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Old 01-26-2007, 12:34 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi people! Susanpotter is back! It's been forever since my last story was posted. Sorry for the wait though. But alas, I have a new story for you wonderful people to read and tell me what you think. I got this idea from other stories I have read in the past many months. Love, Romance, Mystory, and many other things have gone into this story. And I hope to Merlin himself that you all love it! So without father adue. I, susanpotter, give you 'To Love A Potter Princess' Tell me what ya think.

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To Love A
Potter Princess
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Chapter One
Family Reunion


A few miles outside the small seashore village of Ottery St. Catchpole sat a lopsided house named the Burrow. Today the Burrow was busy with its twentieth family reunion that took place every summer in mid-June. What started out to be two parents and their six sons and one daughter, turned into one of England’s biggest families. For each of Arthur and Molly Weasley’s children where now grown and each had their own children to raise in the new peace of the Wizarding world. Of course, just like every year, the Weasley’s also invited some of their closest family friends.

Molly Weasley stood in the doorway of the Burrow’s back door and looked out at her family and friends in the back garden. To say she was pleased with what she saw was an understatement to the word. No, Molly Weasley was beyond pleased, she was proud, very proud of her growing family. To the left of the garden stood the older men, Albus Dumbledore, Alastor ‘Mad-Eye’ Moody, the ex-Auror, Remus Lupin, Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, and Percy Weasley. All six of the older men where talking business with each other. Not far from the older men stood the younger men Fred and George Weasley, Ron Weasley, Neville Longbottom, and Harry Potter. Also with the younger men where Molly’s oldest grandsons Zackery Weasley, Robert Weasley, Justin Weasley, James Potter, Sirius Potter, Jason Weasley, and Mark Weasley. All of them where talking with each other, but they where talking more of jokes and stuff younger men liked to talk about.

Molly's gaze then turned to the right of the garden where there was a very large table set up for dinner. Setting at the table where the women of the growing family. There was Luna (Lovegood) Longbottom, Minerva McGonagall, Nymphadora (Tonks) Lupin, Fleur (Delacour), Rebecca (Jameson), Penelope (Clearwater), Angelina (Johnson), Alicia (Spinnet), Hermione (Granger), and Ginny (Weasley). Also with the women where Molly’s oldest granddaughters Sarah Weasley, Jessica Weasley, and Anna Weasley. The youngest of Molly’s grandchildren, that also included the Lupin’s and Longbottom's children, where father from the Burrow, but from where she stood, she could still make out which child was which. Out on the Quidditch pitch where Michael and Johnathan Weasley, Katherine and Jennifer Potter, Crystal Lupin, Franklin Longbottom, Daniel Weasley, Arthur and Andrew Potter, Christopher Weasley, Elizabeth and Julie Weasley, Heather and Margot Weasley, Susan Potter, Alice Longbottom and Derek Lupin. Out by the lake where only three of Molly’s grandchildren, Jane Weasley, Lillian Potter, and Alexander Lupin. And her last two grandchildren, Amy Weasley and Emma Weasley where sitting by the swings talking with themselves, these two where concidered the girly girls of the family.

But Molly wasn’t just watching everyone, she was watching the three that sat by the lake. The New ‘Golden Trio’ is what most people called them. Jane, Lillian and Alexander where just like Harry, Hermione, and Ron when they where that age. The three of them where stuck together like glue, there has only been a few times where Molly had seen one or two of them without the others. Out of all of her grandchildren the three of them where Molly’s favorite. As she looked over everyone once again a smile grew on her aging face, not in a million years could she be more proud than this moment. She had six daughters-in-law, all very beautiful in their own ways. She had the King of the Wizarding Race as her son-in-law. She also had thirty-two grandkids and five of them weren’t related to her by blood at all.

Bill, Molly’s oldest son, was now the Head Curse Breaker at Gringotts bank. His beautiful, part Veela, French wife, Fleur Delacour, was a French Interpreter for Gringotts as well. They married a year before the second war ended and had their oldest daughter, Sarah Ann Weasley, nine months afterwards. Sarah now works in the Department of Magical Accidents and Catastrophes at the Ministry of Magic. Two years after Bill and Fleur had Sarah, they had Jessica, Jess for short, Angle Weasley, who owns her own Book shop in Diagon Ally. Then three years after Jess they had Amy Rose Weasley, who is now a sixth year at Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Bill and Fleur have been married for twenty-one years now and are still very much in love.

Charlie, Molly’s second oldest son, was still a Dragon Keeper in Romania, when he meet his beautiful wife, Rebecca Jameson. They have been married for twenty years now. A year after they married and opened their own Dragon farm, they had their twin sons, Jason, Jay for short, Dennis and Mark Anthony Weasley. Jay and Mark both took after their parents and are now helping them run the Dragon farm. Three years after the twins they had their only daughter, Emma Jane Weasley, who‘s a sixth year at Hogwarts. Two years later came Daniel, Dan for short, James Weasley, who is in his fourth year at Hogwarts, and with another two years came their fourth son, Christopher, Chris for short, Charlie Weasley, who is now in his second year at Hogwarts.

During the second war Percy, Molly’s third oldest son, married his long time girlfriend Penelope Clearwater, who is now a reporter for the Daily Prophet, while Percy works in the Department of International Magical Cooperation. Six months after Arthur was made Minister of Magic, Percy came back into the family with his nine month old twins, Zackery, Zack for short, Allen and Anna May Weasley, and Penelope. Then three years later came Robert, Rob for short, Michael Weasley. Zack now works in the Improper Use of Magic office at the Ministry. Anna works in the Department of Magical Transportation, while Rob is the Quidditch Reporter for the Daily Prophet.

Now Fred and George, Molly’s twin sons, are a different story all together. They own a joke shop called ‘Weasley’s Wizarding Wheezes’ that had locations in Hogsmeade, Diagon Ally, France, the United States and many other countries, too many to count on two hands you could say. Fred married his long time girlfriend Angelina Johnson six years after the second war ended. Then two years later Angelina gave birth to twin girls, Elizabeth, Liza for short, Bee and Julie May Weasley. Both girls are now in their second year at Hogwarts. While Angelina runs aDress shop with Alicia Spinnet. Alicia married George the same time Angelina married Fred. She also had her and George’s twin daughters, Heather Kay and Margot, Maggie for short, Barry Weasley, around the same time as well.

Molly’s sixth eldest son, Ron, married his best friend and longtime girlfriend, Hermione Granger. They married a month after the last battle, then nine months later their oldest son, Justin Ronald Weasley, was born. Justin is now playing Professional Quidditch for the Chudley Cannons, Ron’s favorite Quidditch team. Three years after Justin came Jane Amy Weasley, who now works for the Quibbler as one of it’s reporters. Two years after Jane came Ron and Hermione’s twin sons, Michael, Mike for short, Paul and Johnathan, John for short, Henry Weasley. The twins are now in their fifth year at Hogwarts. Through the twenty years of being married, Ron became the Head of the Auror Department at the Ministry, while Hermione worked as a Unspeakable in the Department of Mysteries doing all kinds of research.

The youngest of Molly’s children was her only daughter, Ginny. Molly was proudest with her for many reasons of course. One reason was that she married Harry Potter. He was like another son to Molly and she had always wanted to make him a Weasley. So now they were related, if only by marriage. At the age of seventeen Harry found out he was the last member of the Wizarding Royal family, who where related to both Merlin and Godric Gryffindor. When he found out of his heritage he became King of the Wizarding Race on that same day. Six months later he married Ginny because it was both a requirement to become king and because he loved her with all his being. Nine month’s after their wedding their first born son, James Henry Potter, was born. James was named after Harry’s father. On James’s seventeenth birthday he took the title of Crowned Prince of the Wizarding Race, and was now working with Harry, learning about being King. A year after James came the Potter’s second son, Sirius Michael Potter, named after Harry’s godfather Sirius Black. Sirius now played Professional Quidditch for both the English National Quidditch team and Puddlemere United. Both James and Sirius took after Harry in every way, from the unruly raven black hair to the bright emerald green eyes. They also had his tallness and body structure. Two years past before Ginny gave birth to the first Potter Princess in over six generations of the family history. Lillian, Lily for short, Molly Potter was the spitting image of her grandmother Lily Evans-Potter. She had the flaming red hair and the bright emerald green eyes, but what set her apart from her siblings were the shape of her eyes, they looked like cat eyes. No one knew why her eyes where different from her siblings, they just where. Harry, also Dumbledore, believe that it was just one of those things Magic had to do with. And being the first Potter Princess in many generations there was a lot of Magic in Lily that even she had no clue about. Two years after Lily was born came Harry and Ginny’s first set of twins. Katherine, Kate for short, Ann and Jennifer, Ginger for short, MacKay Potter were the second and third Potter Princesses to be born to the Potter family. But were always pushed into the shadow of Lily, not that Lily wanted the attention that came with being thrust into a limelight that was different from the rest of her family. Kate and Ginger had Ginny’s features, Harry’s emerald green eyes and flaming red hair, with a hint of black mixed in with the red. Now that Lily had graduated from Hogwarts, Kate and Ginger where in their fifth year and hoped to their ancestor Merlin that they would become even more popular and stay out of Lily’s shadow when they returned to the school. A year after Kate and Ginger where born came their twin brother’s, Arthur, Art for short, Johnathan and Andrew, Drew for short, William Potter. Like James and Sirius the twin boys took after Harry in everyway possible, but they where also just like their Uncles Fred and George, which Harry blames himself for jinxing them when Ginny was pregnant with them. Going into their fourth year, Art and Drew where already planning to use some of Fred and George’s new inventions at school. Two years after Art and Drew came the youngest and last child of the Potter family, Susan, Susie for short, Emma Potter. Just like Lily she was identical to their grandmother Lily, but Susie didn’t have the cat like eyes as Lily did, and she didn’t really care either. From the day she was born to today, Susie has Harry and her older sibling’s wrapped around her little finger. For the first few years of her life she had Ginny wrapped around it to but as she got older Ginny some how unwrapped herself from it. Which made everyone laugh every time little Susie tried to get Ginny to get her something she wanted.

