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Old 08-28-2010, 10:00 PM   #1 (permalink)
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“I’m heels over head for you.”

“You mean head over heels.”

“No, heels over head. Because I’m so dangerously hanging upside down. Because I’ve risked and thrown away everything that I love just to be with you. Because if I make one mistake, everything will instantly fall apart and I’ll have nothing left and just fall to the ground.”


Disclaimer: JK Rowling owns the Harry Potter universe. I take no credit for her work.
The title of the story comes from the song Heels Over Head by Boys Like Girls.


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It’s the first day of school. I’m on the Hogwarts Express, trying not to topple over as the train starts moving. I’m looking for the compartment that consists of my two friends, Desiree Harmon and Meagan Lara, when stupid James Potter steps up to me. Ugh, I’ve had enough of his messy hair and his arrogant, pigheaded attitude.

“Hey, Evans,” he says with a smirk, “how was your summer?”

How dare he speak to me after what he did to Severus in June? If he thinks I’ve forgotten about it, he’s seriously mental.

“It was great without you,” I say with a mock smile.

What Potter says next, I don’t hear, for I spot someone behind him. I don’t recognize him for a few seconds. Either he has changed a lot over the holidays, or my eyes are playing tricks on me.

His steel grey eyes are one of a kind, fathomless and giving me the feeling that he is somehow looking right through me, but at the same time full of humour. He has a fair tan and soft black hair which sort of falls into his eyes gracefully. Wait, scratch that. The black hair I’ve been accustomed to for the last five years looks a little lighter — it’s the darkest shade of brown now. I don’t know why I’m noticing these things all of a sudden; I’ve known the guy for five years.

He is laughing, paying little attention to Potter and me. He seems to find amusement in something about Peter’s summer. Every now and then he casually flicks his hair sideways so that it doesn’t get in the way of his fascinating eyes; it may be for show, but I doubt it because it is appalling and fantastic to watch.

“Hello? Anyone home?”

I switch back to reality and see Potter looking at me with an eyebrow raised. Now that I have averted my gaze back to him, he looks so plain — his glasses, his unbelievably messy black hair, his rather pale skin, his lanky body, and his boring hazel eyes.

“What?” I blurt out, trying hard to keep myself out of my own personal world. From the corner of my eye, I see Sirius guffawing.

“I asked why it was great without me, and your eyes sort of unfocused.”

“Potter, I thought I made it clear that I never wanted you to come near me again. Now if you’d just let me —”

“Hey, Lily.”

I nearly fall over. Sirius Black is making conversation with me. “Um, hi,” I answer hastily.

“How was your summer?”

“Good, you?” It feels like I’m going to lose myself in his eyes.

“Mine was fantastic, actually. I flew on an airpain with Remus here over to Italy.”

“Airpain?”

“He means airplane,” says Remus, smirking.

“It should be called airpain, it was the worst means of transportation I’ve taken.”

“I thought you had to go?” interrupts Potter, his eyebrows raised at me.

“No, I just wanted you to leave me alone,” I shoot back icily.

“Yeah, Prongs, we’re just having a nice little conversation about our summers,” says Sirius with a grin. “Is there really any need to be so nosy?”

“Oh, shut your mouth,” Potter says, slightly shoving him.

Suddenly, the train shifts rather violently, and I stumble, landing in someone’s arms; I look up and realize that it’s Sirius. Potter stares, looking sour.

“Sorry,” I mumble.

“It’s fine,” Sirius answers coolly. “I wouldn’t want you to break your skull.”
He lets go of me when Potter scowls, but his expression is malicious.

“Well, I’m going to go, excuse me,” I say, feeling my face turn scarlet, trying to walk past.

“Why don’t you come into our compartment, Evans?” Potter is smiling at me as though we’re friends. “It’d be fun.”

He’s getting very annoying. “I would rather jump off a cliff than join you.”

Potter looks a little taken aback, which gives me a feeling of triumph and guilt at the same time, and Sirius nudges him. “I’m bored, James, let’s go eat. She’s obviously not going to come; I don’t know why you even asked her.”

“Thank you, Sirius,” I say with a smile, and walk away to find Desiree and Meagan.

*****


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I never thought that anyone could change so much over just two months. Perhaps I now see what James sees in that girl: Witty, smart, and pretty.

I mean, really pretty.

“What was that about?” James shoots at me.

“What?”

“You know what. There was something going on.”

I snort, rolling my eyes. “What, was I supposed to let her fall flat on her face?”

