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Old 04-25-2006, 05:00 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey! My name is Gina.There is another Fanfic before this called Mistaken Love, so incase our wondering about the story below it follows on from that story. It was shut down because my internet had broken down and I couldn't get on the internet even though i alreay had the next part of the story written. So if you like this post, then please read the beginning of Mistaken Love. Thankyou, and please tell me if it's rubbish.

Chapter 7: Findings of the Unexpected …. (And a tiny bit of chapter 6!)





Harry went on his wondrous journey, determined to find Lord Voldermort, and Wormtail. In the last half-hour, he had already encountered on a rather strange looking dog (German Shepard breed), who looked like he was about to attack, even if Harry moved a bone in his body. Two horns, sharpened on his head, faced Harry.



“Who dares pass these lands of my master, farmer’s field?” Said the dog, in a heavy Irish accent.



`Oh no… does every bad thing have to happen to me?’ Harry thought to himself. He pondered for a long time, and the strange dog grew weary.



``Tell the why they’ve come here, tonight?” he said, snarling and spitting. The dog looked up at Harry, with angry expressions.



``I’m just passing, Sir, If you don’t mind?” said Harry, quite scared.



The dog, with four eyes, and five legs, hobbled closer to Harry.



“These lands are sacred, they are!” he said, informing Harry. ``I don’t trust strangers, for I not know who you muggle or wizard are. I’m guessing you’re a wizard, for you av’ not ran’ away.”





“I am Harry Potter! I’m sorry for trespassing, but I’m trying to find someone, someone who no one else will seek.” Harry squeaked.



The hairy beast, scratched his chest, and wondered his eyes to his for-head.

“Arry’ Potter?...Arry’ Potter?...yes, yes…I know who you are now, all over the Daily Prophet, 17 years ago, an’ still t’day’! My goodness, dat’s sumtin’ to tell me Bofler grandchildren. I’ve met the boy who…”



“Bofler?” Harry interrupted, looking confused.



“I! Bofler, dat’s what we call our kind. We are the only creatures to speak out here in the mountains/farmland, but other creatures such as centaurs, an’ elves and much more speak to the human or rarely speak. Wish everyone spoke, then that ruddy, flamin’ rooster wouldn’t keep waking me up in the mornin’, with all dat’ owlin’!”



The Bofler talked on, and on about his rooster and his home, then suddenly he had a brilliant idea, which Harry just had to know.



The Bofler’s eyes lightened up and said “Arry’ Potter, you could stay in mi’ master’s ouse’! I have my own home, but I shall stay in the house with you and my master in case anything happens!



“You don’t have to go to any trouble I’m just passing…I…” Harry said, being interrupted by the Bofler this time.



“….I…I…I….I see nonsense. You shall be comin’ to our ouse’, to stay the night. It’s already dark, so you’ll be needing’ to stay somewhere. So follow me!” The Bofler shouted, running to the house.



Harry asked no questions, but ran with the Bofler to his mysterious master’s house. They reached the grey stone house, and knocked on the door twice. Harry noticed a wooden sign next to the door. On it was carved ‘Whistleton Cave’.



“Sorry about frightening you before!” the Bofler said.



“It’s alright!” Harry replied.



Then the light that was shining form underneath the door was gone. Someone was standing in its way.



“Polly?” Shouted a husky, clouded voice. The Bofler and Harry turned to face the door as quick as they could.



“Yes, sir tis’ I.” He sniffled, nudging the door with his black, shiny nose.



Harry looked at him chuckling.

“Polly? Isn’t that a parrot’s name?” Harry asked.



Polly looked up at Harry, saying “My mother thought I was a girl when I was little! Don’t ask!”



Then suddenly the door, creakily opened. The light, from the candles shined a shadow, from the man’s body, onto the floor.



“Who’s this we be havin’ for our tea t’night?” snarled, the man.



