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Samia · 07-15-2007, 01:02 PM

soo cool!! nice one..!!! is the bribe time over???

Hollister · 07-15-2007, 09:13 PM

I'm afraid so Samia, Glad ya liked it!

Okay guys, I kep forgetting to post. But it will be up soon! and plus, I go on Holiday for 3 weeks next week, so most of this FF will be finished this week, so sorry if it seems rushed
H o l l i e x

Hollister · 07-16-2007, 06:14 PM

I had the roughest of nights last night. Everytime I had finally gone to sleep, I would wake up sweating, from a nightmare about killing Draco.
Carla and I were walking along the dirt path towards Hogsmede. And might I say, Carla is quite the talker. Most of it I wans't listening to. The parts I was were, when she talked about what the ball is like.
"It's quite formal actually, alot big gowns and tuxedo's" She had said.

Once we had arrived in Hogsmede, Carla immediatly pulled me into a dress shop I had never heard of. With lots of sparkly dresses and black suits. It said in the window that they were the gowns and robes specialists. Carla had already ran too the pink section of the shop, no way was I going anywhere near there. But I had already found my dress, right in the corner of the room, saying Buy me Alice, Buy me! It was a dark red dress with a halter neck. The colour was mouth watering, I even bought a stupid ribbon the same colour, what a waste of money. I also found a red drawing pin on the floor which I just had to pick up. Carla stared at me as if I was going mad.
"Um ... Alice, you don't know where that's been" She said cautiously.
"What? Oh yeah, ew" I said dropiing it on the floor. I think I had gone mad. Everytime I saw something red, Carla had to restrain me from buying it, or picking it up from the floor.
"What has gotten into you?" She asked as we walked into Honeydukes.
"I don't know, I just not feeling myself today I ..." I stopped midsentence. I stared at the shelf holding the very unfamous Bloodsucker's. I could smell them from where I was standing. It was hard to believe that it wasn't real blood, I was just so thirsty it was impossible. I quickly grabbed Carla's bottle of water and drank it all in one swig.
"Sorry .. I'll buy ... you another one" I panted. Anything to get the thirst away.

We started to walk back to Hogwarts, Carla had linked arms with me if I had collapsed, which wasn't going to happen.
"I told you I'm fine"
"But if you collapse? Who's going to get the blame huh? me! that's who. I'm not going to let anything happen to you"
"Thanks" I smiled, hiding that I didn't want her here. I wanted to be alone again.

Before I knew it we were back in the Slytherin common room. No Draco or Hayley, thankgod. But an evil looking Pansy, reading in the corner.
"Do you want anything?" I looked at Carla as if she was now acting weird.
"Um .. nooo. I'm fine"
"Ok, well I'm going back to Hogsmede if that's alright, I haven't finished my shopping"
"Yeah, you go, I'll be fine" I said to her. She walked out the common room and left me laone, just what I needed.
I couldn't stay in the same room as Pansy, to many glares directed at me. So I decided to walk around the grounds, it's a very good past time.
Unfortuantly, well not that unfortunate I mean, he was nice to look at (another past time), I found Draco sitting by the lake, skimming stones across the water.
"Hey" I said as I sat next next to him. I think I sort of made him jump, he jolted to the side a bit and relaxed when he saw it was me.
"You alright?" I asked.
"Yeah. Well, sort of. No"
"Does that mean yes or no?"
"No" He said flatly.
"Can I help?"
"I dunno. Possibly" He went quiet before he continued, he faced me.
"Have you ever loved someone? but also loved someone else who has been right infront of you most of your life?" I hsitated before I answered. How was I ment to know this? I had never gone to a school, or aplce when there is children the same age as you before.
"I don't think so no" I said Apologetically.
"You could still help though"
"Yeah, I guess"
"OK then...You do know that one of these people are you right?" I smiled at him and nodded.
"Good. Well, do you know who the other person is? the one who has been right infront of me all my life?"
My face dropped when I thought about it.
"Yes" Draco looked away from my face. It was hurting him, I could tell.
"I liked her before you came, ages ago. In 3rd year when we sort of, grew up a bit. But then when you came, it kind of all changed. It's now split. But obviously it's more with you because I'm going out with you. It's kind of like a trance really" I thought about what he said. But something really played on my mind.
"Wait. Did you say like a trance?"
"Yeah. And by the way, I'm not eing over the top, I mean literally. your doing it now"
"Doing what?"
"Dazzling me"
"I dazzle you?"
"Yep. I've also seen the looks other boys give you, but you don't seem to notice"
"I dazzle people?" Draco laughed and put his arm around me.
"Your very good at pretending you don't know" We remebered we had lost track.
"Anyway, about this love triangle. What do you want me to do? I'll leave you if that's what you want" Please say no, Draco. I don't think I could live without you.
"No! I love you too much, I just don't know who to choose"
All of a sudden I had a tingling sensation in my nose. I covered my nose and pretended everything was alright. I could smell something nice. it was Draco.
"You OK?" He asked, worried.
"Yes, everyone keeps asking me that today"
"Proboly because you're acting a little strange" I quickly changed the subject.
"We're drifting off the subject again"
"You're right. God I just don't know what to do!"
"Just go with what your heart tells you" I said. Hmm.. that ws very clever of me. Draco smiled at me and embraced me in a hug, and I was not hesitant. I started sniffing his hair seen asthough it was right next to me. He didn't seem to notice.
I wanted to stay there forever, while Draco gre wold and grey and I was perfectly the same. But there was a ball to go to and a thirst to stop.

