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Old 12-30-2009, 05:53 AM   #26 (permalink)
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's Connie's fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I'm soooooooooooooo sorry, I just found your visitor's note today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I saw it, and came right up to read your fic!!!!!!!!!!

And you didn't disappoint me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


It's wonderful till now!!!!! I'd love to read about Lily and Snape!!!! And I absolutely love that part where Lily and Petunia are competing against each other to see who can swing higher!!! That makes me wonder... is Tuney really nice?????

Anyway, Connie I'm sooo sorry that I'm late!!!! But trust me, the fic's wonderful!!!! I love it!!! I already subscribed!!!!
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harita:I wanted to show the drastic change in Severus’s demeanor, without dwelling on it, from the beginning when we meet him, until the present part of the story, him as a death eater. He wanted to become an evil person, and he accomplished that so much so, as we see how Lily trembles when she talks of him.

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Ottery blew, and holstered his wand with a satisfied smile. Then, he raised his hand and gracefully caught the caboose hand rail as it came by. Ottery tipped his cowboy hat to Lily, (who had her head out the window watching,) then magnificently swung up onto the platform as he mounted his mighty steed the Iron Horse.
This was something I wanted to do specifically for OtterySt.Catchpole. He is the one who encouraged me from the start to write my story. He has been a constant help from, pc help, learning my way around SS, and tips in writing. I don’t think he’s ever written (that I’ve seen) and he said so himself, he’s never written himself as a hero. I just wanted to write him that way to show my thanks. And thank you for always being so sweet to read and post.

K’Lari: JK isn’t specific about weather Sev‘s dad hits him, but I think it is implied that his dad is physically abusive. In my story, he is because it gives me an excuse for, Severus, to be the miserable person that he is. But, the part where Severus is waiting for Lily at the park all beaten from his dad was totally fabricated from Severus’s little potion jar. He knew Lily loved him for a friend, and he couldn’t stand not having that, so he fabricated the lie of his papa beating him, and the bruises and open cuts for her to see. Which he did feel guilty about and later told her the truth. (you see this in the diary page I posted for Christmas.)
Using, such, in the way I did was to show, much more than. How could Lily be in good spirits with all the hardships in her life, and only have a cat to talk to? Because of his magic he is able to be much more comfort to her than normal. He comforts her mind without her even knowing it. So, by saying, such, in this instance, I didn’t have to say something like, “Even though Lily endures so much hardships in her life, with only Tom to talk to, she is in really good spirits.” I don’t think that sounds believable. Using, such, enables the reader to think Tom is doing much more for her than she realizes. Hope I didn’t ramble on too much. I just don’t want to be misunderstood, and I want my story to be easily read.

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I didn't think the Protean Charm could be used like that-well, any way other than Hermione's anyway
What I did was have Lily put a drop of her blood in the soil that nourished the plant so that when Lily tended her bush the message for Petunia’s bush to bloom would be given, and the extra charms and enchantments she put on it caused it to produce blooms. Maybe a little far fetched? It sounded logical to me, so I used it.

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o_O What's up with her? Maybe she just doesn't hate her that much yet?
I reserve the right to answer this question until after this next chapter , if at that time you don’t have your answer.
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His family has money, so I’ll be loved and provided for.” she exclaimed with her nose in the air. I wouldn't be surprised if she really did marry for money-though I think she did have some feelings for him...she did tell him about Lily after all :/
I’m pretty sure you’ll get your answer in this next chapter.

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I wish you had delved more into his gradual descent into the dark arts and all, but ... I guess you want to move this novel along and not say ... have it become overburdened and cumbersome like some I could name ... Human Nature. I swear, we've been on the train to Hogwarts for years now ...
It’s not that so much, as, well, o.k. I didn’t want to say, but it’s bugging you I can tell. (you’ve brought it up before) At the beginning, I said this was a story of the uncommon? Yes, this is a narrative story, and it is coming from Tom’s point of view, but he isn’t the one telling the story. The end of the story is done, and that is where you’ll learn, “The rest of the story” as the late Paul Harvey would say. Tom wasn’t at school, so he didn’t see any of Sev’s slipping into the dark arts. Tom only knew of what Lily told him and she didn’t dwell on it because of it being so hurtful, and scary to her. Remember she trembles when she speaks of him?

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As for the sudden death of Lily's parents you seem to gloss that over and that's a major event in a person's life. I would have written it in more detail but again ... I write too much detail and not enough action. So you can ignore that critique but not this one, James' parents dying at the same time is just too coincidental ... just a thought.
I was just trying to keep my readers from getting weary of all the hardship she has endured all her young life, and she has some major hardships coming up after this next chapter.
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The fact that James’s parents die the same period of time as Lily’s is no coincidence. Strange occurrences’ happening. Remember James found out about secret meetings going on in Dumbledore’s office? That Voltemort was a dominant factor of dark wizards taking over the world? Tom being worried about Lily, and even Petunia. I tried to slip little snippets of things to be thinking about, because the story is going to be gradually changing, and I wanted a foundation laid for the change.

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I don't get why Tom doesn't just go with her to Hogwarts when I realized, because there's soooooooooooooooo many magic users and teachers there, Hagrid alone could probably tell what he was. I'm sorry ... I'm such a dork sometimes. As for the whole tongue licking equals skin ripping, does that apply to all cats? I don't know I don't own a real cat
I can’t say anything about that except none of them knew he was magical. He didn’t want to take a chance on them finding out. Lily and her parents wouldn’t hurt or cause harm to come to him, but Petunia and Severus wouldn’t think a second thought of it and feel better for it. His magic kept Severus from seeing him as he is. I was under the impression that it would be magical pets that could accompany students to school, or pets that was accustomed to magic. This being the case then Tom going to school wouldn’t even be considered. They probably got her an owl so they could stay in contact.
He,he,he, Don’t worry about cats. Small domesticated cats tongues are very course, like sandpaper, but not rough enough to take off your skin. Big cats however can. All cats have little spiky hooks that stick up on their tongues to hold their pray in their mouths when they catch it called umm well, I don’t remember, but they have Keratin in them. It’s found in finger nails… The bigger the cat, like werecats, (if they existed) lions, tigers,… the bigger the hooked spiky things. My daughter has a cat, Miss Prissy, and she actually reminds me of Tom. Hmm, I wonder if she’s a werecat? LOL They can be very comforting, and a lot of fun to watch. You should get Kelly one. I’d advise getting a kitten so it can grow up with the kids. A lot of times adult cats have troubles adjusting to children.
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Neways, why would Petunia be nice to Lily if she thinks so viley of her? That part I also don't get. Are you planning to reveal all of this in the end, maybe? I guess she isn't all bad, I mean she took Harry in but ... why? And the whole rose bit ... yeah, that's sad and sweet at the same time. I expect many tears from that later
Petunia is a case to ponder, yes? We never hear of her speak of friends. We know she is by herself, tending her flowers, (roses in particular) reading, or playing the piano whenever we see her. She doesn’t have a friend like Tom, or even any friend, and her first heart throb whom she was madly in love with for around six years, was a total jerk. She feels betrayed by the only person who ever thought she was anything special and her heart is consumed with jealousy. I think she is frightened to think that she is without love and tries to now and then break through the wall of hate around her heart, but alas, not able to, but for fleeting thoughts and sporadic acts, as a hug, and warning, a quick kiss. The rose bush, yes, later in the story.