Molly smiled at the thought’s of her blood related children, their spouses and her grandchildren. Then her thoughts turned to the Lupins'. Remus Lupin had been a old family friend of the Potter family. But during the second war, he quickly became a family friend of the Weasley family as well. Two years after the war ended he marred Nymphadora Tonks, who hates being called by her first name and only went by Tonks. A year after they married they had Alexander, Alex for short, Remus Lupin, their eldest son. Since Alex graduated from Hogwarts he was excepted to play Professional Quidditch for Puddlemere United as one of their Chasers. Two years after Alex was born came Remus and Tonks's only daughter, Crystal Angelina Lupin, and three years after her they had Derek John Lupin. Crystal is one of Kate and Ginger’s best friends, while Derek is the in the same year as Susie. After the second war and when laws where changing Remus retook the job as Defence Against the Dark Arts Professor at Hogwarts. Just before Tonks gave birth to Alex she went into inactive as an Auror, then after having three kids stopped being an Auror all together, saying that she wanted to raise her kids as a full time mom.

Another family friend where the Longbottoms. Neville Longbottom had been in Ron, Hermione, and Harry’s year while at Hogwarts, while his wife, Luna Lovegood had been in the same year as Ginny. Neville and Luna married three years after the second war. Luna took over the Quibbler after her father’s death While Neville became a Herbologist researcher for St. Mungos hospital. Two year’s after they married, their son, Franklin, Frank for short, Allen Longbottom was born and is in the same year as Kate, Ginger, and Crystal. Then their daughter, Alice Ann Longbottom was born three years after Frank was.

Now that Molly thought about it, to say she was proud or pleased of her family was close to the truth, but it didn’t get it right on. There was no word for the feeling she now had about her growing family. As she stood there looking out at that very family and friends she was over proud of, she gave a very happy sigh. Then she felt her husband, Arthur, put an arm around her shoulders as he too looked at what she saw. “Pleased?” He asked, looking down at her.

“Very!” She answered looking up at him with a satisfied smile on her face.

“It’s only going to get bigger, you know that right?” he said with a smile of his own, looking back out at his family and friends.

“Yes and I wouldn’t have it any other way.” Molly answered “Com on, it’s time to eat.” She added then she turned to the table where the older and younger women say. “Come on girls, come help me put dinner on the table.”

“Coming mum,” Ginny said, standing with the other women at the table.

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After everyone was seated and the food was on the table Arthur Weasley stood from his place at the head of the large table and smiled at his huge family. “What started out as two, then turned into nine, then turned to this loving family will never stop amazing me. For the past twenty years we have been having this family reunion to remind us of the people we have lost and the good times we have had in our lives. But I would like to share with you all that we are the largest family of the Wizarding world and to that I am more than proud.” He then raised his glass of dinner wine. “May we grow in number and let our children always stay true to the light for many, many generations to come.”

“Cheers!” Said everyone as they all raised their own glasses and with that they started in on the lovely meal Molly had made for them.

As everyone ate different conversations started up all over the table. At the head of the table where Arthur sat, Ginny on his left asked, “How’s the new Law’s at the Ministry coming along?”

“Quite well.” Arthur answered “And how are things with our Royal family?”

“The same as always. Let’s see Harry is teaching James about being King of the Wizarding Race. Sirius is mostly at Quidditch practice. Lily is getting ready for her Crowning as Crowned Princess of the Wizarding Race, now that she’s seventeen. Kate and Ginger are driving Lily crazy about taking her clothes, Art and Drew are trying to figure out a way to go to Fred and George’s shop with out me knowing. I just wish sometimes they weren‘t so much like Fred and George. I‘m being to see why mum is the way she is with them.” She paused as she thought.

“I’m sure that it’s already to late for Art and Drew,” Arthur said with a smile of knowing.

“Yes and I blame Harry for being their key investor,” Ginny said.

“And how are you and Susie?” Arthur asked

“Susie is doing great. It’s amazing how she has them all wrapped around her little finger so tight. I’m surprised she’s not spoiled yet,” Ginny said with a small smile. “As for me, I have a lot to do. Which is the bad thing about being Queen of the Wizarding Race.”

“You’ve only been Queen for twenty and a half years. I would have guess it would get easier not harder?” Arthur asked.

“Well with raising eight kids, five of them still in school, while the other three are still living from home because of a stupid Royal family tradition and law, plus all my regular Queen duties and helping Lily plane her Crowning Ball. I’m surprised I have slept more than five hours at night,” Ginny answered.

“Anything else Gin?” Arthur asked watching his youngest child rant about her own life.

“Oh yes, trust me there is always something else. Like the bloody Press hounding Lily,” Ginny said.

“They're still on about her and Max what’s-his-name?” Arthur asked. He hated the Press when they hounded his favorite granddaughter, Lily. Lily was special in many ways. Besides being the most powerful out of the whole family. Lily was also the first Potter Princess born in six generation of the Potter family. She was put into a lime light that none of her siblings where put into. Every move she has ever made had been monitored by the press since the day she was born. If it wasn’t for how she looked then it was about what she did and most of the time the press made it so bad that it made her cry and shut her self in her room at ‘Potter Castle’.

“It’s a mixture between Max and her Crowning,” Ginny answered, knowing the look on her father’s face and she had to agree with him. “This weeks article was about why she shouldn’t be named Crowned Princess of the Wizarding Race. Then they compared her to Kate and Ginger.”

“Yes, I read the article in the paper. If you weren’t the Royal family it would be because she’s the eldest daughter of Harry Potter,” Arthur said. “Fame is fun in some ways but as some one once said; ‘You have to take the good with the bad.’”

“You got that from a Muggle movie didn’t you?” Ginny asked with a sly smiled as she watched her father.

“Yes, it’s from the movie ‘A Knight’s Tale’. Very good movie by the way,” Arthur answered with a small laugh.

It the middle of the table there was talk about Quidditch and Fred and George’s joke shop ‘Weasley’s Wizarding Wheezes’ “Hey Uncle Fred when’s the new line of Pranks coming out?” Asked little Arthur, with an evil kind of smile on his face. His twin brother, Andrew, who sat next to him, had the same smile.

“Now boys you know what your mother said?” Harry said looking at his twin sons.

“Oh come on Dad. We’re just finding our how the joke shop is doing,” Andrew answered. The two of them may have looked like him, just like their older brothers did as well, but they where just like Fred and George in every way but looks. Harry smiled at the thought.

“Alright, but don’t let your mother find out or it’s my head,” he said, going back to his dinner.

“Hey Dad, who you think's going to win the World cup this year?” Asked Harry’s oldest son, James.

“No idea, but I hope it’s England,” Harry answered.

“How’s Puddlemere doing this year Sirius?” Asked Charlie.

“We’re doing great. We have a match against the Cannon’s coming up, right Justin?” Sirius answered looking over at his cousin that played for the Chudley Cannons as their Keeper.

“Yeah, but Puddlemer’s going to win, Sirius. You’re ten times better than us,” Justin answered.

At the very end of the table sat what most people called the new ‘Golden Trio’. Jane, Lily, and Alex, the three of them have been best friends for seventeen year and counting. And just like Ron, Hermione, and Harry they where inseparable. Always doing things together, besides getting into trouble that is. They where close, as close as one could get as best friends/cousins could. “Can you believe we’re finally done with school?” Jane asked the other two.

“No not really,” Alex said. “it’s going to get even harder when we each start working,” he added.

“Alex we’ll always be together,” Lily said, noting the sadness in his voice. “We’ll have to work harder at getting together over the weeks and holidays.”

“Yeah, it’s just hard to imagine that we’re never going back to Hogwarts,” Alex said, looking at Lily. Jane saw the look in his baby blue eyes of longing and she smiled to herself.