My chapters are going to be longer than normal because I'm leaving for 3 weeks soon, so I have to finish this by Thursaday.
H o l l i e x

Fallon Chanel · 07-16-2007, 06:33 PM

ooh loved it!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara

Hollister · 07-16-2007, 06:38 PM

Thanks mah Tara!

Crayola · 07-16-2007, 08:30 PM

Wow, that was great!! I loved it
PAMS!!!

Carla

K33P0NR0CK1N · 07-16-2007, 11:37 PM

Great job Hollie!
Loved the post.
I won't say post more soon because
I know you are going to.

-Sky Captain<3

Hollister · 07-17-2007, 08:58 AM

Hehe thnaks dudes!
You are all getting a cookie! *hands out cookies*
Anyway yeah, I'll post more soon =]

Hollister · 07-18-2007, 08:14 PM

Told ya I'm speeding up the space of time between posting chapters

"Carla, I'm having second thoughts. I don't think I want to go"
"Alice, You can't turn down Draco now! And why would you anyway?"
"I just don't feel like going now."
"Why?"
"I feel unwell"
"You're always unwell, Alice" I glared at Carla and sat on the bed and rested my head on the bed post.
"And plus. Who would wear your gorgeous dress if you don't go?" Carla asked as she took my dress out of the wardrobe and shoved infront of my face.
"It'll be fine. Are you nervous or something?"
"Yeah I guess." Carla satbeside me and put her arm around me.
"You don't need to be, I'll be there, Draco will be there. Like I said .. It'll be fine" She stood up and walked into the bathroom to get changed. I tipped my head back onto the bed and sighed. Why me? Why not someone I really hate ... like Hayley.

Me and Draco were walking to the great hall with linked arms, and he looked happy. Nothing on his mind, possibly.
"So.. about what happened the other day. Have you chosen someone?"
"Yeah. It's a bit obvious. Because if I had chosen Hayley, I would have cancelled you as my date" He grinned.
"Well, I suppose" I smiled back. I could still smell him from a distance. Even though he put on loads of deodrant, like boys do when they are going out, I could still smell that smell. His smell. I could feel my nose twitching again. Draco had noticed.
"You OK?"
"Yeah I'm fine"
"You look a little pale"
"I'm always pale" I said in a cocky tone.
"Oh! Just like me" Draco smirked.
"Yeah, but I'm more pale"
"Yes. And more beautiful" I blushed slightly and faced infront of me. There was already loads of people all dressed up and in the great hall, having fun and stuffing their faces with the halloween themed food. I could already see Hayley, she was much more beautiful than me. He hair was curled in lose curls and she was wearing a dress that put mine in the shadows. She hadn't seen me yet thankgod.

