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Zoe 04-06-2007 12:35 AM

Zoe's Poetry Nook - Sa13+
 
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Hello everyone. Welcome to my poetry thread! My name is Zoe and I have already been making poems about Harry Potter characters and some in a few of the Fan Clubs here on SnitchSeeker. So, I've finally gotten around to making my own poetry thread. So, here it is!

I will take character requests from you members. If you'd like me to write up a poem or two on a specific Harry Potter character, feel free to PM me and I'll see what I can do.

Well, I covered what I wanted to cover. Enjoy!

u]Moon In Her Eyes[/u][/b]

She's the girl that they mock
She might give you a shock
You might want to laugh as she passes you by
I'm in love with the girl with the moon in her eyes

She's kind of an outcast
And she's got a strange past
You'll find her outside with her face to the sky
I'm in love with the girl with the moon in her eyes

Some people say that she's not too sane
They haven't seen that she's not to blame
She’s been through so much that it makes me cry
I'm in love with the girl with the moon in her eyes

While others laugh and tease
You will notice me with ease
I'm the one staring with a frown and a sigh
I'm in love with the girl with the moon in her eyes

One day, I'll ask the question
One day, without suggestion
I'll hope and I'll wish and I tell her why
I'm in love with her, the girl with the moon in her eyes


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Obi-Wan K'Lari 04-07-2007 02:53 PM

Nice!!! You made a thread!!!! Go Zoe :woot: I love it! Luna? hehehe

Zoe 04-07-2007 05:45 PM

Hi Lari!

Yes, it is Luna. Well, ... what Neville thinks of Luna. :xd:

More poetry coming soon! :)

Obi-Wan K'Lari 04-07-2007 06:11 PM

:woot: :woot: Loves this thread already! :xd:

Zoe 04-08-2007 03:06 PM

I Solemnly Swear

I solemnly swear
I am up to no good.
That I will make mischief.
That I will plan pranks.
I solemnly swear
I am up to no good.
That I will play pranks.
That I will get into trouble.
I solemnly swear
I am up to no good.
That I will be the best.
That I will not settle for less.
I solemnly swear
I am up to no good.
That I, Fred Weasley,
Will uphold this law.
I solemnly swear
I am up to no good.
That I, George Weasley,
Will uphold this law.
We so solemnly swear
we are up to no good!
Oh and that we will
make Flitch mad
every chance we get.
We so solemnly swear
we are up to no good!

Obi-Wan K'Lari 04-08-2007 05:26 PM

*grins* *dies laughing* that was so funny! :xd: the Twins :no: lol they're cool!

Zoe 04-08-2007 10:47 PM

Yes, the twins! :D I just had to write something up for them! :xd:

Another poem that I made just a few hours ago:

The Knight in Blue

The knight in blue
Crinkles cradled his smiles
Noble and true
His face beaten by a tempest of trials
Yet life filled his frail body to the brim
Emanating light to others
So blind, so hateful, so hopeless, so grim
They couldn’t see friends, enemies, lovers, nor brothers
Suddenly he would ignite the torch
A candle of wisdom for those who would simply grasp it
Or a blaze of fury for those who would underestimate its scorch
He kept the signal fire lit
That could never quite clear the haze
But always the goal shown bright
He kept the world going with a simple phrase
A spout of truth that could settle any plight
He was a sky with two half moons
We thought him master of the tide
So, we never expected the monsoons
That swept him aside
He was a knight that kept everyone believing
And beneath the shiny blue armor, we forgot
A human stood breathing
And we should remember what he’s taught:
Always we’ll have to choose between what is easy and what is right
For it is our choices that show what we truly are
Alone we cannot win the struggle of life’s fight
Because only united can we go far
Truth is a beautiful and terrible thing,
And should therefore be treated with great care
Only with acceptance and understanding can truth be freeing
Only with a broad perspective can we do what’s fair
Remember, death is but the next great adventure
Let us step out into the night and pursue that flighty temptress
For the knight who was worth every lecture
And always remember that the dead we loved never truly leave us

Obi-Wan K'Lari 04-09-2007 10:01 AM

:cry: Dumbledore!!!! *sniffs* that was sooooooo good!!!

Zoe 04-15-2007 01:04 AM

Thanks Lari. Next poem! :)

You're All Alone

I cannot be alone in here
This barn, it holds all of my fears
The sun will turn its back on me
The moon; It shines. How bright it be
The days grow long,
The nights grow cold
I have no one in here to hold
Each month is harder,
Each month I pray:
Next month nothing!
Next month I'm saved!
But my dreams and hopes are all in vein
But maybe there'll be someone on they way
A friend perhaps! To stop me moan!
And I will not look on this night and groan!
"Oh Remus, you fool," I'll say with a tone
"Remember this well: You're all alone.''

