Well i was right--the beatch is very inspiring! Although i didn't actually GO to the beach, considering we went A DAY AFTER THE FREAKIN SHARK ATTACK! And, unlike the times before, this attack was actually WHERE WE WERE STAYING! Argh. I was really wanting to use my new skim board too...ah well, we did a ton of shopping (really, it was only at Barnes and Nobels (my new fave store--OMG, i found a quill that was handmade in italy! It's BEAUTIFUL~) And Books-A-Million--I got alot of new books
) And I saw STAR WARS and WAR OF THE WORLDS!! Honestly, i liked WotW better--it was AWESOME! I was kinda freakin out though XD--it's scarier than Tom Cruise's behaviour lately.
*falallaaa cut out some stuff here*
I really liked this one
:
Don't Look Down Sitting high above the world Looking down at all the dots I can't connect them. I used to peel my world apart Examine each ridge Bump And turn And when I reached the juicy core I was ready to take a bite Because I knew it was just enough to chew But now as the waves Build and crash in my world I can't catch them long enough To see Now I'm pedaling blindly Going down a dusty road All alone I'm chasing after you I don't stop to ponder Just turn And feel As I hit a bump Somehow I'm not afraid.
***Update: Haha that poem was published in Teen Ink Journal! Er, probably over a year ago. But it rocked =D***
I uh, wrote this one awhile back but for some reason never edited it--kinda sweet, i think:
My Little Drummer Each heart beats To its own drum And once it gets lonely It cries for rhythm And someday it finds That perfect match That falls behind And jumps ahead Protecting its insecurity They fall into harmony And sometimes go solo But the rhythm is steady Complementary To the different beats You take this road I'll take that one We'll meet again someday Our roads will cross And i know i'll never Be lost Your song is in my heart.
This one is slightly lame:
Scattered Showers Rain falls on my paradise The grey clouds match the blurry Perpetual ocean And the storm in my heart Last night, Billowing waves Dark, Deep, Dangerous blue Tears Rising up from all sides But in the distance I can see Soft, comforting blue skies And white clouds of bliss Maybe the rain will let up. I really liked this one--Ha, you know you're bored when you start writing about trees XD: Forest
Hordes of trees
Huddled together
In no particular form
Or fashion
Each his own
Some lean on others
Many hide
The great stand out
Some are weak
Some built strong
Several fat
Many are tall
They tower the short ones
They're all rooted to the ground
But some reach for the stars
They all get rained on
--but there are sunny days too
I think those are about to fall--
But they're still rooted
You know,
This sounds familiar
^ Blah, i know the tie-in is lame
This one i saw--a car passing by. I don't think it'll be offending...i hope not, i mean, i wasn't really assuming anything--the poem just grew into what it is *slightly unsure* I rather liked it
Glimpse of Pain
Cars zoom by
Everywhere!
Left
And right--out of
Nowhere
A blue van
passes us
I glimpse
A girl
In the front seat
She's bald--
She's laughing
There's a crumpled dent
On the back
Well, that's it--a pretty large batch too. ^O^
) My hand was like shaking afterwards though, so weird. Lolol, yeah he's a "dude". His poems are awesome (as are yours)! You should read them sometime. Anyways, your newest ones are great 
