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01-05-2006, 05:44 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
Posts: 3,271
| Laieesha's HP heartbreak poems - Sa9+ ♥ Poet Extraordinaire ♥
I've decided to just open a new thread and copy my HP poems as opposed to editing the old thread. I hope my "loyal" readers will find me... lol
Remember, my poems are about Heartbreak, so they will have sad tones. But sometimes, I do write random non-heartbreak stuff. Anyway, to start of, here's one about my fave ship... (thanks to Potterpuffs for the idea!)
****************** Finally
The first time I saw you
Was at the train station
My heart was flooded
With all kinds of emotion.
I found you attractive
Indeed very good-looking.
Later, I would learn
You'd be my life's meaning.
First, you saved my life
On our first year together.
But did you do it for our school?
Or even, for my brother?
You treated me like a sister
But I saw you as my hero.
I've loved you secretly
It hurt that you didn't know.
I turned to others and tried
To fill this empty space.
I wanted to feel loved
But what I wanted was your embrace.
I sat and I watched you goggle
Over a girl who didn't deserve you.
I sat and I watched you get hurt
So now, will you see me too?
Over the course of some tragic events
My feelings for you got stronger.
I thought I'd keep on hiding it
But I couldn't fight it any longer.
I wanted to grab you and kiss you
And just say what I want to say
That after all these years with you
My childhood crush never really went away.
But you grabbed me, and you kissed me
And my heart overflowed with joy.
Finally you realized I was here all along
Now I know I'm madly in love with this boy.
My waiting and patience has paid off
I love you and I know you love me.
Now that you're here by my side
I'm happy as I'll ever be...
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I will add more as soon as this thread gets approved... but for now,
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01-09-2006, 01:00 PM
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| Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: @ ShruckleNoofer<3
Posts: 13,488
Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabelle Lee Costas First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ Quote:
I've decided to just open a new thread and copy my HP poems as opposed to editing the old thread. I hope my "loyal" readers will find me... lol
We always do....But the stalkees are always first**Runs to tell others**
OOh, and Lai I found a solution for the non Hp ones.... If you ever do get in one of your "moods" and write some post them in your User Notes Please and Thank you!
Can't wait for new ones! :worship:
Lots of Luff XD
~~RQT
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile. ツ .......... |
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01-10-2006, 07:28 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
Posts: 3,271
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Hey y'alls.. here's a Cho/Ced poem!! This just came to me...
***************** Always In My Heart
Fighting back the tears
Thinking about all the years
That you haven't been by my side
Countless were the nights I cried.
All this time I've been depressed
I couldn't eat or sleep or rest
I want to move on, I want a fresh start
But your smile is haunting my lonely heart.
I think of you every night and day
I still remember when you looked my way.
Between us was an instant attraction
To me, you made a great first impression.
Your eyes twinkling and your smile charming
I couldn't resist, you were so appealing.
I fell in love when you waved and said hi,
I looked at you and smiled, all shy.
When you asked me to the ball
I felt like the luckiest girl of them all.
In different houses we may be,
But that didn't stop you from noticing me.
Here I go again, staring at your photo
I never ever dreamed of seeing you go.
You being strong, and smart, and true
Is why I fell deeply in love with you.
I hope you're watching me from up above
Because I don't know how to let go of our love.
As I mourn the loss of this boy who was brave,
I drop this flower, and my tears, on this grave...
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01-10-2006, 07:33 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
Posts: 3,271
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ok... just moving my R/Hr poem from the old thread to here....
******************* So Close, And Yet So Far
Six years I've known you
Six years you've been there
But why is it so hard
To tell you how much I care?
First year together was bad
All we did was bicker and fight
But in the end, with Harry
I saw you in a different light.
Once, when I heard you get insulted
I was there to defend, and I endured
Disgusting effect of a spell that backfired
And you were there til I was cured.
I think of you as a great friend
My true feelings for you I deny.
That is why I was overly jealous when
You went to the ball with another guy.