Tina: Hi, gee it’s so nice to see you here. Where have you been? I check everyday on your story. You’ve slipped off the face of the Earth! Or maybe you found the Room of Requirements. Whatever the reason, you’ve been missed. Welcome to my story, and I’m glad you like it. Stick around and post often. Feel free to let me know anything you don’t like or understand. This will help me be a better writer. And yes, as I just said above, to ~otts, Tuney is one to wonder about. Much will be answered in this next chapter.

I think everyone will enjoy this next chapter: “Hate Takes A Backseat, Love Abounds” Basically a Petunia Tom chapter, and I have to say, I had a lot of fun writing it. I’ll try to post the next chapter tomorrow sometime. And if there are any other questions or posts between now and then I’ll just add it to the beginning of the chapter. Catch ya later.

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CHAPTER SIX

Hate Takes a Backseat, Love Abounds

This last term Tom had to live with Petunia was turning out to be not so bad. He tried to stay out from under foot so Petunia could plan for her wedding. She was actually falling in love with Vernon.

In addition, she seemed grateful for Tom’s company. In the evenings after each day of seeing: the caterers, to decide what delectable delicacies are going to be served; the flower shops, to shop for the perfect brides bouquet, bride's maids' arrangements, boutonnieres for lapels, rose petals to be dropped on the red carpet runway, gardenia trellises, and so on and so forth the list seemingly unending, Petunia would tell Tom all the good things that happened that day, as she readied herself for bed.

Each day was another chore that needed tending. The day of the appointment to pick out her wedding dress was upon her. This would prove to be a very productive day for Tom. Marge, the soon to be
sister-in-law was coming to help Petunia pick the perfect dress.

“Tom,” Petunia said somewhat uneasily. “Marge raises dogs," her eyes squinted, her nose wrinkled, and her lips pursed showing she greatly disapproved, "and she’s bringing her favorite one along. The vial thing such as it is.”

Without thinking what she was doing, she picked up Tom, and sat with him on her lap, stroking his fur. She indeed was deep in thought, for this was the first time she had ever held him. “She has thoughts of putting it in the wedding. I don’t want it in the wedding though.

Vernon says I need to humor her because she controls the family fortune when his parents pass on.” Tom was thinking already what to do to take care of the situation; he was going to enjoy this. Master of deception is his magic after all.

Petunia was going on with her complaint in the background of his thoughts when something she said alerted him to his senses. “… was my plan all along to have you walking down the isle with the pillow clipped on securely carrying the wedding bands. Now I have to have that stupid dog carry it. I wanted to have pictures made and give to Lily. I know she loves you so, and she would enjoy seeing you in your smart Tuxedo.” Tom did not like this plan at all. He was all for helping the dog after all until she said about the pictures for Lily.

“Oh there’s Marge and Kipper, or whatever the horrid things name is. Tom, look what an ugly disgusting thing it is!” Her whisper reached an octave higher. “It’s drooling all over the place! Tom what shall I do, what shall I do?”

“Petunia, here we are Ripper and I at your service!” She started in command of the conversation. “Instead of us traversing all over the city, looking at gowns, I’ve phoned and have all of them coming here.”

“Oh, “Petunia said trying to have a congenial smile come to her face, with only a fraction of success. “That sounds delightful, I should have thought of that, but I didn’t. (She lied; she had been looking forward to the bustling around all over the city.) I’m afraid I’ve got appointments and reservations at Crispers for lunch with Vernon, and,”

“Oh pish posh,” interrupted Marge cutting in on Petunia. Marge wafted her hand in the air, waving away Petunia’s plans. “No, this is much better, and we can all go out to dine later. And Ripper is just a puppy; an all day expedition would wear him out.”

“But, what of Tom? Cats and dogs aren’t the best of friends, it’s not in their nature to get along.”

“Tom will be fine, as long as he behaves himself,” she said looking warily at him. ”Ripper will be a true gentleman; he is very well behaved. Watch this.” She took Tom from Petunia by the scruff of his neck and hung him in front of Ripper. Were it not for the fact that he would loose his home, Tom refrained from lashing out with claws that would take off her hand for handling him this way, and kept himself limp in front of the dog.

He reached out to the animal with his magic and challenged it to see if it could bark and get slobber all over him without even touching him. Of course, Ripper was up for the challenge and was very happy to oblige. “Tom didn’t move a muscle. It looked like the dog had just tried to make a meal of Tom. Marge was flabbergasted and speechless.

“Tom!” Petunia screamed. She reached him and ever so gently brought him to her breast.

“Tom, are you alright? Please be alright.” He mewed softly and made himself tremble. Petunia carried him to the bathroom. “Oh yes of course” he thought eyeing the tub as she hurried to it, “every great plan has a downfall of some sort. Anyway strike one Ripper.”

Petunia drew up a shallow bath for Tom, and washed him carefully examining him for wounds that would need tending to. She was talking very sweetly to him, and then he looked to her face and saw she was crying.

He felt ashamed that he used her for the deception. He really did not have a clue that she cared for him like this. He new she was warming up to him, but didn‘t recognize the love he felt now. He nibbled on her chin, when he was clean and she held him to her wrapped in a towel. She smiled and said, “I see why Lily loves you so. I do too.”

She went back to the living room where Marge was giving Ripper a “you’re a very bad boy lecture.” “Is it going to make it?” Marge asked timidly.

Petunia smiled weakly, and forced a kind answer. “Yes, TOM (taking offense at him being called it) is ok. Thankfully, he did not draw blood. She looked at Ripper with repugnance. “I think he was just scared near to death.”

“Nonsense, Petunia, Ripper was just playing, he’s only a puppy,” she said recovering from her timid laps of her self-image.

Petunia was actually starting to tremble from holding her true feelings in for the despicable dog and his master.

“Well then,” she said not being able to hold it all in. “It seems Tom is the gentleman here then, because he didn’t tear you up trying to get away from Zipper and he didn’t rearrange Zippers face either. Now if you’ll excuse me, it seems I have people coming and I’m to be trying on gowns, and I’m not ready for that because I’ve got your dogs slobber all over me.

She got louder as she went, turned smartly about and then she and Tom went to get ready. When she came back out Marge was still standing in the same spot looking shocked at the way Petunia clearly manhandled her.

Then she smiled, “Well you’ve come through this test with flying colors. I was afraid you was one of those mamby pamby city girls that wouldn’t be worthy of the Dursley name.” she proffered two rather ham shaped arms towards Petunia for a hug. “Welcome to the family.”

“Petunia, you look radiant in that little fall bath robe.” she marveled, desperately wanting to change the subject after Petunia rejected the hug, but thanked her for the welcome. “The perfect thing to wear sense you’ll be getting fitted for your gown.”