Polly stood on all fives, and said “My dear master, this is tha’ boy that lived. This is Arry’ Potter!”
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Chapter 8: Hermione’s troubles



Sorry that I keep switching the scenes back and forth, but it’s fun. And in this chapter, Hermione feels a little bit for the bad boy of the school!!! Enjoy!





While Harry was thinking he was facing near death experience, from what the farmer had said, Hermione, in the Hospital Wing, was still rather shocked and astounded by Malfoy telling her his true feelings for her all these years.



“Pardon me?” Hermione said.



“I said I love you!” Draco said, his cheeks turning red.



“What?” Hermione shouted “I mean you’re really sure aren’t you?”



“Yes, I’ve never been so sure in my life Hermione!”



Hermione felt guilty, for leading Draco astray, but she was going out with Ron. She thought, through her head over and over again, why she had a little bit of guilt inside her heart.

Was it because she wasn’t truly in love with Ron? Or maybe the fact that she fancied Malfoy just a tiny bit?

She tried to push these questions aside, at the back of her mind, but they kept reappearing.



“Draco, I think it’s really sweet…but…but…I’ll have to get back to you on that!” Hermione anxiously said. She walked out of the room, and down the corridor feeling ever so awkward.
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…Continued…





``There you are Hermione!” Ron shouted, running towards Hermione down the corridor, putting his arm around Hermione. Uneasily she shrugged her shoulders removing Ron’s hand from around her. Everyone else tried to look somewhere else, pretending they didn’t see what happened.



``We need to tell Prof.Dumbledore….” said Prof.Wiliarnic. So they all walked through the strips of the corridor, through the gigantic castle, and the moving stairs. By the time they got there the students were amazed at how just the statue outside of Dumbledore’s office, looked magnificent. Painted with golden magic, and bronze, the statue glowed with radiance.



``Honey Dunk’s Dips” Prof.Wiliarnic murmured. They ran up the long, wooden stairs and burst the door open on Dumbledore and Hagrid talking.



“Professor!” Hermione stepped forward to face Dumbledore.



Dumbledore and Hagrid looked, at Hermione with great confusion.



``What is it that you want Miss. Granger?” Replied Dumbledore.



``Sir, Harry’s ran away, we don’t know where he is or anything sir.”



“Arry’s ran away? E’ wouldn’t do anythin’ like tha’…”



“…but he has, he left us a note and everything.” Hermione reached into her jacket pocket, and took the note to Dumbledore.



He read the letter and said “Then we must go now, I have an idea of where he might be. The man he is staying with is nice, but grim and dark in mysterious ways when he wants to be. A house deserted in the hills and mountains. Come all, we’ll take the Portkey (I don’t know how 2 spell that!) there”



And with a flash of light, they were all spiralling in a wind, they suddenly were Dumbledore had told them they would be near a mysterious house………………………………………..in the middle of nowhere.

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The ending of a curse



Harry looked at the tall figure in front of him. He had no hair, and a patch eye. His ragged clothes made him look un-fit for any activity, and his crutches made him limp.



“Come in!” He said, “an’ si’ down.”



Harry moved past the “Pirate” (In Harry’s mind), and sat down at the carved, wooden table with a melting candle in the middle.

“So… You’re a Potter!?”

“Yes, I am sir” Harry told the man.

“Yur’ don’t look like one!”



Harry was confused. Normally people would say to him, “you’ve got eyes like your mother’s, and jet black hair like your father’s, naughty like your father too!”



“Don’t mean to sound rude or anything, but who are you?” Harry asked.



He got up, and went to a drawer and pulled out a dusty, rotten box. The man blew the dust off, of it and headed back to the table. He sat back down and pushed the box closer to

Harry.

Harry took the box and opened the waxed wooden lid. In it was an ancient picture of a women and a man.

“Who are these people?” Harry asked, yet another question.