I wished it was me with you there
So I sulked and didn't have fun.
That was when I finally realized
For me, you were the one.
It hurt to think of you with him
The thought of you kissing another.
My heart was crushed, and I was lonely
So I turned to Lavender.
But soon, I knew she wasn't enough
It was you who I really wanted.
I know it, and you know it,
Why did I take you for granted?
At night, I look up at the sky
And I wish upon a star.
That I get to be with the girl I love
Who's close, but yet so far... |
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01-10-2006, 07:35 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
Posts: 3,271
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here's my Lupin/Tonks poem....
******************** I Don't Care
We used to always be together,
We used to hang out and be silly.
I used to see you as a dear friend,
And you too felt the same for me.
I thought we'd always be this way,
But something inside me has changed.
I felt something stir deep inside
This new feeling I had was strange.
I tried to dismiss whatever it was
Thinking if I did, it would go away.
The more I fought this new feeling
The more it decided to stay.
I sort of didn't want to think
That for you, I was falling.
But I couldn't keep it to myself
To you I revealed this feeling.
But you said it wouldn't work out
You said it just cannot be.
So you pretended I said nothing
You stayed away from me.
I was hurt and it showed
My patronus took a new form.
Others also took notice
They knew it wasn't the norm.
Until one day I broke down
I screamed that I loved you.
I said I didn't care what you were
A promise of a love that's true.
You said I'm not safe with you
You're only thinking for my own sake
Tears filled my eyes and I told you
That it's a risk I'm willing to take. |
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01-10-2006, 07:38 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
Posts: 3,271
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here's a Victor/Hermione one...
****************** You Don't Belong To Me
I'm the youngest to play Pro Quidditch
But my heart was stolen by a young witch.
She is great, she is smart, and very sweet
I waited for the day we'd officially meet.
See, I was invited for an event at her school
I accepted thinking, this event I'd rule
I walked in there, all sure and proud
Then I noticed her in the crowd.
Although I was surrounded by many girls
I noticed her, with her books and her curls.
I was always hanging around the library
I know she'll bump into me eventually.
But I just couldn't wait any longer
So I decided to just go up to her.
I let out my feelings once and for all
I asked her to go with me to the ball.
She looked at me, somewhat hesitating
She wasn't sure because she was waiting.
She was waiting for another to ask her out
But it seemed she was still having doubts.
So finally she agreed to go with me
At the Yule Ball, she walked in gracefully.
She was the most beautiful girl there
I couldn't have picked anyone better.
Yet I noticed she was still distracted
By someone whose hair glowed fiery red.
In her eyes, I saw her longing
For that someone she can't help loving.
The term ended, how I wished I could stay
I asked her to write me everyday.
She promised to keep in touch, an owl she would send
And she said she liked me, but only as a friend.
I wish things will turn out just fine.
I wish she will love me, and be mine.
But even if I use many potions and spells
I know she's in love with somebody else. |
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01-10-2006, 07:40 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
Posts: 3,271
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here's one about one of the first ships on the book.. my very own James/Lily poem...
***************** Pretty Brown Eyes
There he goes again, with his pretty brown eyes
Looking at me lovingly, thinking up his lies.
I try to ignore him, and I go a different way
He's annoying, but somehow his smile makes my day.
He's been trying to get me to notice him
He's so obnoxious, his chances are slim.
He always hangs around his creepy little friends
Most of his time, with those three, he spends.
He thinks he's so cool, playing with the snitch
Always getting in trouble with poor old Mr. Filch.
He's just not someone I'd be proud to call 'mine'
But between love and hate, there is a fine line.
I saw him less as an annoyance, more of a good guy
I saw it when I looked into those pretty brown eyes.
Down by the lake, we spent most of our time
I fell in love with him, he's perfect and so fine.
The days and years pass, and our love grew stronger
Until one day, he asked to be together forever.
I married this fine man, and he's been good to me
We were in love and happy as we'll ever be.
We were blessed with a son, we called him Harry
He was a beautiful baby, strong like daddy.
