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08-12-2009, 02:30 AM
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| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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Department of Mysteries |  Wizard POV's - Sa13+ ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
Made by Jess of Sunset At The Beach Hello again!!! This is Jess and Lily! This is Jess's 4th Fanfiction and Lily's 2nd! Please read and review! Oh and check out our other stories too!
From Chapter 8 - Chapter 10 Jess will be writing only. Disclamer: The characters, as well as the Harry Potter universe, belong to J.K. Rowling.
Chapter 2 //Chapter 3 //Chapter 4//Chapter 5//Chapter 6//Chapter 7//Chapter 8//Chapter 9//Chapter 10
Chapter 1 I looked out my window into the dark clouds above. The dark mark is placed in between the two clouds that stand out the most. Those two clouds remind me of my mother and the one I love the most....
"Draco! Get down here now! We have caught another mudblood! It's your turn to torture the piece of filth!" Lucius Malfoy yelled.
I sighed but grabbed my wand off of the old, rotten desk and prepared myself for a very long night.
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"Harry! Have you seen Hermione?" I shouted panting like crazy.
"No I haven't, calm down mate! Maybe she is with Ginny in Diagon Alley." Harry said.
I nodded and sat down on the couch.
"Look at this!" Harry said.
"What is it Harry?" I asked looking at the newspaper.
"Look there's the dark mark over the Malfoy Manor!" Harry said.
"So? They usually always have it over there. It would be a suprise if I didn't see it over there anymore. Don't worry about it mate. They are probably just having a big deatheater meeting or something." I said eating some crackers I found on the side of the couch.
Harry's eyes bulged and I dropped the old stale crackers. I finally understood that what I said could actually be happening, but who was the victim?
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"Ron that's just... not right." I said with a look of discust.
Ron's Chudley Canons door opened revealing a very worried looking Ginny Weasley. She looked around and when she saw us she tried to run. I caught her arm before she could though.
"Gin, what's up?" I asked patting her on the shoulder.
"Oh Harry, it's h-horrible!" she sobbed.
I took her in my arms. I knew it was wrong, I mean, we're just friends, but I can't help thinking we could be more...
"T-they took 'M-mione!" she sobbed into my shirt.
"What?" Ron screamed.
"W-we w-were i-in H-hogsmeade a-and d-dementors a-and d-deatheaters!"
"What?!" screamed Ron again jumping up all of a sudden.
Ginny looked down and saw the prophet. She wriggled out of my arms.
Grabbed the prophet and it read:
Quote: THE DARK MARK!
Once again the dark mark is arise just over Malfoy Manor. A few aurors around the location have heard screaches. The word Crucio was heard in a shaky voice more than once. Auror's have guessed that Lucius Malfoy and his underage son, Draco Malfoy are behind this. Head auror, Kingsley Shattlebolt, is convinced that the victim is a Hogwarts pupil.
Story continued on page 4-8 Ginny's eyes jumped out her sockets and she screamed in horror!
"That's it if my best friend is going down I'm going down with her!" she bellowed running out of the portrait hole of Ron's bedroom.
Her tear stained face now had a blazing look on it.
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08-17-2009, 05:17 AM
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| | Mooncalf
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Yay!
It's up!  
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08-17-2009, 09:27 AM
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| | Mooncalf
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Department of Mysteries | ♥ Slytherin Princess to the core ♥ / St. Trinian's Terror
Awsome
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08-17-2009, 09:29 AM
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| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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Department of Mysteries |  ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
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Originally Posted by LilyLunaGinnyPotter  Yay!
It's up! I know!!!
I'm soo happy!!
 Jess Quote:
Originally Posted by deviljo8586 Awsome Thanks!
Jess
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08-17-2009, 09:42 AM
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| | Mooncalf
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heya...Jess...another one yet again...cool...keep going honey...hello lily...
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08-17-2009, 09:44 AM
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| | Mooncalf
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Home ♔
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hey to both you guys
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08-17-2009, 09:45 AM
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| | Shrake
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Originally Posted by harita heya...Jess...another one yet again...cool...keep going honey...hello lily... Hiya! (says in Ron's voice) 
Yeah another one! =DD
Yes Lily will be working with me on this story!
Jess
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08-17-2009, 12:19 PM
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| | Gnome
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Wow its great i cant wait for more..
aww you you and lilly are working together :O.. this should be great duudes..
ill try and check out your other stories to okay
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08-17-2009, 12:24 PM
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| | Mooncalf
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Great!
We will be posting in about 4-5 days!
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08-17-2009, 12:39 PM
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| | Gnome
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We will be posting in about 4-5 days!
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08-17-2009, 12:43 PM
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| | Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Ron+Hermione Obv !! great cant wait
I'm really glad!
