Agreed. -pokes her-

I've tried to show the more "humane" side of her here, though. It ends as soon as it starts, yes, and there's terribly little of it, but I've tried to show it all the same. =/
I'll try, bebeh. -shnuggle-

So Jenna's hands are cold and Bella is a meddling sister ... uh, but this does get better ... the plot thickens.

I love your story Maxie, keep it coming. Seriously kewl. I love all the women in the fic and their bickering ... I have to admit this is my favorite fan fic going on now.

But why are we in the romance thread? *giggles evilly* Just sayin' ... *wants you to drop a hint*

It has to do with that new Death Eater doesn't it? But who? Who falls in love with him? Is he cute? Or is it Bella/Voldy? OMG!

Neways, LOL I love shipping so ... don't mind me. I'm loving it, love, keep it up. Pams ...

Plot? -blink-

Sorry, I don't have much of a plot. =[
Bickering? Where?

Butttt --- you just made my day. [Which wasn't going so good, by the way, because I'm mega sleepy, and I can't sleep, right now.] So anyway.... I LOVE YOU! And like I said, you just totally made my day. Iloveyou. <3
I know what you're trying to do. =p My lips are sealed. Not really.
LOLOL. Bella/Voldy.... actually sounds kinda cute. =p But, my lips being sealed and all, I can't tell. Well, I can, but I won't.
Shipping rocks! I love your new siggie, by the way, it made me laugh. <3

-hugs you tightly-

*headdesk*

All my fault, all my fault! You post, and I'm not around.

Sorry

Get down to reading soon.

Luv you!
~~Jay~~

WHAT ARE YOU DOING?
Aww, hunny, it's super alright. Honestly, it is. -hugs you-
Take your time, and love you too.

Quote:

Narcissa Black’s lean face, usually rendered handsome by its striking, perfectly-shaped features, looked uncharacteristically ugly [though not uncharacteristically bad-tempered] as she surveyed her elder sister through steel-like, blue eyes.

Nice description. ^^

Quote:

“Andra Castle is my friend!” Narcissa half-screamed.

“Andra Castle is a Castle,” Bellatrix replied, very calmly.

Luved this bit.

Quote:

“She’s stupid,” Narcissa mumbled.

Quote:

“Take your time,” Narcissa replied acidly, storming down the staircase. “Because, you know what? You’re going to have all the time in the world.”

There was a crack, and Narcissa had vanished into thin air.

Oooooh, angry Cissy!

Great post! PAMS! PLEEEEEEEEEEASE!

Love,
~~Jay~~

^ Thanks, luff. Will update soon.

You say that all the time :/ :/ :/

Me want an update NOWWWWWWWWWWWW

Love,
~~Jay~~

She could see her face reflected in the flask, the reflection of her almond-shaped, silver eyes staring at her, carrying a dazed image of her face, her features.

The wind was lovely, tonight.

Tom Redwork looked thoughtfully at the girl with the flask, and he wa all too clearly distracted. She could not be more than sixteen. Seventeen, at the oldest. And she was beautiful. Devastatingly beautiful.

He, himself, was not much of an enigma. He was not a death eater, but he worked for Lord Voldemort now and then, and everyone knew where his loyalties lay. He was not particularly skilled in the Dark Arts, but he was good with memories and certain other things, and the fact that he could be of use was enough for the Dark Lord.

“Jenna?”

She was bent over the glass flask, intent. She looked up, and her silver hair sparkled as it caught the yellowish light of the room. Tom blinked.

“Yes, Tom?”

“Are you sure you can do that? It’s a very complicated job.”

“You think the Dark Lord would have sent me here if he wasn’t sure I could do it?”

Tom shut up.


He watched her work, her hands moving slowly – expertly – along the glass walls of the flask. She seemed to know what she was doing but, Tom could not help thinking, he had worked with these things his entire life. How could she – was she even sixteen? – accomplish what he, with all his experience, had failed to?

There was a flash of light, and he blinked again. She had her wand out now, and was slowly tapping the flask. Light burst out of its open mouth, faint at first, but steadily growing stronger. It changed colour from white to yellow, before dissolving into an orange mist that wrapped the flask for a few seconds, then disappeared, leaving no trace.

“Some job,” Jenna said rather breathlessly, her silvery eyes sparkling. “I almost thought I wouldn’t be able to do it.”

