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04-18-2010, 03:37 PM
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#226 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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'Is there something you want to tell me?' I smiled.
'No, why do you say that?' Amelie smirked and turned away from me.
'Seriously, what is his name?'
'Rob, he is amazing and sweet and kind and talented and good looking and oh out of this world.'
'Do you love him? Like love, love him?'
'Yeah, like marrying love him.'
'How did you meet him then? Tell me all about it.'
'I interviewed him, do you not know his last name? It is Rob Fiddle. Scottish Quidditch Keeper.'
'Really! I thought it was just a random guy.'
'I said he was talented.'
'Among all the other things that you said about him that I didn't catch.'
'Sorry, we are going out again tonight.'
'How many times now?'
'This is the fifth, he goes to New Zealand in two days for a game then comes back three days after that.'
'Are you positive that you don't just like him 'cause he is famous Am?'
'Of course not, I think he could be the one.'
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'I'm home! Ted!'
I was desperate to apologise for being so moany and cranky but my fiance was nowhere to be seen. In his place was a note............ Hey, I have to go. Work needs me. The South African Minister for Magic needs back up. We have all been called in. I love you.
'I love you too.'
I brushed my shaking fingers across the page remembering the last thing I had said to him- 'Work'. I immediately burst into tears and lay on the couch with nothing better to do.
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When I woke, there were two owls sitting on the windowsill of the livingroom, I recognised both of them. I stumbled across the room and opened the window, both owls lifted their feet and I took the letters.
The first- Do you want to come and stay with us? Ronald is away and i understand that Ted probably is too. H xx
The second- We have a spare room waiting for you if you need to stay with us. Harry just left and Ted probably did too. G xx
I scrawled onto the back of both letters and sent the owls away, then I went to my room and packed a few belongings.
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'Hey honey. Don't worry about it, just make yourself at home.'
'Thanks Aunt-'
'Vic, hello Darling. I didn't expect to see you here.'
'Hi Granny, he left me a note saying somthing about South Africa so I am staying here for now.'
'Oh right, yes, both Ron and Harry have gone too.'
'Yeah, that's right. Listen, I need some sleep, would you mind if I headed upstairs?'
' Course not. I will show you where you can sleep.'
'Thanks Hermione.'
How was it?
RonHermione(L) you might be getting some drama now???????????
I tried to keep it tense before I told you where she was going.
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04-18-2010, 04:34 PM
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#227 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida
Posts: 1,415
Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Great post! That's so sad he had to leave suddenly. It always makes it worse when there was harsh words spoken and one has to leave for whatever reason without resolving anything. At least they can be comforted that they know they love each other. I'll be watching for your next post. Good job on this one by the way.
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04-18-2010, 05:05 PM
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#228 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Not the beach
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP I brushed my shaking fingers across the page remembering the last thing I had said to him- 'Work'. I immediately burst into tears and lay on the couch with nothing better to do. Sad, it always sucks that the last conversation you had with someone was a fight and then they leave and you don't what's going to happen. It was fantastic! I loved both posts! Can't wait for more! PLEASE PAMS!!! |
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04-18-2010, 05:54 PM
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#229 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
Posts: 2,770
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Thanks
__________________ You're just a daydream away,I wouldn't know what to say if I had you. And I'll keep you a daydream away, Just watch from a safe place, So I never have to lose. |
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04-18-2010, 07:56 PM
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#230 (permalink)
| Murtlap
Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Manchester
Posts: 52
Hogwarts RPG Name: Deanna Gallows First Year |
New reader! love this story, PAMS!
Serena
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04-18-2010, 08:14 PM
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#231 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
Posts: 2,770
| Wish I Was In Florida! | The Avengers | Music | HP Boxset - my life since Xmas! | Luna Lovegood Quote:
Originally Posted by Serena Potter New reader! love this story, PAMS!
Serena
xx
Thankyou.
Welcome to Love:Teddy and Victoire.
I hope you enjoy the story, there is loads more to come.
__________________ You're just a daydream away,I wouldn't know what to say if I had you. And I'll keep you a daydream away, Just watch from a safe place, So I never have to lose. |
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04-18-2010, 08:40 PM
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#232 (permalink)
| X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Killing Rob!