For as long as she could remember both Alex and Lily had liked each other, but were to afraid to say anything about it. When Lily started dating Alex would get jealous and tell the guy if he ever hurt Lily, he would now only be facing him, but Lily’s other male relatives as well. Lily was the same way almost when Alex got a new girlfriend, but she would just be to nice about the whole thing. Which would lead her being called a true ‘Potter Princess’, which was true, Lily was a Potter Princess, but she hated the fact that everyone thought she was a spoiled brat, who had to have everything her way. Which was a far cry from the truth. Jane and the rest of the family knew that Lily hated being called ‘The Potter Princess’ and did her best to get out of that lime light. But try as she might, she knew she could never step out of that light. Everyone also knew that Lily tried to earn everything she got, like her NEWT’s she got outstanding on everyone of them. Well all three of them did, but she had worked her butt off studying for them.

To Lily it didn’t mater what her grades were, or the face that she was a Princess, all she ever wanted was Alex. And Jane knew Alex wanted Lily, but felt he didn’t deserve her. They where close, closer to each other than they were with Jane, but she didn’t mind, she always thought they should be together. “Are you done dears?” asked Molly looking at the three of them.

“Yes grandma,” Jane said, still watching the looks Alex and Lily were giving each other when the other wasn’t looking.

“Would you like some help grandma?” Lily asked, looking away from Alex. Jane then saw that longing look in Alex’s eye again. This time Molly saw it as well.

“No love, I’ve got it. Why don’t you three go do something before you go home,” Molly said with a smile at her three favorite grandchildren. They so reminded her of Ron, Hermione, and Harry when they where that age. The three seventeen year olds left the large table when Ginny came over to her mother.

“Let me guess, you saw the look as well?” she asked.

“How long?” Molly asked looking at her.

“For over five years now,” Ginny answered “Jane’s noticed it as well.”

“Yes. I saw her watching them, but she seemed surprised when she was the longing look in Alex’s eyes,” Molly said.

“That look started after Max entered the picture,” Ginny said, helping Molly take dishes into the Burrow.

“What do you mean?” Molly asked, walking into the kitchen, where the rest of her daughter-in-laws were, with Luna and Tonks. Minerva, Albus, and Mad-Eye had already left for the evening.

“Who you talking about?” Tonks asked.

“Lily and Alex,” Ginny said putting the dishes in the sink then taking a set at the table.

“Oh you’ve noticed too?” Tonks asked.

“I think everyone’s noticed by now, but it's gone a step farther since Max started dating Lily,” Ginny said.

“What do you mean?” Rebecca asked.

“Alex shows signs of longing in his eyes now. It started about the time when Lily introduced us all to Max,” Tonks said.

"So what does Max have to do with it?” Angelina asked.

“Ever since Harry and I started letting Lily date, Alex has always got a little jealous of the boys she’s dated. The same goes for Lily with Alex’s girlfriends,” Ginny started. “Well over the years that ‘Like’ has turned into ‘Love’. Alex can’t stand being around any of Lily’s new boyfriends, especially Max.”

“That still doesn’t answer the question,” Angelina said.

“I know the answer. Well Jane told me this. She said that the only reason Alex dislikes Max is because he knows Alex loves Lily. And Max is rubbing it in Alex’s face, because Max doesn’t like Alex, no offence Tonks, because Alex is a half Werewolf,” Hermione answered. “And Max thanks that Alex isn’t worthy of Lily.”

“How’d she find that out?” asked Ginny.

“She’s the only one other than Lily, that Alex confides in,” Tonks said.

“And she’s the only one who hangs out with the both of them the most,” Hermione added.

“Let me get this straight. Alex hates every boy Lily goes out with because he loves her?” asked Molly. Tonks and Ginny both nod their heads.

“And Lily hates every girl that Alex goes out with because she loves him?” Fleur asked and again Tonks and Ginny both nod their heads.

“Then why don’t they just tell each other how they really feel and be done with it?” Alicia asked.

“That’s the problem in a nutshell. They're to afraid what the other would do if they said they loved each other,” Tonks said.

“Sound’s a lot like Ron and myself,” Hermione said, recognizing the signs now.

“Yes, but you never had as many boyfriends as Lily has ‘Mione,” Ginny said. “I guess I could say Lily’s not really scared of what Alex would do, it’s the rest of the world she’s afraid of.”

“Why’s that?” Penelope asked.

“You’ve all read the papers. Lily is known as ‘The Potter Princess’, which is only half true, but even if she could step away from that lime light for being the first Potter Princess born in six generations, she can’t. So she’s afraid of what the world would think and say if she confessed her love for her best friend,” Ginny said. “Of course Alex, on the other hand, thinks his not worthy of her.”

“That’s true,” Tonks said in agreement.

“Then I say we do something about it,” Luna said, looking around the kitchen.

“I agree,” Molly said. “I can see they love each other and it’s tearing at my heart to see them not together.”

“First, we have to get Max out of the picture,” Angelina said.

“True,” Ginny said. “I’ve got it. . . .” And for the next hour of so, all of the women sat in the kitchen talking about the best ways to get Alex and Lily together and Max out of the picture.

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Meanwhile out at the large table in the garden all the men, young and old, sat talking. Harry looked over at the kids, who where now playing with some games and pranks from Fred and George’s joke shop. He noticed Alex watching Lily play with a muggle sparkler and talking with Jane, who also had a sparkler. Remus saw where Harry’s eyes were looking and he smiled. “You see it too?” he asked.

“Yeah, but when did it start?” Harry asked looking at Remus.

“It started with the first boyfriend Lily got. But that longing look started when Lily introduced Max to all of us,” Remus answered, watching his son watch Harry’s third oldest.

“Where have I been the last few years?” Harry asked running a hand through his unruly raven black hair.

“You’ve been doing your Royal duties as our King,” Remus said with a smile. “And working.”

“Like I need to work. No why didn’t I notice the signs between Alex and Lily before now?” Harry asked.

“Can’t tell ya that sorry. I didn’t start noticing until her seventeenth birthday ball, when we all meet Max,” Remus answered. Harry looked at him with a confused look. “Oh sorry, Max found out some how that Alex loves Lily. And he’s been rubbing it in Alex’s face ever since.”

“So in other words, Maxwell Smith is using my Lily to look the better man?” Harry asked, with a disgusted look on his face.

“You could say that,” Remus answered.

“Remus, Alex, Crystal, Derek, Time to go home!” came Tonk’s yell from the back door.

“Well, I’m being called home. I’ll talk with you later Harry,” Remus said.

“Yeah, see ya!” Harry said watching Alex hug Lily bye, then heading into the house. Lily looked after him with that same longing look Alex had. ‘I’m going to have to talk to Gin about this!’ Harry thought to himself. Then he and his eight kids where called to go home to ‘Potter Castle’.

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This is an excellent start! I was getting a little confused because there's so many new characters, but otherwise you have done an excellent job! I'm liking the Hermione/Ron situation between Lily and Alex. Can't wait to see where it goes!
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You made another story!!
I remember back when i first started going on SS i read one of your finished storys I think it was.

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I love it so far! And like Shan said,
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Cant wait to see what they're plan is .

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ahhhhh i love this story so far!! post more soon!!!

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Hey guys! Thank you so much for the replys. I'm very happy you all like it so far. As always I am keeping my promise of posting again. So here's the beinging of chapter two. The Thruth comes to light. Hope you like.

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“Argh!” yelled Lily slamming the morning paper down on the family breakfast table in the smallest dinning room of ‘Potter Castle’.

“What’s wrong now Lily?” asked her oldest brother James, as he looked up from his own breakfast.

“I’ll give you three guesses and the first two don’t count.” Lily said, looking at James, who sat across from her, with an angry look, a look that could give their mother a run for her money.

“That bad?” her other older brother, Sirius, asked from his set to the left of James.

“Worse. They have now added Alex to my love life. We’re just best friends, nothing more. I can’t believe them.” Lily said, as their mother walked into the dinning room, with their youngest sister, Susie, right behind her.

“What’s got you so angry at this hour in the morning Lily?” Ginny asked, sitting next to her at the table. Lily didn’t say anything as she passed the paper to her and left the dinning room. Ginny read the front page and spite her morning tea out and into both Sirius and James’s faces. “Oh sorry boys. But this has to stop.” Ginny said, “And Susan it isn’t funny.” she added walking out of the dinning room with the paper in hand.

“I thought it was funny.” Susie said, pilling her own plate with eggs and bacon.

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Meanwhile, Harry sat in his private office going through the morning post, when there came a knock on the door. “Yes?” he asked, only looking up when the door opened and Ginny walked in looking very angry. “What did the twins do now?” he asked, thinking that Art and Drew pranked Ginny again.

“Oh it’s not Arthur and Andrew that have me upset. It’s the bloody paper. Did you read it this morning?” She asked holding it out to him to take.

“No. Why?” He asked taking the paper from his wife and leaning back in his chair to read it. There on the front page where two pictures. One of Lily and Alex hugging at the last family reunion. The other was of Lily and a very handsome, short neat blond hair man by the name of Maxwell Smith, her one year boyfriend, the picture was from her Crowning Ball a week ago, while the picture of her and Alex was two weeks old. Under the two pictures where the words;

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In Love With Two Men?’