Little did we know, our happiness will be cut short
By someone who thought killing was a sport.
As the night sky was filled with ominous green light
I was too late and saw James, my love, in a fight.
For that split second, he looked my way
"I love you, and Harry too", he seemed to say.
I looked at my love, I was scared for him
He wanted to reassure me, as things go dim.
He wanted to say everything will be alright
But it was too late, he'd lost the fight.
How could I protect the men of my life?
I was Harry's mother, but also James' wife.
There he goes again, with his pretty brown eyes
He closed them as I cried for the very last time... |
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01-10-2006, 07:42 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
Posts: 3,271
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this one is for my loyal stalker and her dedication to her Siry... my Siry/Tina poem...
********************* A Sad Farewell
You used to be mean and cruel,
You felt superior to everyone else.
You were always bored in school
So to others, you performed spells.
You were careless and arrogant
You led people to believe
That everything will be better
The moment that you leave.
In the beginning, I didn't like you
But that was a long time ago.
You have turned into a fine man
Far from the boy I used to know.
You changed for the better,
You were dependable and loving.
You were loyal and honest,
My heart you were slowly stealing.
You didn't know I cared for you
I loved you from a distance.
You were oblivious to those around
I didn't even get my chance.
I should've told you I loved you
Now I'm afraid I'm too late.
I should've held you in my arms
Before you met your sad fate.
I hope you can hear me now
I'll tell you this before I cry.
I love you, Mr. Sirius Black
Let this be my final goodbye... |
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01-10-2006, 07:46 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
Posts: 3,271
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ok, I promise this is the last one for tonight... This one is not a ship, but it's about my obsession *cougholiverphelpscough*... It's an acrostic, so if you read the first letter of every line (except for the last line... sorry)
************ I really don’t know just how I can Love someone, from afar, like this man. One day, I’m wishing that you would be Veering your attention towards me. Every night I dream of you On my side, with you loving me too. Loneliness deep inside my heart Is eminent knowing we’re so far apart. Various feelings I need to sort out Everytime I think, I just want to shout! Read my thoughts, feel my heart Please tell me where to start. How can I let my feelings go? Each thought of you haunts me so. Love me, please, love me dear Please know that I am always here. Someday, I wish you could see
Just how much you mean to me… |
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01-10-2006, 11:28 AM
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| Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: @ ShruckleNoofer<3
Posts: 13,488
Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabelle Lee Costas First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ Quote:
this one is for my loyal stalker and her dedication to her Siry... my Siry/Tina poem...
Yes...He's all mine!!!!!!!!!! Thanks Lai! I'm going to frame it one day... **Cherishes it forever** Quote:
I really don’t know just how I can
Love someone, from afar, like this man.
One day, I’m wishing that you would be
Veering your attention towards me.
Every night I dream of you
On my side, with you loving me too.
Loneliness deep inside my heart
Is eminent knowing we’re so far apart.
Various feelings I need to sort out
Everytime I think, I just want to shout!
Read my thoughts, feel my heart
Please tell me where to start.
How can I let my feelings go?
Each thought of you haunts me so.
Love me, please, love me dear
Please know that I am always here.
Someday, I wish you could see
Just how much you mean to me…
Haha, I still can't believe you wrote that for Oliver Phelps...It sounds so real....Than again it's just like my love for Siry. It's awesome Lai! **Worships**
I'm glad you didn't give up on posting some of your poems on SS Lai. It would've been too much to bear...I've already gotten four pms from others saying that they're leaving SS because of the deletion of their poem thread....
**Sniffs** It's so not fair.... ANyhoo, At least I still have you! **Stays clinged Forever**
~~RQT XD
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile. ツ .......... |
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01-11-2006, 06:21 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
Posts: 3,271
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did u see my new one Tina?? the one about Cho/Ced?? (see post #3)... that's my latest one right now... I don't know which ship I'll do next, but I have an idea... |
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01-11-2006, 07:12 AM
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| Augurey
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Riga, Latvia.