Posts: 1,159
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Hi Katie. Loved the post...PAMS PAMS PAMS
Your a Ravenclaw too!
S x
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04-18-2010, 09:54 PM
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#233 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
Posts: 2,232
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Aria Williams International Cooperation | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Omg post asap !!!!!!!! :|
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04-18-2010, 10:56 PM
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#234 (permalink)
| Fire Slug
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Los Angeles
Posts: 166
Hogwarts RPG Name: Elizabeth Burnes Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kristen Holly Magical Games & Sports |
loved the post. i hope something doesnt happen to teddy while hes away. i like how u made us wait to know which aunt it was
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04-19-2010, 02:52 AM
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#235 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
Gosh. Can't give a full review, got to go to bed. But I really liked it!
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04-19-2010, 06:49 PM
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#236 (permalink)
| X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Killing Rob!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Need a post, Katie. Where've you gone? lol
PAMS PAMS PAMS
Soph x
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04-19-2010, 06:53 PM
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#237 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
Okay here it is!
Wow.. This Rob guy sounds nice.. Like coool nice! (er yeaa)
Haha! She thought he was some random guy :Imao:
OH NOEZ! I hope that the guys stay safe! If not then I can't glomp Teddy! not that Vic would let me
Oh I was reading the first part and the part about the hand made me think about what could have happened to the other hand! Kay, I'm random.
I'm so sad that the last time Teddy and Vic talked they argued! WAAAAAAAAAAA! HE BETTER STAY SAFE!
Lol, love it, pams when you can.
Gabby
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04-19-2010, 07:50 PM
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#238 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Lets hope that all the guys stay safe. 'hint hint'
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lol
I have writers block so you will have to wait
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04-19-2010, 08:34 PM
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#239 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
WHAAAT! Hint?! *is scared*
Awww, poor you! I hope you get over it.
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04-19-2010, 08:38 PM
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#240 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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It has already started to go.
I am discussing a plan with Kerri at the mo.
lol
__________________ You're just a daydream away,I wouldn't know what to say if I had you. And I'll keep you a daydream away, Just watch from a safe place, So I never have to lose. |
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04-19-2010, 09:31 PM
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#241 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
Awesome!
OOOH! A plan! *is scared* lol
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04-20-2010, 03:19 PM
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#242 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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| Wish I Was In Florida! | The Avengers | Music | HP Boxset - my life since Xmas! | Luna Lovegood Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy Awesome!
OOOH! A plan! *is scared* lol
Don't be scared. It is just we were helping eachother get rid of writers block by giving each other ideas. Nothing bad, unless you consider our ideas bad! lol.
Thankyou to anybody who viewed my friend's story. She was nearly crying when I told her I had advertised it! If anybody hasn't read it then it is Love You Too in the Mature Section, by Morag. She is called Sophie or Soph. Also if you haven't already read Love At Last? in the Romance Section by RonHermione(L). She is called Kerri.
__________________ You're just a daydream away,I wouldn't know what to say if I had you. And I'll keep you a daydream away, Just watch from a safe place, So I never have to lose. |
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04-20-2010, 04:22 PM
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#243 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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| Hello. Soon my story is going to change slightly. Just a warning! Wish I Was In Florida! | The Avengers | Music | HP Boxset - my life since Xmas! | Luna Lovegood
By change I mean disaster. Sorry.
'I think it is weird how nobody has wrote any replies to our letters.' OK, I will admit it, I was petrified.
'They are probably just really busy, do not worry.' I also had to admit that I had caught Hermione crying last night.
'Well, I am sending another one tomorrow if there is no reply, it has been a week and your owl is a good one.'
'She has never flown to South Africa remember.'
'I know, but, it is really scary.' Now, I have to admit something else, I burst into tears again.
I had been staying with Hermione for a week now and I had gone to work normally and everything but I couldn't get Teddy out of my head. As I planned more of the wedding all I could think about in my head was , 'Will there be a wedding?' 'Are my babies going to have a father?' Can you even begin to imagine? Didn't think so.
