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04-05-2005, 06:37 AM
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Ok, I thought this would be a nice place to write my poems.. Please don't judge...
Glittering World
The world makes the sound,
Of that of which, we must not hear
And hushes that, which has been already broken
For fear perhaps, of the unknown
So people go about
Forgetting others' pains
Ignoring the social need for touch
Fulfilling no desire
But I wish it was all a ruse
Then it would hold up to nothing more
Yet I know, it is all a game
When we pretend everything is okay
So we mask our fears
And we go out the door
Into this glittering world
Into the unreal, the fake, the broken
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04-06-2005, 11:58 AM
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| | Granian
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*sniffs and cries* great poem Francisa, i am glad you are writing  please post more soon.
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04-06-2005, 12:04 PM
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i like, post soon, you have talent. i know you said dont judge, but that poem is good
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04-08-2005, 01:39 AM
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aww thanks By dont judge, I meant be nice
I've never made my poems public... lol
I will post one soon.. hold on (I've been working on a couple)
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04-08-2005, 01:42 AM
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Great poem Francis!
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04-08-2005, 02:06 AM
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Wretched Routine
As I stumble out of bed
On that groggy and unforgiving morning,
I crawl under my sheets
And pull myself up.
"Am I awake yet?", I wonder
As I creep into the cold bathroom,
And I feel it, like a gravitational force,
And I know it is pulling me like no other,
Like a pupetteer,
As it moves swiftly across the room.
And I find myself in a familiar situation
Cringing as my warm feet touch its cold surface
That.. wretched, metallic surface.
So, I close my eyes in pain
Wondering as I lunge forward,
If I made the right choice..
Anxiously waiting, I have to open one eye
And see my feet holding me up,
I see the numbers rotating,
And feel the world stop to gaze.
I gasp and beg,
I anxiously try to hold my tears inside,
"Please.. oh please!", I cry again,
"Just this once.. Just one more" | |
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04-08-2005, 04:00 AM
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Just these two are like a thousand ripples upon the ocean of the reality of life.....yeah anyways theses are deep. I like them.
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04-08-2005, 04:27 AM
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Oh, very nice Francis! You've got talent babe! Post more, they're great! 
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04-08-2005, 04:41 AM
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thanks 
I will, I think tomorrow | |
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04-08-2005, 04:47 AM
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Originally Posted by CrazyMoonyFan *sniffs and cries* great poem Francisa, i am glad you are writing please post more soon. Me too.. I just hope it helps
Otherwise, I will definetely go weirdly insane and be hospitalized o_O
Amber knows what I mean *nods*
But Amberish is not here  *pokes non-existent amber*
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04-08-2005, 10:53 PM
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| | Granian
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Francis i knwo a very good poem that relates to your problem, i could send it toyou privately if you want, just PM me 
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04-09-2005, 12:24 AM
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please do I would love to read it | |
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04-09-2005, 10:09 AM
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| | Granian
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turns out you read it when i posted somewhere else
anyway post more soon Francis
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04-11-2005, 03:11 PM
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Upbeat, totally!
it's not soppy at all!
poems seem to sound like that
hehe..
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04-22-2005, 11:00 PM
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ooo it is sooo good i really like it , I think i can speak for every one when i say its AWSOME!!!
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05-06-2005, 09:14 PM
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I like your poetry it's so real. keep posting you could help others as well by doing so, along with yourself.
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05-07-2005, 06:00 AM
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Aww thanks
I will post more in a sec.. | |
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05-07-2005, 09:55 AM
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| | Granian
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YAY! *cough siggie and avvie rock*cough*
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05-12-2005, 05:22 PM
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Dealing with their loss
Suddenly, I find myself reflecting on life and death
I wonder not about what happens, but about the pain both cause
I wonder how could I stop it, when I care so much
I wonder how could I do anything, when I am so weak
And I can't help but wonder, how many more will die
How many more I will see
How much more I can take
But at such loss for words
I find myself thinking about how numb I feel
How I can't cry anymore
Because nothing is left
It happened about 3 years ago, but it feels like today
She died because of me
I know I didn't push her, I know I didn't force her, I know I tried my best
But I can't stop feeling it was because of me
Because I didn't stop
Because neither did she
Because I'm not stopping
Because I never will
Simply because I'll never go to therapy
Because I will never open up to them
Simply because I'll never be sick enough
Sometimes I wish I could kill that voice inside my head
But I know I won't because I can't bear living without it
Because somehow, I don't possess that inner strength
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05-13-2005, 10:37 PM
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| | Granian
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aww so sad but it was a good poem Francis PAMS and BUMPS
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05-14-2005, 01:49 AM
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^ Thanks Lee-ness-ness *hugs* | |
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05-29-2005, 03:02 PM
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come on francis wheres you next poem? *getting you back hee hee*
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05-29-2005, 05:12 PM
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^ Its coming AFTER yours  | |
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05-29-2005, 05:24 PM
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Shades of Yellow
It starts in the morning
When everything's fresh
It jumps in the evening
When anything's crushed
If its the same color
Then why does it change?
From a sunflower yellow
To a diluted watery red?
The answer is a riddle
Just like the rest
That will never be answered
Because I'm too afraid
But perhaps you can answer it
Because I never will
A mediocre answer that is never complete
Because the question is caged away
But is still very yellow
Like a sitting tea kettle
But it is not quite that bright
But it is still yellow
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05-29-2005, 11:59 PM
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| | Granian
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ohhhhhhh nice choice of theme ma francis, very schmexy poem as always!!!
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