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JeshieRAWR 11-30-2009 01:49 AM

Mourning - Sa13+
 
Mourning
-the act of sorrow for a person(s) death

http://i876.photobucket.com/albums/a.../Mourning1.jpg
Made by Jess, Of S.O.S. [Jessica's Request Thread].

Dedicated to Marcy, you've been there ever since my first fanfiction. :glomp:

Hello! My name's Jess or Jessica. This is my 6th fanfiction in the romance section. ;) Please read and review. I also update people in messages, if you would like me to update you, please message me. I hope you like it!

Disclamer: The characters, as well as the Harry Potter universe, belong to J.K. Rowling.

Jess's Other Stories:

Love is in the Air, Mission Pureblood, Desperate, Wizard POV's and S.O.S. [Jessica's Request Thread]



Posts:

Chapter 2/Chapter 3/Chapter 4/Chapter 5/Chapter 6/Chapter 7/Chapter 8/Chapter 9/Chapter 10/Chapter 11/Chapter 12 /Chapter 13/Chapter 14/Chapter 15


Prologue


It had happened.

Yes.

The battle has happened.

I have cut myself off from everyone I know. It has been 2 years and all the contacts from my friends I've been ignoring. I need this, a new life. Something new to start with. If I take one look at anybody that I knew before I will break down and I did that for a year. Now after 5 years I've started out new.

I moved out of my parent's old house and I have a flat in London. I've began to work as a waitress at Cafe Le Rose. I barely use magic anymore, unless I'm at my house. This is my story, the story of my Mourning...

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Chapter 1


I was walking down the old brick stairs of my flat porch out into the crisp, cool morning. I breathed out and saw my breath in the air, like a fog. I hugged my warm red, fuzzy coat closer to me as the cold wind blew against me. I crossed the cross-walk on the street, avoiding cars, and walked for two blocks. I saw the blue and white sign, Cafe Le Rose. I took out the key from my pocket and unlocked the door to the Cafe.

As I walked in I surveyed the area, white, circular tables all around, except for the gray square tables right by the windows looking out the lake. I sighed and switched on the lights. I put on my apron which was blue with the Cafe's name printed upon it. I started up the cash register and sat down behind the counter, waiting for the other employees to come. Ten minutes later my friend Emma came in.

"Hey Emma." I said smiling, standing up, straightening out my apron.

"Hey Hermione." Emma said, hanging her coat up on the hanger and switching the sign to OPEN instead of CLOSED.

Fifteen minutes later more and more people were hanging up their coats, getting behind the counters or sitting at tables. I grabbed my pen and notepad and walked over to a man with auburn - red hair and a woman with brown curly hair.

"Welcome to Cafe Le Rose. What can I get for you?" I said smiling at them.

The two were looking down at their menus. The auburn-red haired man spoke first.

"Erm..I'll get the Mocha Latte." He said taking a quick glance once more at the menu. "Oh and a blueberry muffin to go."

I looked down and started to write his order down. The brown-haired woman spoke next.

"Oh I'll have a Strawberry Fruit Smoothie and a blueberry muffin just like my Ronniekins." She said in a squeaky voice.

I wrote that order down then paused. I looked up and gasped. It was Ron and Lavender. Ron had changed quite a bit. His face looked more mature. Then Lavender had become quite beautiful but still the same. How did she live that blasted war.

"Erm...hello?" Ron asked waving a hand in front of my face.

I cleared my throat and shook my head.

"Oh coming right up." I said walking over to the counter and yelling, "Order."

Emma came up and said, "One Mocha Latte, One Strawberry Fruit Smoothie, and two blueberry muffins!"

I could see one of the other employees, Scott, handling with all the drinks and muffins. He got it in five minutes too soon.

"Thanks Scott." I said nodding my head.

I walked over to Ron and Lavender's table and sat down their orders.

"Enjoy." I said faking a smile.

I began to walk away but Ron's voice startled me.

"Have I met you before?" He asked.