Tom curled up on the overstuffed chair Harry had always sat in. The rest of the day was pleasingly pleasant once Petunia actually started trying on different dresses. Petunia settled on her favorite dress, which wasn’t the one Marge thought Vernon would pick, but, Petunia cut across her mid sentence. “Sense Vernon would look silly in any of them, I will take the one I like the most.”

Later that evening Vernon came over and it was discussed where they should go out to eat. “But, you two go on, “Petunia said,” I can’t leave, Tom, here with the dog.”

”Oh, just shut it in your bedroom.” Vernon spouted out. “It will be fine until we get back. Come on now hurry up I’m starved.” Petunia was offended once again at Tom being called, “it” but decided not to push the issue. She took him to her room and told him she was sorry. Tom wasn’t though; he had to be getting on with the next part of his plan.

They all left and Jim opened the door and went to the kitchen. “This will be perfect.” he said. Ripper was following Jim around smelling the boy, and being very curious.

“You should be thankful you can’t talk. I have ways of taking care of loose tongues.“ Jim told Ripper in a matter of fact way.

He got the wine and poured it out into Rippers water bowl, then broke the bottle perfectly, so there wouldn’t be any shards of glass, and placed it on the floor under the table the wine had been on.

“Here you go Ripper drink up, but do not touch this bottle or any part of it.”

He watched as the dog lapped up the wine. “Now, this is your final instructions for the night, and ,Jim told Ripper, what he had to do when his master got home. He put fresh water in the bowl and watched over the dog until he seen the car coming down the road.

He went to the bedroom and shut himself in and changed back into Tom, then curled up on the foot of Petunia’s bed as if he were asleep.

“What the bloody blaze is going on with that dog? It’s drunk!” yelled Vernon, his face turning a shade of plum purple. It’s knocked the wine off the table and drunk it!” he yelled incredulously.

“Strike two Ripper,” recounted Tom

Petunia screamed, as Ripper went over to the table leg and lifted his leg and yes, he did, he relieved himself of his full bladder of wine.

“Strike three Ripper, you’re out of the wedding.”

Poor Ripper. None of the events of the day was his fault, and yet he was the one in trouble. Tom didn’t have a bad conscience from it though. It was an unpleasant fact that; the masters are at fault most of the time when there are problems; and the animals are the ones to get in trouble for their stupid mistakes.

If Petunia wanted Ripper to be in the wedding, Tom would not have stepped in. When Marge just put him in and Petunia didn’t have a choice about it, her own wedding, that was Marge’s mistake.

Although Tom enjoyed this new and improved Petunia, he grieved for his master and digressed to the day she left for Hogwarts to start her last term of school. Petunia was so sweet and loving when she hugged Lily and admonished her to be careful of Severus before she left for school, then to change so swiftly with such animosity towards her, he wondered if Petunia might be suffering from some sort of mental instability.

He could not believe the vulgarity she used telling Lily to conjure up a love potion, and shack up with someone. That is indifference, even hate, but not love.

Hope you all enjoyd this chapter. I welcome all comments. I love reading all the posts. Happy New year!

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JK isn’t specific about weather Sev‘s dad hits him, but I think it is implied that his dad is physically abusive. In my story, he is because it gives me an excuse for, Severus, to be the miserable person that he is. But, the part where Severus is waiting for Lily at the park all beaten from his dad was totally fabricated from Severus’s little potion jar. He knew Lily loved him for a friend, and he couldn’t stand not having that, so he fabricated the lie of his papa beating him, and the bruises and open cuts for her to see. Which he did feel guilty about and later told her the truth. (you see this in the diary page I posted for Christmas.)
You know what...he might actually have been! I was re-reading OotP recently, and there's a bit when Harry sees a memory of Snape's when his parents are arguing and he's crying in a corner () So it's totally possible! I looooooooooooove it

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Maybe a little far fetched? It sounded logical to me, so I used it.
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was my plan all along to have you walking down the isle with the pillow clipped on securely carrying the wedding bands. Now I have to have that stupid dog carry it. I wanted to have pictures made and give to Lily. I know she loves you so, and she would enjoy seeing you in your smart Tuxedo.” Tom did not like this plan at all. He was all for helping the dog after all until she said about the pictures for Lily.
Aw!

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Aw, okay now I don't think I can hate Petunia I'm loving the post
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K’Lari: Thanks to you also. Your loyalty and enthusiasm is a big motivation for me. The scene you mentioned of Snape crouching in the corner crying, was the scene I used to base Snape’s foundation on. Nice recall. I’m glad you enjoyed the post.

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CHAPTER SEVEN

The Calm Before the Storm

Tom was very grumpy in his tuxedo the morning of the wedding. This was going to put a serious cramp in his courting that gorgeous new cat next door. How could Ginger form a profound opinion of him in this contraption?

Ginger was one of the reasons he didn’t mind being here without Lily. He had been taking his time showing off for her, strutting about the place with a haughty air about him. All was for not now, he was quite peeved about the whole situation, and that will be that about Tom and his plight with the cat next door.

It didn’t help his disposition this morning thinking of Lily left out in the cold, about the wedding. Petunia didn’t even tell her there was going to be a wedding. The last she knew was that Petunia was going to call Vernon and accept his proposal.

This’ll devastate Lily. She would have wanted to share in Petunias wedding paradise, by helping her arrange it. Although Tom was saddened Petunia did this to Lily, he was still very happy for Petunia, and wanted only the best for her.

The reception was fit for royalty, and enjoyed by all. There was roast lamb croissants, candied yams, sweet beets, fresh broccoli florets, and cauliflower, different cultures of cheese, and exotic fruits. There were also all sorts of salads, dips and crackers. The drinks were all you would expect to find at a large social event and the wedding cake was massive in size and a site of elegance and beauty to behold.

Adorning every table was beautiful fresh cut flowers, some having to be imported. In addition, there were dishes of after dinner mints and mixed nuts on the table every four feet.

Photographers roamed the reception looking and watching for candid video clips, like Tom giving Ripper (who is tied to a post near by) two large croissants, and indiscriminant shots, of Petunia holding a Lily to her face with eyes closed, and a solitary tear about to roll down her cheek, as if living in a memory. In addition, irreverent shots, such as Marge taking a croissant from Vernon’s plate, while he is busy stealing a kiss from Petunia.

People continued eating and visiting while Petunia and Vernon opened their extravagant gifts bought for them. It was an event of the year to be sure, and it all went on without a hitch. Eventually, they managed to open and fondle all the lavish gifts.

Movers packed all the gifts and transported them to Vernon and Petunia’s new home. The newly weds bid adieu, and thanked everyone for their attendance and gifts, then left. Everyone thought it was to start their honeymoon, but it was so they could be back at Petunia’s old home to wait for Lily to come home from school.

Petunia sent a car and driver to King’s Cross to get Lily and bring her home. Lily expecting to have to hale a Cab, seen a driver holding a sign that said, “Lily Evans”, on it.

“Oh! She doesn’t hate me anymore!” she exclaimed in a jubilant voice. She grabbed the person next to her then hugged and kissed him.

