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09-06-2013, 10:49 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Ganymede (GMT-5)
Posts: 777
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Louise Fellen
Third Year |  Well... here goes! Sa 13+ Jupiter's Satellite
No i'm not a poet. But I am a writer.
Translation: I need to practice poetry and this seems like a good place to do so!
Other notes: My general theme (other than HP world) is writing poems about spells and charms and potions and just NOT characters. (now watch this devolve into all character based poems...) Also sorry if any are short. This poem thing is new to me.
If you happen to be reading this and wish to request/ give me a spell/charm/potion/non-character to write about
PLEASE DO NOT BE SHY. COMMENT. CRITIQUE. or something.
*sigh* well... here goes! -------
Cheering Charm
If you're sitting in class and you're feeling depressed
and you're watched far too closely to make a good jest
Then the spell that you need is not far away
A Cheering Charm's in order for a much better day
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09-10-2013, 01:02 AM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 15,697
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sebastian Price
First Year |  The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
I love it, I LOOOOOVE it! Welcome to the Script Cript, I hope you'll post lots of poems! I can't wait to read them. Don't forget to follow the rules and have fun!!!
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09-10-2013, 08:48 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Ganymede (GMT-5)
Posts: 777
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Louise Fellen
Third Year | Jupiter's Satellite
Bluebell Flame
To make the flames for which we are all so fond
Just say the word and with a flick of a wand
Some heat and warmth may be felt
Where only cold and darkness dwelt
However words of caution are at hand
There are few things this flame cannot withstand
With that in mind use this spell well
To make a Cold Fire flame call Bluebell
Just a comment here: This poem was originally written for another thread
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09-11-2013, 12:54 AM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 15,697
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sebastian Price
First Year | The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
I love it! Keep it up!
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09-11-2013, 02:38 AM
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| | Billywig
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Gallifrey (GMT +1)
Posts: 3,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Adrienne Rebecca Colbert
Seventh Year | The Last of Her Kind
Aaah, these both sound lovely! The rhyming is great! Um, if you're looking for requests, how about a talking mirror (like the ones at the Weasleys') or a Pepperup Potion? 
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09-11-2013, 05:03 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Ganymede (GMT-5)
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Louise Fellen
Third Year | Jupiter's Satellite
Quote:
Originally Posted by aaetha  Aaah, these both sound lovely! The rhyming is great! Um, if you're looking for requests, how about a talking mirror (like the ones at the Weasleys') or a Pepperup Potion? Will do!  (requests!)
Thanks 
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09-11-2013, 08:11 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Ganymede (GMT-5)
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Louise Fellen
Third Year | Jupiter's Satellite
Commentary
It’s a great day here for a match
One that will end with the Snitch being snatched
Puffers and Claws are on for the day,
Let’s get the game started, wouldn’t you say?
It began with Ravenclaw and a goal
Before Badger Beaters decided to bowl
Two Chasers had to give pause to their flight
Avoiding that Bludger with all of their might
Wait, wait, what’s this? The whistle is blown
It appears bad sportsmanship was shown
A pause in the game and a player is out
Oh common, it’s your fault, there’s no need to pout
The game continued, Hufflepuff takes the lead
With brooms whizzing by all at a top speed
Whoa! That was a shot the Keeper just blocked
I bet you that Chaser was a little bit shocked
We’ve had a sighting of the elusive Snitch
Just now above the Quidditch Pitch
The Seekers race, speedy and lean,
To where the golden flash last was seen
If you ever had doubts in Team Hufflepuff
It’s obvious now that they aren’t full of fluff
It looks like they’re up by a hundred and fifty
Unless Ravenclaw gets some points in a jiffy
The spectators roared, even Gryffindor came
To watch the conclusion of this epic game
The Eagle- eyed Seeker really fought
To Ravenclaw, the Snitch was caught
This means it has finished in a dead heat
A comeback like this is hard to beat
The players were great and the commentary fine
But for now I must go, I’ll see you next time.
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09-14-2013, 06:46 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Ganymede (GMT-5)
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Louise Fellen
Third Year | Jupiter's Satellite
Pepperup Potion
Achoo! Goes the Professor
Achoo! Goes the Nurse
Achoo! Goes the Student
The cold's getting worse
The mandrakes are ready
So's the bicorn horn
Heed Hipworth's recipe
And a potion is born
Please drink up the potion
Else the cold will spread
Steam may pour from the ears
But none are sick in bed
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09-14-2013, 06:56 PM
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Second Year  x10
| Admiratrice des Maraudeurs | C-Rizzle | THE Best Snuggler
I like this! Good job!
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09-28-2013, 12:51 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Ganymede (GMT-5)
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Louise Fellen
Third Year | Jupiter's Satellite
Before a Sorting
Fingers twitching
Nervous ticks
How can such a thing
cause such tension?
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09-28-2013, 03:08 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Ganymede (GMT-5)
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Louise Fellen
Third Year | Jupiter's Satellite
Billywig Sting
A man with the surname of Figg
Flew with a sting of billywig
Though he thought it nice
He wanted down in a trice
But alas he was caught on a twig!
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09-29-2013, 12:52 AM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: May 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sebastian Price
First Year | The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
Very VERY good!!! I'm loving these!
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10-22-2013, 12:08 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Ganymede (GMT-5)
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Louise Fellen
Third Year | Jupiter's Satellite
Bewarewolf Tunnel
Moonlight shines on the lake below
Something's happening at the old willow
Just tap the knot, don't bother with please
Now the tree is frozen, despite the breeze
At the base of the motionless trunk
Into the floor a trapdoor sunk
Revealing a tunnel with a dirt floor
And a ceiling so low it makes walking a chore
Quick! Step into the tunnel, the tree is alive
but the whipping branches are soon put out of mind
For far in the distance a howl is heard
Was it made by something wolfish and furred?
At the end of the tunnel lies the Shrieking Shack
It looks like a werewolf now has a good snack!
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10-22-2013, 09:06 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Ganymede (GMT-5)
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Louise Fellen
Third Year | Jupiter's Satellite
Tora's Wand
With a core of Pheonix
she can perform spells of all kinds
At eleven inches long
a good medium of extravagance and refined
With a wood of Ebony
her imagination can't be chained
And a Slightly Springy bounce
her aspirations are not too strained
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12-01-2013, 01:03 AM
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| | Streeler
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^ I love your poem. That's the first wand poem that I've read. | |
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