“Tha’ women is yur’ great grandmar’. She wa’ the loveliest lady around our town. She made me laugh so many times I can’t remembe’ even wha’ she said.



“Well, why didn’t you marry her? I mean if you loved each other enough, why didn’t you get married? Because you would’ve talked to me, since you’d be my great-grandfather.” Harry said.



“Eye’ I would’ve loved to marry er’, but when the death eaters came…”



Then Harry got a fright, when Polly jumped his paws on the table.



“When tha’ death eaters came e’ ran away, an’ never saw tha’ lovely lass ever again. She used to feed me an’ everything, lovely lady she was”



The man gave him a guilty look, and told him that some food was left on the floor for him.



“Anyway son, I’m Arold’ Nimbler, you’ve met Polly, hope he wasn’t annoyin’



Harry looked at him with a smile and said “No, he was really helpful and...”

Then a thud came from the door.



“Who goes there?” Harold shouted.



From the other side, the voice replied.



“I am Albus Dumbledore. Head Master of Hogwarts witchcraft and wizardry I…”



Harold opened the door and Dumbledore stopped speaking.



“I’m Harold Nimbler, it’s an honour to mee’ yer’ sir!” Harold said, shaking Dumbledore’s hand.

“Nice to meet you, may we come in?”

“Why yer’ sure ya’ guys can!”

“Come on in children” Dumbledore said, slightly pushing them in “Erm…Hagrid will you be ok…?”



Hagrid rolled his eyes and said “ Yer’ I know wa’ yer’ mean, I’m too big to fit throu’ the door, even if I did wan’ come in”



“Very well Hagrid, thankyou!” Dumbledore replied.



“Well, you have a lovely home. This is Hermione Granger, Ronald Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Prof. Wiliarnic and Hagrid is the man outside. There will be another boy joining us, his name is Draco Malfoy.”



Hermione was nervous at the thought of meeting Draco again, she still wouldn’t know what her answer would be. Tension between Ron and Hermione were building up, and up, and Hermione was ever so confused.



“Oh! And this Polly, my Bofler. He’s such a kind creature, he won’t bite or nuffin’. “

Polly walked to Harold’s side and said “That was very kind of ur’ master thank you!”



Hermione, Ginny and Ron had been to busy meeting Harold and Polly that they forgot that Harry was in the room.



Ginny looked and saw Harry grinning at her and his friends. Ginny ran to him and hugged him, and Harry picked her up and swirled her around. Ron and Hermione ran over and hugged Harry too.



“Why did you run away Harry?” Ginny crying.

“Yer’. Why Harry?” Ron said nibbling on a baguette he saved in his pocket from breakfast.



“I didn’t run away, well I did, I just…I just…erm….”

“You didn’t want us to get hurt?” Hermione said, putting her hand on Harry’s shoulder.

“Exactly!”



“You don’t need to worry about us Harry we’re your friends, and Ginny your girlfriend. We wouldn’t leave you, Harry!”



“Hermione’s right!” Ron said. Harry couldn’t believe it, Ron agreeing with Hermione for the first time ever! He was going to remember this moment for the rest of his life. “We’re your friends, and we stick by you through everything. Even though we mess up sometimes…”



Ginny gave a stern look at Ron and faked coughed.



“…ok, even though I sometimes mess up, we always try and fix it together and it always works!”



“Don’t mean to break up your reunion, but I think we’ve bothered Mr. Nimbler enough. It’s time to head back to Hogwarts Harry. No more running away!”



They all said goodbye to Polly and Mr.Nimbler and went outside.



At the door, Harry was saying goodbye to two new friends.

“Keep in touch. I’ll send you an owl and maybe visit you if that’s ok?



“That’d be great!” said Harold

“Bye Polly I’ll miss you, maybe visit your children and wife one day!”



“I open’ ur’ do, Mr. Potter.”



“Call me Harry!”



“OMG! It’s him, Harry it’s him!” Hermione shouted, scared.