“I’m so happy!” she announced to him, with a smile from ear to ear, and tears of joy streaming down her cheeks.

“I’m loved and I have a home.” The man smiled and patted her on the back around her waist.

“That’s nice honey,” he said innocently.

However, the woman on the other side of him glared at each of them in turn, then jerked the man away from Lily, and told her, "I don’t care how happy you are, get your own man, this one is taken!"

She turned from Lily (who was not paying any attention to her) to the man and said even more reproachfully, “I’ll deal with you later, husband - after we GET MOTHER FROM THE TRAIN!” she shouted.

Lily was so excited she didn’t even notice the commotion and the stares. She took up her potted rose plants and the driver took her trunk, and they proceeded to the car.

Knots tied up her stomach, the whole trip to King’s Cross from Hogwarts. James had tried to relax her by telling her everything would be okay. He would stay close by and if things didn’t look good then he would go with her to give Petunia her gift of love, and pick up Tom, the cat.

James followed her and seen that apparently all was well, so he kissed her good-bye and said he would drop in after an hour or so. After him and Petunia’s introduction, they would tell her of their plans to be married.

James gave Lily an hour and a half to visit and explain how to take care of the roses, and how they would bloom. When he disapparated to her house he stepped out from behind the bushes to find Lily sitting on the steps of the front porch, holding Tom on her lap.

“Oh,” she said non-plussed, but with a weak smile, she stood up and said, “Here you are. James, meet Tom. Tom, this is James. Let’s go inside.”

“Oh, ok,” he said reaching out to scratch Tom behind the ears and leaning in to smooch Lily quickly, but Lily had turned and started inside. James shrugged his shoulders and affixed an immensely charming smile on his handsome face, and looked around for Petunia.

The house looked deserted. It was immaculate, but it sure didn’t look like anyone lived here. “Um,” he started to say, but didn’t know what to say. “Um, looking around, where’s Petunia?”

“They left about an hour and twenty minutes ago.”

“Aw, er, well then,” A long pause ensued, more looking around, and a glance at Tom, who watched him intently.

“Honey,” he said cautiously as though the mere utterance of his voice would cause havoc to an unstable environment. “I can’t help but notice that something seems to be amiss here. Did she love your gift of love? I mean I’m sure she did, it’s incredibly brilliant, and all.”

Staring into her eyes, waves hand before her eyes watching for any reaction. Though a candle burns in her house, there’s nobody home. The weak smile on her face didn’t seem natural.

James put his face inches from her face earnestly trying to read some sort of anything going on. She spoke suddenly saying, “She took the rose plant.”

“Jeepers Lil! Honey you scared me, what’s going on?” Back to the blank stare. Suddenly he realized something.

“Someone has put a spell on you. Severus! Are you here?” James pulled out his wand and stood in front of her, looking around. He raised his wand and said, “Home Revelionum” Nothing.

Looking directly at Tom he stated urgently, “Tom, please - I know - even though Lily didn’t tell me that you are a werecat. I know of your kind and respect you and your magic. I don't have any desire to own or trap you. Please search my mind, search my heart and find out what you need to so you can trust me. I love Lily and I intend on, rather we both plan to get married. I ask that you continue to live with us as part of our family after we’re married. Do you trust me? Tom, please tell me what’s happened here!"








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wow...that was a nice post there Connie...i was pretty much into reading this one...it was really sweet and nice...
i liked the part where the pictures are taken and Magre is stealing the food from Vernon's plate when he was busy...um...kissing his wife......i can literally imagine that...good thinking...
would want to know more...

and yeah Connie thanks to put that indication about my story up...that was quite a surprise and well... nicely thought of...didnt expect that...thanks a lot...
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Firstly, my apologies Connie, but seeing your last post had regular type I assumed it was more replies and I never read it. I'm such a dork. I'm writing you about how you need to post and here I've been seeing a post for days now and I was completely oblivious to it ... Swear I'm too busy and my life and brain are over ...

Just a few corrections I noticed Connie, but otherwise, I loved your posts. I hope you don't mind me pointing them out.

I do this all the time, which is why I know it's wrong but read the sentence.

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In the evenings after each day of seeing: the caterers to decide what delectable delicacies was going to be served, or the flower shops to shop for the perfect brides bouquet, brides maids arrangements, boutonnieres for lapels, rose peddles to be dropped on the red carpet runway, gardenia trellises, and so on and so forth the list seemingly unending.
The Evenings are the subject of the sentence, but there's uhm not predicate. Nothing's happening in this sentence. You list who she sees, but not what happens to those evenings or Petunia, sorry. Maybe you meant to write something like this:

In the evenings after each day of seeing: the caterers, to decide what delectable delicacies are going to be served; the flower shops, to shop for the perfect bride's bouquet, bride's maids' arrangements, boutonnieres for lapels, rose petals to be dropped on the red carpet runway, gardenia trellises, and so on and so forth the list seemingly unending, Petunia would do something.

Everything I italicized I corrected. I always find it easier to fix other's grammar mistakes than my own I wrote the stuff so of course it's going to read right to me. Neways, the bride's bouquets needed the apostrophe because bride is possessive of bouquet. You're talking about the bouquet that belongs to the bride. Ditto bride's maid's arrangements. That one's more fun You see, the maids are possessed of the bride but the bouquets are the maids so the bride possesses the maids who possess the bouquets now that one would be hard for anyone to catch but grammar geeks like me Your was also should be a are because the wedding is in the future and not the past. Sorry.

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“Marge raises dogs, (her eyes squinted, her nose wrinkled, and her lips pursed showing she greatly disapproved) and she’s bringing her favorite one along. The vial thing such as it is.”
Here quotations enclose what someone says when they speak so technically it should read like this:

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“Marge raises dogs," her eyes squinted, her nose wrinkled, and her lips pursed showing she greatly disapproved, "and she’s bringing her favorite one along. The vial thing such as it is.”
Since she doesn't say her eyes squinted that's not part of the quote and since it's not an aside in a sentence you don't need the (). :grin:

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Tom was thinking already what to do to take care of the situation; he was going to enjoy this. Master of deception is his magic after all.
I totally ♥ Tom He's soooooooooo cute, and that's just the cutest thing ever.

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Oh there’s Marge and Kipper
Seriously, Kipper, Connie? I like Kipper

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“What the bloody blaze is going on with that dog? It’s drunk!” yelled Vernon
Firstly Vernon, don't ask questions you already know the answer to, you look a fool secondly, Connie, drunk dogs aren't allowed just kidding ... I love plastered pets you're so bad ...

I have to agree with harita the strikes were funny stuff, poor Ripper or whatever his name was ...

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Tom was very grumpy in his tuxedo the morning of the wedding. This was going to put a serious cramp in his courting that gorgeous new cat next door. How could Ginger form a profound opinion of him in this contraption?
If I wasn't already in love with Tom this would have clinched it You have a very strong sense of the comedic Connie and I love how you use it in your story. It lightens the mood.

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The last she knew was that Petunia was going to call Vernon and except his proposal.
It's 'accept his proposal', except is 'that is the exception not the rule.'