After a while nearly everyone was on the dancefloor including me and Draco. Which was quite fun, apart from the spinning and twirling, it was making me dizzy.
Spinning and the semll of Draco was really making feel sick, which also made me want to dance more so I could just smell him. The thing is everyone smelled lucious, but Draco was closest.
"I'm getting tired, you wanna stop for a bit and get something to eat?"
"No! .." I said clinging on to him.
"Why?"
"I .. uhh.. Like dancing with you" Draco looked at me, puzzled, but then smirked and kissed my forehead,
"Ok then. Just for a little longer" He smiled at me and we carried on dancing to slow music with everyone else. My head was resting on his shoulder, while my nose was stroking his neck. Any closer and my teeth would be in his neck.
"You smell so good"
"Compared to how you smell, I smell like a rubbish tip" I mumbled. Draco chuckled. My nose was still on his neck. I closed my eyes and inhaled slowly through my nose, so I could get a good smell of him. I started to feel all drowsy, I felt like I was going to collapse on Draco their and then, and if not that, kill him.
"Draco I think we should sit down now"
"Why? What's wrong?"
I stumbled on my words and couldn't say anything. I was dying of dehidration and my drink was infront of me asking me what's wrong. I quickly ran out if the hall, to the door and outside where the cool air hit my face. I could hear footsteps behind me, Draco had followed me.
"Draco .... just ... leave me for a ... while" I didn't face him. I kept gasping for air and sat down on the cold stone.
"I'm not leaving you Alice" He said worriedly and sat down next to me. He wrapped his arms around me and hugged me close to his chest.
"Your really cold" He said, worried still. I could feel sweat from my forehead trickling down my face. I was cold and hot at the same time.
"Come on love, let's take you to the Hospital ward .."
"NO!" I grabbed hs jacket and dragged him back to his sitting position.
"Stay here .. with me"
"Alice, I think you're seriously ill"
"I'm fine! I just want to be with you" I threw my arms around his neck and kissed him.

Draco had already pushed me so I was lying on the stone step, still kissing me. Technically, I was a good kisser. it just made me more thirsty.
"No Draco, Stop now"
"You feeling ill again?"
"I don't know. no .." And that's where my mind stopped. I couldn't remember anything. Where I was, What I was doing. All I knew was that Draco was going to die right now. And I was happy about it.
"Wow! Alice! you're eyes have gone red"
"Oh who cares!" I yelled at him without knowing, and before I knew it, my lips were pressed against his, again. I had completely lost it. This time my teeth were stroking his neck. Draco was starting to sweat aswell. He was starting to get afraid.
"Alice, hospital wing"
"No .." I said in a soothing voice in his ear. He closed his eyes and smiled, soon he wasn't going to enjoy it.
This time I pushed him down on the step and turned his head so I could bite him ...

Then it all came back. What was I doing? I need to divert myslef, and fast. I saw a person in the distance. i left Draco there and ran after them. They had noticed I was chasing them and started to run. It didn't take long until I caught up.

More in a few days dudes! Possibly the last chapter

Fallon Chanel · 07-18-2007, 11:46 PM

wow! intense!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara

Hollister · 07-24-2007, 12:28 PM

YAY! The fanfic area is reopened! *dances*
OK, I'll wait until more people have commented because I know you all couldn't post before. But thatnkyou anyway mah Tara!
There will be a post possibly in a few days or weeks, or maybe even later today

Hollister · 07-24-2007, 09:22 PM

"What to do with you.." Snape paced around me slowly, smirking. I knew he was angry. He was cleverly hiding it by thinking of how to punish me.
"I wouldn't punish as badly if it wasn't another Slytherin. Why not a Gryffindor? Alice?"
I just looked up at him innocently. "I didn't mean to do it" I muttered quietly, fidgeting in my seat. Snape walked back to behind his desk and rested his hands on it.
"You brutuly attacked a fellow student, Alice. Of course you meant to do it. I told Dumbledore it was a bad idea to let a vampire in the school, but like always, he gave you a chance. Just like he does with Potter." Suddenly, the portrait behind Snape, which was just an empty frame before, had an old man that looked the age of Dumbledore appeared.
"Dumbledore would like you and Alice to report to his office, Severus" The portrait said sternly.
"Come on, I'm not letting you get away with this" Snape glared at me.