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princess of*hp* 11-30-2009 02:03 AM

First Reader! Jess, I love it, so much potential! :glomp:

- Love, Mel :loved:

MarcyMoo 11-30-2009 02:11 AM

AHH!!!
I love the plot, seems familiar to me! :lol:
But totally loved it, can't wait for more!

Whens the next chapter going to be up?

J-E-L-L-O 11-30-2009 02:15 AM

Awesome!!!!!!!!!! I totally love it!!!!!!

XxSkaterJonasxX 11-30-2009 02:37 AM

Hey Heyz!!!! I luv it!!

RoseMalfoy 11-30-2009 03:06 AM

I loved it!
it seems really interesting!
PAMS!!!
-Chrissy

Ellieeenator 11-30-2009 03:13 AM

I liked it a lot Jess. PAMS! :) :) :)

Maxilocks 11-30-2009 04:53 AM

Lovely start. && I have to say Jess... YOU HAVE IMPROVED! You have always been a good writer, but this story is even more well-written than usual. Lots of potential here, too! GOOD job, and good luck! <3


Winter Dreams 11-30-2009 06:24 AM

Woooooooow. I agree, lots of potential. It's an interesting start of a plot, too. Even though it doesn't have Malfoy. :shifty:

Maxilocks 11-30-2009 06:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JesshLuffYAY (Post 8870939)
[CENTER]Mourning
-the act of sorrow for a person(s) death

I find this funny, JesshLuffYAY. Not because of the meaning - definitely not, that would be terrible - but because it reminds me of how I ask you for meanings plenty of times, and you look them up on the net and stuff, and then we laugh over all sorts of wacky words like Wowza. :lol:


harita 11-30-2009 08:22 AM

Heya Jess...nice start hun...but hadnt Ron noticed Hermione?god!want to know more...

##Hermione&Draco## 11-30-2009 12:24 PM

Very intresting...
and i may say also you really have great potential....
yes indeed...
you are becoming a great author...
I want more hun:)
-Xavier

Lollipop! 11-30-2009 03:59 PM

OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!
JESSY! Woah! That's amazing!

draco'sgirlraquel! 11-30-2009 09:10 PM

beautiful jess!!!!!!!!! luv it PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Calezilla 11-30-2009 11:13 PM

Holy Smokes !
This is amazing for suree.
PAMS :D

norenchen 12-01-2009 12:17 AM

Great start
I can't believe Ron is with Lavender!!! Why doesn't Ron recognise Hermione?!?!?!? Did she use magic to change her appearance?!?!?!?

keep writing please

Shell

POTTER128 12-01-2009 04:36 AM

the post was great and this is goin to be as good as the others cant wait for more

potionsmaster22 12-04-2009 08:34 PM

OMG!!! Jess this is soooo good!! I can't wait to read more from your wonderful mind!! :) PAMS!!!!
Sammy

cursedkatie 12-05-2009 10:00 PM

OMG! EEP! PAMS! CONTINUE PLEASE!!! *ahem* sorry about that. I was a bit excited. :D

cait malfoy 12-06-2009 12:39 AM

Oh I'm so excited to see what happens next! Great writing, great idea, and great cliffhanger! Keep it coming:)

JeshieRAWR 12-06-2009 09:05 AM

Replies To Comments(:
 
Replies To Comments:
Hey everyone!
I just wanted to say thank you for all the lovely comments!
You have no clue how much I appreciate them all!
:glomp:
Jess(:

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princess of*hp* (The Tale of Two)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mel<3 (Post 8871004)
First Reader! Jess, I love it, so much potential! :glomp:

- Love, Mel :loved:

Yay! :woot: My first reader!! :loved:
Thank you so much, I had no clue this story was going to be this good...so far. :shifty:
Thanks for commenting! :glomp:
Jess(:


hermione9495 (Love Will Hurt & Love Is Dangerous)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Marcyluff<3 (Post 8871037)
AHH!!!
I love the plot, seems familiar to me! :lol:
But totally loved it, can't wait for more!

Whens the next chapter going to be up?