He still looks a bit troubled, but seems to decide to forget about it.

Mentally, however, Lily Evans has been added to my list of girls that I still have yet to date. And I promise you, I have never, ever considered putting her there. She’s just… out of bounds. She’s James’s, the girl he has been chasing for five years now.

Forget her, I think to myself as we walk back to our compartment. She’s off limits. Your best friend is much more important than some girl, particularly the one he’s wanted for years. Besides, you like Desiree. Forget Lily.

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“Lily, over here!” I see Meagan’s face poking out of the compartment.

Neither of them has changed over the summer, really. Meagan, whose skin is a little pale, has finally managed to tan. Desiree’s skin is quite dark, having been in Italy for about a month, and her hair is blonder than ever. Her bright blue eyes are always playful and strangely remind me of Sirius’s grey ones.

“Where have you been?” Desiree demands as I enter.

“I ran into Potter,” I scowl, taking a seat.

“You never give him a chance, do you?” says Meagan with a small smile, her soft brown eyes gazing at me in such a way that I feel a little guilty.

“Oh, Meagan, please don’t look at me like that,” I answer, putting a hand in front of my eyes, “it always overwhelms me. And it’s James Potter. Of course not.”

“I’m just saying. He’s not all that bad, you know. He just acts like a blundering idiot around you because —”

“— he’s in love with you,” Desiree finishes, flipping back her long, yellow hair that many girls at Hogwarts yearn for. “Speaking of James, I have some news I want to tell you.”

Meagan and I aim our full attention to her. I’m not too eager for the information, because I’m indifferent to things that usually excite Desiree, like new dress robes, boys, and new spells to do her hair.

“Sirius Black asked me out a few days ago.”

My face is stony. It feels as though the world has flipped upside down, and I’m soon going to plummet through the sky, the atmosphere, the universe, and land somewhere where no one would see my heart wilt in pain.

Dramatic, yes. But it’s how I feel.

“Oh, Desi, that’s great!” I distantly hear Meagan exclaim.

“Yeah,” I hear myself agree weakly.

Desiree is beaming. “Thanks, you guys, I really appreciate it. I did kind of see it coming, though, because we exchanged letters all summer and before that, well, you both saw how much we flirted. It was expected.”

“I’m really happy for you,” says Meagan. “You must be really excited, huh?”

“Yeah, and we could double date, Meagan, if you and Remus just tied the knot.”

Meagan rolls her eyes. “We’re not gonna go out. Remus and I are just… friends.”

“Ugh, that dreaded word. Come on, you know you like him. And I’ve seen the way you guys sit together in classes and meals and the common room and how much you talk while the rest of us are, well, I don’t even know what we’re doing half the time. Lily, are you okay?”

She stares at me as I lean back in my seat, rubbing my forehead.

“What? Oh, I’m fine,” I say quickly. “I just have a headache. I need water.”

“The food trolley will be coming around soon,” says Desiree in a comforting voice. I smile and close my eyes as my two friends continued to argue whether Remus likes Meagan or not. Normally I would join in, for it is so obvious that he does, but I really am not in the mood.

It’s ridiculous to feel this way. It makes no sense that I am pining over the fact that Desiree has gotten the boy she has been crushing on for a little over two months. I don’t even know Sirius well enough to have feelings for him, and besides, Sirius and Desiree make a great couple. Both are gorgeous, outgoing, and funny. Me, I definitely am not gorgeous (though not hideously deformed, hopefully) but quiet, and a little bossy. Sirius would never turn to a girl like me. No wonder I only get James Potter, the stupid idiot.

But a vision keeps popping up inside Lilyland; it’s of Sirius and me, his arm around my shoulder, sitting by a beautiful lake at nighttime; we are just talking, him occasionally flipping his shiny, black hair back. It seems like the perfect dream, something that I can spend hours imagining.

No one would know of it.

Later as I head to the bathroom, I spot Severus. I know it will be awkward from now on to even be in his presence; in June, we’d had a fight after he had called me a Mudblood as he dangled from the air, jinxed by Potter. I’d told him we couldn’t be friends anymore, we’d chosen our separate ways. But it doesn’t mean I would totally shut him out of my life.

I give him a polite smile and say, “Hi, Severus.”

“Hello,” he answers breathlessly.

I am about to ask about his summer when Walden Macnair, Slytherin seventh year, calls, “Yo, Snape! Hurry up!”