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“You’ve got to be kidding me! Did Lily see this yet?” Harry asked looking up at Ginny.

“That’s who was yelling moment’s ago.” Ginny answered sitting in one of the two chairs in front of the large oak desk.

“I was guessing that was Lily, but I didn’t want to go check it our, thinking it could have been you.” Harry said with a sly smile.

“Harry this has to stop. If it doesn’t she wont be able to perform her Crowned Princess duties and lock herself up in her room for the rest of her life.” Ginny said. “I’ll even bet she wont leave the castle for the next few weeks, even then I don’t think people will stop talking about this.”

“Your right this does have to stop. I’ll get some people to find out who’s been taking these pictures of Lily and see what I can do.” Harry said, standing and walking around the desk to hug Ginny. He knew that the articles the press put into the paper didn’t only effect Lily, but the rest of the family. “I can’t promise this will all go away. We’re the Royal family after all and if we weren’t this would still be happening because of who I am. But in the mean time try and get Lily out of the castle as much as you can. Take her into Muggle London, not to many people know us there.”

“I’ll try, but I’m not promising anything. Besides I have a birthday Ball to plain.” Ginny said giving him a kiss on the lips.

“Err. . . .yes, I’m turning thirty-seven this year aren’t I? Merlin I’m old.” Harry said, kissing Ginny’s forehead.

“Not as old as dad or Dumbledore yet.” Ginny said “Just find out who’s behind the pictures and articles, please.”

“Don’t worry I’ll find out who it is.” Harry said, as he watch Ginny walk out of the office. He gave a heavy sigh and walked over to the fireplace. He took a pinch of Floo Powder and threw it in. “Head Auror Office, Ronald Weasley.” a moment latter Ron’s head popped into the fireplace.

“Harry?” Ron was “Why ya calling?”

“Did you read the paper this morning?” Harry asked his best friend/brother-in-law.

“Didn’t get a chance to. Why?” Ron answered.

“I think you should.” Harry answered passing the paper threw the fire.

“Oh Merlin.” Ron said reading the front page of the paper. “You’ve got to be kidding me! Both the family reunion and Lily’s Crowning Ball where press free.”

“Wish I was Ron. But I’m not. Ginny wants this to stop and I don’t blame her. Having Lily upset all the time puts a damper on the rest of the family.” Harry said. “This is already getting to Gin.”

“Let me guess, you want me to find out who’s behind it all?” Ron asked

“That’s exactly what I want. You can also tell anyone in the family to keep an extra eye out. Especially Penelope, Rob, Luna, and Jane to let us know if they suspect someone from the Daily Prophet or the Quibbler.” Harry said “Since Luna owns the Quibbler, and everything has to go threw her to be published, I don’t think there’s a problem there. But the Prophet. . . .”

“Yeah, I know. I’ll let everyone know. Even dad. I’ll ask him what he thinks.” Ron said “Tell you what. I’ll get my best Auror’s and make it a top secret investigation.”

“Thanks Ron.” Harry said.

“How’d Lily take it?” Ron asked, not wanting to know the answer.

“Let’s just say she can give Ginny a run for her money. Her temper is a bad mix of Weasley, Evens, and Potter tempers. Think Merlin she’s the only one with it.” Harry answered.

“Sounds like you ave your hands full. I’d feel sorry for you, but I’ve got to deal with Hermione and Jane.” Ron said “Well I’ll get right on this and talk to you later.”

“Thanks again Ron, Bye.” Harry said as Ron’s head popped out of the fire.
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Hey guys, I just realized that your right it probably is too many people, but i figured that i should have a back ground on everyone before i started writting. So sorry about all the names. Even though i think that everyone is important within the story, i'm not going to be using everyone. i will be mostly using Harry, Ginny, Arthur and Molly Weasley, Jane, Alex, and the eight Potter kids, Max, and Lily's Aunt and Uncles, and some cousins, Maybe? I don't know yet. So don't worry about trying to remember everyone of Lily's cosuns. But one to another note. Here's the next bit of Chapter Two. Hope you enjoy!

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At the Lupins house, Alex sat in front of the living room fireplace, watching it’s flames dace around the logs. He then heard a soft scream and a loud crashing of a mug or glass hitting the floor in the kitchen. Alex stood up, his wand drown, and ran into the kitchen. His sister, Crystal, and brother, Derek, where standing in the backdoor door way with their wands outs as well, and their father, Remus, came running in from the dinning room.

Their mother, Tonks, was standing in the middle of the kitchen with big eyes staring at the morning paper in her hand, that was holding it with a death grip. Her coffee mug lay broken at her feet. Remus waved his wand at the mug and picked it up off the floor. “Tonks, you okay?” he asked his wife. She turned to him and held up the paper for him and their children to read the front page. Remus dropped the mug again. While Crystal let out a small scream, Derek was smiling a little thinking the whole thing was funny. Alex showed no emotion as he took the paper out of his mother’s hands and read
he article out loud for them to hear.

“It has come to this paper’s attention that our Newly Crowned Princess has fallen in love with not only the young and handsome, Maxwell Smith, but also her best friend of seventeen years, Alexander Remus Lupin, the part Werewolf. Who’s the son of the Potter and Weasley family friend, Remus J. Lupin, who teaches Defence Against the Dark Art’s at Hogwarts, and his wife Nymphadora Tonks-Lupin, the Ex-Auror. . . .” Alex read, looking sick to his stomach.

“Oh Merlin. Lily’s going to kill someone when she sees this.” Crystal said, looking at the pictures over Alex’s shoulder.

“I’m going over to see how she’s doing.” Alex said passing the paper to his fifteen year old sister and walking over to the fireplace. “Potter Castle” he said as he threw Floo Powder into the fire.

“Maybe this isn’t a bad thing.” Remus said, as he watched Alex vanish in green flames.

“What do you mean Remus?”” Tonks asked looking at his thoughtful face.

“Maybe Alex will finally tell Lily how he truly feels about her.” Remus said, taking the paper from Crystal and studying the pictures and re-reading the article again.

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Alex arrived in the Entrance Hall of ‘Potter Castle’. He looked around and saw that there was no one around. “Aunt Ginny? Lily? James? Anyone?” He yelled out not knowing where everyone was.

“ALEX!” came Lily’s voice from the top of the stairs in front of him. Lily ran down them and into Alex’s comforting arms and wrapped her own around his neck, burring her face into his shoulder as he held her close when he realized she was crying.

“It’s alright Lily.” Alex whispered into her ear as he noticed her sisters and Ginny arrive in the Entrance Hall. “Shhh!”

“Your not mad are you?” asked Ginny, as she came up to the two of them.

“Why would I be mad?” Alex asked, knowing that everyone knew how much he loved the woman in his arms. “It’s just a bunch of rumor’s that aren’t true.”

“Girls come on. Alex can take it from here.” Ginny said, giving Alex a look that clearly said ‘Tell her the truth.’ Then she, Ginger, Kate and Susie walked out of the Entrance Hall and into the drawing room that was located to the right of the stairs.

“Lily you okay?” Alex asked, concern dripping in his voice as he held her close. Lily backed off a bit, still in his arms, but enough where she could look him in the face. She whipped her cat like eyes with a shaky hand.

“What have I ever done for them run my name threw the mud?” She asked. Alex lead her into the living room to the left of the Hall and sat her down on one of the many couches. The living room was big enough to hold their whole family in it and then some.

“Lily, you haven’t done anything to get this. It’s just a bunch of people who want to break you. Make you look worse than you really are.” Alex said, holding her as he sat with her on the couch. “You can’t let the press rule your life, or any one else. It’s your life no one else’s.” Lily looked up at him and thought ‘When did he get so sensitive?’

“Dad say’s the same thing.” she said studying his face.

“I know, he’s the one I got it from.” Alex answered trying to make her smile which worked as she let out a small laugh.

“I’m being silly.” Lily said sitting up.

“You have a right to be upset, you know.” Alex said, watching her as the fire place flamed into green flames and out stepped Jane.

“Oh Lily!” Jane said, running over to where Lily set next to Alex. “This is the worst thing they could accuse you of.” she added hugging her.

“Thanks Jane.” Lily said, hugging Jane back. “Dad has Uncle Ron working on trying to find out who’s taking the pictures and writing the articles. Their also asking Grandpa what he thinks we should do.”

“Dad called the house to tell us to read the morning paper. After I read the article I came straight here.” Jane said.

“Well I defiantly don’t want to go out today.” Lily said leaning back into the couch.

“Well I’m not going to let you set around the castle and be board out of your mind.” Jane said.

“Don’t you two have work?” Lily asked looking at her two best friends.

“Aunt Luna will understand if I’m here comforting you.” Jane said.

“And I don’t start my Quidditch practice for another week.” Alex said. “So I’ll stay with you as well.”

Just then the fireplace flamed green again and out steeped Max Smith. “Oh Max!” Lily said, standing up and going to the tall handsome, blond hair man, that stood in front of the fireplace. She wrapped he arms around him.

