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JeshieRAWR 09-05-2009 03:51 AM

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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie (Post 8586202)
Bwaha, that's okay, luff.

I just hope you haven't forgotten that Lucius Draco lived. :whistle:
You haven't, have you? :whistle: xDD


Of course I remember that.
I mean I am married to Draco in my other world. xDD
Yeah but I also have to deal with meany Lucius all the time!! :poke:
:) Jess

P.S. Are you going to post anytime soon??? :flower:

Also PAGE 6!!!! =DD

Maxilocks 09-05-2009 03:52 AM

Narcissa Black held her head high as she climbed the polished, stone steps that led to the entrance of Andra Castle’s mansion, her mind still dazed from her fight with Bellatrix.

Bellatrix -- Oh, how she hated her sister at the moment! She knew that, deep down, she admired – even respected – the way Bellatrix carried herself, the way she dealt with people and let them know the difference between their position, and her own - a difference very great, of course. Or, at least, that was how Bellatrix made it sound. But that was not the point! The point was, Narcissa Black could not just let anyone run her life.

And Bellatrix was so... domineering.

– Not to mention, the apple of their mother’s eye.

As for Andra Castle, Narcissa hated that girl with a passion. She was a Castle, and no Black could get along with a Castle, that fact was too well-known. The enmity was decades old, both families locked in an unsaid fight to get crowned the most noble, most ancient, most thoroughly-pureblooded line of witches and wizards the World of Magic had ever seen.

People who did not side with any family usually laughed at the fight.

– Narcissa wanted to behead them.

But, back to Andra, for now. Yes, they were best friends. – At least, they were, for the world. Though Narcisaa doubted there was any person on the face of earth who was not fully and completely aware that it was just a hollow, fake, put-on sort of friendship whose real aim was to humiliate each other.

And speaking of humiliation – this was the real reason why Narcissa was here, despite of all Bellatrix’s reasoning. If Andra had not really bought her dress yet, she could twist the seemingly innocent piece of information into gossip and spread it around.

“You know that Andra Castle? The new hostess for the Castles’ annual ball? She’s clueless – I took pity on, and bought a dress for, her, a day or two before the ball, because she forgot.”

Ahh, how nice that would sound.

Running a finger through her platinum up-do, Narcissa stopped at the door of the Castle Mansion and knocked. Once. Twice. The grand-sounding noise seemed to echo past her, and behind the doorway.

Seconds later, a house-elf was peeping out.


Maxilocks 09-05-2009 03:54 AM

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Originally Posted by JesshLuff (Post 8586223)
I mean I am married to Draco in my other world. xDD

Why did Jessh not invite me to her wedding? =[
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Yeah but I also have to deal with meany Lucius all the time!!
:gasp: Is he bad to my Jessh? -pokes him REALLY harddd-
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P.S. Are you going to post anytime soon???

Also PAGE 6!!!! =DD

Updated, bebeh. ^^

&& yes! Page six, so huzzah. =DD


JeshieRAWR 09-05-2009 03:58 AM

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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie (Post 8586236)
Why did Jessh not invite me to her wedding? =[

:gasp: Is he bad to my Jessh? -pokes him HARDDD-

Updated, bebeh. ^^

&& yes! Page six, so huzzah. =DD


Oh I'm soo sorry MaxieluffYAY, it was a secretive wedding. Lucius said if it wasn't secret I wouldn't be able to marry Draco darling. xDD

Yes he is!!! Bad Lucius!! :poke:

I loved the update Maxerzz!!!
I want to know soo badly what's going to happen to Narcissa when she enters the castle.
EEEPPP!!!! xDD
PAMS!!
:) Jess

Maxilocks 09-05-2009 03:59 AM

Wrong place. =p

Maxilocks 09-05-2009 04:00 AM

Updated in the wrong place. =p

Maxilocks 09-05-2009 04:03 AM

II'm such a BAD multi-tasker.
I just posted two updates for Us, here. :lol:

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Originally Posted by JeshhLuff (Post 8586248)
Oh I'm soo sorry MaxieluffYAY, it was a secretive wedding. Lucius said if it wasn't secret I wouldn't be able to marry Draco darling. xDD

Nice excuse. :P
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Yes he is!!! Bad Lucius!! :poke:
Shall we tie him up and show him Fang, then? xDD
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I loved the update Maxerzz!!!
I want to know soo badly what's going to happen to Narcissa when she enters the castle.

Patience is a virtue. ;)


JeshieRAWR 09-05-2009 04:14 AM

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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie (Post 8586264)
II'm such a BAD multi-tasker.
I just posted two updates for Us, here. :lol:


Nice excuse. :P

Shall we tie him up and show him Fang, then? xDD

Patience is a virtue. ;)


Hahahaha!!! :lmao: :rotfl: :lol:
You're so silly MaxieluffYAY.
It wasn't an excuse... :shifty:
Hahaha, maybe...no wait! We'll show him Grawp!!! Bahahahaha!! xDD
mhmm true that! ;)
:) Jess

Maxilocks 09-05-2009 04:17 AM

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Originally Posted by JesshLuff (Post 8586287)
You're so silly MaxieluffYAY.