I crane my neck to look at him; he is with a group ranged from fifth to seventh years. I raise my eyebrows at Severus, who looks at me desperately as though wishing to tell me something. I walk past him, murmuring, “Typical, Sev. I’ll see you.” He doesn’t reply, and instead just stands there.

I wish I could help him, but if there is one thing that Sev is good at, it’s shutting people away when they get too close. He told me once that he doesn’t want me to see what goes through his head. Not because they’re horrid thoughts, but because they might destroy the way I see the world. This, in a way, shows his selflessness, but I wish he let me in a little.

When I reach the bathroom, I don’t notice my surroundings until a tall boy nearly collides into me. “Whoa! Oh, hey, what’s up, Lily?”

I look up to see Sirius. My heart seems to lighten up and pump blood faster than ever. “Oh, not much, my bladder alarm just went off.”

Oh my god. I did not say that. I try to laugh it off, and he joins in. “Same here. James won’t shut up about you, either.”

“Ugh, please tell him I would NEVER go out with him even if he was the last man on earth.”

He grins. “Well, I guess he’s just not the guy you want, then.”

“Ha, no.”

“You’ll find him quick enough.”

I think I already have. “Yeah, hopefully. And James Potter is not one of the candidates.”

Sirius seems to think over this for a moment, and says, “You know, James isn’t that bad. It’s just, around you, he gets really stupid. If you just give him a chance, maybe it’ll work out and you’ll realize he’s not the ‘arrogant toerag’ that you think he is. I know you think he’s a bit harsh on Snape, but…”

My heart seems to cringe at every word he says. I’m saved the trouble of answering when his brother, Regulus, appears. He notices Sirius there and, after shooting an icy glare, shoves through us.

“Er, are you okay?” I question carefully as Sirius stares at his retreating back; his usual grey eyes look blue for some reason. But before I can analyze this phenomenon, he blinks and his eyes return to their usual colour.

“Yeah, I’m fine. I should go back; I’ll talk to you later.”

*****


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James is getting awfully irritating, highly annoying me, but then making me feel bad that he is so bummed about it all.

Oh, Prongs. If only you had my knowledge, my tact, my charm, my everything.

“Wow, that took a while, eh?” he says as soon as I reenter our compartment; I raise an eyebrow at him as I sat down.

“You were gone for about fifteen minutes,” says Peter, and then chuckles. “Are you constipated or something?”

“No, I’m perfectly fine, thank you,” I say, snorting.

“Did something happen?” asks Remus suddenly.

“What?”

“You look a bit weird.”

“What are you talking about?”

“Sirius, I’ve known you for almost five years. Your eyes are different – something’s up.”

I’m surprised to see James, who I thought was too busy whining about Lily to notice anything, nodding with Remus. “Yeah, what happened?”

“I’m fine, you guys,” I answer before any guesses are made. “Nothing
happened other than running into Lily, but that’s really no big –”

“You ran into Lily?” James says loudly, all seriousness forgotten. “What did she say? What did you say?”

“Nothing, calm down. Just, you know, the casual stuff, like, what’s up, not much.”

“Oh,” he slumps back in his seat, looking disappointed.

“What else?” Remus eggs on.

“And I ran into my brother. Whatever, that’s nothing.”

All three of them, even Peter, look at me with concern; I pointedly look away at my reflection in the window and blink several times.
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The next day, Potter asks me out. Again. I scream at him that if he asks me again I will jinx him and turn him into a cockroach. Sirius watches in amusement, while Remus pointedly looks away.

“I think you should give him a chance, Lily,” says Meagan quietly when we arrive in Transfiguration.

“Um, I think not, judging from the way he acts 24/7. I’m sorry, but no. I’ve already gone over this yesterday.”

Meagan looks mildly surprised. “With who?”

My eyes dart over to Sirius, who has just entered with Desiree. “No one.”

“Sirius?” She noticed my quick glance.

“No. Yes. Oh, I’m not supposed to say, he told me not to, so don’t spread it.”

Then I tell her all Sirius had confessed to me on the Hogwarts Express. When I finish, she looks at me stubbornly. “Well, I agree with Sirius, for once. I think you should say yes, because I’m sure James isn’t really like what he usually is. I bet he’s actually a good guy at heart who would treat you better than anyone would.”

I watch as Potter takes a seat behind Sirius (who is sitting with Desiree), looking a bit sour at the loss of his best friend’s presence.

“Well, how’s this?” I say, smirking because I know she would decline. “If I go out with Potter, you have to tell Remus that you like him.”

Meagan’s face pales a little. “No! No. I don’t even like him.”

