Mourning - Sa13+ -the act of sorrow for a person(s) death http://i876.photobucket.com/albums/a.../Mourning1.jpg Made by Jess, Of S.O.S. [Jessica's Request Thread]. Dedicated to Marcy, you've been there ever since my first fanfiction. :glomp: Hello! My name's Jess or Jessica. This is my 6th fanfiction in the romance section. ;) Please read and review. I also update people in messages, if you would like me to update you, please message me. I hope you like it! Disclamer: The characters, as well as the Harry Potter universe, belong to J.K. Rowling. Jess's Other Stories: Love is in the Air, Mission Pureblood, Desperate, Wizard POV's and S.O.S. [Jessica's Request Thread] Posts: Chapter 2/Chapter 3/Chapter 4/Chapter 5/Chapter 6/Chapter 7/Chapter 8/Chapter 9/Chapter 10/Chapter 11/Chapter 12 /Chapter 13/Chapter 14/Chapter 15 Prologue It had happened. Yes. The battle has happened. I have cut myself off from everyone I know. It has been 2 years and all the contacts from my friends I've been ignoring. I need this, a new life. Something new to start with. If I take one look at anybody that I knew before I will break down and I did that for a year. Now after 5 years I've started out new. I moved out of my parent's old house and I have a flat in London. I've began to work as a waitress at Cafe Le Rose. I barely use magic anymore, unless I'm at my house. This is my story, the story of my Mourning... --------------------- Chapter 1 I was walking down the old brick stairs of my flat porch out into the crisp, cool morning. I breathed out and saw my breath in the air, like a fog. I hugged my warm red, fuzzy coat closer to me as the cold wind blew against me. I crossed the cross-walk on the street, avoiding cars, and walked for two blocks. I saw the blue and white sign, Cafe Le Rose. I took out the key from my pocket and unlocked the door to the Cafe. As I walked in I surveyed the area, white, circular tables all around, except for the gray square tables right by the windows looking out the lake. I sighed and switched on the lights. I put on my apron which was blue with the Cafe's name printed upon it. I started up the cash register and sat down behind the counter, waiting for the other employees to come. Ten minutes later my friend Emma came in. "Hey Emma." I said smiling, standing up, straightening out my apron. "Hey Hermione." Emma said, hanging her coat up on the hanger and switching the sign to OPEN instead of CLOSED. Fifteen minutes later more and more people were hanging up their coats, getting behind the counters or sitting at tables. I grabbed my pen and notepad and walked over to a man with auburn - red hair and a woman with brown curly hair. "Welcome to Cafe Le Rose. What can I get for you?" I said smiling at them. The two were looking down at their menus. The auburn-red haired man spoke first. "Erm..I'll get the Mocha Latte." He said taking a quick glance once more at the menu. "Oh and a blueberry muffin to go." I looked down and started to write his order down. The brown-haired woman spoke next. "Oh I'll have a Strawberry Fruit Smoothie and a blueberry muffin just like my Ronniekins." She said in a squeaky voice. I wrote that order down then paused. I looked up and gasped. It was Ron and Lavender. Ron had changed quite a bit. His face looked more mature. Then Lavender had become quite beautiful but still the same. How did she live that blasted war. "Erm...hello?" Ron asked waving a hand in front of my face. I cleared my throat and shook my head. "Oh coming right up." I said walking over to the counter and yelling, "Order." Emma came up and said, "One Mocha Latte, One Strawberry Fruit Smoothie, and two blueberry muffins!" I could see one of the other employees, Scott, handling with all the drinks and muffins. He got it in five minutes too soon. "Thanks Scott." I said nodding my head. I walked over to Ron and Lavender's table and sat down their orders. "Enjoy." I said faking a smile. I began to walk away but Ron's voice startled me. "Have I met you before?" He asked. |
First Reader! Jess, I love it, so much potential! :glomp: - Love, Mel :loved: |
I love the plot, seems familiar to me! :lol: But totally loved it, can't wait for more! Whens the next chapter going to be up? |
Awesome!!!!!!!!!! I totally love it!!!!!! |
Hey Heyz!!!! I luv it!! |
I loved it! it seems really interesting! PAMS!!! -Chrissy |
I liked it a lot Jess. PAMS! :) :) :) |
Lovely start. && I have to say Jess... YOU HAVE IMPROVED! You have always been a good writer, but this story is even more well-written than usual. Lots of potential here, too! GOOD job, and good luck! <3 |
Woooooooow. I agree, lots of potential. It's an interesting start of a plot, too. |
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Heya Jess...nice start hun...but hadnt Ron noticed Hermione?god!want to know more... |