Posts: 11,518
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__________________ Hibernating. |
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01-11-2006, 07:27 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
Posts: 3,271
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oh wow... a new reader???? thanks for stopping by patronus_ravenclaw!
i try to update as quickly as i can, but can never find the time to do it... but maybe another one next week?? i have a character in mind to be the "speaker" of my next poem...
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01-11-2006, 08:57 AM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Fangtasia.
Posts: 17,750
Hogwarts RPG Name: Teagan Skye Corliss Fifth Year | Chris Cookie Siriusly In Love *gasp* I love your poems! Just read them all now, being myself an avid poetry writer, and I have to say your writing skill is awesome =]
My faves are the Cho/Cedric, Ron/Hermione and James/Lily, though I bet that if I skim through the others one more time, I'll like them as much.
Keep posting, I'll be here to pass well-deserved galantry
Chris |
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01-15-2006, 02:01 PM
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| Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: @ ShruckleNoofer<3
Posts: 13,488
Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabelle Lee Costas First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ Quote:
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did u see my new one Tina?? the one about Cho/Ced?? (see post #3)... that's my latest one right now... I don't know which ship I'll do next, but I have an idea...
**Cough** I actually didn't.... Bad Stalker....**Hits wrist** I thought tehy were all the old ones, **Runs to re-read them all again**
A new poem? New speaker? **Wonders** You know this kind of stuff kills me, Then again I love suspense, but who? Maybe Filch? WHo knows?
Keep them coming and remembering your poems will always leave us to want more! :worship:
Lots of Luff,
~~RQT XD
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile. ツ .......... |
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01-15-2006, 03:54 PM
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| Ashwinder
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Toronto, ON, Canada
Posts: 13,563
| Tale as Old as Time
OMG!! i dunno which poem to comment first:confused.mode: lol!! all of them are soo touching, soo beautiful*thumps chest*! i love 'Finally' but not the ship[peace to all h/g shippers]...i still love 'So Close, And Yet So Far'[r/hr!!! ]lol...
the others are lovely too!! "ILoveOliverPhelps", *thumps chest*
Keep it up Ate Lai!!! you rOCK! \m/
__________________ (My) love... (My) angel... (My) always...
[Words] of sentiments
Wishing to be said;
[But] your name alone
Can send this heart to overdrive;
Yet your presence, my [forever],
Can make a heart specialist lose his career.
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01-15-2006, 06:59 PM
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| Shrake
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 12,692
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hi! New reader here, just read them all, and truthfully im awed, your so good! Really really good, compare to mine, you're far better. I love your poems about ron and hermione and v/hr. No, actually i love them all... I didn't know you write poems, until now. Post more soon. I'd surely like to read them.
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01-21-2006, 07:45 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: The World That Never Was
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Hi Laieesha.. I'm a new reader and i think they are great poems indeed!!! I love all of them!!! Keep up the excellent work!!!
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01-22-2006, 01:41 PM
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| Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: @ ShruckleNoofer<3
Posts: 13,488
Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabelle Lee Costas First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ
**Juggles to Keep all the new readers entertained before they leave** ((**Cough** No one knows I can't even juggle **Cough**))
Anyhoo, We're all waiting Lai, I'm really anxious to see who your speaker in the next poem will be...It's killing me....
**Stalks and worships**
~~RQT XD
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile. ツ .......... |
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01-25-2006, 07:16 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
Posts: 3,271
| ♥ Poet Extraordinaire ♥ an update an update!! Sorry took so long... Like I told Tina, I sort of got sidetracked...
Also, I was going to do something else. But it seemed kinda shallow. So I decided to do one about someone else instead...
Here's another R/Hr one, only this time, it's Hermione's turn to speak... (I wasn't very satisfied with this one though...) Oh, and Tina, I know I said it would probably be short, but you know me.. I couldn't resist!
*********************** Somehow...
You've been my friend, I've been yours
Being with you was all that mattered.
But somehow, as if by strange force,
All my dreams for us were shattered.