Harry quickly turned around and saw the dreaded, pale, dark creature. He had returned just like he had said, with the prophets in his wrinkly, long hand. It was Lord Voldemort.

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Last post next one, in the middle of writing it, I can't think of anything to end it....but it i will make it good (well I'll try!)
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Hey Gina!!!!! Glad that your'e back with Mistaken Love 2!!!!
I've read the first one and i like draco hermy too!!
Glad you PMed me about it or i'd never have found it!!
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Ok...thanx Sadia and thanx 2 everyone who's reading this, it's kind of cool that u like my story even though I don't think it is like...anyway dosen't matter...nearly finished the end of the post, will nearly be done...soon. Oh, well. I'll try and make a come back with a better story!:p
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The ending of a curse…continued for the last time



Apologies if it is too long. But alas the end has come and I am sad to say this story has finished, but on a lighter note you get to read the ending now instead of reading this, and I might post a new story so there you go….It might carry on, it might not who knows. Certainly not me, that’s for sure…anyway if I do, do another one maybe you wanna’ check it out, I don’t know, could be fun…ok…so…byeXxXxXxXxX









Harry walked to Hermione and Ron, still stunned and nervous by the unexpected arrival of his enemy. Then suddenly Draco appeared right in between of the two sides. Dumbledore tried to beckon Draco to move himself near him, but once again Voldermort spoke before.



“Draco come here.” He hissed, cold air breathing out of his mouth when he spoke.

Draco hesitated, but did not move.

“Do you want your father to die?” Voldermort growled, growing impatient.

Draco walked slowly walked to Voldermort with his head hanging down, and kneeled before

him.

Voldermort lifted his chin up and said “There will be better days, but you will serve me or die serving me, you do not win in this game, you only lose and I win!”

And with that he smacked Draco’s cheek. It was so sudden that everyone was frightened. (But it was Voldermort!)



Draco stood up, feeling no shame, and started chuckling he went back to the line of other death eaters. Everyone was shocked, because they thought Draco the hard-hearted, cruel boy who had no respect for others had changed. They were wrong.



“But Draco...” Hermione was about to ask Draco about all the good things he had said about her, but she couldn’t help but feel guilt in her heart. Some what say responsible for her actions, of leaving Draco on his own mid-sentence to know whether she fancied him or not.



Dumbledore still weirdly bedazzled moved in front of the rest of the gang and look Voldermort straight in the eye.

“Too long has it been Riddle…”

“I’m not afraid of you anymore, and I never will, see what you fail to realise Albus…is that…I have become more than you will ever be…I’m greater, better and certainly cleverer than YOU!” Voldermort hissed, “Say goodbye to all your friends”



“Do what you can Voldermort, you will regret it later, I suggest you don’t do anything…” Dumbledore mid-sentence was struck with a bright green light. His face paled and straight fell to floor, back-side up. Voldermort screamed, and laughed thinking how glorious he was for he had killed, destroyed the man he was no longer afraid of. Dumbledore the powerful sorcerer had died. Hermione and Ginny stood there weeping, turning away, and not bearing to even glance at the body.



“Now that I’ve killed that worthless, rodent, I am not destructible!” Voldermort laughed, putting his wand up pointing to Harry, “You next, Potter!”
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Nearly!!! I keep saying that, but 4 real the next post is the last post. I keep forgetting to write it, but i will try tonight. Can't wait!!!! but still sad!
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_________-There is not enough time in life, until you die or something, which I doubt will happen soon, but i don't have enough time to write loads for the last bit, too busy, i hate it, but it's fun. Erm, probably the next one is the last post, i know i keep saying it will be the next post, but there you go. Erm, sorry if i seem like a weird, freak but indi and emo music has taken a toll of me.



Hermione put her hand over her mouth and started crying, as did Ginny. Their shock of someone they had known and loved for years was gone in a flash. Everyone else was in complete shock, except for Harry; he was outraged and filled with anger. He despised Voldermort more than anything; he didn’t care what happened to himself. He wanted hurtful, painful revenge.