“Fine, then, I’m not going out with him.”

She narrows her eyes at me, but drops the subject.

“Sirius is so sweet,” Desiree squeals the moment we’re out of class. “You should have heard the things he was saying; I didn’t even know he was capable of even thinking of –”

I force myself to listen as she rats on, Meagan nodding her head or smiling whenever there is a pause. Eventually I stop listening to her, watching Sirius walk with his friends a little ahead of us.

“Personally, I don’t think I’ve ever had a better boyfriend,” Desiree concludes her story in the Great Hall.

“I’m really happy for you, Desi,” I say with a strained smile.

“Aw, thanks, Lil, you’re sweet.”

*****


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I really like Desiree.

She’s a lot like me, actually. Outgoing, popular, smart, and funny. While I don’t like to hear it, I’m kind of arrogant; she knows how to – how should I say this? – strut her stuff. We both know how to dazzle the opposite sex.

I asked her out because of those reasons. I really thought it would be a good relationship, but then she had to barge in. I can’t like Lily Evans; I would never, ever risk my friendship with James for anything in the world, especially some girl. The girl.

I decide to push the thought to the back of my mind for now; as soon as I enter the common room, my stomach shifts slightly, for nothing could be mistaken for that dark red hair. “Sirius!” she exclaims in surprise when I approach her. “What are you doing here?”

“What, a guy can’t go to his own common room?” I say casually with a faint smile. There aren’t a lot of people in the room. “Who are you? You look a lot like this girl named Lily Evans that my best friend is in love with.”

“Ha, ha, very funny,” she answers sarcastically. “Please don’t bring him up again, he’s driving me nuts.”

I sit on top of the table which she has her stuff on. “You know you like him.”

“No.”

“Yeah. You’re too afraid to admit it,” I tease her, watching her eyes narrow, “because then it will mean he won and you lost.” Sometimes I don’t understand myself; why is it that when I have feelings for this girl, I’m trying to convince her that she is in love with someone else?

What am I saying? I don’t even like Lily Evans.

No, I really don’t like him, Sirius. Please don’t say that,” she says through gritted teeth; there is a dangerous edge to her voice. I immediately drop it – redheads tend to have a nastier temper than anyone else.

“What’s that?” I ask to interrupt the silence, beckoning to her book.

“Oh, some dumb book that I don’t even like. My mom recommended it to me, but I’m not so into reading about people rescuing animals.”

“Would you save a dog in trouble?” I can’t help asking.

“Of course, I love dogs.”

Heh, so she’d like my being an Animagus.

“What?” says Lily, looking bemused. I hadn’t realized I was smirking at her rather vividly.

I merely laugh and get up. “Uh, no, it’s nothing.”

“You’re odd, Sirius Black.”

“So are you, Lily Evans.”

Our eyes lock, and for a moment I consider giving up trying to stay away from her. Then she tears away her gaze. “I need to go and return this book,” she says, flushed. “I’ll see you.”

“See you later,” I say as she smiles and leaves the common room. Feeling rather happier, I walk over to James, who is in a serious conversation with Lewis Crookbain and Eric Whale, abruptly stopping when I approach.

“Uh, telling secrets?” I say, my eyebrows rising.

“We should have a party for him,” Eric exclaims, pointing to James.

“Why?”

“Because Lily –” Lewis starts, but James slaps a hand over his mouth.

“I haven’t told him yet – don’t ruin the surprise,” he says quickly. My suspicion arises.

“What did Lily do?” I demand as soon as he pulls me into the dormitory.

“Nothing. I’m telling people that I asked her out, and she said yes.”

I merely look at him. “She didn’t, though.” It isn’t a question, but a statement.

James grins sheepishly. “Well, no. But I figure she’ll eventually how genuinely great I am and everything will be great.”

My jaw drops in disbelief. “James, that is the stupidest thing on this planet. She’s just going to despise you even more, if it’s even possible. Tell those people you were kidding or something, because it’s bound to spread fast and reach her in about five minutes –”

“I already told about twenty people,” he interrupts calmly.

“You –”

“So it’s too late. Come on, Padfoot, relax. My plan’s going to work, I know it.” He climbs into bed; as he grins, this time victoriously, I don’t crack a smile.

I mean, I love him and all, but that is just ridiculous.
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Ooooh I can tell this rumour is going to cause REAL big trouble. I wanna know what Lily will do after finding out! *nods*
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The next day, I realize that I’ve never been so jealous of Desiree.