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However the woman on the other side of him glared at each of them in turn, then jerked the man away from Lily, and told her she didn’t care how happy she was, and to get her own man, that this one was taken!
While the whole incident on the train with Lily and the man and the wife is very funny, too cute for words honestly and I loved it dearly, that paragraph there is another prime example of you telling when you need to show. It's jarring because you show us everything that happens up to that point and you show us afterwards as well. I don't know why you changed your tone here but it's weak. You should write it out like:

The woman on the other side of him glared at each of them in turn, then jerked the man away from Lily and told her, "I don't care how happy you are, get your own man this one is taken!"

You're saying her words for her, why don't you let her do it herself.

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“I can’t help but notice that something seems to be amiss here. Did she love your gift of love? I mean I’m sure she did, it’s incredibly brilliant, and all.” (pause)
Here also, you're writing a story not stage directions so the (pause), should be written out as, "he paused" or "there was a pause" and technically a pause is between two somethings so he should have said something right after too.

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She spoke and knocked him off his feet, what from him jumping back so quickly because it startled him so badly.
^^This sentence is just cumbersome. I had to read it a few times to tell what you were saying.

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And the last sentence needs to end in closing quotes Sorry, I'll shut up now.

I loved the descriptions for the wedding, even though it was Petunia's wedding, one wishes her the best of luck Still, it's hard to imagine her and Vernon young and in love, no? LOL But everything with Marge was good, right down to the namby pamby

Lots of kewlness ensued in these two posts and I can see where your writing has become stronger and more confident, which is always a good thing. As a writer Connie I think you should always write with the authority of a god, even if you do write wrong ... I mean ... whose going to dispute it, right? It's your story?

You're really growing as a writer Connie, I'm impressed with your story and how you present it. The little mistakes are the same we all make, Kelly keeps finding teeny tiny spelling errors in my posts ... But what matters is the prose and how you use it, and you're definitely using it more artfully and that's what matters. I'm sorry, again, I wasn't here earlier, I'm such a loser. I ♥ Tom though ...

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Okay, drum roll please, my first post on your story Any corrections I was going to point out, were already mentioned, so you'll get no critiquing from me. :p I am really enjoying your story, but *whines* Mommmmmieeeee, you can't leave us hanging like this! Who cast a spell on Lilly?!?!? *Sighs* Okay, I'll anxiously wait for the next post along with all your other fans, but don't keep us waiting too long!
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Tom continued looking at James a moment longer. He could feel the urgency in this boy and he couldn’t feel any boundries in James's capacity of love for her. James knew analyzing him was important, so he tried to be patient.

“Lily is in a bad way, but she’ll be alright shortly.” Tom said. “You saw how excited she was at King’s Cross today. I also saw because I was in the car waiting for her. My heart broke for her because she was under the delusion that all was well between her and Petunia. When she got in the car, she became overwhelmed with the truth and tears flooded her eyes. She somehow realized that instead of Petunia being there, I was there so that Petunia wouldn’t have to see her. Understand?”

“Yes, yes, please go on.”

Tom jumped down from Lily’s arms and turned into Jim. Although James knew about werecats, he had never seen the convertion before, and his mouth dropped open. Jim held out his hand.

“My name is Jim in this form.” They shook hands. "It’s a great honor and privilege to finally meet the great James Potter.” He smiled openly.

“Tom, er, sorry, Jim, what has happened to Lily? Why is she like this? Is she in shock?”

“She was about to collapse, burdened with unbearable pain within her heart. I put her in a controlled trance and slowed down her heart rate. She was able to come home and face what awaited her here. Petunia, and her husband,"

“husband, Petunia’s married? But Lily didn’t say,” James cut in,

“were waiting for her.” Jim continued, only slightly annoyed with the interruption. Jim checked Lily’s eyes before going on. Looking back at James and seeing him looking also, although James didn't know what he was looking for.

Jim smiled “She’s doing fine. Now, she’ll be coming out of this trance shortly so I need to finish without interruption.” James nodded his head eagerly awaiting the rest of the explanation.

“At this moment she is unaware that you are here. I’ve been controlling her sense she broke down in the car. The only thing she’ll remember is, she came home and gave Petunia her gift of love with instructions to care for it.”

Jim explained to James what happened when Lily came home. Petunia simply said, ”Thanks," and shoved the rose bush onto Vernon. "This is my husband, Vernon. We were married today. You don’t have that terrible boy Severus anymore?”

She looked around with her nose wrinkled. The thought of him made her rather squeamish.

“No” answered Lily, unable to cope with Petunia getting married without as much as telling her.

“So, it’s a love potion and a lazy lay about then? I don’t care. Here is the key’s to the house. I certainly don’t need them, so I changed the Deed over to your name.”

“I’m in love with James Potter and we’re going to get married as soon as,” but she didn’t get to finish her announcement because Petunia said, “I really don’t care to hear it. Come along Vernon lets go.” And with that, she took back her rose bush. Then only for a second, looked at Lily with a caring look, however, just as quickly as that expression came it left, and so did Petunia and Vernon.

It was all a show though, for I saw into Petunias heart and seen that she was filled with love, and very proud of Lily. Sadly though, the stonewall she has around her heart kept her from telling Lily. She nearly did just before she left but couldn’t bring herself to do it. Petunia walked out of her life letting Lily think she still hated her.

She went completely into the trance at this exact moment. Her mind from the time Petunia left, until now, is totally abstracted. She needed this time to mend. She will not remember anything starting at the time Petunia left. I need to change back to Tom now, for she doesn’t know about werecats. She just thinks that I’m an unusually large cat.”

“Well, that explains everything then.” comprehention dawning on James's face. “I was wondering why she never mentioned it before.”

“Yes, now you know, and make sure she never finds out. Quickly now, one more thing before she comes around. Lily told me about the plan to join Dumbledores’ Order of the Phoenix, take me along. Dumbledore, Hagrid, Remus, and McGonagall, will know what I am, and I can control them if I need to. We are quite rare you know. Honestly though, I’m curious how you knew.”

“Ah, yes,” he smiled a sly smile, “I’ll tell you next time we talk. Lily is,” and at that second Tom was once more purring loudly in Lily’s arms being her best friend.

James ran back to the bushes and just as she aroused, he was coming to the door to knock. Lily went to the door, a smile of nervous relief that he was here. He smiled sadly and opened his arms to her.

“James” she whispered in a short breath. She put Tom down gently then, swiftly put her arms around James’s shoulder saying his name again. Lily closed her eyes and sobbed softly hiccupping on his chest, her forehead snuggled in his neck under his chin.

James wrapped his arms around her slight frame, and laid his head over top of hers. Tears welled up in his eyes and streamed down onto Lily's head. He felt her pain, and thanks to Tom’s magic, didn’t need to make her tell him the heart wrenching agony she was going through. She could talk about it later if she ever wanted to.

Lily raised her face so she could see his eyes. Their lips were so close together anticipating, and inviting. Their breathing was irregular, hers, short and catching, his long and hot. Their eyes could see nothing but the path to each other’s heart. Their eyes closed, and their lips came together.