'Stop your blubbering, you are worrying over nothing. Last time, the guys went to America when there was a new Muggle president who needed protecting. Strange name he had, Barrack something. Anyway, all these white 'gangs' they call them weren't happy you see, the President is the first African-American one. Anyway, the guys were gone for a month. Missed Christmas and everything. I hadn't one letter.'
'Its just this is the first time that Tedy has went on something major. The Prophet says that the Minister is really struggling, they won't tell us anything else. The headlines are just ' SOUTH-AFRICAN MINISTER FOR MAGIC BEING PROTECTED' We already know that for Merlin's sake!'
'You just need to relax, that is all.'
'Relax, Relax! You are telling me to relax. Atleast I can cry infront of people, I am not ashamed-'
I did not just do that.
I did.
Crap.
WHOOPS.
'Sorry. I didn't mean to-' I didn't know what to say, I really had no idea. The Next Day.
She isn't speaking to me. Still letting me stay here but the house is silent.
No reply from the guys. I am putting on brave face and not sending another one. The Next Day, AGAIN
I am terrified. Two of my uncles and my fiance are in a country going through magical civil war. We heard yesterday that the Minister has been hidden away in another country. Today
Received a short scribble today. Hey ladies. Hermione thanks for putting up with Vic, I appreciate it.
We are all together don't worry, we are safe. I hope you are the same. Did anybody follow him?
Hope my three babies are OK and my in laws. We love you all.
P.S. Ginny got a letter too, we hope.
Harry, Ron and Ted
We made up.
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I am so confused by something Ted said.
Does he mean that Phillip Ozwaga is in our country? Britain? Could we be at risk?
__________________ You're just a daydream away,I wouldn't know what to say if I had you. And I'll keep you a daydream away, Just watch from a safe place, So I never have to lose. |
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04-20-2010, 04:44 PM
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#244 (permalink)
| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Laura Thomas International Cooperation |
heya me back hadnt read the past posts...good one...i am waiting for the next...pams when you can...
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04-20-2010, 07:47 PM
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#245 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Not the beach
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP By change I mean disaster. Sorry. What?! THere can't be a disaster!!! Quote:
'Relax, Relax! You are telling me to relax. Atleast I can cry infront of people, I am not ashamed-'
Not good. Quote: Hey ladies. Hermione thanks for putting up with Vic, I appreciate it.
We are all together don't worry, we are safe. I hope you are the same. Did anybody follow him?
Hope my three babies are OK and my in laws. We love you all.
P.S. Ginny got a letter too, we hope.
Harry, Ron and Ted I'm glad they're okay
Great chappie! PLEASE PAMS!!!
Last edited by Emileyn; 04-20-2010 at 10:16 PM.
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04-20-2010, 08:58 PM
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#246 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
Oh gosh.. When I read disaster the first thing I thought was that the babies or Ted are going to die!!!
Haha, no your idea's aren't bad. I just say uh-oh a lot because my friend and I have stories which disastrous things happen in.
OHNOEZ SHE SAID THAT! Err. Poor Mione and Vic need huggles
I hope everything turns out okay..
Love it! Pams when you can...
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04-21-2010, 03:46 PM
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#247 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
Posts: 2,232
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Aria Williams International Cooperation | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Pams pams pams !!!!!!!
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04-21-2010, 04:21 PM
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#248 (permalink)
| X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Killing Rob!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Great chapter Katie. I'm glad they made up
Looking forward to next part, lets hope everything goes to plan and the ladies stay out of trouble! Soph x
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04-23-2010, 12:33 AM
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#249 (permalink)
| Fire Slug
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Los Angeles
Posts: 166
Hogwarts RPG Name: Elizabeth Burnes Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kristen Holly Magical Games & Sports |
loved the chapter
when i read ur message in the beginning i was worried
but im glad that they're ok.
when victoire said the crying thing the first thing that went through my head was "FAIL"
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04-23-2010, 12:49 AM
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#250 (permalink)
| Jobberknoll
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Up in the Stars
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kennedy Stark Fifth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Aubrie Cosima Hampson Magical Law Enforcement x2
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PAMS PAMS PAMS It's so so so so so so good
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