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06-21-2005, 03:11 AM
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| | Ramora
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Starbucks man.
Posts: 5,158
|  Words from the mind.
Hello, and welcome to my forum of poetry /songs. I actually have made a poety forum a long time ago in SS, but that was when I just was starting to express myself on paper. I think I have gotten better, but not as good as alot of you poets out there on SS, but I want a way to express myself, so here I am!
Well, my ´work´ is based on my own thoughts and emotions, and will be written in different styles. Such as poems (Hehe...of course!), songs from my lil band, and just thoughts written out as small speeches.
I just wanted to do something different, yeh know?
Note: A lot of my writings are right now in the U.S, but at the moment I am in S.A, so I will have to post them up in two weeks or so. They are mostly poems and songs I made in a series of months. But for right now I will just be writing some stuff off the top of my head, heh.
Enjoy, and thank yeh for reading!
{No name- Just top of the head stuff}:
How do I feel,
you may ask,
as I stare out,
at that stained glass.
"I think I rather pass..."
I would explain,
trying to repress that pain.
Why would you pass,
if its all in the past?
You would ask,
staring quietly,
at my mask.
"Its too much to grasp..."
I would sigh,
giving you a sign,
as I stood up to past by.
Then why don´t you share it,
and allow me to bear it?
You would say,
as you stood up,
willing to pay,
the payment to which you saved.
"I could not hand you my burden,
for it is mine to be certain..."
I would reply,
as my eyes scanned the sky.
These are lies,
you may muttered,
watching closely as a moth fluttered.
"Would they be?"
You would ask,
and continue as you walked past.
"Because if they were,
then I would not be sure,
over the fact of my own person...
For these are my emotions,
kept behind a black curtain.
Mine,
and mine alone,
are these emotions,
and only these,
can I within stand this commotion."
And with that I left,
my soul set,
on my pain that I remained kept.
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06-21-2005, 08:18 PM
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#2 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Starbucks man.
Posts: 5,158
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Yay! It´s up! ^.^ | |
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06-22-2005, 04:03 AM
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#3 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Starbucks man.
Posts: 5,158
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Meh, a poem I made just now:
Another normal day,
of staring into the reflection,
wondering what exactly happened,
to your own heart´s affections.
Another simple hour,
has gone past the clock,
and yet you still remain,
blank without a thought.
Another silent moment,
of your mind giving out.
Your heart twisted,
with that undying doubt...
Can emotions truly drown?
Can they disappear without a sound?
Another endless stare,
in your mind of despair.
What caused the scare,
you thought,
of my feelings to become unaware.
Another little laugh,
made without the behalf,
of the soul which was quiet,
figuring out what was the riot.
Another soft sound,
of a heart still bound,
breaking onto,
that cold grave mound.
Is my heart buried deep?
Still able to actually weep?
Another normal day...
Numbness is all I feel,
from what was supposely real.
Another normal thought...
Was it my tears that drowned,
my emotions that are unfounded?
Another normal explaination...
Was it the depression I felt,
once surpressed by all that I dealt?
Another normal realization...
Had my emotions worn out,
and left my heart in a drought?
Another normal day,
of staring into the reflection,
wondering what exactly happened,
to your own heart´s affections.
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