Obi-Wan K'Lari 04-20-2007 05:48 PM

Nice! a Tonksy poem!!!!! :D :D :D :D I luf it!!!

Your Obi-Wan K'Lari! :rotfl:

Zoe 04-20-2007 11:25 PM

Well, it's a Remus poem. Remus is talking too himself saying that he's alone because of his 'furry little problem'.

The Toad and Me

I sit before the toad-like squirt,
Holding her vicious quill.
I wish I could wipe off the smirk,
But I fight against my will.
On and on, I write the words,
I must not tell lies.
A growing rage swirls in me;
A fire burns in my eyes.
The toad looks at me with eyes so gleeful,
Sneering at my task.
I keep my gaze down, seemingly calm,
My face is an unreadable mask.
On and on, on and on,
I write, ignoring the pain.
I know I have to do this job,
My anger is in vain.
Blood drops down my wrist,
The parchment is stained.
If I have to keep this on,
'Tis my pride that will be pained.
At the close of the hour, the toad looks up
And summons me to her desk.
I obey; I cringe for that,
I know it is a test.
My wounds give her pleasure, my latent anger glee;
She looks at my hand, and tells me to leave.
I obey again; I cringe for that,
But one day, I swear, I'll take revenge on that rat.

Fallen_Angel1721 04-21-2007 12:12 AM

youre reallr really good

keep writing such wonderful poems

Zoe 04-21-2007 10:24 PM

^ I sure will! I'm glad that you like my poems. :)

Unfogging the Mysteries

I gaze at the future and what I see
Are foggy mysteries that reveal themselves to me.
Struggle and suffering,
Hex against spell.
A war is coming
And good and evil will duel.
Dark Times grow near.
They haunt me in my dreams.
Will courage overcome fear?
My head is filled with the screams.
Now I know what will occur.
Who will win and who will fall.
One will bring an end to the war
And will unite us all.
So come and take a look, clear your mind.
My crystal ball is here, don't be scared,
Leave your scepticism behind
And a new world will be unfolded.

MalfoyzBeloved 04-22-2007 06:56 AM

you're a great poet :) keep it going :P

Professor Trelawney is the last one, correct? (I've never been great with... well I'm never good at understanding some poetry, but I love reading it! :D)

Zoe 04-22-2007 02:42 PM

^ Thanks! Yep! It was Professor Trelawney. ;)

I'm working on a poem right now! I'll post it sometime later today. :D

Obi-Wan K'Lari 04-22-2007 06:19 PM

:poke: you write too fast! :xd: sorry! anyway my vagueness will poke you all it wants but you have to know I love the poems!!!!!!!!!! :P

Zoe 04-22-2007 10:40 PM

^ Me write too fast? Nah! I just like writing poems a lot of the time. :D Glad you love 'em!

She Likes Me

As we change for our first match,
I glance at her from across the tent.
She's starring back,
With much content.

My heart beats just a little faster,
Can anyone else hear this?
My thoughts of love,
And a hopeful kiss.

It is time now for the match.
As I grow nervous and anxious,
She is calm,
Totally unconscious.

Of the way I feel towards her,
How I want to hold her in my arms,
Everything right,
Nothing to harm.

Out on the field we stand ready,
The whistle blows and we're in the air,
Spreading out,
With care.

She scores once, and then again,
Katie is forever my girl,
A shot on me,
Around I wirl.

I almost let the ball in the hoop,
How detrimental that would be,
For my dear Katie,
To have to see.

"Nice save Wood!" she yells to me.
A rush of joy overwhelms me,
She likes me.
She likes me.

Obi-Wan K'Lari 04-23-2007 02:34 PM

Oh cool! I never thought that Oliver might like Katie! I just thought he was in love with quidditch! :lol: I love it! You can rhyme and still the poems very adult! (as in doesn't sound childish) It's my problem with rhyming *sigh* anyway you don't have that problem and I loved it!

MalfoyzBeloved 04-23-2007 02:57 PM

Quote:

I just thought he was in love with quidditch!
Maybe he loved Quidditch cause Katie was there...? You never know :lol:
Quote:

You can rhyme and still the poems very adult! (as in doesn't sound childish)
I ditto that :)
I loved it! :D can't wait for the next poem!

Zoe 04-24-2007 10:43 PM

^, ^^ Thanks you two. :blush: I'm sorta of an Oliver/Katie shipper so, yeah! :lol:

Black Inside My Heart

When the night comes it is all black;
Black like the shadows of fear on a tormented heart,
Black like shattered dreams and souls ripped apart.
I feel the lack ...
The lack of bright light
In the middle of the cold night.