:help: :lol:
:whistle: How is it familiar?
:D Thanks Marcy!
It's nice to hear that you liked it. :loved:
Wow, already eager for the next chapter, huh? xD
I should be posting the new chapter later today after I put up some Christmas decorations. :)
Jess(:

lathelawyer0128

Quote:

Originally Posted by Leslie<3 (Post 8871052)
Awesome!!!!!!!!!! I totally love it!!!!!!

:glomp:
Thank you so much!
*gives a cookie to Leslie*
Jess(:


XxSkaterJonasxX

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lucy<3 (Post 8871121)
Hey Heyz!!!! I luv it!!

Haii! :hello:
:loved: Thanks!
<3
Jess(:


RoseMalfoy

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chrissy<3 (Post 8871232)
I loved it!
it seems really interesting!
PAMS!!!
-Chrissy

:eek: :lmao:
Thank you!
I hope it continues on to be interesting for you. :)
New chapter should be up later on today. :D
Jess(:


DracikinsLuver4321 (Bring Your Kid to Work Day & Time Heals)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Thalia<3 (Post 8871256)
I liked it a lot Jess. PAMS! :) :) :)

:glomp:
I'm glad you liked it! :)
Hope you like the rest of it as well!
Jess(:


SenoritaMaxie (The Second Road to Death)

Quote:

Originally Posted by MaxieluffYAY<3 (Post 8871644)
Lovely start. && I have to say Jess... YOU HAVE IMPROVED! You have always been a good writer, but this story is even more well-written than usual. Lots of potential here, too! GOOD job, and good luck! <3


:D
-clingsfordearlife-
:blush: :blush: :blush:
Awww Maxerzzz you're so nice!! <3
Thank you soo much, this comment brightened my day. :glomp:
Jess(:


Quote:

Originally Posted by Maxerzz<3 (Post 8871898)
I find this funny, JesshLuffYAY. Not because of the meaning - definitely not, that would be terrible - but because it reminds me of how I ask you for meanings plenty of times, and you look them up on the net and stuff, and then we laugh over all sorts of wacky words like Wowza. :lol:


WOWZA! :D
I hope you didn't mean the meaning. :lmao:
I didn't really notice that once I put it up. xD
Looking up words on the internet is funner than you actually think it is. :shifty:
<3
Jess(:


Lily Lupin

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ana<3 (Post 8871886)
Woooooooow. I agree, lots of potential. It's an interesting start of a plot, too. Even though it doesn't have Malfoy. :shifty:

:eek:
Thanks!
I guess I was really hyped up when I wrote this chapter. xD
Glad to know you liked it! :)
:lmao:
I was waiting for someone to say that!
Actually....Draco will come soon....:shifty:
Jess(:


harita (Life Post Wizard War)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Harita<3 (Post 8872163)
Heya Jess...nice start hun...but hadnt Ron noticed Hermione?god!want to know more...

:hello:
:loved: Thank you!
Well it's been 2 years since they've seen each other and 5 years since the war was over.
So Hermione probably has changed since she is 5 years older than what she was during the war. :)
Hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Jess(:


##Hermione&Draco## (I Open At The Close)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Xavierluff<3 (Post 8872343)
Very intresting...
and i may say also you really have great potential....
yes indeed...
you are becoming a great author...
I want more hun:)
-Xavier

:)
Wow lot's of potential, I'm not known for that. xD
Aww thank you, but I don't think I'm becoming an author when I grow up. :no:
Will do!
Jess(:


LilyLunaGinnyPotter (My Story & As the Sun Sets)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lilyluffeh<3 (Post 8872550)
OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!
JESSY! Woah! That's amazing!

