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Old 08-24-2009, 08:43 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi im Jen! This is my first go in the poetry Vault so tell me what you think!

I also have two Fan Fics, so feel free to check them out if you have time or if oyu wanna. They're both in the romance section and they anre called Echos and Troubled.

Disclaimer: i dont own any of the Harry Potter Universe, it belongs to Miss J K Rowling

This first poem is about the idea of what lurks behind the curtain that Sirius fell though. I hope you like it.

so here goes:

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Through the Curtain

Through the curtain,
Where nothing belongs
where smoke swirls and swishes
Singing ghostly lit songs

They’re greedy, they’re wanting
They’re long lives are watered
They wait for the innocent
And prey on the tortured

But you must be strong,
And keep your mind set
It keeps me awake and I scream and I shout
And I wake in the night when I’m covered in sweat

From the torture I know that they’re putting you through
But you have to be strong
It’s all down to you

You fell though the curtain and into their trap
I still want to blame you
For crossing the gap

But even in death I see your eyes,
Sparkling and shining and happy with pride
But you fell though the curtain...
And threw me aside..

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Let me know what you think


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Old 08-29-2009, 02:50 PM   #2 (permalink)


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Great Job! Welcome to the Script Crypt poetry vault, please be sure to read all the rules and post often.
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oh my god that was a awessome poem i'll definitly be reading your poems post more soon
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That was AMAZING!!! I'm definately checking out your fan-fics now!!

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Aw! That poem was so good! Wow! Jen: you're really good! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
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Thanks for the comments so far, its great to get feedback

This is a poem about Tonks loving Lupin


Deep Sleepy Seas


I dont care what you are
I dont care what you do
Ive always known one thing
And that's i love you

You tear and you rip
And you gash at your soal
I'd rather give mine
To help you, thats all

Because if theres no you
Theres no me to survive
I'd rather be dead with you
Than without you, alive

Just never stop loving me
And Ill never leave
And we'll crash together
Like deep sleepy seas....

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Hmmm im in a poemy mood This is about harry when dumbledore died Enjoy

You Fell

You fell.
You fell, and you left me,
To conqure this height
But i cannot do it
Its not out of fright

Its just im too young
And I cannot see
How the Dark Lord could be discouraged
Or frightened by me

And now im alone
to do this great task
the unanswered questions
leave me aghast

For you could have told me
Helped me, let me in
I feel unprepared
It hasnt sunk in

You say i must die
But how do i go
Knowing who im leaving
It wont happen, no

You fell, You died
Without taking my hand
Please stop to help me
Before you land...
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Omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Aww...
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Im just a Simple Poet writer....
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and, er, have you READ your stuff?!?! simple, me no think so! more like AWSOME!
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Ya I read my stuff...
Its Just Plain...
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Plain??!?!?!?!PLAIN?!?!?!
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Oh wow! Those poems were so good! I felt like crying in the one where Dumbledore died! It was so good! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
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PS: Xavier: what do you mean by you're simple and plain? You're poems are nothing less than awesome! That goes for you too, Jen!
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Oh wow! Those poems were so good! I felt like crying in the one where Dumbledore died! It was so good! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
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PS: Xavier: what do you mean by you're simple and plain? You're poems are nothing less than awesome! That goes for you too, Jen!

aww thanks kita! your comments always make me laugh lol
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ooohh new reader!! yay!!

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Hahahha
I cant help myself I love chatting...
AND STALKING THIS THREAD...
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AH man! i just wrote another one and when i tried to copy it it deleated!!
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ARE YOU SERIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!
AGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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i know!! i really liked it as well! it was about voldy!!
(also, thechnically this isnt chatting because its about poems, and its a kerfuffle and a too-doo)
i might try and remember it and post it tomorrow tho

also, xavier, go check out new troubled chapter! its so exciting!! (im excited about my own story, i know its lame but eeeeeeeeeeep!)
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Okey Dokey....
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