“Draco, come here!” Voldermort said, twitching his hand, his face scrunching up. “Do it…”

Draco looked to the floor, hesitating.

“…I said do it; remember what I harshly said before. I’d think again!”



Draco, unwillingly, stepped forward and faced his body towards Hermione.

“I…I…” Draco stuttered. He turned his head to face Voldermort, and all he could see inside his eyes where his dead parents. Draco turned his head back to face Hermione’s scared and fragile eyes.

“I…just wanted to tell you that, all the things I said to…were…erm…were…true, but I’m someone different.”



Hermione had more tears rolling down her face.

Ron turned his head to Hermione. “What’s he talking about ermione’?”



“You should join us, please Hermione I’m begging you, please!” He walked over to her, and held her hands.



“Do what your master says, Draco!” Whispered a man, all hooded in jet-black.

Harry was sure he has seen that figure before; the man was tall and had black-greased hair. It was Snape.



Prof.Wiliarnic laughed, saying `` so you decided to come back. Must have been painful getting into the castle without no one there guarding the corridors, except for young, not as clever as you think you are, students.”



Snape crossed his arms; the sides of his mouth switched into a smile, and back, faster than you could say go.

``Never could be fooled could you, all the people in Azkaban can’t wait to get out, and kill you. It’s all they ever wait for actually.”



``Silence!” Voldermort hissed once more, `` enough of this nonsense, get it over with Draco!”



Draco gently pulled Hermione’s hand, making her move closer to the death eaters.



“Ron!” She said, looking back and forth, to Draco, to Ron.



“Whatever Hermione!” He said, looking away feeling heart broken.



Hermione removed her hands from Draco as fast as she could, but he gripped her by the waist and lifted her behind Voldermort.



“I don’t want to this Hermione, but I have to!” Draco said, trying to control Hermione, who was trying to wriggle her way out of his hands.



Harry kept his anger in, but thought that taking his friend was too far. He took out his wand from his back pocket drastically, and started walking to Voldermort with the wand pointing at him.



“Arrrghhh…!” Harry started screaming. Luckily Hagrid held him back, tightly, since he was a beefy and strong man. Harry screamed and tried running out of Hagrid’s arms.



“Let go of me...Hermione!!!! Let her go!!!Hermione!!” Harry was yelling, while Hagrid was trying to calm him down.



“He’s not worth it Harry. Let it go!!”



Eventually Harry stopped and started to calm down, he was wondering how could Ron be so calm? He was just staring at what was happening, like he didn’t care about Hermione or him. Arms crossed like Snape’s, and eyes filled with rage, maybe it was awkwardness? After all Hermione did nearly leave him for the kind, but daft-cruel hearted Draco.



Harry was about to speak, but Ron spoke unsuspected.

“Why do you want her? Why don’t you take me instead? Hey!”



“No...” Ginny stepped forward “You should take me instead!”



“Silly children! I don’t want any of you, misfits. I want…”



Harry’s face was looking down at the ground staring into space, when he heard Voldermort’s voice his head slowly lifted up and said



“Me.”



“Well, finally. Mr. Power Potter decides to join in on our little…shall we say…festivities. I have my prophets and I have my followers and all I need to do is get rid of you. I tried the first time…”



He said walking up and down his death eaters, like a general shouting at his soldiers.

“…the second time, third time, forth time. But today is my glory day. And I will kill you.”



“Well…if it’s your glory day…” Harry said his face, faced to the cold, rocky ground.



“…then it’s just ended!” Suddenly the mountain, moved, rocking everyone except Harry, Ron, Ginny, Hagrid and Prof.Wiliarnic. Spinning round and round, until the sun, slightly rose.