:eek:
Wow! I mean I thought I was excited about it, but Lily you have shown me that I was wrong. xD
Thank you soo much luff! :glomp:
Jess(:


draco'sgirlraquel!
Quote:

Originally Posted by draco'sgirlraquel! (Post 8873406)
beautiful jess!!!!!!!!! luv it PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:loved:
Aww thank you so much!
Jess(:


CaleyShoutCaley<3
Quote:

Originally Posted by Caleyluff<3 (Post 8873782)
Holy Smokes !
This is amazing for suree.
PAMS :D

xD
Ahh Caley is herrrreee!!! <3
:eek: :lmao:
I'm glad you like it!
I bet you'll see me at school later writing more chapters...:shifty:
Thanks!
Jess(:


norenchen
Quote:

Originally Posted by Shell<3 (Post 8873996)
Great start
I can't believe Ron is with Lavender!!! Why doesn't Ron recognise Hermione?!?!?!? Did she use magic to change her appearance?!?!?!?

keep writing please

Shell

:glomp:
Ron is with Lavender...I didn't know that...:whistle:
:no:
No it's been 2 years since they've seen each other and 5 years since the war.
So Hermione has gotten older and has changed. :)
Thank youu!!
Will do!
Jess(:


POTTER128
Quote:

Originally Posted by POTTER128 (Post 8874678)
the post was great and this is goin to be as good as the others cant wait for more

Awww thank you!
I'm glad you like this story as well as my other ones too! <3
:glomp: :loved:
Jess(:


potionsmaster22 (The Love of My Life)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sammy<3 (Post 8884338)
OMG!!! Jess this is soooo good!! I can't wait to read more from your wonderful mind!! :) PAMS!!!!
Sammy

:glomp: :glomp:
Wonderful mind? :loved: xDD
Will do hun!
Jess(:


cursedkatie (Love Will Find A Way)
Quote:

Originally Posted by Katie<3 (Post 8887530)
OMG! EEP! PAMS! CONTINUE PLEASE!!! *ahem* sorry about that. I was a bit excited. :D

:eek: :lmao:
Tons of people are excited! :D
I'm happy you are liking it so far! <3
Jess(:


cait bragg
Quote:

Originally Posted by cait bragg (Post 8887970)
Oh I'm so excited to see what happens next! Great writing, great idea, and great cliffhanger! Keep it coming:)

I think everyone is by now. :lol:
Awww thank you for the lovely comment! :)
Jess(:

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Maxilocks 12-06-2009 01:46 PM

*shnuggles you*

Nuuuu, I no mean the meaning. :lol:
&& you put in a link to my fiiiciiieeee.

=O


JeshieRAWR 12-06-2009 03:35 PM

MaxieluffYAY's Comment(:
 
SenoritaMaxie (The Second Road to Death)

Quote:

Originally Posted by MaxieluffYAY (Post 8889288)
*shnuggles you*

Nuuuu, I no mean the meaning. :lol:
&& you put in a link to my fiiiciiieeee.

=O

*gives mah Maxerzz a special teddy bear who actually can walk*

:gasp: :lmao:

Yushh I did! :)
Although it was very hard to pick between putting up Paws; Pink Pillow; or The Second Road to Death.
So I decided to put up The Second Road to Death because it was the only one who didn't have such a long title. xD

:glomp:

Jess(:
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##Hermione&Draco## 12-06-2009 06:15 PM

Hehehe...
Well,I think you will be a great author if thats
what you want to pursue in life...
Every fanfic you do...You get simply
More astonishing....
and you also put a link to my Poetry thread...
Thanks....
Im going to post a poem right now...
Thanks again<3
looking forward to the next chapter...
Love you!!!

-Xavier

JeshieRAWR 12-06-2009 06:30 PM

Xavierluff's Comment(:
 
##Hermione&Draco## (I Open At The Close)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Xavierluff<3 (Post 8889699)
Hehehe...
Well,I think you will be a great author if thats
what you want to pursue in life...
Every fanfic you do...You get simply
More astonishing....
and you also put a link to my Poetry thread...
Thanks....
Im going to post a poem right now...
Thanks again<3
looking forward to the next chapter...
Love you!!!

-Xavier

Awww thank you, that made my day. :loved:
No problem! :)
Yay! I can't wait to see it. :D
:glomp: :glomp:
Jess(:

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