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LizzieEvans · 08-09-2008, 10:32 AM

Hi, hope you like my poem. I do hope I get it all right, I made one earlier and I forgot to write Sa+9 on that one, I suppose I should do it before I post it?

Well, here we go:

If a dream about you would come true

How come you've never visited me?
And why have I never seen you?
How many times have I wished it to be,
Wished it all to be true?

The girl is crying, how do you tell?
Somethings are not for real
Like there's no heaven, no hell,
But that doesn't change it, I feel.

I feel that it's real, and I know
If they could they'd be here
But as it is now they can't show
And have to stay over there.

They're trapped in a book with no light
Behind letters and pages and fun
But if I can read through it all tonight
I might let them out in the sun.

I know they'd be happy to see it all
Or at least I hope it'd be so
But what if they miss the great hall?
And want to go back to what they know.

All I can do is just wait and see
if someday I can meet up with you
If, I hope that you will like me
when someday my dreams will come true.

Thanks for reading <3 and please please comment! I would love to hear what you think of it. Please just a little "good", "ok" or "bad"... Or something longer if you want to.. but anyway, thanks for reading and posting.

LizzieEvans · 08-10-2008, 08:25 AM

Hi, if you didn't like my last poem (or if you just want some more), check out this one:

When no letter came

The summer I turned eleven i thought
this is the year it will be
this is the year it will happen to me
and this is the year I'll be free.

I waited all summer fom the letter to come
I waited day and night
I kept waiting for a light
for a star on the sky to shine bright

When July turned into August
there were still some summer to go
I thought, I've been waiting a month or so
maybe it is coming but I don't know.

Should I keep waiting when no letter comes?
I wasn't meant to go there, like you
maybe it's just a story, not true
I'll go back to reading Harry Potter 2.

And when first september came closer
I felt the days run by
I didn't want to start to cry
But there was no sign of an owl in the sky.

And the 2nd of September I gave up all hope
I gave the sky one last look
I felt so lonely and began to shook
all I can do now is to wait for the next HP book.

Thank you so much for reading my poems, I hope you enjoyed it and post a comment before leaving, I'd be grateful if you did. Have a nice day

harita · 04-15-2009, 02:34 PM

hey!nice one there...we all so... wish harry potter and hogwarts to be so true....

Bellatricks · 06-25-2009, 05:43 AM

Great effort!

Droo · 08-13-2009, 07:19 PM

Last Poem 8/10/08

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