Harry quickly tried to blast Voldermort with Aveda Karendra. He swirled in the air and missed, by an inch. Professor.Wiliarnic and Hagrid took on the death eaters on the left side of Voldermort, and Ron and Ginny took on the right side of the death eaters.



“Someone help!” Ron shouted quickly, “What was the word aga…?”

A death eater, tried to hit Ron, and kill him. When Ginny stepped in front of Ron, and pointed her wand at the horrible, masked death-eater.



“Avenda Kenendra!” Ginny shouted. A bright ray of green light shone out of her wand and killed the death eater instantly in front of her.



Ron’s face was shocked, he looked at Ginny and said, in a high-pitched, scared tone. “Thanks! I remember the word now!”



They destroyed the prophets the death eaters held in their hands, and every last one of them had fallen, with a thud, to the ground. Snape (again!) was running away from the battle, even though Voldermort was there in the blood.



“Not this time Snape!” Wiliarnic said, running after Snape, he sped as fast as he could and eventually caught up with Snape, diving into his legs to trip him up. Snape tried to run, but Prof.Wiliarnic got to his arms, and twisted them behind his back. He got out his wand, and muttered a special spell. It instantly tied his legs and feet together, and his mouth, and pulled him, onto the mountain wall. He was stuck on the edge, so he couldn’t run away.”



“Surprised you didn’t even know that trick!” Professor Wiliarnic said, clapping the grass, and mud off his hands.

P.S> I can't remember that spell, so if I get it wrong soz!

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Ok, I've been a bit busy, so i'm liek just starting to write the last one now and then...so...update later.
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Every last death eater had been destroyed. Voldermort was facing Harry, when from behind him were Professor, and the rest of Harry’s friends…





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THE END



Apologies if it is too long. But alas the end has come and I am sad to say this story has finished, but on a lighter note you get to read the ending now instead of reading this, and I might post a new story so there you go….It might carry on, it might not who knows. Certainly not me, that’s for sure…anyway if I do, do another one maybe you wanna’ check it out, I don’t know, could be fun…ok…so…byeXxXxXxXxX (again)



“Nooooooo!” Voldermort screamed. “I want my vengeance and I shall get it, Potter. You took everything from me, and I have fought for my life to keep it from being destroyed by some pest’s friends, who probably don’t care about you anyway Potter.”



Harry looked at his friends, his grim face made it seem that they ment nothing. He looked to the floor, thinking stupidly why he even listened to Voldermort when all he was trying to do was corrupt Harry to insanity and death.



“Think about it Potter.” Voldermort carried on.

Harry looked swiftly back.

“Yes, Harry.” He hissed, “Think of all the times your friends really didn’t care for you, just wanted you gone. For example to refresh your empty memory, the Tri-Wizard Tournament, Ron your red-headed friend over there.” Voldermort pointed to him “He got jealous of you, because he thought you put your name in the goblet, but when you tried to tell him it wasn’t you would he listen…NO!!”



Harry got tense and shouted “My friends have NOTHING to do with you, if you want a fight with me….stop being a coward before I’m already dead!”



Prof.Wiliarnic nodded to Harry and took his wand out slowly.



“No” He shouted. Voldermort looked confused, and angered. “No, wands. If you can even do without, and if you can’t……well it’s just bad luck, and you are no man.”



Voldermort frowned and said “I am more man than you will ever be Potter!”



“Well then…..you’ll just have to show it, because you are a worthless, cheating, liar and no one will believe you.”



With arms out, Voldermort ran to Harry, with fists in a ball. By the time he got closer Harry and knelt down and tripped Voldermort up. He swiftly got back up on his feet and punched Harry in the stomach and face.



Harry held onto his stomach, and fell to the floor.

“How pathetic.”



Harry lay on the ground. His mind was blank and his eyes were glazed with a blur. Then he heard his mother in his head. It got louder as his vision started to come back.

“Harry….the prophets will save….prophets will save.” Suddenly Harry vision was full again and he stood up, as pain staking as it was and tried to hit Voldermort, but missed.