“I guess you’ve already read the paper this morning?” he asked in a silky smooth voice, that would make any girl fall head over heals for him.

“Merlin yes and it’s not what it looks like.” Lily said “Alex is one of my best and closest friend.”

“Lily I know. I’m not mad at you. I’m mad at the paper.” Max said, yet eyeing Alex with hatred. Alex returned the look. “I just wanted to come by and see if you where alright. And seeing that your friends are here, my worry level has calmed greatly.” Max added ling through his teeth, at the fact that he was happy to see Alex there with Lily.

“You already have so much to worry about, than just me.” Lily said, looking up at him. “But think you for stopping by.”

“Your welcome. I have to get to work, but I’ll stop by after words and see how your doing.” Max said, kissing Lily, then flooing from ‘Potter Castle’. Jane looked over at Alex and saw the look he had for Max.

“Well come on you two, lets do something.” She said getting them to get out of their thoughts.

“Yes, lets.” Lily said answering first.

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Yes, i can see where Lily is way to much into herself, but soon, very soon she will see the errer of her ways, in more ways than just one, hopfuly. But anyways. Here's the last bit of chapter two. Keep telling me what ya all think.

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“I found a very juicy rumor, while working on hat picture case Harry.” Ron said, standing at Harry’s private office door five months after the newspaper had started printing pictures of Lily, Max, and Alex, and writing horrible articles about Lily.

“Yeah?” Harry said motioning for Ron to close the office door and take a set.

“Did you know that Draco Malfoy had a son?” Ron asked sitting down in front of Harry.

“No, but what does that have to do with Lily?” Harry asked, with a confused look.

“Well, I’ll tell ya.” Ron said getting comfy in the chair. “We finally found the person who took those and other pictures of Lily, his name is Phish Williams. When we asked him who hired him, he answered Max Malfoy. But we never knew Draco had a son. So we asked Mr. Williams to show us a picture or something that could prove it. Well Mr. Williams pulled out several pictures of the Max person. Including the one that we saw five months ago. He said that the Max, our dear Lily is now seeing is the son of Draco Malfoy and Pancy Perkinson.”

“That can’t be right?” Harry said, sitting back in his chair and studying Ron’s face. Nominally people would crumply under Harry’s stair, but this was Ron and Ron knew better than most to look Harry in the eye when you told him something as important as this.

“Oh we didn’t think so either, until we got a hold of some hair from Max and from the DNA we already had from Draco , proved otherwise. Then we check out Max. It turns out Draco never knew he had a son up until a year ago. When max went looking for him.” Ron said.

“Lily’s not going to like this.” Harry said “max told her his last name was Smith. She hates being lied to as much as I do. Or even more.”

“Yes, but we can’t do anything until he messes up with Lily.” Ron said.

“What do you mean?” Harry asked.

“Well many reasons. One we know why he told Lily his last name was Smith. Shortly after Pancy left Draco, she married a man named Justin Smith. The only reason Max went looking for Draco was after Pancy told him who his real father was before she died two years ago. I also found out that Max hated his step-father, just as much as you hate Draco.” Ron started to answer. “We also found that Max is taking some of the similar steps as Draco and his father took.” Ron watched Harry’s face, turn from unbelieving to out right angry.

“Right. I want you to find out every thing dear old Max is up to. And find out where Draco has been all this time.” Harry said, in an angry voice. Not liking what he was hearing from Ron’s report.

“Right-o. Harry I’m sorry to bring such bad news, but I didn’t want to do it tonight at the Christmas Ball.” Ron said, as he got up to leave.

“It’s all right Ron. Now I can have a reason to watch Max with out feeling guilty about it.” Harry said, as Ron left the office. Harry sat thinking. He hoped to Merlin, himself, that the next few day’s, weeks, maybe month’s would go by without anymore problems for Lily or the rest of the family.

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At the beinging of chapter two it was like a week or two after the Fmaily reunion. but for five months Ron and his team of Auror's have been working on finding out who was taking those pictures and writting the articles about Lily. So please don't be confused with the time line. Hope you liked. Keep me posted on what you think. Love ya all.
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‘Potter Castle’ was full of laughter and chatter. Lily stood on the second floor balcony in her floor length ball gown, that was the same color as her emerald green cat like eyes. Her flaming red hair was up in an elegant bu with two stains framing her angle like face. Around her neck she wore the crystal heart necklace Harry had given her on her seventeenth birthday. She stood on the balcony over looking everyone who was invited to the ‘Royal Family Christmas Ball’ that took place two days before Christmas Eve, every year. Ginny had once again out done herself with the décor. Lily smiled at the thought. She watched her parents and some other guest dance on the Ballroom dance floor. The rest of the guest where standing around talking to each other. Everything, it seemed, was perfect. As she thought this she felt a pair of strong arms wrap around her waste. Her smile grew even bigger, as she turned around and face the person behind her. “Hey beautiful!” max said kissing her on the lips softly.

“Hey yourself. Why may I ask, are you late?” Lily asked, looking him in the eye.

“I have some family business to take care of.” he answered, pulling her closer, but when he did Lily didn’t catch the evil glint in his brownish-gray eyes.

“Well now that you’re here, you can come dance with me.” Lily said, pulling away and leading him down to the dance floor. Neither of them noticed as an Auror stepped out of the shadows of the second floor. ‘Ron was right. He needs to go.’ thought the Auror as he watched them enter the Ball room below.

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Alex sat at a table in a corner of the Ball room, that had a very good, close view of the guest dancing on the dance floor. He was watching them dance, well he was watching Lily more than anyone else. He was so busy watching her, that he never noticed his father sit down at the table with him. “You know if you keep watching her she’s going to notice.” Remus said, noting Alex jump a little and look at him.

“Who’s going to notice?” Alex asked, taking a drink of his Butterbeer, and acting like he was innocent of watching Lily.

“Lily, who else?” Remus asked watching his eldest son.

“I’m not just watching Lily. . . .I’m watching everyone.” Alex replied ling through his teeth.

“Could have fooled me.” Remus said. “If you where watching everyone, then why haven’t your eye’s moved from Lily for the last, oh say, fifteen minutes?” Remus asked. He could see that Alex was trying to not watch Lily dance in her new emerald green strapless dress. Then added “Why don’t you just tell her already?”

“I can’t.” Alex replied.

“Why not? Being a Werewolf never stopped me from telling your mother how I felt.” Remus said, remembering how he and Tonks had confessed their love for each other.

“That’s different dad. Mom wasn’t going out with your biggest enemy.” Alex said.

“Alex it doesn’t matter. I can tell you right now that given the choice between you and Max, Lily would choose you. Only thing she needs to know are your feelings on the subject and she’d choose.” Remus said.

“And Max would give her and me the death glair or worse. No thinks dad.” Alex said.

“If Max had a problem with Lily’s choose, then he would not only be facing Lily but the rest of this family. Of course we all know how Lily gets when she’s angry.” Remus answered, “Alex, if you don’t tell her your true feeling soon. Your going to lose her forever.” and with that said Remus stood up and left his son there to think of his words. Alex sat there lost in thought, lost in the truth of his father’s words. ‘What harm would it do?’ he asked himself, as he watched Lily dace with Harry. He took the last sip of his Butterbeer, sighed, and walked out the door to the garden. As he walked out of the Ball room, he didn’t even notice that the song that had been playing was now finished.

Lily saw Alex walk into the gardens, before that, she had seen him talking with Remus. He looked kind of out of the Christmas spirit. “Thank you daddy. But I think I need to go check on Alex.” she said to her father, who also saw Alex and Remus talking then Alex leaving the Ball room.

“Your welcome Lily. I’ll go find out from Remus what’s wrong.” Harry said, then watched her walk out of the Ball room and into he garden. He then made his way over to where Remus stood talking with Tonks and Ginny. “So what happened with Alex?” Harry asked.

“He’s afraid to tell Lily how he feels about her. And watching her dance with Max was killing him inside, cause he wont tell her.” Remus answered.

“Oh is that all? Well if you want to know, Lily just followed him out into the garden.” Harry said.

“Isn’t it freezing out there?” Tonks asked.

“There’s a Warming charm on the whole garden for anyone that wants some fresh air.” Ginny answered with a smile.

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Lily found Alex sitting on a stone bench by the water fountain in the middle of the garden. He had his head in his hands, messing up his neat sandy-brown hair. “May I join you?” She asked, walking close to him. He looked up at her and nodded his head while he moved over to make room for her to set. She watched him for a bit then asked “Care to share what’s bothering you?”

“Not really.” Alex answered not looking at her.

“Why not?” Lily asked a little taken aback.

“It’s complicated and I wouldn’t know where to start.” he answered looking up at the water fountain in front of them.

“Alex, you can tell me anything.” She said, reaching out to take one of his hands, when he stood up and walked a little bit away from her.

“Not this I can’t” he said. Lily was now very confused. This was not the Alex she knew and loved. She saw him take a breath before he turned and faced her. “Lily, have you ever been in love with a person that you knew you couldn’t tell?”

