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Old 04-19-2008, 05:31 PM   #1 (permalink)

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Hey everyone this is my second fanfic. Im still writing my frist one though. If you want to read it then itz in Epic/Adventure, and called The New Nightmare.


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CHAPTER 1

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Hi, I'm Tinkerbell and this is my diary. I write everything that happens in my life. I mean everything. Ok where to start??? I know. My name is Tinkerbell Sabrina Evens, Im 11 years old. My parents are Lily-Anne and James Evens. They both are lawers(sorry if wrong spelling). I have a twin sister called Saffron Lily Evens and a 3 year old brother called Jake. Oh i must not forget Spooty and Bubbles(My goldfish). My home town is Bridport but we moved to London when me and Saffron were 3. we have lived here since. I attend a school called symonsbury. well thats really all about me. Wait i have one last thing. I have a cousin who is mine( and Saffron's) age. His name is.....
Oh sorry got to go, Mum's calling me fro tea
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I'm evil a cliffy. Can you guess who Tinkerbell's cousin is???
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Im sorry if this first bit of my Diary is boring but you have to introduce ourself. Thankz for reading
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Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Chapter 8 Chapter 9 Chapter 10
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pretty good start so far.
And I think I have an idea who her cousin is.
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pretty good start so far.
And I think I have an idea who her cousin is.
Hehehe, well dont give anything away. Hehehe lol just kidding. you wont find out until a few chpters later sorry.

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Saturday Morning

I'm back, ok so after i had tea it was too late to write again so i went straight to bed. But i'm back now.
I had to stop when mum called me but i'll finish my sentence, My cousin is........Um.......... i can't remember, i mean i've only met him once or twice but we never really talk about him at home. I'll ask mum later.

Nothng really happened today, i had an argument with saffron, She Won!!!. more later, by then i should have his name.

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Ive got to go to bed but i just thought i would post and say i asked mum the name, itz......



Ok for some reason my chapters just get shorter and shorter. Help!!!! hehehe.lol! dont worry the next chapter is LLLLooooooooonnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggggggggggggggg gggeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. I promise
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It's pretty good, but I think it could be better if you developed the entries more, added more feelings, more of went on. Like descriptions.

I'm liking the concept though.
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yeah i think an 11 year old would be bursting with energy and descriptions

just develop the entries more but she is such a cutie pie i love it

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It's pretty good, but I think it could be better if you developed the entries more, added more feelings, more of went on. Like descriptions.

I'm liking the concept though.
Thanks for the info. Im glad you like it soo far. Dont worry ill try to add fro feeling, add more to what went one etc.. Dont worry if your wondering im not mad, just glad, even if this reply may sound like im mad. Hehehe and i promise to develop the entries more. posting next chapter soon, just got to change it a bit. Lol!!!!

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just develop the entries more but she is such a cutie pie i love it

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Evangeline!!! It's brilliant!!! Wondering if just by chance... Tinkerbell is related to... never mind... don't want to spoil it for anyone!!

Sabrina has noticed that Tinkerbell's middle name is the same as hers!!

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Evangeline!!! It's brilliant!!! Wondering if just by chance... Tinkerbell is related to... never mind... don't want to spoil it for anyone!!

Sabrina has noticed that Tinkerbell's middle name is the same as hers!!

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Hehe yes it is. your name Sabrina inspired me. i luv your name so i used it. Hope you dont mind.
Jemmz i have a feeling you may know who she is related to. If you want to PM me with your thought then im happy to recieve one. I just luv getting mail itz sooo fun. Lol!!!! Anywho i glad you loved my Fanfic and i know it may not be as good as my first one but i promise it will get there.

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thank you for the comment. I didn't think anyone would like this one coz itz not as good as my first Fanfic and plus noone well except for 4 or 5 people have read it. Oh well more may come when itz better. I hope. Anywho she'll find out who her cousin in the four chapter, just before she leaves for Hogwarts *Not saying anything else or I'll give away a secret*

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sorry, extremely hyper! Keep the story coming hunni! It's brilliant!!

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Ok to whoever reads this. I really want to post for you guys but i really need someone to re-read my chapters and make them better. So if anyone wants to help me then plz PM me. dont worry I'll mention you when i post. Lol!!!


