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03-29-2005, 03:49 PM
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|  Agony AuntSpazztically AwesomePuffskein
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Accidents & Catastrophes |  Hayley's Poetry
Here are a few of my poems i have wrote,
alot of them are about my X William, who i still care for, so they are personal, but i feel poetry is a personal thing, so you might as well know what im talking about.
Hope you enjoy.
Empty.
Out my window I do stare,
I wonder whom I love out there.
Feeling alone, I watch the rain,
Will this fragile heart love again?
I lay in my bed facing the door,
My heart beats fast, can’t take no more.
I hug myself to show I care,
But empty my arms are, so unaware.
I take a walk to clear my head,
At times I wish I were still in bed.
I'll love him forever, why can’t he see.
That him and I are meant to be?
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I …
I love him
Does he love me?
I love his eyes,
So brown, so clear
I love his hands
So gentle, sincere
I love his touch.
Will he touch me again?
I see him
Does he see me?
I see a future
Just him and I
I see a family
There till I die.
I see us together
Will he see me again?
I feel him
Does he feel me?
I feel so alone
I need a hand
I feel so scared
No one understands
I feel so much
Will he feel again?
Hope you like them, i would appreciate your comments on how to improve.
Ill post more soon.
Peace out Babes
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03-31-2005, 01:24 AM
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| | Fire Slug
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deep.
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04-03-2005, 04:30 PM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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here's another form you lovely people
Happy.
Holding my hand,
safe in your arms,
totally in love,
in love with your charms.
Dreaming of you,
making me smile,
staring at you,
hope i'm here for a while.
Feeling so close,
soul mate's are we,
finishing setences,
Everyone thinks it's meant to be.
Writing in the stars,
I love you,
Staring back at me,
I know you love me too.
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04-03-2005, 10:56 PM
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| | Fire Slug
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Wow, that last one there is good. I really like that one. I write alot of love poems as well, but yours feel like you've actually been in love. I haven't I just pretend to be.
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04-04-2005, 02:23 PM
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| | Granian
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wow amazing stuff, my favourite is deffers your poem "Happy", update soon 
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04-04-2005, 04:23 PM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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Im back guys, thanks for your comments, their so lovely *blushes* 
Yes ive been in love, and been left, poetry helps to get over it.  Do you still... Do you still want me the way i want you. I want you to want me the way i want you, I dream of us together again, the very first kiss reliving the moments of total bliss. Do you still think of me when you hear my name, i still think i might have been a game. Did i win, did i lose, i knew i love you But you lost this game, does it make you blue? Do you still love me like Juliet and Romeo, i love you and do you too, i hope so. I want you back here, whisper in my ear those three words i long to hear... | |
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04-05-2005, 10:43 AM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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Here another one, not a rhyming one, but i think i has good ryhthm
At one.
In the spring I love the feel of the morning dew on my fingers,
In the summer I crave the sun on my pale skin,
In the autumn I long for the brown crispy leaves to fall,
In the winter I wait for the snow to dance before me.
In the morning, I love a cold pillow against my warm cheeks,
In the afternoon I need the time to relax to daydream away,
In the evening I long for the cuddles of a loved one,
In the bed I pray for dreams to carry me away.
In my hands, I love the touch of a soul mates hand lingering with me,
In my eyes, I long for a gaze to make me feel like a princess,
In my mind, I want him to know all my inner thoughts and desires
In my heart, I need him to remain till my dying days.
Last edited by Ms Wood; 10-21-2005 at 07:45 PM.
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04-05-2005, 10:47 AM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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bit of a less deep one, must have been taking happy pills or something, really simple, hope you like it?
MINE ALL MINE
Happy
Smiling
Laughing
Crying
Mine all mine
Love
Fears
Excitement
Tears
Mine all mine
Touch
Deep
Gaze
Keep
Mine all mine
Last edited by Ms Wood; 04-05-2005 at 10:51 AM.
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04-05-2005, 12:11 PM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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He.
Walk through the door, shouts my name,
In to the kitchen, home again,
Into your arms, hold my tight,
Hold my forever including tonight,
Walk up the stairs, runs me a bath,
Glass of wine ready, making me laugh,
Candles in rows, dancing fairies,
Feeding me chocolate and strawberries.
In too the bedroom, makes the bed,
Leans closely forward, kissing my head,
Run his fingers through my hair,
Falling in love, so unaware,
Dream of him, seeing his face,
Feeling the arms of loving embrace,
Waking up next to him find myself smiling,
Love like this feels like im flying.
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04-05-2005, 02:44 PM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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Heavy is my obsession,
A bane on my life
Re-living the adventures
Run through the night
You defiantly took flight through the sky.
Pleased to hear im not alone
Others are crazed
The people log on.
The world they live in
Envious I am
Requesting to live, not like I am
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04-05-2005, 02:57 PM
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| | Niffler
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Wow I love your poems! *claps*
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04-05-2005, 03:09 PM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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Accidents & Catastrophes | Together
Why thank you darling, too kind.
But for saying that, here's another lovey-dovey on.
Together.
First you were one of my close friends,
Now as I’m older on you my life depends.
We played together when were we small,
Now kissing each other just seems natural.
Together our parents said we would be,
At ten we laughed, thought "him and me?!’’.
But I guess they saw something we didn’t,
Leave you now is something I couldn’t.