Very intresting... and i may say also you really have great potential.... yes indeed... you are becoming a great author... I want more hun:) -Xavier |
JESSY! Woah! That's amazing! |
beautiful jess!!!!!!!!! luv it PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Holy Smokes ! This is amazing for suree. PAMS :D |
Great start I can't believe Ron is with Lavender!!! Why doesn't Ron recognise Hermione?!?!?!? Did she use magic to change her appearance?!?!?!? keep writing please Shell |
the post was great and this is goin to be as good as the others cant wait for more |
OMG!!! Jess this is soooo good!! I can't wait to read more from your wonderful mind!! :) PAMS!!!! Sammy |
OMG! EEP! PAMS! CONTINUE PLEASE!!! *ahem* sorry about that. I was a bit excited. :D |
Oh I'm so excited to see what happens next! Great writing, great idea, and great cliffhanger! Keep it coming:) |
Replies To Comments(: Hey everyone! I just wanted to say thank you for all the lovely comments! You have no clue how much I appreciate them all! :glomp: Jess(: ---------- princess of*hp* (The Tale of Two) Quote:
Thank you so much, I had no clue this story was going to be this good...so far. :shifty: Thanks for commenting! :glomp: Jess(: hermione9495 (Love Will Hurt & Love Is Dangerous) Quote:
:whistle: How is it familiar? :D Thanks Marcy! It's nice to hear that you liked it. :loved: Wow, already eager for the next chapter, huh? xD I should be posting the new chapter later today after I put up some Christmas decorations. :) Jess(: lathelawyer0128 Quote:
Thank you so much! *gives a cookie to Leslie* Jess(: XxSkaterJonasxX Quote:
:loved: Thanks! <3 Jess(: RoseMalfoy Quote:
Thank you! I hope it continues on to be interesting for you. :) New chapter should be up later on today. :D Jess(: DracikinsLuver4321 (Bring Your Kid to Work Day & Time Heals) Quote:
I'm glad you liked it! :) Hope you like the rest of it as well! Jess(: SenoritaMaxie (The Second Road to Death) Quote:
-clingsfordearlife- :blush: :blush: :blush: Awww Maxerzzz you're so nice!! <3 Thank you soo much, this comment brightened my day. :glomp: Jess(: Quote:
I hope you didn't mean the meaning. :lmao: I didn't really notice that once I put it up. xD Looking up words on the internet is funner than you actually think it is. :shifty: <3 Jess(: Lily Lupin Quote:
Thanks! I guess I was really hyped up when I wrote this chapter. xD Glad to know you liked it! :) :lmao: I was waiting for someone to say that! Actually....Draco will come soon....:shifty: Jess(: harita (Life Post Wizard War) Quote:
:loved: Thank you! Well it's been 2 years since they've seen each other and 5 years since the war was over. So Hermione probably has changed since she is 5 years older than what she was during the war. :) Hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Jess(: ##Hermione&Draco## (I Open At The Close) Quote:
Wow lot's of potential, I'm not known for that. xD Aww thank you, but I don't think I'm becoming an author when I grow up. :no: Will do! Jess(: LilyLunaGinnyPotter (My Story & As the Sun Sets) Quote:
Wow! I mean I thought I was excited about it, but Lily you have shown me that I was wrong. xD Thank you soo much luff! :glomp: Jess(: draco'sgirlraquel! Quote:
Aww thank you so much! Jess(: CaleyShoutCaley<3 Quote:
Ahh Caley is herrrreee!!! <3 :eek: :lmao: I'm glad you like it! I bet you'll see me at school later writing more chapters...:shifty: Thanks! Jess(: norenchen Quote:
Ron is with Lavender...I didn't know that...:whistle: :no: No it's been 2 years since they've seen each other and 5 years since the war. So Hermione has gotten older and has changed. :) Thank youu!! Will do! Jess(: POTTER128 Quote:
I'm glad you like this story as well as my other ones too! <3 :glomp: :loved: Jess(: potionsmaster22 (The Love of My Life) Quote:
Wonderful mind? :loved: xDD Will do hun! Jess(: cursedkatie (Love Will Find A Way) Quote:
Tons of people are excited! :D I'm happy you are liking it so far! <3 Jess(: cait bragg Quote:
Awww thank you for the lovely comment! :) Jess(: ---------- |
*shnuggles you* Nuuuu, I no mean the meaning. :lol: && you put in a link to my fiiiciiieeee. =O |
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:gasp: :lmao: Yushh I did! :) Although it was very hard to pick between putting up Paws; Pink Pillow; or The Second Road to Death. So I decided to put up The Second Road to Death because it was the only one who didn't have such a long title. xD :glomp: Jess(: ---------- |
Hehehe... Well,I think you will be a great author if thats what you want to pursue in life... Every fanfic you do...You get simply More astonishing.... and you also put a link to my Poetry thread... Thanks.... Im going to post a poem right now... Thanks again<3 looking forward to the next chapter... Love you!!! -Xavier |
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No problem! :) Yay! I can't wait to see it. :D :glomp: :glomp: Jess(: ---------- |
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