Lily looked at him and thought of her answered. She was in love, she was in love with him, yet she denied it. Alex had been one of her best friends for seventeen years. “I can’t say tat I have.” oh how she wanted to tell him she knew what he felt, but she couldn’t make her self say it.

“Then you can’t help me.” Alex said, turning away again.

“Alex, I can try and help. Tell me who your in love with and I can try and get her to see how great you are.” Lily said. Alex picked up the sadness in her voice. He turned back around to answer her, when he saw Max walk around the corner of the path.

“Oh there you are Lily.” Max said. “Your mom wanted to talk to you.”

“Oh alright.” Lily said then she turned back to Alex. “We’ll talk more later, right?”

“Yeah, go talk to your mom.” Alex said with a forced smile. After Lily left, his face turned to dislike as he faced Max. “If you ever hurt her Malfoy, your dead.”

“Who said I’d hurt her?” Max asked. Alex saw the glint in his eyes.

“I’m just saying that if you ever do. I’m the one you’d be facing.” Alex said, then followed the path Lily took. Max followed him.

“Your just mad cause you can’t have her.” He said as they got closer to the castle. Alex stopped. “That’s right. I’ve already have had her in my bed. And Merlin was she excellent.” At that Alex turned around and punched Max in the face.

“DON’T YOU EVER TALK ABOUT LILY LIKE THAT!” He screamed, as the fought. Before Alex could punch Max again he was pulled off of him by Harry and Remus. While Charlie and Ron held Max back.

“Let me at him!” Max yelled, struggling to break free of Charlie and Ron.

“Stop this at once. Your both grown men here.” Arthur said. “Now what started this?” They all knew what ther fight was about, but not what got Alex so angry to actually his Max. Neither Max or Alex would answered Arthur. So he turned to Alex. “Alex?”

Alex was still being held back by his father and godfather. “It doesn’t matter.” he said, shoving Harry and Remus off of him. Before he turned to leave he faced Max. “Be warned Malfoy. The next time we’re alone, you’d better wish you’d never touched Lily.” Then he walked off. The other’s that where left looked at Max.

“Well then. I guess I’ll just be going.” he said, with a visible gulp as he saw the looks Lily’s male relatives where giving him.

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After hearing about the fight between Alex and Max, Lily spent two day’s trying to get everything out of her older brothers, male cousins, Uncles, grandfather, and father. All of which told her that Alex said it didn’t matter. “Why are the men of this family so difficult?” she asked as she sat in the living room of ‘Potter Castle’ with her Aunt’s, female cousin’s, younger sisters, grandmother, and her mother. She hadn’t seen Alex or Max for the past two day’s. Max had sent a note telling her he had some family business to take care of. And Alex, well she wasn’t sure where he was. So here she sat with the rest of the females of her big family, like they did every Christmas Eve.

“Lily there men, their all difficult.” Ginny said flipping the page of the magazine she was reading.

“Enough talk about the men. Let’s talk about something that matters.” Kate said from the floor by the fireplace, where she, Ginger, and Crystal where playing exploding snap.

“You just play your game and let the rest of us talk about what we want Katherine.” Ginny said putting the magazine down.

“Dad did tell you what happened, didn’t he?” Lily asked. Ginny locked eyes with Tonks, and the rest of the older women in the room. As usual all their husbands had told them what was going on. Especially between Alex, Lily, and Max.

“Yes he did tell me what happened and a little bit more.” Ginny answered with a guilty look.

“Tell me then. I need to know what happened between my best friend and boyfriend!” Lily said, looking at Ginny for answers.

“Don’t you mean to put Max first dear?” Molly asked, Lily turned to look at her grandmother with a confused look. “Well you put Alex before Max.”

“So?” Lily asked, not understanding what her grandmother was saying.

“Molly’s right. You put your best friend before your boyfriend.” Alicia said.

“It doesn’t mean anything.” Lily said.

“Oh yes it does. It shows which you care about most.” Hermione said.

“But I care about both of them!” Lily answered.

“The same way?” Fleur asked

“What do you mean ‘The same way’?” Lily asked her French Aunt, still really confused about what they all where asking.

“Do you care about Alex and Max in the same way?” Ginny asked, getting Lily to look at her. Lily was still really confused of what was happening. Ginny saw that clearly in her cat like eyes. “Let me put it this way. We all know you care for Alex and Max right?”

“Yeah.” Lily answered.

“Now do you see Max and yourself in a way more than being girlfriend/boyfriend?” Ginny asked watching Lily’s eyes as they changed from confusion to understanding.

Then Lily looked down at her hands and answered. “I don’t know.” She answered truthfully. It was true that she didn’t know if she loved Max as she did Alex.

“Okay, do you see Alex and yourself in a relationship that’s more than best friends?” Ginny asked, now every female in the room froze as they waited for Lily’s answer. They had all seen the looks she and Alex gave each other. Lily looked at her mother. She so wanted to say; ‘Yes, with all my heart!’, but what would they say if she did? What would happen if something went on between her and Alex. ‘Lily just answer with your heart. Let it guide you. Don’t hid from it!’ those where words her father once said to her. He said those words on her seventeenth birthday when he gave her, her crystal heart necklace that she never took off. She reached up to fiddle with it and closed her eyes thinking of that day so many months ago.

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“When your true love tells you he loves you and you tell him the same, and you seal that bond with a kiss only then will your souls become one.” Harry said.

“But how do I find my true love dad? It’s not like he’s here or anything.” Lily said.

“You’ll know. It’s the way he will smile when you walk into the same room. It’s the way you fit perfectly into his arms. The way he con comfort you with no problem, how easily he is to talk to. All these things are important Lily. The key thing is observation. Observe your surroundings Lily. Take in everything you see and how it feels. If it feels like it belongs in your life then it does.” Harry answered “once you find him and mated your souls, your necklace will glow the deepest color of red and you will be one forever.”

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Lily re-opened her eyes and looked at her mother. Love flowed in her eyes. “I’ve go to go.” she said standing up and walking out of the living room, before she made it to the door she turned to Tonks. “Aunt Tonks, where can I find Alex?”

“Last I knew he was up in the library.” Tonks answered.

“Thank you.” Lily said and then left. They all watched her leave then they turned to Ginny, who wore a very big smile.

“What just happened there?” Angelina asked her.

“She just realized she’s in love with Alex and not Max.” Ginny answered.

“How?” Hermione asked, taking Lily’s seat on the couch.

“Well you know that crystal heart necklace around Lily’s neck?” Ginny asked the room and saw them all nod their heads. “Well Harry gave that to her on her seventeenth birthday saying that when she finds her true love and they tell each other how they feel and seal it with a kiss, they crystal heart will glow the deepest color of red. And their souls will be joined as one.”

“How would she know who her true love is?” Rebecca asked.

“How’d you know Charlie was for you? Or Bill? Or Fred? Or George? Or Percy? Or Ron? Or Remus? Or Neville? OR Dad? Or Harry for myself?” Ginny asked “when I’m with Harry it feels right. I fit perfectly in his arms. He’s easy for me to talk to about a problem. Every time I walk into the same room as him, his smile changes at the sight of me. Lily just realized who her true love is by that. Who do you all know comes to see she’s alright, right after something in the paper first? How dose she go to most often when she has a problem? Who’s smile changes when she walks into the same room as him? And who loves her more than anything else n the world?” Ginny asked all her nieces, sister-in-laws, friends, mother, and daughters. They all looked at each other as they all realized who Ginny was talking about.

“Alex!” Tonks said in a husked whisper. “That why she put him before Max with out realizing it.”

"Yes and we just helped her realize it.” Ginny said wit ha satisfied smile on her face.

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Chapter Four
Feelings Are Shared


Lily found Alex sitting in the library just like Tonks said he was. He sat in front of the fire place watching the warm flames dance in the grate. He looked like he had lost all hope and everything that he held dear in his short life of seventeen years. But Lily knew better to think of such things. Who was she kidding? This was the man she had loved since she was little. But she never realized that the love she had always thought was sisterly or just love of a best friend, had actually been love of a lover. And she did love Alex as a lover. He was the man of her dreams. She wanted nothing but him and only him.

“I know your there Lily.” came Alex’s voice, breaking her out of her trance of watching him sit there.

“You’ve always did like watching the fire.” She said as she walked closer to him and sat down on the couch beside him.

“What do you want?” he asked not willing himself to look at her.

“Oh I want many things. But from you, only a few things.” Lily answered catching him off guard making him look at her with confusion written clearly on his face.

“What?” he asked.

“You heard me.” She answered.

“That’s not what I meant Lily.” Alex said, turning back to the fire. “I meant what do you want from me?”

“I thought that was clear. Well it is to the rest of the family, but I guess you haven’t noticed it.” she answered. “I want the truth and nothing but the truth Alex.” she added. Looking at him studying his face.

“Sorry, the truth of what?” Alex asked looking at her.

“Why you and Max were fighting two days ago?” she answered, full knowing of why they where fighting, even though it did take her a year and several months to realize the truth of the whole situation she know found herself in.