Seriously. This is the first time that I’ve wished to have been someone other than me. Every time I look at her, she’s shnoodling with Sirius. I wouldn’t be surprised if they did it on top of a desk in front of Professor McGonagall.

I know I should be happy for my friend. But this is just not one of those times that I’m going to cheer for.

Like now – they’ve been making out for the past ten minutes in this common room, while everyone else is doing homework or socializing. Are they not aware that people don’t like to see their tongues and hands slobbering over each other?

“Lily, what’s wrong?” says Meagan in concern. “You look like you got an Acceptable on your essay.”

Sweet, sweet Meagan. How perfect she would be for Remus. Oh my god, everybody has someone except for me. “I’m just stressed,” I reply, removing the scowl from my face.

“About?”

“Just stuff. Nothing that matters.”

Meagan’s brown eyes peer into mine. After a pause, she says, “You know you can tell me anything, right? There’s no need to hide anything.”

The way she speaks is as though she knows exactly what’s going on through my head everyday when I’m not doing homework or in class. To automatically deny whatever she thinks she knows, I open my mouth, but no words come out. Instead, I nod; Meagan smiles and leaves to go to bed.

Stupid, stupid me. Why can’t I trust my best friends?

“Congratulations, Lily,” says Kate Watson out of the blue with a smirk. “I’m glad you finally came to your senses.” I blink at her, but before I can ask what she’s talking about, she disappears through the portrait hole.

Then later as I get up to go to bed – there is no point staying up unless I want to see more of Sirius and Desiree’s making out – a boy named Lewis Crookbain calls to me suddenly, “Hey, Evans, it’s about time, huh?”

“What are you talking about?” I say.

“Oh my god, she’s denying it,” his friend, Eric Whale, mutters to Lewis, rolling his eyes.

“What’s so bad about him?” says Lewis with a frown. “I mean, you said yes. It kind of means you like him.”

Just as I’m about ask him what in the world he’s blabbering about, Alysha Seater, of all people, taps me on the shoulder, her hand on her hip.

“Uh, hi?” I say. Alysha is one of the girls here at this school who slack off and never study; I’ve only talked to her about four times before.

“I hope you know that you can’t pretend forever,” she says coolly.

“Excuse me?”

“Don’t pretend you don’t know what I’m talking about. Everyone already knows.”

I just stare at her, speechless. How does she know? How did anyone found out? It makes no sense – the only person I could understand that could know is Meagan, but she doesn’t even know for sure, and she wouldn’t go around telling everyone –

Oh god. And now Alysha is about to curse me because she had been Sirius’s last girlfriend; they broke up in the beginning of July. But why would she be mad – or jealous, even – if she now had a boyfriend in seventh year?

“How do you know?” I say in a low voice, fearful.

She scoffs. “It’s spreading all over the school. Why are you even denying it, anyway? Give the guy a break.”

Wait. What?

“Who are you talking about?” I say, blinking.

“Oh my god,” she rolls her eyes in disbelief, “for a girl that gets an O in every class, you’re pretty stupid. Can you think of one guy who has been in love with you for the whole time they’ve been at Hogwarts? You know, the guy who’s never even looked at a girl other than you?”

Okay. Sirius definitely does not fit into that category.

“There’s no one except James Potter,” I say, confused.

Alysha looks at me like I’m missing the biggest point in the conversation.

“Wait,” I say slowly, the truth finally dawning on me, “you’re talking about Potter? But what am I denying?”

“That you’re his girlfriend now,” Alysha answers simply, rolling her eyes and flipping back her shiny strawberry blonde hair.

My eyes widen. “WHAT? No! No, no, no, no, no. I don’t know where you’re getting this information, but that’s NOT what’s happening. He’s a seriously annoying, arrogant idiot who unfortunately seems to be interested in only me. Where did you get –”

“Listen,” Alysha interrupts, putting a hand on my arm. “I know how you feel. It’s okay not to want everyone to know. In third year, this dork back at home kept asking me out, but I continuously said no, even though I wanted to say yes. I didn’t want people to point and think: What is she doing with that loser? You know what I mean? But James isn’t a loser. You shouldn’t be afraid to let people know. He’s the most popular guy in our year, with Sirius Black. That’s all I’m saying, because he’s really happy about it – he’s been telling everyone– and I don’t think you should hurt his feelings. Goodnight, Lily.”

She walks away, leaving me speechless and dumbfounded. Her voice echoes in my head: He’s been telling everyone.