I feel like somehow I'm to blame
Within arms length, I kept you near.
My heart is screaming out your name
But somehow, you did not, could not, hear.
You have always been there for me
To me you are more than just a friend.
If you felt the same, somehow I didn't see
Confusing signals you would always send.
In our fourth year, I waited and waited
For you to ask me to the Yule Ball.
Until someone else asked and I debated
If not with you, should I go at all?
I tried to keep my mind off of you.
I went with Viktor and with him I stayed.
Somehow I caught you glancing my way too.
You were there, looking hurt and betrayed.
In our sixth year, sometime in December
I found out something I didn't want to know,
You liked her, you kissed her, and I remember
Mixed emotions as I cast, "Oppugno!"
This is not how I wanted it to be
I thought I was supposed to be smart?
I couldn't believe you'd do that to me!
I never thought you'd break my poor heart.
I feel the warmth of tears from my eyes.
How long will you make me wait?
How long until you finally realize?
Tell me you love me, before it's too late...
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Not my best... whacha guys think??
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01-25-2006, 07:35 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
Posts: 3,271
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by the way (sorry for double posting), I just wanted to say thanks thanks and more thanks to all my new readers!!! Glad you all like my work.. Quote:
Originally Posted by patronus_ravenclaw Thanks for stopping by! I love new readers! And comments are always appreciated! Quote:
Originally Posted by Blackened *gasp* I love your poems! Just read them all now, being myself an avid poetry writer, and I have to say your writing skill is awesome =]
My faves are the Cho/Cedric, Ron/Hermione and James/Lily, though I bet that if I skim through the others one more time, I'll like them as much.
Keep posting, I'll be here to pass well-deserved galantry
Chris Thanks Chris! Comments are very well appreciated, especially from fellow poets! Quote:
Originally Posted by eliza andrea OMG!! i dunno which poem to comment first:confused.mode: lol!! all of them are soo touching, soo beautiful*thumps chest*! i love 'Finally' but not the ship[peace to all h/g shippers]...i still love 'So Close, And Yet So Far'[r/hr!!! ]lol...
the others are lovely too!! "ILoveOliverPhelps", *thumps chest*
Keep it up Ate Lai!!! you rOCK! \m/ aawww... my lil SS sis! *glomps you* even though you don't ship H/G, I forgive you thank you for always reading my poems... Quote:
Originally Posted by lala_favehp hi! New reader here, just read them all, and truthfully im awed, your so good! Really really good, compare to mine, you're far better. I love your poems about ron and hermione and v/hr. No, actually i love them all... I didn't know you write poems, until now. Post more soon. I'd surely like to read them. my other PCC buddy! hi lala! thanks for reading too! I'm nahihiya! Quote:
Originally Posted by Oathkeeper_Roxas Hi Laieesha.. I'm a new reader and i think they are great poems indeed!!! I love all of them!!! Keep up the excellent work!!! another new reader?? wow, i'm touched! my reader count is going up! yay!
and last but not least...
my luverlee stalker, (who's still clinging to me, by the way), my most loyal reader! Thanks for always checking here, and nudging me to write a new one. Quote:
Originally Posted by My Luverlee RQT **Juggles to Keep all the new readers entertained before they leave** ((**Cough** No one knows I can't even juggle **Cough**)) *is watching tina trying to entertain my guests* uum.. [whispers] you're scaring the readers.. [/whisper] yay let's give it up for the amazing Tina!! *tackleglomps* you're the best! |
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01-25-2006, 11:28 AM
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| Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: @ ShruckleNoofer<3
Posts: 13,488
Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabelle Lee Costas First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ Quote:
Here's another R/Hr one, only this time, it's Hermione's turn to speak... (I wasn't very satisfied with this one though...) Oh, and Tina, I know I said it would probably be short, but you know me.. I couldn't resist!
