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05-18-2005, 09:17 PM
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| | Guest |  ♥ alex's poems ♥
here's one of the poems i wrote. Quote: lies
will you be there to catch me
when my world starts to fall,
will you be there to hold me
just like you'd hold a doll.
will you be there to dry my tears
even though i'm falling faster,
will you always be with me
in this world that's a disaster.
some people can look so perfect
but they're not even close,
they can project an image
but soon the cover blows.
and then they see the real you
the one you've been hiding all along,
they always thought that you were perfect
but it turns out that they were wrong. will be adding more later.
Last edited by falling from grace; 06-15-2005 at 02:07 PM.
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05-21-2005, 03:44 AM
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| | Antipodean Opaleye
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Thats really good. I can relate to the 3rd stanza. I'd love to hear more of your poems
-angel
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05-26-2005, 10:56 PM
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| | Granian
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i didnt know you owned a poetry thread!!!!! its sooo awesome!! post more soon pwease!
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06-01-2005, 02:22 PM
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| | Horklump
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that was a beaufifel poem!!!
i just found out today that there was even a place for poems...i'll have to put some of them up!!!
i do poems also...and i so can not wait to put them up!!!
i hope that if u c them some thime that u'll stop by and take a look!!!
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06-08-2005, 03:58 AM
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| | Guest |
your poem's really good <3333333  i wish i was better at poetry... muh poems are never very good  | |
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06-15-2005, 02:05 PM
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| | Guest |
Quote:
so perfect on the outside
but so broken up inside,
you can't see the tears she cries
the truth is there, behind her eyes.
sometimes she's so scared
about all the lies,
she wished she hadn't cared
but it's too late, she dies.
now they wished they hadn't done
the things that they did,
they thought it was all good fun
and she was just a kid.
but they never saw the pain
that lay within her soul,
she sat outside, drenched in the rain
with her heart blacker than coal.
she couldn't take it anymore
she acted on her feelings,
she knew what the blade was for
and soon, she started bleeding.
they found her later on the floor
but it was far too late,
they were shocked when they opened the door
they never imagined this was her fate. thanks for the compliments guys, i really appriciate it. ^.^ hope you like this one. | |
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06-16-2005, 03:10 AM
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| | Lobalug
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oh wow....these are awesomez....i cant wait til you post more!!
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06-16-2005, 04:22 PM
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omg. ur poems r so awesome! please post more soon
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06-17-2005, 11:46 PM
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| | Granian
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that last one is fandabiedozey! i love the last to stanzas they rock!!!!!!! *squeezes you*
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06-19-2005, 09:52 PM
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| | Quintaped
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great poems Alex Love
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06-20-2005, 02:34 PM
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| | Murtlap
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your poems are really quiet good.
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06-25-2005, 08:00 PM
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| | Antipodean Opaleye
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That last one was brilliant. I love it sooo much. Post more soon please.
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06-26-2005, 07:39 AM
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|  Band GeekPuffskein
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i love your poems, publish more.... please 
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07-08-2005, 08:35 AM
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| | Snidget
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w00t w00t
more please
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08-02-2005, 09:12 AM
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| | Bundimun
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Is this alex from somerville high school?
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08-02-2005, 09:27 AM
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| | Kappa
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OHMYGAWSH!!!! THESE ARE ALL AWESOME! I cried through some, and smiled through others, I got that deep sensation at the pit of my stomach through all, and LOVED EACH AND EVEYRONE OF YOUR WORKS!
You're an awesome writer! I was just wondering if you've ever got them published? I love Chicken Soup (A Book of stories/ poems for teens written by teens) and I think I remember...Aww, it can't be.
Well, pls I beg of you, check the site and enter your poems for inspection! They'll truly reach everyones hearts and it's just what the site is looking for!
It's simply... www.chickensoup.com
Then again, maybe you've already sent it there?
WEll, Post more soon!!! I'll always be reading...
Ur new fan,
Tina
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08-02-2005, 03:46 PM
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| | Niffler
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Is this alex from somerville high school?
That is no question to ask and that is considered SPAM.
Anyways lovely poems Alex! Post more soon please! >.<
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09-27-2005, 01:00 PM
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Quote:
Our worlds collided
And we became one,
We were so close
Like the starts and the sun.
But something hit me
Too hard to understand,
It felt so wrong
You should have grabbed my hand.
Instead of doing that
You pushed me in deeper,
You drifted away
Like a secret keeper.
We talked in the end
But it was too late,
The damage was done
That was our fate.
It's hard to let go
Of someone you love,
We'll meet again
Even if it means
That it's only up above.
Thanks sweethearts. <3
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10-30-2005, 11:44 AM
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| | Gnome
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Tour poetry is suprisingly dark, yet at the same time it's light enough to persuade you to read on, more and, more. I really liked it. WRITE MORE PLEZZZ!
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11-02-2005, 08:26 PM
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| | Kappa
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Thanks sweethearts. <3
You're Very Very Very Welcome!!!!!!!!
I love all of your stuff and it just gets better and better.
Keep it up! I'll always be back~
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~~RQT
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Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile.
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