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05-04-2005, 10:52 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
Posts: 855
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year | Gothic Poems i will put posts up of gothic poems
Nightmare
-nightmares are considered as bad dreams
-its like swimming up stream
-sometimes you just want to cry
-or just say goodbye
-some people like nightmares
-or just a little bears
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05-06-2005, 01:08 AM
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| Lobalug
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: *****Dealing with Two Dollar Bill at his old hang outs*****
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Well its certainly interesting , and p.s i love your little tag things!!
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05-06-2005, 10:59 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
thanks alot this is my frist writing a peom personal i really worked on this not really
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05-13-2005, 11:29 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
Posts: 855
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year | im sorry that i havent posted lately so i will make it up and will post a poem ok
Blood
Blood is the color red
But id you have read
Blood is truly blue
Some may had no clue
Inside of you
You are truly blue
But when it reachs the air
It can give you really scary
Because it turns your blue blood red........ |
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05-13-2005, 11:48 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
Posts: 855
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
my favorite poet is Edgar Allan Poe here is one his famous poem Annabel Lee
Annabel Lee
-Edgar Allan Poe
It was many and many a year ago,
In a kingdom by the sea,
That a maiden there lived whom you may know
By the name of Annabel Lee;
And this maiden she lived with no other thought
Than to love and be loved by me
I was a child and she was a child,
In this kingdom by the sea
But we loved without a love that was more than love-
I and my Annabel Lee-
With a love that winged seraphs of heaven
Coveted her and me
And this was the reason that, long ago,
In this kingdom by the sea,
A wind blew out of a cloud chilling
My beautiful Annabel Lee;
So that her high born kinsmen came
And bare her away from me,
To shut her up in a sepulcher
In this kingdom by the sea.
to be contiued if u want me to finish his poem so u can read reply back ok and i will post the rest
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05-14-2005, 09:20 AM
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| Emo Girl Lissy's Troll Ramora
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Missing my SS addiction.
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| I love Edar Allan Poe!!
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05-14-2005, 04:49 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
Contiued of Annabel Lee
The angels, not half so happy in heaven,
Went envying her and me-
Yes!-that was the reason(as all men know,
In this kingdom by the sea)
That the wind came out of the cloud by night,
Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee.
to be contiued cause i have go talk to my cousin tell me if u want me to post more
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05-14-2005, 04:54 PM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Mar 2005
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I dont understand this stuf but it seems really interesting
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05-14-2005, 05:12 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
lol u will some day
Last edited by lilly pad; 05-14-2005 at 11:29 PM.
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05-15-2005, 03:19 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
Posts: 855
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
here is a new one i just made
Family
You may love them
You may care for them
Or even hate them
Sometimes they can be a real pain
But they may just be playing a game
Sometimes they fight
You may ratherfly a kite
They may yell at you
Or they may just want to kiss you
Just know all familys have a different way they show thier love
When they tell you they love you
You want to kiss them to.....
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05-15-2005, 03:20 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
Posts: 855
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
lol i hope u like it |
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05-15-2005, 03:24 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
Posts: 855
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
Its me again here is another one i made
Black
Black is pitch black
It can give your mind a crack
Black is dark
It can even give you are scar
Black meybe light
But not as bright as night
Black has many phases
And changes
But no matter what black is black....
Or maybe not....
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05-15-2005, 05:52 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
lol i hope u like them
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05-16-2005, 09:22 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
Posts: 855
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
Senses
Sight is a sense
Voice is a sense
Hearing is a sense
Pain is a sense
Healing is a sense
Feeling is a sense
Taste is a sense
Without sught you cannot see light
Nothing will ever be bright without sight
Without a voice you have no choice
Without a choice there is no point
Without hearing you cannot hear voices
Without voices you hear no noises
Without pain how do you know if you playing a game
Without games nothing will be the same
Without healing you will not be very appealing
If you aren't appealing you are concealing
Without taste you can use any paste
Without taste you maybe able to drink a case.
Without senses you cannot do much which sense would you risk to lose and why?
-Please Post Answer-
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05-16-2005, 11:43 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
Posts: 855
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
i would say myself pain i just want to get go i hate pain its not i dont feel it all the time because i do
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05-20-2005, 12:10 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
will anyone post
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06-05-2005, 01:28 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
i fell all alone only if someone will post please people
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06-08-2005, 12:54 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
Posts: 855
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
here is a picture i thought about when i wrote my poems= |
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06-08-2005, 12:55 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
same here= |
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06-09-2005, 12:31 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
same also= |
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06-09-2005, 12:32 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
right now im working on a new poem
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06-21-2005, 12:53 AM
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| Bundimun
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Delaware
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| sweet pics dude Those pictures are so intriuging...okay that's not spelled right but who cares...Are any of them Amy Brown? I like her misfits series...not a lot of people do...Oh, and your poem about blood is by far my Favorite of them. Hey I've read a lot of Edgar's stuff, it's strangely creepy, but totally awesome.
Keep writing, and post more poems a.s.a.p.! The Forgotten Maurader |
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06-21-2005, 05:17 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kim So Eun Fifth Year |
^u sound like my cousin laina
Last edited by lilly pad; 06-22-2005 at 01:52 AM.
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06-22-2005, 12:27 AM
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| Dementor
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Delaware
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| John...that's not me...I'm here...tho it does sound a lot like me...Hey you...erm...maurader person...my fave is also Blood, i love Amy's misfit series, and've read edgar's stuff. Aren't his poems great? Hey bud I miss ya!
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06-22-2005, 01:41 AM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: In my music....
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The're great but I hope you know that all poems don't have to rym.
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