We walked out of the dungeons and across the school, to Dumbledore's office.
"Ah. Severus, Miss Moore" Dumbledore said, in a freindly tone. I smiled slightly and sat in the chair Dumbledore indicated, with a warm smile. He didn't seem the slightest bit angry at me, not like Snape was.
"Miss Moore, I was sure this would happen. And unfortunatly it did. Seeing as though your mother said it hasn't happened in a very long time" I looked down at my hands, I was picking my nails.
"She said 'She didn't mean to do it' how pathetic, professor. Of course she meant to do it! Attacked a student! Hoinestly, didn't you realise you could of exposed what you are" He spat at me, still glaring.
"But she didn't. You chased the student into the forbidden forest. Am I correct?"
"Yes"
"And who found you?" He asked, still calmer. Much calmer than Snape was.
"Madame Pomfrey. She was wlaking throught the foyer when she saw me go chase after the..student" I said, not knowing if they knew who the 'student' was.
"Well, seen as though I'm the head of your house. I choos the punishment!" Snape declared, emphasizing on the word 'I'.
"You're going to expell me aren't you" I muttuered, my head still looking down.
"It's possible. It depends on how the victim feels about it, really. She was the one you inflicted pain on"
"It wasn't that much!" I yelled, then suddenly quieteneing down a bit.
"I mean ... I didn't bite them. I realized what I was doing before I could do that, just alot of cuts, because I fought them to the floor"
"Hmm. Miss Moore has a point there, Severus. She didn't kill the student, nor turn the student into one of Alice's own. Which I beleieve, isn't any different." I nodded, agreeing.
"Would you like to see the student? I think visits in the hospital are still open"
"I guess, I don't they did like me anyway, so they probobly want me expelled" DUmbledore just looked at me and opened the door to let me out. Snape followed shortly after wards.

Snape began to talk to Madame Pomfrey, as she kept giving me looks, as if I was leathal. I slowly walked over to the bed where the person I'd hurt was. For some reason, Draco wasn't there, I'd thought he would be. Maybe he hasn't been told. He would be avoiding me anyway. I was being strange around him too that ngiht. Or maybe he hadn't noticed. Or maybe girls are like that to him all the time.
The student was asleep. Her hair shimmering over the pillow she was lying on. A bandage around each arm from where I had pinned her to the ground with my nails, and a large, long gash acroos her left cheek.
She slowly stirred and opened her eyes. I said the first thing I could think of.
"I'm really sorry" I said, making sure she could hear it.
"I kind of new anyway, I got that Granger girl to look it up form me. You just seemed so strange. That's why I started to not bother, and I wondered what I had done wrong when you started chasing after me, during the ball"
"I was going to get Draco, but I suddenly changed my mind, realising what I was doing"
"It's fine, Madame Pomfrey said I'll be alright in around 2 weeks" She smiled. I hadn't seen her smile since my first day, during the welcome feast.

Visits were over, and I had to leave her. Draco was outside the door, looking at me, not smiling.
I smiled slightly and carried on walking, he quiclky walked after and stopped me.
"Why didn't you tell me? I wouldn't have told anyone" He said
"I don't know, I didn't want anyone to know, I thought .. no one would like me if I wasn't human"
"I would. I still do, even if you're ot .. human" He took his time in saying human. I smiled at him and he gave me a hug, a very long one.
"No matter what you are, I still love you" He whispered in my ear.
"Really? I've never heard you say that"
"Well, there you go, now you have" He smiked as we let go of each other.
"I'm not sure if I'm getting expelled or not" I looked down at the floor again.
"You're not. Snape told me to tell you as he left. She seems fine with you and doesn't want you expelled"
"Really!?" I grabbed Draco again and embraced him in another hug.
"It's nice to kow you are happy, Alice" Draco smirkde, and kissed me on the cheek. We both started to walk back to the common room.
"So how long is Hayley in the hospital ward?" Asked Draco, looking back at her.
"Two weeks she said. Atleast she's friends with me. Maybe I'll try to bite people more often so I can make friends" Draco chuckled and kissed me on the lips this time.
"Maybe you should keep the atacking on the low for the rest of this year"
"You never know, I may not be able to control myself" I said, biting the air near Draco.
"You can bite me if you like love. I don't mind" He smirked at me.

THE END! *End Music*

Commment me guys!
Hollie X

Samia · 07-25-2007, 02:00 AM

Wait..Wah-?? It ended already..!!

Oh what the helll... It was Awsooommmmeeee...!!!!!!!!!!

Loveddd itttt.....!!!

Keep up the goodworkk..!!!

Fallon Chanel · 07-25-2007, 03:55 AM

dang. I cant believe it ended! but it was good!
XOXO,
Tara

Hollister · 07-25-2007, 09:57 AM

Yeah, I know.
Well I'm going on Holiday in a few minutes and it would never be updated. So it was a good place to end it
There'll be loads of stories where this one came from but not yet! *points to avvie*

See you all soon! And still comment until this thread closes
Hollie x