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08-17-2009, 02:08 PM
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| | Puffskein
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Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
OMG!!!!!!!!!
ANOTHER STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!
I call dibs on Being your NUMBER 1 READER!!!!!!!!!
HEHEHEHEH
PAMS!!!!!!!
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08-17-2009, 02:08 PM
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| | Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by ##Hermione&Draco## OMG!!!!!!!!!
ANOTHER STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!
I call dibs on Being your NUMBER 1 READER!!!!!!!!!
HEHEHEHEH
PAMS!!!!!!!
-Xavier -
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08-17-2009, 03:25 PM
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| | Imp
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*New Reader* I really like this story. PAMS
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08-17-2009, 04:04 PM
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|   DMCDemiguise
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Awesome story yet again Jess and Lily. Can't wait for more!
~Sarah
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08-17-2009, 04:16 PM
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| | Puffskein
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PAMS I love it post more soon! Please let hermione be oK!
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08-17-2009, 04:38 PM
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| | Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by potionsmaster22 *New Reader* I really like this story. PAMS
*Sammy* We're glad you like it! Quote:
Awesome story yet again Jess and Lily. Can't wait for more!
~Sarah
Ahhhh! Thanks!  Quote:
PAMS I love it post more soon! Please let hermione be oK!
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08-17-2009, 06:50 PM
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| | Manticore
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giiiirls.
im uberly sooory ive missed posts and stuff. but im on a catching up spree. believe meee.
i love it.
PAMS.
loveeyouuuu
shannon x
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08-17-2009, 06:50 PM
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| | Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by midget ♥ giiiirls.
im uberly sooory ive missed posts and stuff. but im on a catching up spree. believe meee.
i love it.
PAMS.
loveeyouuuu
shannon x loveeeyouuuu22222!
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08-17-2009, 07:10 PM
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OMG! They took Hermione?! That's who they caught and are going to torture?! OMG! They are simply ridiculous! Aw! Harry wants him and Ginny to be something more! How cute! Wonder who Draco likes, though! Ew! Ron ate the crackers someone left behind! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: Yay! Jess and Lily are working together! This should be good!
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08-17-2009, 07:15 PM
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| | Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by hermionesclone OMG! They took Hermione?! That's who they caught and are going to torture?! OMG! They are simply ridiculous! Aw! Harry wants him and Ginny to be something more! How cute! Wonder who Draco likes, though! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: Yay! Jess and Lily are working together! This should be good! I think the H/G is really cute too!
And thanks!
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08-17-2009, 08:50 PM
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| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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Thanks Rachluff!
Okay cool!
Jess Quote:
Originally Posted by LilyLunaGinnyPotter
Great!
We will be posting in about 4-5 days!
It kind of depends. Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron+Hermione Obv !! great cant wait
I'm not sure yet. Quote:
Originally Posted by ##Hermione&Draco## OMG!!!!!!!!!
ANOTHER STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!
I call dibs on Being your NUMBER 1 READER!!!!!!!!!
HEHEHEHEH
PAMS!!!!!!!
-Xavier - Haha sure Xavierluff you can be our #1 Reader!
tehe. xDD
Jess Quote:
Originally Posted by potionsmaster22 *New Reader* I really like this story. PAMS
*Sammy* Thanks Sammy!
Jess Quote:
Originally Posted by iluvfob13 Awesome story yet again Jess and Lily. Can't wait for more!
~Sarah Thanks Sarah!
That means a lot!
Jess Quote:
Originally Posted by PotterGirl714 PAMS I love it post more soon! Please let hermione be oK! Thank youuu!!!
Can't say. 
Jess Quote:
Originally Posted by midget ♥ giiiirls.
im uberly sooory ive missed posts and stuff. but im on a catching up spree. believe meee.
i love it.
PAMS.
loveeyouuuu
shannon x That's okay Shannonluff!
I'm glad you're back!!
Thank youuu!!
luff youu toooo!!!! =DD
Jess Quote:
Originally Posted by hermionesclone OMG! They took Hermione?! That's who they caught and are going to torture?! OMG! They are simply ridiculous! Aw! Harry wants him and Ginny to be something more! How cute! Wonder who Draco likes, though! Ew! Ron ate the crackers someone left behind! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: Yay! Jess and Lily are working together! This should be good! Hahaha yeah.
Thanks Kita!
P.S. Aww thanks! *hug*
Jess
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08-17-2009, 09:19 PM
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Awesome!!!!!!!
Poor Hermione.
This story has such a great beginning.
Post more soon.
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08-17-2009, 09:21 PM
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| | Shrake
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Thanks!
Yeah I know!!! =(
Aww thanks! *hug*
We will!
Jess
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good start, keep it coming
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