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Ok UPDATE: I have found a person to read through my story, The wonderful Sabrina Snape so never mind about that. What i really wanted to say is that i have changed my Hogwarts name to Tinkerbell Sabriona Evens which makes this her diary. Lol!!! I give credit to Sabrina Snape for the idea for this change and i hope she wont mind. Lol!!!
The next post will be up soon, i know you all have been dieing for it(or have you???) but i need to talk with Sabrina and Jemmz about making it better.

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I've go t to got to bed but i just thought i would post and say i asked mum the name, its...

Sunday
Sorry Saffron turned the light off without telling me she would. Arhh... I hate her. I am going to tell you you his name but it will have to wait because something weird happened today. Me and mum were eating our lunch(dad was at work, Jake was asleep and Saffron was out with friends). Anyway there was a knock at the door, mum answered it. She came back into the kitchen with this man following her. He had a long white beard, half-moon glasses(there is another term but i dont know what it is) and he had blue eyes(like mine)He smiled at me and bowed, i thought it was rather funny.

"Tinkerbell, he has come to talk to you" My mother had said sitting down in her seat.

"Hello Miss Evans," He had looked around the room, "May I sit down please?" He asked.

"You can have my seat" I said politly jumping up.

"No thank you Miss Evans, I'll have this one" He sat on the chair next to mum. "I'm sorry I have not introduced myself. I am Albus Dumdledore, Headmaster of Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry"

Mum and I were so taken aback; there are people that are witches and wizards? How cool!!! Anyways, I just gasped. "But I'm not a witch and don't go to that school so why do you want to talk to me?"

He had just smiled "Oh but you are." He pulled a letter from his.... well dress; it was addressed to me.

"Cool mummy I've got a letter" I said happly. My mum for some reason didn't answer, she was looking at the man with horror on her face(I think it was horror). It was scary.

I opened the letter(after studying the seal on the back) and read through it. Once finished the man spoke again nicely, "Now I will take you to Diagon Alley. I have some coins here for you, but you will have to get second hand stuff im afrad" He handed me a bag of coins,they weren't original coins, I mean I get this weird spending money just for being a witch! After that he left promising he would call tomorrow.

As soon as he left mum went strange, she kept
talking to herself. Weird! Dad and Saffron didn't take it so well either when mum told them. I don't get it I'm a witch shouldn't they be happy???

I can't wait till tomorrow but I'm sad...
Tinkerbellx

Ok what do you think??? this may not be as good as my other story' The New Nightmare' but i think this is ok. Lol!!! Hope i get more new readers soon

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This seems familiar. Where have I seen it before? lol!



Love the post hun! Sabrina is glad that Tinkerbell likes her name, and can't wait to see her, once she is sorted!

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Love the post hun! Sabrina is glad that Tinkerbell likes her name, and can't wait to see her, once she is sorted!

This story is going to be wonderful! I can feel it!

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Lol!!

thanks 4 reading it. Have you had your french test yet??? and are you still in school???

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Ok just before i start, i would like to say thank you to all my readers so far. Lol!!!

I have written this from the top of my head, not written it down at all.

Ok so im changing it too

so here you are


Monday Morning
5.00am

Diary you know i love to write, and you know that my posts are not fun, exciting to read and very boring. Well thats all going to change from now on. I'm going to make sure its not boring and itz exciting, so itz like im re-starting this diary(dont worry im writing from were i left off)

Well i woke at 5 this morning, weird though i dont usally wake early, itz normally 9 by the time i wake. In an instant i know something was wrong, i never wake this early unless something is wrong, itz sort of a gift i have, it might be something to do with me being a witch. but i have a perfectly good idea whats wrong.... Mum. I best go talk with her.