*****


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I stare at Lily as she approaches me, looking murderous. “Where the hell is James Potter?” she demands.

“On the Quidditch field with Peter, I think,” I reply quickly, as she looks as though she’s about to explode any second. “Don’t –”

Before I can finish, however, she stomps away and climbs out of the portrait hole, looking ready to kill.

“What the hell was that about?” says Desiree. “Lily didn’t actually say yes to him, did she?”

“No,” I shake my head rapidly. “This is just James being stupid. He thinks if he tells people that they’re finally going out, she’ll come to her senses or some crap.”

“Then shouldn’t you tell people that he’s lying?”

“No. I want him to learn his lesson, because he can get awfully delusional sometimes.”

“You do realize that Lily is going to murder your best friend.”

“I know. He probably deserves it.”

Desiree laughs lightly, and moves away from my lap, where she had been playing with my hair. “You’re so nice.”

“He’s a guy. He can take it,” I answer, reaching for her; she shakes her head playfully and stands up.

“I’ll wait for her in the dormitory. Meagan and I will be able to calm her down, hopefully.”

She gives me a quick kiss, but I want more, holding onto her arm. She giggles, kissing me twice, and scurries away. I watch her with amusement.

It proves that I like Desiree. Not Lily.

When I glance at the window, I spot a silhouette of James, flying on his broomstick. Then he stops, and flies toward the ground, landing. Smirking, I get up to watch. Remus would hate to have missed this. But, as usual, he’s in the library.

Sure enough, Lily has arrived, Peter standing beside her awkwardly, as he clearly has no idea what’s going on. I can just make out James’s grin, which vanishes as Lily shouts something; even from this distance I can see her face reddening fast. As she continues to scream, he tries to say something, but fails. Then, after slapping him in the face, Lily waves her wand abruptly, nearly poking Peter’s eye out in the process.

Suddenly, James disappears; Peter, frantic, says something to Lily, who merely stomps away. I watch as Peter just stands there, staring at something on the ground intently, not knowing what to do.

I should help. But I won’t; he deserves it for doing that to Lily.

Oh god. Why do I even care what happens to her?

I calmly wait until she comes back to the common room. When she does, still fuming, she yells to the room, “People! I am not going out with James Potter, and I never will.”

I fight the urge to laugh, because I’ve never seen her like this.

“Don’t believe a thing his blabbering, fat mouth says, because EVERYTHING IS UNTRUE.” Then she begins to walk away as people look at her curiously, and I quickly get up to stop her.

“What did you do to James?”

“What do you care?” she snaps, trying to get past me.

“I’m asking because I’m curious. Chill out.”

She looks at me, her green eyes burning. “I turned him into an ant. That way, I hope he gets stepped on and dies.”

Taken aback, I stare at her as she pushes past me and leaves for her dormitory.

*****


LE

Okay. The last part was a lie. I don’t really want Potter to die. But really, if he did, I wouldn’t mind too much.

Immediately when I enter the dormitory, Desiree and Meagan hurry up to me. “What the hell did you do to James?” Desiree demands frantically. “I could make him out flying around, then you suddenly show up, and he disappears! Where did you send him? What did you do?”

“Nothing that will harm his health,” I reply calmly. “I turned him into an ant. Big deal.”

Desiree bursts out laughing, but stops when Meagan gives her a look. “What if someone steps on him?” asks Meagan, worrying.

“Then the world would have gotten a whole lot better.”

Meagan gives me the same look. “You need to tell Sirius or Remus. They’ll be able to turn him back. You left him with Peter, right? Peter won’t have a clue.”

“I already told Sirius. I expect he’ll turn him back soon.”

We all stare at each other.

“Of all things you could have turned him into…!” Desiree blurts out, shaking her head, but her eyes are playful. Meagan even smirks.

“He’ll be fine,” I assure, “unless his fat head is too heavy for him to carry.”

Laughing, we climb into bed; I’m prepared to drift off to Lilyland when Desiree suddenly sits up. “Hey, Lily, remember how the Charms textbooks were sold out in Diagon Alley, and how we’re supposed to order one by Owl Order? Isn’t the deadline tomorrow?”

“Oh, no,” I groan, getting up lazily. “I better go to the Owlery. I could order yours too, if you want.”

“That would be the best. I am way too tired to go all the way over there, especially having to sneak around, trying not to get caught. Thanks a bunch, Lil.”
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Desiree and Sirius are hilarious, I laughed when Lily said about them 'doing it on a table infront of McGonagall'

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