“You think the Dark Lord would have sent you here if he wasn’t sure you could do it?” He grinned, tossing her words back at her.

Jenna laughed. “It’s a dangerous little thing, this flask. Plenty of memories the Dark Lord wouldn’t want anyone seeing, no?”

Tom nodded. “Should I deliver it to him?”

She shrugged a pair of very white shoulders. “If you like. Though I have to see him in an hour – could save you the trouble.”

He nodded. “Why not.”

Okaii...

I won't make any excuses - I'm sorry. =[
But mewubyou LOTS. <333
Updated, for my Jay.

Gee, Maxers, have I ever mentioned just how much I love the way you write? x_x
Honestly, though! This was so beautifully well-written, and when you describe Jenna... wow. Seriously. It's amazing.
Tee hee. But where is my precious Lucy?! Uwaa. & I have a bad feeling something bad's gonna happen to Tom... I dunno why, I just do. I hope not, though.. but knowing Voldy...
Eeeep.
Amazing chapter, Maxers! I wantssss more! -Bite-

-blink-

I can't remember, but I love you.
Every time someone says I write Jenna well, they make my day. But you, DracoliciouseeLee, make it even MORE'er. So... thank you. <33
Well, he was with Bella.
How come? What is your.... conspiracy theory regarding this?

-pokes you to tell-
Tell you something - the only thing the characters in this story really have to fear is .... me and my evil plots. But, you know, I'm so nice and all...

Thanks, luff. IWUBYOU!

[I just won Round number Numberless, YAY!]

OOOoooohhhh I wonder what Voldemort the Dark Lord is going to say!!!
LUFFED IT!!!
MOAR PAMS MORE PAMS MOAR!!!

Jess

Thank you Maxie for the update.

I wonder what Jenna's up to? Memories in a flask? Sounds interesting and Tom is in love ♥ okay so he likes Jenna, maybe? I don't think it's Jenna & the flask so ... one must still wonder.

I love how you write Maxie, straight, swift to the point but, lovely to the eyes and ear. You don't overburden us with too much description it's like you just know what we need to know about every character and that's enough.

I'm really liking Jenna even if she is a bit ... self-assured? She's confident to say the least ...

What Tom does though ... now that I'm curious about. I mean for the Dark Lord because from your post I'd think he owns a pub, or something? Just curious.

Keep posting love and don't make us beg ... at least not too much.

Thank you.

=O Why the strikethrough, luff?
Thank you, and you're quite a demanding reader, aren't you? xDD

Do you really want more so soon?
Awww. Why the thanks? -hugs you tight-

I like MaxieOttyStHugs.<3
He likes how she looks... Doesn't mean he likes her. But I'm not supposed to say that, not really. =DD
I hope you're not calling me a minimalist. But really, too many descriptions annoy me, sometimes. Even though some writers just have this knack for making them sound so sweet. <3 -randomly clings to you-
A bit? You call that a bit? =p
I don't think he's that important. I introduce a lot of not-so-important characters. Just to make people wonder. Or confuse them. xD
Heyyyy! No fair. I post when I.... can --- okay, okay, I'm bad and don't. But I still love all of my readers LOADS. && my OttySt.<3

You say that like you just ended a speech.

I had to put the strikethrough or he will come after me!!
I mean don't you remember?
He put a curse on his name, so if you say it, he will come after you!!! -scared-
I'm sorry! =/ I don't mean to be!
You can take your time, I just luff my MaxieluffYAY's stories sooo muchh!!!
Of course I doo!!!!!
Jess

Oh, that. I thought he's dead. =D
It's alright, sweetie. I was joking, so no worries.
So why did you use strikethrough, this time?

P.S: I wub you. =DD

He is?!?
-gasp-
How did I not know???

I wub youu moree!!!!! <333333

Yeah, I thought he died in the last book.

You mean he didn't? =O
*claims my JesshluffYAY*

Of course he did!
I just forgot!
=DD <333
Jess

Bwaha, that's okay, luff.

I just hope you haven't forgotten that Lucius Draco lived.
You haven't, have you? xDD

MAXO! You dunt post fo ages, an' then you suddenly post here!

It makes me ANGWY. 'Cause me no lyk when you no post.

Love,
~~Jay~~

I'm sorry, sweetie. I'm updating, right now.

Ooh, update!

Just PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!

Love,
~~Jay~~

I'mma updaaaaaaatingggg. =]