Thank ya's...! I'll post some more when I get the chance...!

love them. Keep up the great work.

Hey everyone! Thanks a bunch! Heres another... a little short... but it works, right? Enjoy!

1-2 Words

Wishing you were here
I'm so far away
I need a better place
I just need to lay

Down

I'm wishing for a clearing
I'm hoping for today
I need a brand new feeling
I need to run away

Again

I want you to be with me
Wherever I may go
I don't want to hear you say
That we need to go slow

This time

I'm standing by the ocean
In a brand new light
I need to let you hear me
And make you see my sight

Once more

I want to let you know
That I love you dear
And I hope that youll come with me
And get me outta here

Tonight

Hey ya'allz...! lolz... ok here's another.... hope ya like it....::::::



::: Dear Child :::


Hold me too the sky
Dear child
Lift me to your mind
Inside the place where
Thoughts will dwell
Far and deep
Inside

Lift me too the sun
Dear child
Lift me to your heart
Beside the place where
Feelings do hide
Never-ending
from the start

Lift me to the stars
Dear child
Lift me to your soul
Underneath the place where
Light is held
Shining
After old

Lift me to the heavens
Dear child
Lift me to your eyes
Above the place where
Darkness lives
Cold and damp
With cries

Nice updates. I'm sorry I haven't read in awhile. Keep the poetry coming though.
- Angel

awesome!!u write some awesome poetry there, keep up ur good work, i love it

o wow... two replys...! lolz... YEA! lolz thanks guys! ill post more as soon as I can!

thanks... all right you guys... i know its been a while but i got a new one.. lolz so here it goes...:::


Can't It Not Fall

This is the last time
Of the first time I loved
And when the rain falls
I'm pushed but not shoved
Into the wall
Against the brick of soul
Walls put up
Stone black as coal
And nothing it seems
Could evade these dreams
That hadn't been real
As much as diamonds gleam
And nothing is sacred
Nothing is pure
In this d***ed world
Nothing is sure
And when you last call
To never at all
And nothing is spoken
But can't it not fall

All right... new song... and that thingy below ther with the artist and stuff... don't mind that.. I have BIG BIG BIG dreams... lmao

Artist- LOL
Song - Cry Out Loud
Album - Just As Well



So much silence
It’s breaking my ears
I can’t hear a thing
Except that small annoying ring
And no one notices
And no one feels this way
That everything is upside down
And I don’t know why
And then I cry…

Cry out loud
Cry out loud
Its just a crash and burn
A sharp left turn
A guy with a gun
And no concern
For who I am
For who I am
And no one feels this way
Or is gonna make the change
And no ones’ heart
Doth beat the same
For who I am
For who I am
Today

The pain in my fingertips
Is getting worse
I think its time to stop myself
And bite at something else
And that’s all anyone notices
And everyone seems to feel this way
That everything hurts deep down
And I don’t know why
I start to cry…

Cry out loud
Cry out loud
Its just a crash and burn
A sharp left turn
A guy with a gun
And no concern
For who I am
For who I am
And no one feels this way
Or is gonna make the change
And no ones’ heart
Doth beat the same
For who I am
For who I am

Oh its not the way
I am today
You shot me out
And didn’t stay
And I cry out loud
And don’t how
But it doesn’t
Need to be this way

Cry out loud
Cry out loud
Cry out loud
Cry out…

Its just a crash and burn
A sharp left turn
And guy with a gun
And no concern
For who I am
For who I am
And someone feels this way
Why don’t they make a change
Because their heart
Must beat the same
As mine…
For who I am
For who I am
Today

And then I cry…