“Why don’t you ask Max? I’m sure his more than will to tell you.” Alex said, standing up and walking to the window. He could see that the grounds of ‘Potter Castle’ where now covered in snow and more was falling from the gray sky above.

“Oh don’t give my that crape Alex. I know why you two fight and hate each other.” Lily said angrily as she stood up and faced Alex’s back.

“Then why are you asking me if you already know Lily?” Alex asked, his anger building up, but he knew he could never raise his voice to her. He took a breath before facing her again. “You know what never mind. I’m not going to ague with you over this.” He added leaving the Library. Lily stood there for a bit trying to keep her own anger in control, before she went after Alex.

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By the time she caught up with him, he was getting ready to leave through the main entrance of the castle. “Don’t You Dear Walk Out That Door, Alexander Remus Lupin!” Lily yelled from the bottom of the stairs, in an unbelievable tone that wasn’t hers. She was now glowing in a soft golden light. Alex stopped a few feet from the doors and turned to look at her. Lily’s yell had got the attention of the family that where in the living room to the left of the Hall and in the rec room to the right of the Hall. Neither Alex or Lily notice them enter the entrance hall and start watching them.

In a soft calm voice that was laced with anger Alex spoke. “And if I do?” Lily didn’t answer him as they locked eyes. Baby blue meeting Emerald green. “That’s what I though. You can’t stop me Lillian, so don’t even try.” he then turned away and took a few steps towards the doors again.

“Don’t even try, you say. Alex you can’t just up and walk away from being best friends with someone for seventeen years. It’s not done that way and you know it.” Lily said. She watched his back. He didn’t say anything. She knew he was thinking of her words, but also knew that he was angry with her as she watched him clench his fist at his sides. “This isn’t just about me dating Max is it?”

There it was, the ever question Alex wished to Merlin she would not ask. Without looking at her he answered. “It doesn’t concern you Lillian. So just leave it be.” He said as he pushed his hardest to keep his anger under control.

“None of my concern? Alex when something comes between my best friend and boyfriend it becomes my concern.” Lily yelled. “And I’m not going to let you leave till I get to the bottom of this.”

“Then choose Lily. Choose between Max and I.” Alex said turning to face her.

“You want me to choose between you and Max?” she asked

“Yes. Your choice decides if I stay or leave!” Alex said watching her closely.

“Alex you know I can’t choose between you and Max. It isn’t fair!” She said.

“No one said it was going to be fair Lily. Life isn’t fair. You can’t have everything go your way all the time. So Choose!” Alex yelled. Everyone watching gasped. Not once in seventeen years had they ever heard Alex yell at Lily. Lily was the one that did the yelling, but out of all the times she yelled at Alex, he anger was caused by someone other than him, and he was only yelled at to get her to calm down. They never had a real fight before this. “Damn your pride Lily. No matter how much you want Max and I to get along, it will never happen. And I’m not going to sit by and let him rub it in my face any longer. He doesn’t deserve your love, he’s not even worth all of this. Max is only with you because your apart of the Royal family. He’s after our title and your money. He doesn’t love you.” He pleaded, running a hand threw his sandy-brown hair.

“Alex I don’t believe that. It’s not possible. And I’m not going to choice between you.” Lily answered.

“Then I guess there’s nothing else for me here.” Alex said turning back to the doors. As he tried the open it, he found that it was locked with a powerful Locking charm. In frustration he yelled and turned back to Lily. “Open the damn door Lillian!”

“No! I’m not finish with this!” Lily yelled back.

“Damn it Lillian. How many times do I have to tell you that you can’t have everything!” he yelled.

“I don’t want everything Alexander. The only thing I’ve always wanted was you. Just you! But every time I tried to say something about my true feelings, I couldn’t make myself say the words.” Lily yelled, tears started to cloud her vision out of anger, frustration, and sadness. “Merlin Alex, I tried to forget these feelings, but I can’t! I tired dating, but you where always there to comfort me in a way that no one, but my father, knew how. I didn’t realize what was happening till my seventeenth birthday, when I introduced you all to Max.” She took a breath and whipped angrily at her eyes. “I didn’t realize how much going out with him would hurt our relationship. Us being best friends, when it’s so clear to everyone we know that we love each other more than we truly know.”

Everyone was quite including Alex as Lily went on with her rate. “Alex my father told me something on my birthday when he gave me my necklace. He said the best way to find your true love is observation. ‘Observer your surroundings Lily. Take in everything you see and how it feels. If it feels like it belongs in your life then it does.’ That’s what he said.” Lily took another breath. “I took his advice and I observed my surroundings Alex. And you know what I found?”

“No!” Alex answered in a soft voice watching her.

“I found Max didn’t belong. You tell me to choose between you and I can’t, because I’ve already made my mind up. I made it up when I was trying to find out why the two of you where fighting at the Christmas Ball. You where fighting because Max knew you loved me! The reason I now know this is because of my aunts, grandmother, and my mother. I gave up in finding out from the men of this family, but I knew that they would have told their wives.” she took a breath and looked up trying to willed herself to stop crying so she could finish what she started. Then she squared her shoulders and looked Alex in the eye. “But when I asked mom said dad told her. Then I said something that caught the attention of my aunts and grandmother. I put you in front of Max. They started asking if I cared about Max more than you, or you more than Max. At first I said I cared about both of you." she took a breath before going on. "But then mom stepped in and asked the two questions that told me everything. She asked if I saw Max and I more than girlfriend/boyfriend. I told her I didn’t know. Then she asked if I saw us being more than best friends. That’s when it hit me. I remembered something dad had said about finding your true love. He said that it’s the way he would look at me, the way I would feel safe in his comforting arms, fitting perfectly like I belonged there. Dad also said that he would always be the very first person that would come and comfort me when something horrible happened. And he would be the first person I would look for when I needed to talk.” she paused and smiled to her self as she thought of what she just said. “I thought about his words Alex. Dad wasn’t just talking about anyone, he was talking about you. Dad was pointing me in your direction. To see you, the real you. The you that only I can see, the you, that you only let me see and no one else. I realized. . . .I realized I’ve been in love with you the whole time. . . .I was never in love with Max or any of my other boyfriends. I only dated them so I could try and forget my true feelings.” She whipped at her eyes again. “But I can’t do it any more Alex. I can’t live my life in denial any longer. I don’t want everything! I don’t want the world. I just want you and everything that makes you who you are. The real you that’s I’ve always loved.” There she said it, all of it. She just lead her whole heart out for him to take. She just told them all that Alex was the only one for her.

It was all now in Alex’s hands. It was his to decide what to do next. Alex looked down at the floor. He had no idea this would happen. He had never been one to say what he truly felt, well not where Lily was concerned. He had always excepted the fact that he couldn’t have her to call his own. But here she was spilling her heart out to him. Telling him her true feelings, that it had always been him that owned her heart. He looked up at her. He could see the love flowing through her cat like eyes. The very eyes he loved to get lost in. He could see that she had gone from being angry with him to seeing how much she would hurt if he left and never returned. And for the first time in seventeen years, he was able to see her true feelings. He was lost for words at how beautiful she looked at that moment. But he knew what she truly wanted and that was just him. “You truly love me?” he asked in a choked voice, as he slowly started to walk towards her. Lily nodded her head afraid of what might happen if she spoke. “And you don’t want everything?” Alex asked stepping closer. She nodded again. “Just me?”

“Just you.” she finally whispered as he stood right in front of her. Tears where still falling from her beautiful emerald green cat like eyes. But Alex could see the love in them. He reached up and creased her face, whipping her fallen tears away with hi thumb.

“Don’t cry Lily. I hate it when you cry.” He whispered to her, while wrapping his other arm around her waste pulling her to him. She snaked her arms up and around his neck as he whispered on her lips. “I love you Lillian!” and then he kissed her.

As their lips touched, all their love for each other was told. Alex drew her closer to him and deepened their kiss. The crystal heart necklace around Lily’s neck started to glow. That glow grew until it surrounded both Lily and Alex in a bright golden light. As the light surrounded them, it lifted them up in the air. They could feel each other as if their souls had been made as one. The golden glow slowly ebbed away as it brought them back to the floor and they broke their kiss. Lily looked into Alex’s baby blue eyes and saw his love for her, and the look of triumph. She smiled up at him and he smiled back at her.

They where then brought out of their trance as someone clapped. They looked around to see Max standing by the fireplace in the Entrance Hall. “Oh bravo! Bravo Alex. You have finally managed to still the woman I love from me.” They could see the look of disgust written clearly on his face.

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“What are you doing here?” Alex asked, his part Werewolf anger clear in his voice.

“Oh, I just came by to wish my girlfriend Merry Christmas. But when I get here. What do I find? I find you fighting, confessing your love for one another in front of your whole family, then if I didn’t know any better, I believe that you just mated your souls together.” Max said. “I know see where I lie with you all.”

“Max perhaps we can talk about this in private?” Lily asked now noticing her family and friends watching the scene.

