Higgs! None of your business” Draco scolded.
“Come on Malfoy. We’re all guys here. Tell us” Marcus demanded.
When Draco was about to answer them, Astoria came and they all stared at the same time. Astoria froze and was curious why they were all looking at her awkwardly.
“Is that Draco’s coat, Greengrass?” Adrian noticed that Astoria was still wearing a black coat on her.
“Y-Yes…” Astoria answered in hesitant.
“She wears your coat and still you can’t tell us you’re dating her?” Blaise looked at Draco, confused.
“So this was it all about, if I was dating Draco or not?” Astoria asked.
“And now she calls you Draco.” Lucian teased.
“Stop teasing!” Draco stood up and went to Astoria.
“Sorry about that.” Draco whispered. Astoria took Draco’s coat and gave it to him. “It’s not a big deal. Plus, it’s cute to see you finally getting bullied by others.” She smiled at him.
“Really?”
“Yes really.”
“Well I guess I should get bullied more often.” Draco leaned to her for a kiss but Astoria refused for a moment. “Not in front of your friends, Draco. I’m tired from the party. I better get some sleep. Good night.” She bid goodbye to Draco and his friends. After she left the common room all she could hear is boys teasing Draco a lot. Some were howling and some were probably imitating the scene. Astoria couldn’t keep the smile off her face, she felt so happy that night…….. and so was Draco.
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Chapter 5: Argument



The following weeks were a little bit awkward for Astoria and Draco. Slytherins just love teasing them both. Draco didn’t like the idea because it feels awkward for them to just be together alone. Astoria thinks it’s a little bit childish of them. Still, both were completely normal with how they are in school. Draco is still bullying Potter and his friends. Astoria is still an introvert. Even with her sudden popularity when the school knew Draco was dating her, she felt awkward about it. She didn’t want the attention she was getting. It was stupid and irrelevant.

During breakfast she receives a gift from her parents. She opened the black packaged and received a new pair of black gloves for winter and a new book to read. Astoria read the first chapter for awhile and liked the book. Although she got irritated because she wants to concentrate reading it and everyone was just too noisy. She decided to read it at the Hogwart’s Astronomy tower.

It was getting colder nowadays. Snow has been around for a couple of days and students are getting sick because of the cold weather. As she got nearer to the top she heard someone sobbing.
“Who could it be?” Astoria thought. The person who was crying felt so hurt. She was sobbing a lot and you can almost feel her pain. It was like someone held up crying for so long that it was finally time to cry it all out. Astoria went further to see who it was.
“Pansy?” Astoria called her name. Pansy was crying a lot. No one has ever seen Pansy cry, heck, no one ever saw her with genuine feelings. Pansy wiped her tears when she heard Astoria call her name.
“What do you want, Greengrass?” Pansy asked but she was still sobbing.
“Are you oka—“
“I don’t need your sympathy!” Pansy was back to her straight face.
“What’s wrong?”
“You want to know what’s really wrong?”
“Yes, I wann—“
“It’s you!” Pansy looked at her. Astoria was confused to her accusation. “I like Draco—A LOT! I’ve never told this to anyone but you don’t need to be a genius to know how much I yearn for him.” Pansy started confessing. “Astoria I hate you and probably I won’t make sense right now but I want you to break up with him or I’ll do it myself. You don’t deserve him.”
“And you do?” Astoria answered back sarcastically. “Draco is no genius and yet he doesn’t know about the feelings you’re talking about. He can date whoever he likes.”
They both looked serious enough to kill each other at the tower but no one drew their wands.
“I’m his best friend, Astoria. No matter what you’ll do he’ll listen to me first.” Pansy left the tower.
Astoria sat on the side and opened her book but as she continued reading, she can’t stop thinking about what Pansy just told her. She didn’t bother reading that day so she left the tower instead.

The next day she went to get some peaceful reading at the Hogwarts Lake but instead she saw Draco waiting for her.
“It’s cold outside. Students get sick because of it. You should go inside, Draco.” They both stared at the lake. It was slightly turning to ice.
“That’s the same thing I would tell you, that’s why I’m here.” Draco offered his scarf to Astoria.
“We need to talk Draco.” Astoria thinks that it’s probably a good time to discuss about what Pansy told her the other day.
“Go ahead.” Draco sat to listen.
“It’s about Pansy Parkinson” Astoria started.
“What about her?”
“She told me to stay away from you… break up… she’ll get revenge if I don’t… stuffs like that.” It got silent for awhile. No one looked at each other, they just stared at the open body of water in front of them.
“She’s mean to me, Draco. I get it she doesn’t like me but she could at least give me some respect because you’re my boyfriend.” Astoria turns to Draco.
“You know Pansy, she’s always like that.” Draco stated.
“That’s it?”
“What?” Draco looked confused.
“You’re not going to scold her about this?”
“Why would I Astoria? It’s not a big deal.”
“Not a big deal?” Astoria raised her voice.
“We’re talking about Pansy. Of course she’s mean, she’s bitter, she’s prejudicial, she’s Pansy.”
“I can’t believe this—you’re actually taking her side.” Astoria was already annoyed.
“No! I’m just saying—“
“But no, I need to go.” Astoria stood up and Draco caught up with her.
“Astoria, listen.”
“WHAT?!” Astoria started to tear up. “I’ve been holding up to this conversation for days now and you act like it’s perfectly normal for her to that to me. Yes Draco, she bullies people but I thought—I could be an exception to that.” Astoria walked away.