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5.25am

Ok i was right there was something wrong with Mum. I went downstairs and she was in the kitchen, just in the kitchen doing nothing. Well as me and my gift i had to go down and find out what was wrong(Nosy or what, at school people call me Little Miss Nosy). I swear when i sat down next to her she had tears in her eyes. I just feel so upset, like im feeling her pain. We just sat there, saying nothing, me feeling my Mums pain and sadness and Mum, well she was upset. In the end we talked. She told me why she was upset, sad. Well she spoke out to me, like i was a equal. She told me about how upset she was that i was a witch, like her half sister Lily(who i have never met, and never will. She died when i was about 1 yeas old. Her and her husband James, leaving a baby Harry). And she told me that i have a cousin called Harry. She just told me everything. Well im in bed again trying to get some sleep.
I still think Mum is down there, just sitting

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5.55am

Ok i've had enough, i can't sleep. Mum went to bed about 15 mins ago, i heard her come up and go into her room. I just can't sleep. There is still something wrong, and i know it. The thing is i just dont know where from. Best not get too worked up, i best try to get some sleep. Goodnight

Tinkerbellx

Monday Evening

I still feel like there is something wrong, but i still dont know where from. I spent my day shopping, with Albus Dumbledore. I got a Owl, I named her Evangeline. Weird name i know but it was my grademothers name, I loved her so much, she was my favourite nan. Ok now i have tears in my eyes, best not let saffron see she'll make fun of me. I have all my things i need fro school. Im excited about going. But i feel a little uneasy around my family, they look at me straingly, like there scared of me. I best finish writing, i need to think. Bye

Tinkerbellx


Ok so what do you think. Do you think the change will make it a better story??? plz comment thanks.

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Thanks to Sabrina and MathI for reading that chapter. Lol!!!

ok im so bored out of my mind, school has finished, none has posted a new chapter in there story(not being rude), ive finished all my Maths and English SATs, only science left which is tomorrow. How B-o-r-i-n-g. Lol!!!

I thought i would write another chapiee for you all, just because i luv ya all so much. Lol!!! and itz from the top of my head again.

So here we are: oh and sorry its all in the same font and everything, the school computers are a bit rubbish. Lol!!! Here we are:
ok i changed it. Lol!!!

Monday Morning, a week later
5.02am

Ok this really gets annoying, everyday for the last week i've woke up at the same time, adn itz for the same reason. Im starting to hate being a witch. Just to let you know Diary the feeling is still there in the air, only me feeling it. Weird.
Im leaving today to go to my new school, Hogwarts. Im not excited as i used to be but im scared. Im scared noone will like me, im scared i will be the odd one out and im scared i'll be behind everyone else.
Oh no..... I can here my mums and dads bedroom door opening, someones heard me, im dead, i should be asleep. Bye

Tinkerbellx

5.07am

Ok false alarm. It was only someone going to the bathroom. My heart was beating really hard then. I know i should be in bed but i cant sleep. My trunk is packed, with all my things and my clothes are ready at the end of the bed. Everyone is taking me to the station, but there leaving me there, i have to find my own way. annoying, there scared of me. Mum doesn't seem to remember the time she spoke out to me, itz like it never happened.
I best get some sleep. Goodnight Diary

Tinkerbellx

6.55am

I got about, i don't know 45 minutes sleep, ive just woken up. I think i may be ill with something. My feelings are hurt because of saffron. Well here is the boring story i promised i would never tell. Sorry Diary but it needs to be said so your'ii understand how upset i am. Well yesterday i was cleaning mine and Saffrons room, and guess what i found, Saffrons diary. I know i did bad, but i couldn't help it i just wanted to see what she was writing about me. Yes you guessed i read her Diary. I am bad. Im going to quote what was in her diary:

Saturday

Diary,
Im scared of Tinkerbell, Shes a witch and im afriad she'll do something bad to me if i annoy her. I think mum and dad are scared too. Its so frightening. She is going to her new school in a few days, a school for people like her. Im too scared to go near her, and i cant wait for her to go to school, i will be so relieved and not scared, well until she comes home in the hoildays, then i will be scared, she would of learn some witch stuff by then

Saffronx


This really upset me. She wants to get rid of me, and mum and dad. I wont hurt her, i may think hse is annoying but i'll never hurt her, i love her.
Oh great now im crying, im going to bed. Goodnight

Tinkerbellx *Tear drop


Ok so what did you think???? when i get home i will change the font so its easy for you to read. Bye i got to go catch my bus. I cant wait till i get home, im getting a new mobile. Yay!!! Lol

luv ya always

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Loved the post Evangeline!!

Poor Tinkerbell , it's fine being a witch, heck look at Sabrina. (No wait, bad example )

Stupid Saffron, doesn't she know what good things wiches can do?? Aparently not.

PAMS!!! and I'll post tomorrow, sorry hun!

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