“Talk in private? I think not Lillian. You just had a whole conversation in public.” Max said, anger laced in his un-calm voice.

“For your information my family are not public. And at the time I didn’t realize they where watching.” Lily said, with an cold anger that could make your blood run cold. Se didn’t like the way Max was talking to her or of her family. “So if you please, we will take this to the study.”

“Lily take it up to my private office.” Harry said stepping in. “You’ll have more privacy there.”

“Thank you dad.” Lily said, then she looked between Alex and Max. “Both of you upstairs. NOW!”

“I thought it was going to be just you and me Lillian.” Max hissed.

“Here’s a news flash Maxwell. This whole thing is about all three of us. So therefore Alex will be joining us in my father’s office. Do I make my self clear?” Lily said putting a stop to Max from trying to talk to her alone. In the back of her mind she didn’t feel safe with him anymore. When Max didn’t reply she turned on her heel and marched up the stairs to her father’s private office. Both men followed her from the Entrance Hall.

“Well that was fun. What’s next?” James asked.

“I would love to know what will happen up there!” Sirius said watching his sister and the two men that where fighting over her walk up the stairs. “How much do you want to bet the Lily’s going to be kicking Max out the door when they come back down?” he asked James who stood to his right.

“I’ll take that bet. How much are we betting?” James asked turning to his brother.

“Boys! You are not going to bet on how your sister is going to kick Max out. Go back to your games and leave it be.” Ginny said.

“Oh come on Ginny. Their just having some fun. Just like the rest of us.” Fred said with a evil twin smile. George, who stood next to him, had the same one. Everyone laughed at that. And so bets where made on how Lily would kick Max out of the castle.

“Harry?” asked Arthur, walking over to him.

“Yes Arthur.” Harry answered with a satisfied smile on his face.

“Why did you tell Lily to talk in your office?” Arthur asked out of wondering.

“Oh. I think it’s the perfect place for them to talk.” Harry answered

“Why?”

“Because I left Ron’s Auror report on my desk.” Harry said walking away from his bemused father-in-law.

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Lily walked into Harry’s private office in a huff and walked straight to the window that was behind Harry’s desk. Max followed right behind her and stood in the middle of the room in front of the desk. While Alex quietly closed the door and stood over by the fire place. He didn’t know exactly why Lily wanted him to be there, but he was happy that she wasn’t going to talk to Max alone. He watched Lily take a deep breath before turning to face the both of them. She looked at them both.

“Well Lillian, what do you have to say for yourself?” Max asked watching her every move.

“What do I have to say for myself? Well one thing is clear Max. I was never in love with you.” Lily said, then looking down as she stood behind Harry’s desk. Something caught her eye. ‘Why would dad have a Auror report with Max’s name on it?’ she asked herself as she picked the file up. She held her hand up to Max to stop him from replying as she read the file.

Alex could see her face go from confusion to anger faster that anything he had ever seen. He saw her emerald green cat like eye flair in green flam as she read the file in her hand. “Lily?” he asked taking a step closer to the desk.

“You lied!” Lily finally said looking up at Max with flaming green cat like eyes. It you had ever seen a cat angry with you, will lets just say the way Lily looked was not a pretty sight to see. “You lied to me!”

“I didn’t lie to you about anything.” Max said trying to defined himself. Lily could see the look of guilt in his eyes.

“Then how do you explain this?” She asked taking out a photo of Max talking with a known Death Eater. “Or this?” She took another photo out of Max sleeping with another woman. “Or how do you explain these DNA test results between you and Draco Malfoy?”

“Draco Malfoy is my real father. My mother left him before she knew she was having me. Then she married my step-father.” Max answered “Who’s last name was Smith. So I never lied to you about my name.”

“So your saying you lied to me about everything else?” Lily asked her anger flaring again.

“I don’t know who that woman is. I’ve never seen her before. And if your accusing me being a Death Eater, I can most defiantly say I am not one.” Max said. Alex and Lily both could hear the denial in his voice.

“Okay. If you say that you don’t know this woman, then why are there all of these pictures of you with her?” Lily asked angrily “You know what never mind. Don’t answer because I already know it.” Lily threw down the file on her father’s desk. “I want you out of this castle. Never return! Never come near my family and friends! If you do then there will be a price to pay for your actions!” Lily said.

“You can’t kick me out!” Max yelled angrily at her.

“Oh like **** I can!” Lily yelled back. “This is my home and I will not be treated like this. You have lied to me and I do not like being lied to. You have five minutes to leave on your own or I will have a House Elf escort you out. Do I make myself clear Maxwell?”

“I will have you!” Max said.

“No you wont, because my soul and heart are now one with Alex.” Lily said “Now leave!” Max looked between Alex and Lily. Anger was clearly written on his face. “And don’t even think about coursing anyone on your way out!” Lily added.

“This isn’t over Lillian! In the end you will be mine!” Max said as he left the office. Leaving Alex and Lily alone. Alex walked over to Lily, who had turned back to the window.

“You okay?” he asked pulling her into his comforting arms. Lily bared her face into his shoulder as she wrapped her own arms around him. “Shhh, it’s okay Lily. I’m not going to let anything happen.”

“Promise me you will never lie to me like that.” Lily said looking him in the face.

“I promise Lily.” Alex said.

“Thank you.” she answered in a quite whisper.

“Come on. Let’s go and enjoy what’s left of Christmas.” Alex suggested, as her lead her out of the office to rejoin the rest of their family.

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Well there's some thing's you probably didn't think about. You think this is the last time we'll see of Max? I don't know haven't gotten that far in the story, but i think we will. What do you guys think? What do you think will happen next between Alex and Lily? Chapter five 'The Perfect Proposal' will be up as soon as i have it typed up on my computer. Keep reading, I love you ALL!!!!!!
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*cheers* Finally, Lily and Alex are together!
Just a question...in the post with the Christmas Ball, Alex was calling Max "Malfoy." Wouldn't he have been calling him "Smith?" No one but the Aurors, Harry and a few of the other adults knew that Max was really a Malfoy, didn't they?
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Sorry, I didn't even notice that detailly. I just read it through.

Wow, that was just awesome! Harry accidentlly left the report on Malfoy there. pams
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I'm very happy some one caught on to that!!!! Lets just say Alex has known Max longer than everyone thinks he has. You'll find that out in later chapters. Thank you Shan and Jessica. You are both very awesome. Love ya very much. As for chapter five, i'm still working on it but hopfully it will be up by tomorrow or the day after. I've started to write it but i'm having a little bit of writter's block. That sucks ever so badly. I'm sure you can understand that. I'll keep you all posted on the progress of cahpter five. I have a feeling i'm going to be posting that in sections as well. Thank you all very much for reading my fan fic. And i'll have chapter five to you all very soon, Hopfully?! love ya all very much!!!!!!
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Believe me, Susan, I understand the writer's block thing a lot more than you know...lol. Don't worry, we'll be here!
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OMG Loved all the chapters!!!
As soon as i seen that max was a malfoy I knew it was him who was putting all that stuff in the papers.

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Go Alex!!!

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“Let me at him!”
Yes! Do please! I'd love to Watch Alex knock him out .

Aww i have to go now, and i havent even finished reading Chapter Three
A Christmas Revolution.
I will be back to read the rest very soon!!!


EDIT: Ok i'm back
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before she made it to the door she turned to Tonks. “Aunt Tonks, where can I find Alex?”
Good Lily!!!

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“Alex you know I can’t choose between you and Max. It isn’t fair!” She said.
Oh yes it is Lily! its very fair considering you know the anwser you want to say!! Just say it already!

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“I don’t want everything Alexander. The only thing I’ve always wanted was you. Just you! .”
Go Lily!!! .

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There she said it, all of it. She just lead her whole heart out for him to take. She just told them all that Alex was the only one for her.
YES Good lily!!

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“You truly love me?”
*seys sarcastically*
No shes lying to you Alex! Just go to her already!

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“I love you Lillian!” and then he kissed her.
EEEEK How cute!!!


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“Oh bravo! Bravo Alex. You have finally managed to still the woman I love from me.” They could see the look of disgust written clearly on his face.
you dont love her malfoy!
go crawl in a ditch! the ants are calling you.

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In the back of her mind she didn’t feel safe with him anymore.
I'm glad she had alex go with! , I dont trust Malfoy with her alone either .

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“Oh come on Ginny. Their just having some fun. Just like the rest of us.” Fred said with a evil twin smile. George, who stood next to him, had the same one. Everyone laughed at that.
Now that was funny!

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“Because I left Ron’s Auror report on my desk.” Harry said walking away from his bemused father-in-law.
Very sly!

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“You can’t kick me out!” Max yelled angrily at her.
If she dont, I WILL, Watch me jump into the computer screen and slap you silly!

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“This isn’t over Lillian! In the end you will be mine!” Max said as he left the office.
He'll be back wont he? Why wont he just go to the Ants!?

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Chapter five 'The Perfect Proposal'
Alex is gonna ask Lily to marry him!?

Cant wait for Chapter five!!
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