It was not a kiss of lust, and mad desire, but submission to unite the two hearts asunder into one. It was a commitment of love. As they unlocked their lips and opened their eyes, they were looking into each other’s hearts.

“James” she softly said in an asking tone. “Will you marry me sooner rather than later? Let’s not wait until fall. I don’t want to be away from this place ever. This is my favorite place in the whole world.”

“You want to live here after we get married?” he asked shocked. I thought you wanted to live,” She put her finger on his lips.

“My favorite place in the whole world is in your arms.” she smiled sweetly. Her eyelids fluttered softly. She laid her head under his chin. She could feel the pulse in his throat on her forehead. Hm, she exhaled and said barely audible, “Right here.”

She was desperately tired. What an abysmal storm she just lived through! James lifted her chin and kissed her on the bridge of her nose. “We can get married first thing in the morning.” He put his right arm under her knees and lifted her, cradling her in his arms.

He kissed her again, backed up to Harry’s big overstuffed rocking recliner chair, and sat down. She snuggled in comfortably and closed her eyes.

She thought of all the times her and Petunia had seen their daddy and momma sitting just like this in this very chair. She smiled at the memory. They had thought it was so cute, but she knew now that it was having peace and contentment. All was well with the world. “Accio afghan James said quietly, then covered them and gently rocked them into the stillness of the night. Tom watched them for a bit.

“Welcome to the family Little One.” he said to himself. He jumped up lightly on Lily’s cradled body, curled up and went to sleep.

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Grrr...I had this really witty response about how ironic it is that Miss Prissy jumped on my lap just at the end of your post, and how she was biting my arm when I stopped petting her to type this. But she pounced on the keyboard and erased everything I had typed. As with Ottery, I've had a long day and I didn't feel like typing it all again. Anyway, great chapter, can't wait for the next...(nearly done typing it yet????)
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Molly W.: Stephanie, You better check to see if Miss Prissy is a werecat. I’ve always wondered. She is not a common cat!

To all my readers: I really hope you enjoy this chapter as much as I enjoyed writing it. It was a lot of fun to write, and watch to see if you meet some friends you know. Everyone is welcome to post comments. Next Chapter is: “Butterfly Flutters” to be posted around Friday, the 29th.



CHAPTER NINE

The Wedding of James and Lily, Not To Be Forgotten

First a Note from the Author:
I must encourage anyone reading this, to remember that this is purely fictitious and the use of certain licenses gives advantages to the writer. To say that I believe in true love, and marriage being a wonderful and precious union is factual.

However, I do not suggest or give advice for any couple to jump into any serious relationship and especially marriage when they are only seventeen as James and Lily are. They are in set circumstances, and literally taught to be an adult at seventeen.

In addition, they, being magical folk, will be living in a world of magic wherein their survival depends upon them making adult decisions. Moreover, James and Lily are both quite literally alone. I want to afford them the comfort of being able to marry and be happy. James is well off, and proven to be a very credible wizard, and does secret work for the Ministry of Magic, much like Muggles CIA agents for the American Government. Now that being said, let us get back to the story.

Lily and James apparated to Petunia and Vernon’s early the next morning, to invite them to the wedding. They said they were on their way to the Islands for their honeymoon, and respectfully declined. Instead, they sent a wedding present of a very ugly vase decorated with paintings of dogs. Tom recognized it as a gift Petunia and Vernon received at their wedding from Marge.

So it was then that, James and Lily went before the minister of James’s Church to be married. It was just going to be a small wedding in the country church with their best friends. However, being magical folk, it was only a small task for their friends to arrange a large wedding and to have the whole of Godric’s Hollow, Albus Dumbledore and a few other professors from Hogwarts to attend. Beautiful flowers appeared and arranged themselves quite adequately, adorning the wedding party, guests, the minister, and the sanctuary. Stunning arrangements of Lilacs, Lily of the Valley, Gardenias, Jasmine, Wisteria, Roses, Orchids, Gladiolas, Irises, Holly Hocks and a myriad of small flowers and vines, were under the swift guidance of, Professor Pomona Sprout.

Professor Flitwick was conducting an Orchestra playing, “The Wedding Song (There Is Love)” by Noel "Paul" Stookey.

Professor Minerva McGonagall came hurriedly towards Lily. As she was passing James and Sirius, without even stopping, noted them, shook her head and said, “This will not do.”

She flicked her wrist and did a little swirl then jabbed her wand at them. This changed their attire to; James, white dress robes with a crimson cravat and lacy frills trimmed in hunter green down the front and around the wrists; Sirius in rich black dress robes and a crimson cravat, with lacy frills trimmed in crimson down the front, and around the wrists.

A brush went through their hair, a quick trim for Sirius to tidy up his growing beard and mustache. And although, Sirius looked much improved, James’s hair remained the same. She went on to Lily muttering something along the lines of, “wondering why it looked like the boy never combed his hair the entire time at school.”

Sirius did a bit of grumbling and scowling about, “…looking like a choir boy, and who invited that old bat anyway?” Minerva grabbed Lily’s hand and started pulling her to one of the Sunday school classrooms. She said as she looked at Lissy, “Come child, we have little time to dilly dally. Girls, come along.” K’Lari and Kelly ran to catch up.

Ottery and Teddy had been standing with their girlfriends when McGonagall whisked the anxious girls away with her, but not before she gave Ottery and Teddy the same treatment as James and Sirius. This is what I have wanted to do all my years and never had a daughter for whom I could do for. Would you allow me the honor of creating your wedding gown, your Maid of Honor, and Maid’s dresses?”

“Yes, thank you, that’s very, - it’s my honor, I’m sure.” Lily stammered. Minerva was a wonder to behold indeed. Walking around Lissy, she squinted, and then an eyebrow raised, next a great flourish of her wand, and then spoke the spell:

No buttons, or bow,
The neck and back low,
Some cleavage, but chaste,
Crimson silk, tight to the waist,
Flow free from the hips, fade crimson to white,
Make this dress a breathtaking sight.

“Yes, that’ll do nicely. Do you like it? Are you pleased?” She looked at the girls for approval.

They were speechless, but only for a moment. They nodded their heads and said, “It’s gorgeous!”

“Good, then let’s finish you, so we can get started on the maids. She said with a pleasant smile on her face. She once again focused her wand on Lissy, and with a small swirling wrist action said:

Eyes, lips, cheeks and jawbones,
Give this face pure hues and tones.
Her curls in long locks of golden hair,
Braid up the sides, tuck and flip there.
Cascade down, her sensual back bare,
Her beauty brought forth; cause all to stare.

“Yes, that’ll do it, you think? Oh, wait one more thing.” She flipped her wand and said, “Accessorize” Earrings made of small crimson colored gems hung eloquently from delicate white gold chains, and a matching necklace adorned Lissy’s ears and neck. Last of all upon her feet a pair of white satin shoes. “Now we’re done. Do you like?” Again, the girls were speechless, and could only in awe nod their heads.

Kelly, and K’Lari, looked at each other and clasped hands, as they could not contain smiles of anticipation on their faces. They knew they were about to be transformed, as Lissy was.