Thank you for making us being together,
Sharing our lives hopefully forever.
You’re still my best friend I see each day,
Together I know we should stay.
I want to be like the old couples we see,
He holds the dog, ice cream with me,
I can see me loving my friend for life,
Hopefully someday soon, I’ll be your wife.
But now I’m happy just being here,
For you say ‘sweet nothings’ in my ear,
I love the way we are together,
And I trust you’ll hold my hand, whatever the weather.
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04-06-2005, 12:00 PM
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| | Granian
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ohh i havent read your poetry, looks liek i am now i love them all i prefer "together" to the other ones, but all are good post more soon.
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04-06-2005, 12:03 PM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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Originally Posted by CrazyMoonyFan ohh i havent read your poetry, looks liek i am now i love them all i prefer "together" to the other ones, but all are good post more soon. why thank you too kind, lovin your stuff as well
Ill post soon.xxx
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04-06-2005, 10:24 PM
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| | Jarvey
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I love your poems! My favorite's 'Empty.' (!)
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04-07-2005, 07:50 AM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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^^^ that has to be one of my favs as well.
Ill update soon
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04-07-2005, 12:20 PM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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Realisation.
Now you left me, im all alone,
I lay in my bed, hand on my phone,
Will you call me? I need a friend
I sincerlly thought we wouldn’t end
Now you left me, im so scared,
Live in this world, unprepared.
I need some assistance in the place
How can I do this? feel out of place
Now you left me, cant speak no more
The realistion makes me fall to the floor.
I just need some assurance you remember me,
Coping without you, how will I be?
Now you left me, I’ll have to grow up,
In my cupboard lays an extra cup,
How can I erase you from my mind?
Some peace of calm I’ll have to find. | |
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04-08-2005, 04:46 AM
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I like your poems 
Thankfully, poems don't have to rhyme! lol 
I personally love using metaphors or describing how things feel or taste
Anyhow, good job!! Keep it up! | |
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04-13-2005, 07:25 PM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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Look at me again
You were all that i needed
all that i loved
Please dont go all i pleeded.
All alone waiting for you
Loving you always
Thats what im born to do.
i please stay
begging you as i kneel.
Im not ready for you to go
Feeling afraid
All thats leaves my mouth is no.
Pulling out my hair bit by bit
The tears fall down
All i need now is to sit.
Laying in this empty bed
Too much space
Memories running through my head.
You say this isnt going anywhere
what a lie
If i could only show my care.
Last edited by Ms Wood; 04-13-2005 at 07:27 PM.
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06-04-2005, 08:43 PM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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i try so hard to win your heart,
the love i can give sets me apart,
i feel i stare at a tunnel of space
i just want to wake up to your face.
trying to win you is all i can do,
why cant you see, its all about you?
i would always treat you like a king,
your the one that makes my heart sing.
I've always wanted to be 'the one'
the one that you lean upon,
i want to have you every day
i wonder will it every be this way?
Last edited by Ms Wood; 12-20-2005 at 02:03 PM.
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09-21-2005, 09:52 AM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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hi guys havent posted in a while and im sorry, bit of mayhem at my house. internet is DOWN!!!!!!
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10-21-2005, 07:40 PM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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hay hay, all connected again!!!!
Kiss Chase
I fell for your charms years ago
on the day of winter snow,
you held my hand, touched my face
one of my first warm embrace.
First we laughed as mates do
gradually fallen just for you,
my best friend then my lover
couldnt imagine any other.
Then you left after a while
a morbid frown replaced a smile,
left me here in the rain
to discover what was pain.
But you made me never forget
Love is something not to regret,
welcome Love into your Heart
it hits your Soul like a dart.
You made me feel like a wanted to die
then you made me non stop cry,
but now i realise it all the same
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11-22-2005, 10:28 AM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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having writter blocks, and it sucks!!!
anyone got any ideas?
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12-20-2005, 01:52 PM
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| Agony AuntSpazztically Awesome Puffskein
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Eternal burning.
Summers day rays on my pale skin
I sit here to burn like my heart does
The flowers go limp and crisp at the ends
By something that is adored by most is so fierce
My thirst needs to be quenched, I sit her parched
Needing my water to keep me refreshed
But its not just me so there is a shortage
There isn’t enough to share it around
Fires start due to the sheer presence
Destroying all that stands it is way, determined
The sun rules the way, takes everything to survive
It has no human regard for what is takes
But this is just its nature, I cant be helped
It will always be this way until it dies
So the trees will perish, the water evaporates
My love for the sun is misguided, it hates me
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Misguided lover.
We’ve been like this for a while
Its so bad I cant bear to smile
Why you treating me like this
The boy I did love I now miss
I just want to kiss you, need you
I need to have you, believe you
But all I do is fell pain and cry
Neglect and I am feeling so dry
Lying is all you do to us now
I can tell you deceiving by your brow
Its cheats you as you try to cover up
Our love is broken like a falling cup
I wished you’d always long for me
But a left over emotion is what be
I sit and wait patiently for you to arrive
But it just seems to be another goodbye
All I’ve ever wanted is you, your love
At first it seemed your from above
But in our embrace its her I smell
Its then I realise, your no angel…Your from ****
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12-31-2005, 06:45 AM
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| | Antipodean Opaleye
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Ohh so many to choose from and I can't. I love them all. Keep posting!
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