“You know, it would’ve been better on the ground, then you would’ve known was it was like to be your parents…………………dead.



Harry dived for Voldermort, his hand out but body moved.



“Argh!” Harry screamed, while he slammed to the floor, fists in a bundle.



“Still trying Potter?”



“No…” he said, kneeling on the ground, with one hand over his stomach. “… I got what I wanted.”

He opened his hand, and a heart pumping was on his palm. The one prophet that would destroy Voldermort, for ever was in his hand. Everything Harry had wanted and asked for was in his hand.



Harry backed to the line with his friends, hand still opened.

“POLLY!” Harry shouted.



Polly ran from the house, to Harry, biting Voldermort leg on the way.

Harry kneeled on the floor and moved his hand so Polly could sniff it.

“Do me a favour Polly?”



“I’ Mr.Potter, anythin’ “



“Lend me your sharp claws”



“Ok…” Polly said, confused. He held out his paw, and shined out his claws for Harry.

Harry grabbed his paw, lightly and said “Goodbye Lord Voldermort, and don’t come back.”



And with that Harry sank the claw into the heart; oozing out was black blood, or ink, all over Harry’s hand. Meanwhile, Voldermort was screaming sinking to the ground, his face turned from pale white face to his horrid scaly black skin.



When all was left of Voldermort was a black puddle, Harry took breathes and dropped the heart onto the floor. Harry dropped to the floor too. Ginny ran over to him and hugged him. Ron, Hermione and Draco went over to look at him also.



“What r’ we gonna’ do, bout’ tha’ eart’ Professor?



“We’re going to have to shoot it….I think there is a rifle in that house over there”



So Hagrid and Prof. Wiliarnic went over to the house. Meanwhile Harry finally got up, and hugged Ginny back, and then he hugged Hermione and shook hands with Ron and Draco.



Hermione tapped Ron on the shoulder, and told him she wanted to talk to him.



“What is it Hermione?” Ron asked.



“Erm…Ron…I…erm…don’t think….I don’t think we should go out anymore.”



“Really? Are you joking?....” Ron said, chuckling.

“Well…I, erm.” Hermione stuttered.

“…I think so too! I mean I wanted to break up with you for a long time, but I guess there wasn’t literally a time.”

“Wow.”

“Yeah. It was getting weird as a boyfriend, I mean your one of my best friends Hermione, and I think that’s one rule we should put in a book, never go out with your best friends. You’re just to cool to be my girlfriend!”



They both laughed.

Ron looked at Draco, and back to Hermione.

“I think someone’s waiting for you Herm’.”

Hermione glanced at Draco.



“Thanks Ron. You and Harry are the best people I’ve ever known.”



Ron pushed Hermione to walk forward, and as she did she turned around and said



“Ron, you do know that if you call me Herm’ again, I’m going to kill you”



“Erm, yeah…yeah, of course, I definitely knew that………Yeah.”



As Hermione walked over to Draco, she noticed that his bleach blonde hair had turned brown.



“You know you have brown hair, right?” She asked him.



“Oh…no, it’s just lots of mud.” He combed his hand throe his hair, and sure enough bleach blonde was underneath it.



“So…I’m really sorry about before Hermione, I mean…my dad and mum was going to be…”



Hermione held his hand and said “I know.”



“So, are we good?”



Hermione rolled her eyes. “Of course we are.”



“And that leads to me going out with you, right?”



“What do you think?” Hermione asked, with a smile.



“I take that as a yes, definitely a yes! “ Draco said.





Eventually everyone went to the side of the mountain were Snape was.

“So….” Professor. Wiliarnic said “Who wants to tell him the bad new?”



“How bout’ Harry?” Ron said, looking at Harry with a smile.



“It’ll be my honour.” Harry replied.

Harry stepped forward, to face sideways to Snape.