Any chance you got to read those Us updates, in this thread? :P
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It wasn't an excuse... :shifty:
It wasn't? *eyes Draco* He's a VERY baaaad Draco, not inviting me. =[
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Hahaha, maybe...no wait! We'll show him Grawp!!! Bahahahaha!! xDD

YES! Waittt! We can show him Grawp and Isla! Together!

:lmao:


JeshieRAWR 09-05-2009 04:19 AM

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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie (Post 8586294)
Any chance you got to read those Us updates, in this thread? :P

It wasn't? *eyes Draco* He's a VERY baaaad Draco, not inviting me. =[

YES! Waittt! We can show him Grawp and Isla! Together!

:lmao:


Actually no I didn't! =((
Oh well, at least I got to read them in the actual story xDD
:lmao:
PAMS!!
:) Jess

Maxilocks 09-05-2009 04:26 AM

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Originally Posted by JesshLuff (Post 8586298)
Actually no I didn't! =((
Oh well, at least I got to read them in the actual story xDD

:lmao:

Oh well, I'm glad I didn't give away any spoilers. =P
I just hope I don't start posting TSRTD material in Us. xDD



I need to update this FF more. :hmm:


JeshieRAWR 09-05-2009 04:34 AM

Gotta go! Bye!!
 
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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie (Post 8586313)
:lmao:

Oh well, I'm glad I didn't give away any spoilers. =P
I just hope I don't start posting TSRTD material in Us. xDD



I need to update this FF more. :hmm:


:lol:
It's not like I would mind you posting TSRTD material in Us. xDD
:yes: YES YOU DO MAXERZZ!!! You definetly need to update this ficlet more!!! :yes: =DD
:) Jess

Maxilocks 09-05-2009 04:37 AM

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Originally Posted by JeshhLuff (Post 8586332)
:lol:
It's not like I would mind you posting TSRTD material in Us. xDD
:yes: YES YOU DO MAXERZZ!!! You definetly need to update this ficlet more!!! :yes: =DD
:) Jess

Hehe. :D

Well, I think I updated earlier than last time, this time round. ^^


Jessica 09-05-2009 04:39 AM

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– Not to mention, the apple of their mother’s eye.
That's where it really stings, isn't it? :P :P :P
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People who did not side with any family usually laughed at the fight.

– Narcissa wanted to behead them.
LUVED this! It really shows the difference in the two mindsets. ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
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“You know that Andra Castle? The new hostess for the Castles’ annual ball? She’s clueless – I took pity on, and bought a dress for, her, a day or two before the ball, because she forgot.”
Is she evil or what??????????? :D :D :D

Love,
~~Jay~~

Maxilocks 09-05-2009 04:40 AM

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Originally Posted by Jay (Post 8586336)
That's where it really stings, isn't it?

Perhaps it is. :shifty:
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LUVED this! It really shows the difference in the two mindsets.
Thanks, hun. Glad to know you liked it. =]


Jessica 09-05-2009 04:44 AM

Nuthin' just delete!!!!!!! Sorry!

OtterySt.Catchpole 09-05-2009 11:19 PM

Always late to the party but at least I show up ... yup, yup.
 
I hadn't realized you'd posted Maxie, my apologies. Some stalker I am :lol: Neways, Narcissa's fake friendship is sooooooooooooo cool :mwaha: she's vile. Truly your Narcissa is a match for Lucius, they deserve each other.

As always I liked your post. Very revealing ... but I'm still waiting for the romance, though I have to admit you're covered in the witchery, backstabbing, fake friendships, conniving, condescending, domeneering, machiavellian scheeming departments ... :eek:

This fic can only get better and it usual does Maxie. I love all the treachery please Pams when you cans ... *fires the cannons* and give us more Bellatrix and Victoria.

Gryffindoll 09-06-2009 12:31 AM

OMG, Narcissa! :rotfl::rotfl:
It's no wonder my precious Lucie ended up marrying her... the girl's vicious! :xd: But very amusingly so! :lol: I love, love this. I can't wait for her and Andra to be together so we can get to see some not-too-ridiculously-obvious catfighting! :evil: :rotfl: Aaaaah. Tee hee. I love the darkness of this FF, though... :shifty: Especially after just reading an Us update, it's like wow. You can write about anything, Maxers... anything! :loved:
But where'd Jenna go?! =[ I miss her and her witty comments. :P
More, more, more!!
-Runs off to prepare popcorn and a drink to watch Cissy and Andra in action :evil:-

Maxilocks 09-06-2009 03:46 AM

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Originally Posted by OttySt (Post 8589012)
I hadn't realized you'd posted Maxie, my apologies. Some stalker I am

-pokes you- :whistle:

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As always I liked your post. Very revealing ... but I'm still waiting for the romance, though I have to admit you're covered in the witchery, backstabbing, fake friendships, conniving, condescending, domeneering, machiavellian scheeming departments ... :eek:
If only you knew how slow my romances are. It's definitely not "Zip, Bam, Wow, you kiss marvelouslly," so you might have to wait for a while. :whistle:

And waiiiiiiiiiiiitttttttttttt a second - those are the departments I'm good in? I mortify myself. :P

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Originally Posted by DeeLeeLuffeee (Post 8589183)
It's no wonder my precious Lucie ended up marrying her... the girl's vicious!