Minerva, made a spectacular wand maneuver and, Kelly, and K’Lari, transformed exactly as Lissy, with the exception of hunter green coloring, where Lily’s was crimson.

Kelly was always more quiet and reserved. Although she was the shortest of the friends and quiet, didn’t mean that she couldn’t take care of herself. She had a temper of a bear if angered. Now, she stood before the mirror and admired herself. She had never thought of herself as beautiful, but had always taken pride in keeping herself looking her best. She has thick, long, black, curly hair that was a contributing factor to Ottery’s notice of her. Now, McGonagall did her magic and fixed it the same as she did for Lissy. With the sides pulled away from her face, she was astonished at what she seen.

“You made me beautiful“, she exclaimed, with a shy smile on her face.
McGonagall smiled sweetly at her and said, “Nonsense child! You have always been beautiful. I simply uncovered what you have, so we can see you. I don’t know why you always hide such a precious face. The rest is only, as Dumbledore is fond of saying, “magically enhanced.”

K’Lari took her turn to look in the mirror. She was a little apprehensive to look at first. She didn’t consider herself as a Tomboy, but certainly didn’t spend long getting herself ready to meet the day. A pair of skinny leg blue jeans, that rode low and snug on the hips, a pull over blouse that just touched the top of her jeans, and her long, thick light brown hair pulled back into a high ponytail, was how she preferred to be. A girl of action and always on her toes ready to fight anyone who dared to say anything about her, and could certainly take care of herself. She gave Teddy a black eye the first time they met simply for him calling her beautiful and winking at her. It was true love ever since.
Now she looked at herself, and finally giggled saying, “I can stand this for a bit.” She pulled the bottom of her dress out to the sides and spun around, admiring herself. “Beautiful is a nice look. I can do this now and then.”

“Ok, now for the Bride.” Minerva took Lily’s hands and delicately spoke to her of her mother, and if Lily wanted in anyway to remember her.
“I love their,” nodding her head towards Lissy, K’Lari and Kelly, “dresses. Actually, Mamma’s gown was quite a bit the same, only a bit more modest, and of course, all white. She loved pearls and her favorite color was blue.

I had asked Momma if I could wear it, our frame structure was the same, and she said she would love it if I would.“ Tears started streaming down her face and she tried bravely to continue. A pause and then she said, “After the funeral, Petunia sold Mommas dress as it was too small for her to use, and she said I wasn’t worthy to wear it.”

Minerva pursed her lips and after she was sure she could speak civilly said, “There is no one more worthy to wear that dress than you, and I’m sorry Petunia’s jealousy took away her happiness.” Then she gave a sharp nod of her head as if that made her statement so.

“All is not lost though. I’m not going to think up a spell for your dress, we’ll both make it from scratch. Would you like that? However, we must hurry, before those boys, start modifying there robes.”

They looked out and sure enough, Sirius was looking around with his wand ready. “Lissy your ready, run out there and distract them. We’ll only be a moment longer.

Oh here, I have an idea.” She slipped an elegant ring on Lissy’s pinky. “When this gets warm instruct, Maestro Flitwick, to start the Wedding March, then scoot back here with Sirius, Ottery, and Teddy in tow so they can escort you to your places awaiting the bride at the alter.”

Lissy hurried out to where Sirius and James were. “Professor McGonagall says you don’t want to make her angry.” Sirius straightened and put away his wand. Turning to make some snide remark, took in the beauty that stood before him and fell heavily into the bench where upon he had been leaning. James laughed heartily and Sirius smiled mischievously.

“I think I’ve injured myself. Could someone call a nurse for me?” Lissy was indeed going to be going into the field of nursing and smiled upon the young man she so adored. “Get up silly, the wedding will be starting in just minutes.”

At this announcement from Lissy, James dropped to the seat, due to his knees giving out on him. Sirius now was the one laughing merrily. Ottery and Teddy snuck out the back door with a look of mischief on their faces.

Tom was angry and wanted to tell Minerva that Lily’s Momma’s dress was at this very moment hanging in Petunia’s closet. That she didn’t sell the dress and was just too jealous to allow Lily to wear it. He held his temptation and let Minerva have this moment with Lily, as it did wonders for both of them.

“Let’s start with the same basic dress as Lissy’s, only all white with a high bodice, attached to a wide choker collar, to accent your elegant neck. A very delicate lace, rimmed the top and bottom of the collar, then down a V shape in the front and back where Lissy’s dress was open.

A light chain of pearls hung in small swags around her collar in the lace then crossed in sophisticated swags over the V in front and back. Minerva flicked her wand and the pearls magically changed form into baby blue teardrops.

Her make up applied like the maid’s, and her hair hung lively in a body of red waves. The sides pulled up in braids with baby’s breath, and more pearls, clasped together with the veil.

“Now, how does that silly tradition go? Something old, (she took the Cameo from her own robes and attached it to the front of Lily’s choker collar. This was my Mother’s; I would love you to have it.

Something new, hmm I have it.” A very dainty ring appeared on her right pinky finger. “Give this to your first baby girl.

Something borrowed;” she poked her wand and on lily’s feet appeared Cinderella’s glass slippers.

“And finally, something blue.” Her wand aimed at her thigh, “we’ll see this at the reception when James takes it off of you. Does everything meet with your approval Dear?”

“Yes, oh yes thank you ever so much! How can I ever thank you?”

“If you don’t mind, please allow me to think of you as my daughter and your children as my grandchildren. It can be our secret.”

“I would love that, but, then I still have you to thank, something else I can do for you.”

“Some motherly advise then? Don’t wait until later (when the time is right) to have a family. If you want children, have them, because later might not come.

My husband, God rest his soul, and I wanted children, but we decided to wait until he became a full time member on his team, (he was a seeker for the Scarlet Aces) and was killed in a Quidditch World Cup match. We never had children because it was the first year he played on the team. He was to get a contract with them after the match they were playing.”

“Thank you,” Lily struggled to say as her throat was constricting. She hugged her, “Thank you Momma,” soft tears dropping off her face.

“Here now, let’s have none of that. You’ll ruin your face.” She dabbed her eyes with a new handkerchief.

Lily whispered, “Would you please sit at my Mamma’s place, up front?”

Minerva caught her breath, and with wet eyes, and her chin quivering, nodded yes in acknowledgment. “Oh, but this won’t do.” She looked at her simple robes.

She waved her wand over herself and a splendid robe of magenta settled upon her. “Now, I need an escort.” Peeking out the door, she caught the eye of Remus, and motioned him over, the same moment touching the ring on her pinky, and seen Lissy tell Flitwick to start the Wedding March. Remus appeared with an asking look on his face. “You are to be my escort.” said Minerva. He was delighted.

She flipped her wand and his tattered robes became the same as the groomsmen’s robes. His hair trimmed and brushed then, a closer shave. He was pleased and offered his arm, and as the music started, got in position to walk her to her seat traditionally reserved for the Bride’s mother.

Everyone fell in to place and Dumbledore touched his heart when he went back to collect Lily. “Be still my heart Minerva; behold your beauty that which makes my heart race!”