“Sorry, mate. But you’re going to Azkaban!”



Everyone was relieved, as it was what he deserved.



Harry looked over to the house, and realised he forgot about Dumbledore. He raced over to the house and started looking everywhere for him. He started shouting and messing everywhere up.

He ran back outside and shouted for Harold.



Professor.Wiliarnic walked over to Harry, while the rest stayed near Snape.

Harry was nearly crying, when Professor. Wiliarnic put his hand on Harry’s shoulder.



“They take all the good from use Harry. But they can never take away our hope, Dumbledore will see you again, don’t worry he will.”



“But where did he go?” Harry softly said, as a tear rolled down his face.



"Hagrid and I sent them to school, through the Portkey." Replied Wiliarnic.



“Them?” Harry said confused.



“Yes them.” Wiliarnic said, “I’m sorry Harry, but Mr.Nimbler didn’t make it either. I know you knew him for a short time, but he was close to your family.”



“How do you know that?”



“Look you better talk to your friend, the Bofler is waiting for you. We can carry on with this discussion later. Ok?”



Harry nodded, and turned around. Polly was sitting on the floor behind him.

“You ok, Polly?”

“Ye’, im’ ok. At least mi’ master died at a great and heroic point in history… You know you’ll be all over the Daily Prophet agai’.”



“Yes, I know, it’s quite disturbing”



They laughed together.

“Hey, maybe you and your children, and wife would want to come with us.”



“Go, Wher’?



“To Hogwarts, they have the best food, and you’d get warm nights.”



“Tha’ would be good!” Alrigh’ it’s a deal Potter!”



Harry went back to his friend and they decided to go back to Hogwarts.



“Ginny, wait!” Harry said. “You guys go; we’ll be there in a minute!”



And with that the everyone, except Harry and Ginny, went back to Hogwarts through the Portkey.



“So…What did you want, Harry?” Ginny asked.



“I just wanted to say that I love you, you know that?”



“Well, yeah. I love you too”



“Yeah, and today has made me realise that what I’m about to do is for sure, and I’ve been thinking a lot abou’…”



“You should just say it Harry!”



“What I’m trying to say Ginny is…”



Harry knelt on one knee.



“Ginny, Will you Marry me?”



Ginny smiled like the sun, and said “Yes!” Harry got up and hugged and kissed Ginny.



“I want to get back and tell everyone!”

Harry smiled at her.



“Yeah, I mean we may seem young, but you only live life once right, and I don’t ever want to lose you, I want you to be around here forever…with me!”



“And you’re worried about me doing something dangerous?” Ginny said giving him a sarcastic look.



“I promise I won’t do that much.” They laughed.



They decided to go back to Hogwarts were everyone was there waiting for them. Still crushed by the new of Dumbledore that everyone seemed a bit down, until Ginny shouted “I’m getting married!” The whole room filled with ‘congratulations’ and ‘she’s a keeper Harry’, noise and laughter.



“Yeah, it’s true, we’re getting married!” Harry said to everyone.

He put his arm around Ginny, who was talking to Hermione and Ron.



Professor. Wiliarnic stood beside Harry and said “When you leave are you thinking about becoming an Aurora or a Defence against the Dark Arts teacher? When you leave that is, because I talked with the ministry of magic and they said that in time you would be taught, and trained, you already have the courage.”



They didn’t look at each other, the whole time; Professor.Wiliarnic was speaking, as to not be heard by anyone, not even Ginny.



“And don’t let me training you, put you off?” He chuckled.



“Maybe” Harry said, looking at the professor.

But in Harry’s wonderful and mysterious mind, it was a definite YES!

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Old 07-09-2006, 11:50 AM   #20 (permalink)
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Aww G that was really good!
Aww Please post more
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No that's the end, it's really muddled up, so i have to edit it.
So hope whoever is reading this, hope you enjoyed it and well there may be another story or not...maybe or not....maybe or not....i dunno!

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