And I fear the darkness outside.
I fear the unknown
Beyond the depths of that dark pitch black;
That black from which I hide,
Although deep down inside
I know that those blurry shapes I see
Couldn't ever harm me.

Yet I fear the nothingness hidden in the dim;
The cold, the dark void within
My veins and my soul,
Whenever the sun goes down
And dusk takes over the world.

I fear black and what it means to me ...
The grief inside an empty heart
In lack of joy and glee.
A cold heart, dark and vain.
The mysteries behind an anguished soul
Drenched in havoc and pain.
The chaos inside a maimed mind
Hollow, in wreckage and insane.

And I fear to feel that way,
To have my dreams shattered one day.
I fear to feel empty inside,
To let myself go with the tide.
I fear to have my soul ripped apart ...
I fear to feel black ... inside my heart.

Obi-Wan K'Lari 04-25-2007 03:06 PM

:faint: I loved that so hard! :lol: but I did :P

Zoe 04-28-2007 05:42 PM

^ I'm glad that you liked it! :)

We All Must Sacrifice To Grow

A soul shredder surely, as am I.
I see it in his eyes ...
As bright as silver the glow within the iris,
And the mouth that so easily lies ...
He does not feel the chill I think,
I see myself in a different light by his side,
I am muted, diluted, shadowed,
Found lacking from what I am lacking,
And that I despise ...

I am ashamed to be so weak where he is so strong.
Am I not strong? I feel I am, but my will,
My esteem still so fragile, my spirit so often killed,
Is kneeling down in his shadow,
Quietly wrapping myself in his favor,
Cursing at the path that I can never cross to reach him,
To match him,
How I wish he stood where I now stand,
In command, and still stretched so thin,
Does he envy me as I envy him?

I am the leader, I move, they follow,
And despite my success I sometimes feel ... hollow.
So pointless and wasted the battle I fight, I would rather wage war within,
And kill this blood that shouldn't stand in his light,
Kill the doubt, the weakness, and the fear.
I will never say it, but his support is so much of what has kept me here.
The pure submitting to my command, my power, my venoms touch ...
And he, the jewel in my crown,
Who has unknowingly given so much.

But I see his weakness too, and it is as great as mine.

His blood would have promised better, but it was not in his design.
He was built to follow, and I to lead.
It is a humorless joke that nature has played, but it allowed me to succeed.
I cannot question that I know this, or if I do then how,
It is because he stands where he satnds, and not where I stand now.

Come my serpents,
Come my fools and favored,
Come my independent and my weak, my old and strong or fresh and young.
Come my lost. And with my war be found,
Come my hopeless. And seek comfort in the moment and the spell.

Peace is not the healer of the soul,
It is in the heat of war that we are finally made whole.
And ours is a hate that no water can dash, and no passivity quell.

And come my Lucius, my silver serpent,
Just for a little longer let me bask in your effortless glow.
For in time I will destroy you, as I break all I admire.
You will be my greatest sacrifice.

And we all must sacrifice to grow.

Obi-Wan K'Lari 05-01-2007 05:04 PM

:gasp: :gasp: :gasp: :faint: *appaudes* WOOOOOOOOOW! That was sooooooooo AWESOME! Who is it....is it Narcissia *sp* ?

Zoe 05-01-2007 09:33 PM

*Cough* Voldemort! *Cough*

Her Broken Heart

It was only a phantom,
the ghost in her dreams;
a light shining through
the darkest of blacks.
His face glowed like a beacon of hope;
a lone star in the night sky.
His hand blackened no longer,
now a shining silver wisp,
reached out for her
with want and desire.
His lips the same perfect shape as before
forming that smile as bright as the sun.
His wardrobe still eccentric
with all the purples and reds
and the silvery stars
dancing on end.
But most importantly are his eyes,
with that sparkling glimmer
of mischief and intelligence
that can match no other.
His blue irises brighter then the sky;
With a twinkling blink
he had my heart in a bind.
But something was wrong
with his brilliant eyes.
A spark was missing
a connection lost,
and the last thing she saw
was the love dying and gone.
She awoke with a start
bolting upright so quick;
sweat drenched her body
her clothes and the bed.
Her surroundings focused
her memory came back,
and a slow tear trickled down
her pale porcelain face.
That's how the dream always went,
waking with a start,
realizing the phantom
was her broken heart.

Obi-Wan K'Lari 05-03-2007 06:26 PM

:worship: :bow: :worship: :gasp: That was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo awesome!!!!!!!!!! :D MacGongall? :hmm:


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