“Oh you, you,” not being able to come up with a suitable name to call him, and her face turning red, pointed to Lily and with a gentle shove sent him on to Lily. “Walk your “daughter” down to her man, and see you don’t step on her dress!”

Tom was so happy; he started to run up the isle to sit in the seat beside where Minerva would be sitting. “Just a minute you.” Tom stopped as though glued to the spot. He was afraid he was going to have to wait outside until the wedding was over.

“We can’t have a black cat at a wedding, even though you are striped with grey.” She flicked her wrist and Tom became as white as great fluffy clouds on a hot summer day. Much better, you may take your seat.

“It’s better than a monkey suit,” he thought, remembering the tuxedo he had to wear at Petunia’s wedding. Moreover, there would be no pillow with rings to deliver to the Groom. He strutted up the isle quite full of himself.

A photographer floated around getting pictures as the wedding proceeded without a hitch, and it was a beautiful wedding to be sure. As the Bride and Groom came out as, Mr.& Mrs. James Potter, a grand explosion of incredible and magnificent fireworks erupted in elaborate and spectacular beauty over the church. These were of course compliments of Ottery and Teddy to send off the newlyweds with their best wishes. In their way of thinking, it was more fun then throwing rice on them.

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that was such an awesome post Connie.i loved the way you wrote about the dresses for the brides maids...and i loved your description for it...and Sirius...god! Sirius was really Sirius.......that was sweet post...waiting for more...
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Woo hoo! Such a happy day! I love the wedding...I love Minerva's role in it..I love Tom. Thanks for posting early. I'm off to bed now! *yawns...stretches...stumbles down the hall*
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This was a wonderfully written chapter, and I enjoyed every last bit of it!!! I was laughing, and nearly had tears in my eyes at some parts!!! Absolutely wonderful!!!

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[FONT="Verdana"][SIZE="4"][COLOR="Navy"]Veggie_Potter: Stefanie, I’m so happy you liked this chapter. Thank you so much for saying I’m a good writer. Your opinion just made my day!
Its absolutely true. I always look forward to reading your posts, and this chapter was absolutely amazing!


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First a Note from the Author:
I must encourage anyone reading this, to remember that this is purely fictitious and the use of certain licenses gives advantages to the writer. To say that I believe in true love, and marriage being a wonderful and precious union is factual.

However, I do not suggest or give advice for any couple to jump into any serious relationship and especially marriage when they are only seventeen as James and Lily are. They are in set circumstances, and literally taught to be an adult at seventeen.

In addition, they, being magical folk, will be living in a world of magic wherein their survival depends upon them making adult decisions. Moreover, James and Lily are both quite literally alone. I want to afford them the comfort of being able to marry and be happy. James is well off, and proven to be a very credible wizard, and does secret work for the Ministry of Magic, much like Muggles CIA agents for the American Government. Now that being said, let us get back to the story.
Thanks for saying this, and I very much agree. I have known many people in my age group (I'm 19) who have gotten married. One of them is doing okay, but they started with things much to early (having a child, buying a home), and now they have to put getting a proper education and job on hold, and are now losing their home due to financial difficulties. The other one has a two year old (almost 3 now) and she lost her house, and is currently getting a divorce. You can never be sure, so patience is always a virtue. I'm not saying its always a bad thing, but just make sure you know what you are getting yourself into when getting married and doing all of that stuff when you're really young!

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muttering something along the lines of, “wondering why it looked like the boy never combed his hair the entire time at school.”
I laughed, literally, out loud at this!

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This is what I have wanted to do all my years and never had a daughter for whom I could do for. Would you allow me the honor of creating your wedding gown, your Maid of Honor, and Maid’s dresses?”
I love McGonagall!


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K’Lari took her turn to look in the mirror. She was a little apprehensive to look at first. She didn’t consider herself as a Tomboy, but certainly didn’t spend long getting herself ready to meet the day. A pair of skinny leg blue jeans, that rode low and snug on the hips, a pull over blouse that just touched the top of her jeans, and her long, thick light brown hair pulled back into a high ponytail, was how she preferred to be. A girl of action and always on her toes ready to fight anyone who dared to say anything about her, and could certainly take care of herself. She gave Teddy a black eye the first time they met simply for him calling her beautiful and winking at her. It was true love ever since.
Now she looked at herself, and finally giggled saying, “I can stand this for a bit.” She pulled the bottom of her dress out to the sides and spun around, admiring herself. “Beautiful is a nice look. I can do this now and then.”
This is exactly how I am! I was maid of honor at my cousin's wedding, and I was wearing high heels and a frilly dress! It was kind of nice!

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“After the funeral, Petunia sold Mommas dress as it was too small for her to use, and she said I wasn’t worthy to wear it.”
My mouth literally dropped to the ground when I read this! Grrrrrrr at Petunia!!!!


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Tom was angry and wanted to tell Minerva that Lily’s Momma’s dress was at this very moment hanging in Petunia’s closet. That she didn’t sell the dress and was just too jealous to allow Lily to wear it. He held his temptation and let Minerva have this moment with Lily, as it did wonders for both of them.
Grrrrrrrrr at Petunia even more!!!! I wonder if McGonagall recognizes Tom as a werecat, since she is an animangus :O

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“Now, how does that silly tradition go? Something old, (she took the Cameo from her own robes and attached it to the front of Lily’s choker collar. This was my Mother’s; I would love you to have it.

Something new, hmm I have it.” A very dainty ring appeared on her right pinky finger. “Give this to your first baby girl.

Something borrowed;” she poked her wand and on lily’s feet appeared Cinderella’s glass slippers.

“And finally, something blue.” Her wand aimed at her thigh, “we’ll see this at the reception when James takes it off of you. Does everything meet with your approval Dear?”
I love this!


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“If you don’t mind, please allow me to think of you as my daughter and your children as my grandchildren. It can be our secret.”
Ohhhhhhh!!!! This made my eyes water!!!!! How precious!!!!

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My husband, God rest his soul, and I wanted children, but we decided to wait until he became a full time member on his team, (he was a seeker for the Scarlet Aces) and was killed in a Quidditch World Cup match. We never had children because it was the first year he played on the team. He was to get a contract with them after the match they were playing.”
Poor McGonagall!!! I always wondered why she and Dumbledore didn't get together (but Dumby is gay, we now know <3)... I always wondered why McGonagall didn't have a spouse! Or any of the professors for that matter, since they live on the Hogwarts grounds!


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Lily whispered, “Would you please sit at my Mamma’s place, up front?”
Ohhhh, here comes the watery eyes again!!!



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“We can’t have a black cat at a wedding, even though you are striped with grey.” She flicked her wrist and Tom became as white as great fluffy clouds on a hot summer day. Much better, you may take your seat.

“It’s better than a monkey suit,” he thought, remembering the tuxedo he had to wear at Petunia’s wedding. Moreover, there would be no pillow with rings to deliver to the Groom. He strutted up the isle quite full of himself.
I loved this part! Tom is so cool! I wish I had a werecat!!!
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