After the conversation Astoria and Draco hasn’t been talking to each other. They would come to class, go to lunch but they neither speak nor look at each other. As the days go by Astoria was starting to disappear from Draco’s areas. Draco doesn’t see her as often and there were times that he would stay up in the common room to wait for Astoria but he never saw her. Draco wanted to ask but his pride was too high. The next few days, Astoria was just absent at all. It’s been 2 days since Draco didn’t see her come to class. It was bothering him a lot.

The following morning Hermione went in the classroom a little bit late.
“You’re late Hermione, it’s not like you.” Ron baffled.
“Astoria has been absent for 2 days or so, what happened to her?” Harry randomly asked Hermione. Draco heard their conversation and started to listen.
“She’s sick” Hermione took out her DADA book from her bag and looked at Draco strongly.
“Sick? How come?” Harry added.
“She told me, Harry. She’s going to be absent for awhile.” Hermione knew that Draco was listening to her.
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“Astoria, the professors wanted me to give you the homework we’re doing. Here’s the list” Hermione Granger handed her a parchment.
“Thanks” Astoria looked paler than the usual. She was sniffing and coughing.
“When are you coming out?” Hermione asked.
“Madame Pomfrey told me I could be discharge out when the week is finished.”
“That long? What happened? Is it about Malfoy?”
Astoria nodded.
Hermione thought it was completely stupid for her to risk her life over a guy.
“That’s stupid” Hermione murmured and she heard Astoria giggled.
“I avoided him too much that I ended up getting myself sick.” She coughed. “I couldn’t stand them. Draco and his friends I mean, especially Parkinson.” Astoria expressed.
“Then why—“
“Why date him?” Astoria looked down. “He’s different when he’s with me, Granger. He’s normal when he’s with me. The Draco you see is different from the Draco that I see.” She started to cry. “Pansy was right. Draco would always take her side no matter what.” Astoria laid down and covered herself with the sheets. Hermione knew she didn’t want to be asked anymore so she didn’t say a word and left.
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Draco was indeed an arrogant child. Even when Hermione made sure he would hear their conversation he still didn’t visit Astoria. The following day when she went to visit the hospital, she asked Astoria if Draco visited. Astoria shook her head. Hermione got irritated about the situation. In the afternoon while Hermione was on her way to the library, he saw Draco approaching. Draco was giving him a terrible look when they both passed each other Hermione couldn’t help it but say his name.
“Malfoy…” she shouted. She heard him stop. “You’re vile.”
Draco gave him a smirk and walked away but Hermione caught up.
“She needs you. She told me.” She lied. “Astoria has been badly ill because of you and you act like you don’t even care. She’s not just a classmate Malfoy.”
Draco never said anything. It was odd for Draco not to come up with any remark from Hermione. He actually listened to her for once.
“You can’t be stupid enough to know how much she likes you.” Hermione said. “if you don’t believe me why don’t you go ask her.”
Her heart was beating fast. “Man up, Malfoy. You’ll loose her forever if you don’t” She walked away.

Draco was just there standing. His thoughts running like wildfire. And then he started walking towards the hospital.

Astoria was still reading the book her father gave her. Madame Pomfrey went to see Dumbledore for a moment and left Astoria alone. She drank the pumpkin juice that Hermione gave her the other day. Suddenly, on her left she saw a reflection, for a second she thought it was a ghost roaming around the palace. As she turned her head, she saw Draco staring at her.

“Don’t come near, Draco. I’m sick.” Astoria uttered but Draco didn’t listen. He walked towards her and sat on her bed.
“Really don’t” she covered her mouth.
“I’m sorry” Draco didn’t know what else to say. Astoria was surprised to hear him say that. “How did this happen?”
“I guess my body wasn’t build for the cold weather.” Astoria answered.
“I was worried you know. I kept wondering where you were or how you were doing.” Draco sat next to her.
“Then why just visit me now?”
“A little bird told me that you were in need of my services right now.” Draco smiled. Astoria knew that Hermione was the bird he was talking about. She was the only person who visited Astoria often. Astoria pinched his cheeks.

Draco wasn’t allowed by Madame Pomfrey to stay in the hospital so he went back to the Slytherin’s common room. He sat in one of the couches.
“Draco, where have you been?” Pansy asked.
“Went to see Astoria at the hospital” Draco replied. Pansy refused to talk about Astoria but since no one was around the common room Pansy decided to talk about it.
“Ever since you dated her, you’ve become weaker.” Pansy started
“What do you mean?” Draco looked at her.
“You’re not the same Draco from before. You’re a bit nicer nowadays. You tend to smile a lot and the only ones you’ve bullied are Potter and his friends.”
“And that’s a bad thing because?”
“Because we used to bully everyone” Pansy emphasized. “Astoria is killing you!”
“What?” Draco raised his voice.
“She turning you into a—“
“Stop it! There are no other girls out there for me.”
“But you have me, Draco!” Pansy confessed. “I have liked you since the day I first met you. And unlike her, I would never change you into something you are not. I’m completely happy with who you are.”
Draco stood up and looked down to her “She never changed me one bit. She never even scolds me if I was mean to others. I decided on my own. I changed because I wanted to” Draco left Pansy in the common room.

Astoria was finally out of the hospital and was feeling better.
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