Can't You See Me

Why is it that you cannot see
all the little thins that make up me
do you not notice that i care
what about that im always there

When your heart is full of pain
Im the one that makes you happy again
When tears fall from your eyes
I hold you close and let you cry

I wish that I could let you see
The love that i carry for you inside of me
Fears that you dont feel the same
Hold me back
Keeping me in pain

But oneday my fears will subside
And ill show you whats hidden inside
Just turn the key and get it started
Open the door thats all i have wanted

Broken Hearted

You gave me everything
Said I was the one
Eventhough I was scared
You kept me assured
All the pomises never to hurt me
The one's you threw in the dirt

I gave you my heart
With which you played
And gave it back broken
You so quickly too away

I would have given you everything
Body and soul
All I ever wanted
Was your heart to hold

But then you took another
And gave her you
The one thing that I yerned for

As tears stung my eyes
I will always wonder why
It was her who captured you

Although ill never know
Ill move on
Putting my heart back together
Keeping it safe from harm

So when im in your thoughts
Shall you know this
My heart will never be completed
A part will always be missing
The one which you kept
The one I never want back

As I will always have a place for you
In my heart

ur poems rock i really liked them

can i send u one of my poems ??

Sure.......you can send it or just post it here.......I dont mind either way BTW thanx for likin my poems.........the second one was about my ex...he wrote one for me in return..If you wanna hear it just let me know n ill get it for you

it'll be nice to read it very rare does one hear of a conversation of poems

anyways i finnaly got my own thread and thanks for letting me post here but i wont need to now
my threads name is the indian's poems

I didnt write this one My ex did in response to Broken Hearted...He wrote it as my perspective on things, hope you like it
This is the website you can find it at: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/14552551/

Sarah

i seem to find
the meakest mile
to walk along
to tread this while
and all alone
not new to me
i think of death and how i'd be

if they could seem to hold for once
to see the pile of loss i love
if in this weird world im dirt
these gifts i love, these gifts of hurt

i seem to find
the sharpest point
to come upon
to break the joint
and as i fall
the colour flies
i hit the ground and hear my cries

if they could seem to hold for once
to see the pile of loss i love
if in this weird world im dirt
these gifts i love, these gifts of hurt
if all he wanted was my pain
then why'd i ever play his game

i seem to find
an absense now
of when and where
and time somehow
it all turns grey
between my mind
and there in death my love i'll find

if they could seem to hold for once
to see the pile of loss i love
if in this weird world im dirt
these gifts i love, these gifts of hurt
if all he wanted was my pain
then why the ****'d i play his game

i seem to find that in my prayer
im drifting slowly through the air
the clouds are red and im so white
while way below -he waits, my knight....

Keeping Me

I do not wish to wake up
But to die in my sleep
So i do not have to deal
With all of my feelings

In this life I do not wish to be
I just wish to go peacfully
And one of the angels I will become
To look over the ones that I love

But in a time of need
I will not be there
And that is what keeps me
Awake and well

keeping me is very deep gosh i m surprised

Once More

How many tears should fall from my eyes
before you finally realise
the pain you have caused me
the nights that I cried

The love that I gave
you threw back in my face
the second chance
we will never have

Dont ever ask if i gave up too fast
I wanted more
I wanted it again
all the love and not the pain

So tell me how i get that back
Just one more chance
Just give me that

They are very profound and fab poems. I love them.

Midyear Fling

Why say you love me
When I know you'll break my heart
I know that things are over
I knew it from the start

I knew oneday this would end
All the happieness would die
But it still hurts, to hear those words
The ones your about to say

So if i cry do not worry
The pain will go away
And when we part, one final goodbye
Will I get a kiss
For I know its over now
This midyear fling

One Tear

When I die will you care
Will you notice im not there
Will a tear fall from your eye
Will you cry just for one day

Or will i stay within your hear
Your memories too or will I part
Will you forget
because of all the pain

Will you come visit my grave
Leave a rose and send your love
Visiting me from above

Or will you forget that I was there
Just another memory
Without a care

Just cry for me
One tear is all I ask
Just to know
That I was loved

Dead Soul

Every word becomes a wound
The ones that never heal
But continue to bleed
Untill a once caring soul
Becomes totally empty

One cannot live without a soul
so tell me what I stall do
as my soul died when you choose to leave
You took my heart too

So shall I die from a missing soul
Than live with one thats empty
For one needs a soul
To show compassion

wow, u r awesum at writing poems, good job!

Hey thanx for your comments..........
If anyone has any comments about not liking my poems I would like to hear them too...
Also sorry for not having anything new..........Ill write soon.......Promise

hi everybody i hav got a poem so here is it:
STARS IN THE SKY

Stars in the sky,
innocent, sweet, bright
clad in tranquality,
which traps me in a trance
and gazing at its beauty
I search myself
if i could find my destiny
The star that lies in the dark night
twinkilng like a heaven
high above the ground
and i begin my course
As inspired by this tiny source
which spreads happiness
through my dejected soul
and discover myself
Gaining upon a gleeful goal


Iknow its not v good but i hav just started writing poetry so..............

I was told we could post poetry on this.... I wasn't exactly shure... Seahbear, your poems hold a compassion that I could only dream of getting a glimpse at, But here is a try...

Here I am
once again
no where to go
I have no home
there are skeletons
with out an origin
hanging in the closet
waitin' for a deposit
of my blood
they want it to flood
out of my veins
tie me down like chains
this screem is my third
still goes unheard
eyes wont cry
since I'm expected to die
a week from now
into the Earth thay'll plow
me a grave
I'll be too gone to save.

This is in Dreis perspective, when he fails his mission in his sixth year, even thou Dumbledore is dead.

had to rate line...

seah! hey! me back and i must say u have maintained ur poetry skills well...

Why dya write sad poems all the time? I'd love to read a light hearted one coming outta yer pen once a while...

Keep em comin
Sushant