Any chance you're admitting that your Lucius is vicious? :P
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Especially after just reading an Us update, it's like wow. You can write about anything, Maxers... anything! :loved:
Aww, thanks, my Dee with shiny, white teeth. Mewubyou.
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But where'd Jenna go?! =[ I miss her and her witty comments. :P
She will be.... back. :shifty:
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-Runs off to prepare popcorn and a drink to watch Cissy and Andra in action -
:P


Maxilocks 09-06-2009 04:13 AM

Prepare for a string of REALLY short updates, people.
 

Their parents had been killed when they were one.

They were twins, not identical but definitely with that something that makes you realize, at once, that the people you behold are siblings - that something which is thicker than blood, truer than emotion - that something that women and men have still to figure out, realize.

The similarly-textured, though not similarly-coloured, hair; the similarly-sparkling, if not similarly-shaped, eyes -- their faces seemed a reflection of each other's and yet, even when they could barely crawl, they were worlds apart in so many ways.

Somebody took pity on them and had them moved to an orphanage, a week after their parents died and nobody came forward to claim them as relatives.

As they grew up, the stunned the place.

They were intelligent girls, both of them. At six years of age, they were the ones who won at hopscotch and racing; at eight, at racing and swimming. Not always, of course - but they were indeed the ones whom the other children in the orphanage could look up to, because they were always ready to help, as much as they could. One of them was the natural leader, the other the natural enthusiast. And both of them were natural beauties.

The kind of natural beauties whose loveliness begins to show early, in a strand of gold hair, or a brown lock, or a gentle smile. Or perhaps it was the fact that they were caring little children that made them so beautiful - they had that innocence, that gentleness, that makes people overlook any flaws in appearance, any blemishes that mark the skin.

Too well-mannered to live in an orphanage, some people said.

The people around them knew them. The neighbourhood might not be full of their stories, snippets and tales, but it definitely knew about the twin orphans that were barely ten, but well-mannered and kind pretty much beyond their age. “They are, at times,” said the people. “Extraordinary.”

At eleven, their letters came.


JeshieRAWR 09-06-2009 04:32 AM

Hmmm very good Maxerzz, very good.
Gives me some thinking to do... :shifty:
At least you're going to update more now in this story!
PAMS!!
:) Jess

Maxilocks 09-06-2009 05:20 AM

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Originally Posted by JesshLuff (Post 8589725)
Hmmm very good Maxerzz, very good.
Gives me some thinking to do... :shifty:

So what conclusion have you come to?
Or is Jesserz still thinking about the... TWINS? :shifty:

=DD

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At least you're going to update more now in this story!
I'll try, luff, I'll definitely try. ^_^


OtterySt.Catchpole 09-06-2009 09:12 AM

Still crazy after all these years ...
 
I love how you wrote that last post Maxie, very mysterious, very ... what are eleven year olds doing in a story about conniving, machiavellian adults? Very intriguing indeed. Sorry, I just thought this would only deal with Narcissa and Bellatrix and them ... or is this a flashback? :gasp:

Neways, you wrote it brilliantly. Your story really is rich ... but I still don't see where it's going. Still, it's fun reading so you keep writing and I'll keep reading. You have a very intriguing style of writing Maxie ... you've got me wondering where were going and how ... :lol:

You spammed my usernotes, you're too kewl Maxie :glomp: :lol:

I ♥ Maxie ... I need a shirt that says that ... :lol:

Maxilocks 09-06-2009 03:19 PM

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Originally Posted by OttySt (Post 8590247)
I love how you wrote that last post Maxie, very mysterious, very ... what are eleven year olds doing in a story about conniving, machiavellian adults? Very intriguing indeed. Sorry, I just thought this would only deal with Narcissa and Bellatrix and them ... or is this a flashback? :gasp:

I will not.... confirm or deny thy suspicions, OttySt. <3
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Neways, you wrote it brilliantly. Your story really is rich ... but I still don't see where it's going. Still, it's fun reading so you keep writing and I'll keep reading. You have a very intriguing style of writing Maxie ... you've got me wondering where were going and how ...
You knowwwwww, if I were in your place, I probably wouldn't really know where it's going, either. But maybe it's going to go somewhere no one expects it to. Maybe. :whistle:
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You spammed my usernotes, you're too kewl Maxie :glomp: :lol:

I ♥ Maxie ... I need a shirt that says that ... :lol:
Me no spam. Me send love. *huggg*

-runs off to order an I ♥ OttySt T-shirt- :loved:


Jessica 09-06-2009 03:26 PM

Do ya know I luv it when you post?

Love,
~~Jay~~


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