Haha, you're crazy! I'm a huge R/Hr shipper, so the more the merrier
Even if you haven't wrote the other poem Lai, I still want to know who the speaker was....I've been literally dying with curiosity! Quote:
In our sixth year, sometime in December
I found out something I didn't want to know,
You liked her, you kissed her, and I remember
Mixed emotions as I cast, "Oppugno!"
Awesome poem, but I don't know whether to laugh at some of the lines or get sad...I wonder what your comedic poems would sound like **HAS AN IDEA**
How about a poem for Fred/George...? I'm sure they "fell" in the pit before and jokes are their way out? A thought, you can do whatever...
Anyhoo, I loved it like usual Keep them coming,
Lots of Luff,
~~RQT XD Quote:
*is watching tina trying to entertain my guests* uum.. [whispers] you're scaring the readers.. [/whisper] yay let's give it up for the amazing Tina!! *tackleglomps* you're the best!
**Watches all the tomatoes thrown at her** FLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
**Flees before it's too late** I shall be back
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile. ツ .......... |
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01-25-2006, 03:52 PM
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| Shrake
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 12,692
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my other PCC buddy! hi lala! thanks for reading too! I'm nahihiya!
Nahihiya?! Don’t be, they’re amazing! I wish I could compose like that, very interesting. Loved your recent poem (r/hr) so much! It’s not obvious but I really like different ships. Can’t wait for the next… who’s going to be in it?! I wish Harry (as the speaker) and Luna is next on your list. Love your poems! PAMS PAMS PAMS |
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01-26-2006, 02:54 AM
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| Diricawl
Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Hermit town
Posts: 26,826
Hogwarts RPG Name: Gendry Elwes Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Edward Lennox Department of Mysteries | NARGLES! |Tree Hugger | Wears a Penguin Suit & Tie | Snape on a Stick
Lai...not been here recently, but I was nudged by a certain persistent and awesome friend. I loved it, though I think Hermione is more bitter than that and I think she would have been harsher on Ron, but you never can tell with love. neways....luv ya.
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01-26-2006, 06:54 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
Posts: 3,271
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wow... all these responses... *feels special*
first and foremost, thank you all for passing by and reading my latest shipper poem... Quote:
Awesome poem, but I don't know whether to laugh at some of the lines or get sad...
yeah, that was meant to be funny, sort of... I think it was hilarious when Hermione did that! i mean, she could've done something worse, like use engorgio on his tongue, or give him boils or something... but the birds?? i guess she was so heartbroken and distraught that it was the best she could do.. Quote:
Even if you haven't wrote the other poem Lai, I still want to know who the speaker was....I've been literally dying with curiosity!
eh, it was pretty boring. FINE, I was going to do a Lavender/Ron, with Lavender as the speaker. I mean, we might not know it, but she could've been devastated when stupid Ron just decided to avoid her and just not talk to her, just like that! I mean, I know I would've been heartbroken. They're like how old in HBP, 16 already?? Man, when I was 16, I was crying over guys who... never mind... this is about Lavender...
By the way Tina, check you-know-where for my OTHER new poem. The one I said I got sidetracked with. You know where it is, since you were the one who suggested I put it there... Quote:
How about a poem for Fred/George...?
Comedy huh?? I dunno... I don't think I've ever done comedy before... I could definitely try though!! Quote:
I wish Harry (as the speaker) and Luna is next on your list. Love your poems!
I'll see what I can do... I'm really not feeling that, but I guess I can sort of work with it... Quote:
Lai...not been here recently, but I was nudged by a certain persistent and awesome friend.
Yeah, isn't she great?? lol Thanks for finding me again, my awesome Penguin Master! *glomps you and Tina* Quote:
though I think Hermione is more bitter than that and I think she would have been harsher on Ron
You know what, that's EXACTLY what I was thinking!! That's why I said I wasn't too happy with it. I felt like I didn't capture her true feelings. Or at least, how she would react. It didn't feel complete, like it was missing something... I'll do better next time, I promise!! *crosses fingers in back while promising* :evillaugh
Again, love on all of you!!!
*glomps everyone before leaving*
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