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16 years ago - September of 1980

The sky was dark, like a black hole, the only light that was visible was coming from the moon which gleamed like a silver sickle that had been suspended in the sky. The two Potters were in a graveyard waiting for their death. It was quiet until a cold voice said "Tonight you will die." Voldemort's voice was calm and happy to kill the two Potters.



"My wife and I don't care if we die." John Potter's brave voice said. John Potter was James Potter's older brother. James looks like his brother just with different hair and eye color. John was tall and thin. John had light brown hair and dark green eyes.



"Oh, you don't care to do?"Bellatrix said laughing."I heard you have a baby girl? Is that true?" She asked.



"Yes we do but we don't care about her." Rachael Potter said. Rachael Potter was pretty she was also pureblood just like her husband. But Rachael was in Slytherin in her Hogwarts days. Rachael had long curly black hair with bright green-blue eyes.



"I heard you care so little for her that she doesn't even have a name." Bellatrix said in a crazy tone.



"Is this true?"Voldemort's cold voice asked them.



"So what if it is true?" Rachael asked.



"Everyone deserves to have a name even if they are not cared about." A Death eater pointed out to the two Potter's.



"Who asked you?" John yelled.



"Avada Kedavra!" Voldemort yelled pointing his want at John Potter.



"NO......NO!" Rachael screamed at the top of her lungs.



"Avada Kedavra!" Bellatrix yelled in a high pitched voice. The spell hit Rachael Potter in the chest and her eyes rolled into the back of her head and she fell backward. Both Potter's were dead. Their daughter was still alive. She was alive and would not be loved by them, ever.



"Sir." Bellatrix said proudly.



"Yes?" He asked.



"What about their daughter?" She asked as if they were the only ones in the graveyard.



"Well, she might be with James and Lily Potter." He replied.


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It was a warm night in September of 1980 in Godric's Hollow. James and Lily found out that John and Rachael were murdered a few hours earlier.



"They got what they deserved."James said sitting in the red couch.



"Yes, but what about their daughter?" Lily asked, sitting down next to him in the brightly lit living room.



"Well, we could raise her ourselves." He said.



"She still doesn't have a name."She said looking into his eyes.



"Well, I suppose we'll have to name her ourselves."



"Okay James, what should we name her then?" she asked.



Before James could answer her someone knocked on the door. "Coming." James said getting up and going to the door. He opened the door and it was Remus Lupin, one of his best friends from Hogwarts.



"Hi James, I’m sorry if it's late for you." Remus said.



"No it's only nine thirty Remus. Come in." He replied.



"Come on we can talk in the other room." Lily said, leading the men into the dining room. The room was an emerald green with dark wood flooring with some muggle pictures hang up on the wall. The dark table could fit at least eight people.



"So I heard what happened to your brother. All of the Order are talking about it and so is Dumbledore." Lupin said.



"Here." said Lily coming back with some hot tea and gave it to James and Lupin.



"I just want to know what will happen to their baby?" Lupin asked.



"Well James and I want to take her in as our own." Lily told Lupin.



"But she doesn't even have a name?"Lupin asked, drinking some of his tea.



"Well before you knocked on the door Lily and I were talking about the same thing." James explained to him.



"Well I think Rose is a pretty name James." Lily said.



"It is, but that would work for a middle name than a first name for her. The way she acts she needs a different name than that." James told them.



"Well how about you name her Lily Rose Potter?" Lupin said taking another sip of his tea. "She does look like you Lily just with bright blues eyes and curly blond hair." Lupin pointed out.



"He's onto something Lily. I like that." James said. Lupin left a hour later. Lily and James went upstairs and went to bed.


John and Rachael Potter's daughter was named Lily Rose Potter she was born on July 30, 1980. When James and Lily were murdered by Lord Voldemort, Harry James Potter went to live with his Aunt and Uncle in the Muggle world not knowing that he was a wizard. Lily Rose Potter went to live with her stepmother Rosalie Richardson. Lily had a hard life with her stepmother. Her father married her after he divorced Rachael Potter then he married Rosalie but then re-married Rachael againand they had Lily. She also lived in the muggle world but she knew she was a witch.
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Chapter Two: Ten Years Later: Summer of 1990



It was a warm summer day in London, England. Muggle kids were running around the sidewalk. While ten year old Lily Potter was doing chores for her Death Eater step-mother Rosalie Richardson-Potter. Rosalie was talking on the phone and watching some dumb game show on the television.


Poor Lily was washing the dishes, cleaning Rosalie’s clothes and also cleaning the rest of the huge house.

Lily found out that she was not only a pureblood witch but also a seeinds; she can see the future and also her past. But she knew it for the past six years.


It’s a very rare power. Lily is the first seeinds in about one hundred to two hundred years. It’s unknown how witches and wizards get this power. Lily went up to her room and grabbed a pen and a piece of paper. Lily walked out of her room and turned right to a big black, green and silver door.

Lily opened the big door slowly, it made a squeaky noise, Lily look over her shoulder to make sure Rosalie didn’t hear her. Lily walked up a few stairs and turned around and shut the door slowly and locked it. Lily walked over to the third row of bookshelves in the library. She looked for a book that was made for her.
It was called ‘The lost Secrets of the Seeinds’ by Bathida Bagshot. Lily grabbed it and walked over to the little sitting area and turned on the little green and silver lamp. The whole room lit up. You could see the dark green walls. Lily opened the bookmarked part of the book where she left off the day before.



Lily finished reading the paragraph.

“So that’s why every time I try to lie, the truth just comes out.” Lily said a loud. “I hate that.”
Lily also read another passage in the book;



“I know what it means. Now wonder why nobody really read this book when it came out.” Lily said. “She wrote like a child” She said aloud getting up from the chair and putting the book away.

She got her paper and pen and walked over to the black wood desk and wrote on the paper.








“Lily Rose Potter get you ungrateful butt down her now!” Rosalie yelled angrily. Lily went down the spiral stair case in the house she lived in but never called home. “What would you like?” Lily asked as nicely and calmly as possible. Lily saw two people in the hallway with Rosalie one was a boy with light blonde hair and grey eyes, the same age as her. She had seen this boy once before.


The other man also had light blonde hair but longer than his son’s, he also had grey eyes.



“I’m going to be at the Malfoy Manor for a few hours and Mr.Malfoy has brought his son Draco here to keep you company” Rosalie said putting her hand in her long black curly hair, her dark green eyes glaring at Lily.


“Draco this is Lily Rose Potter” Lucius said looking from Draco to Lily.


“Hi Lily!” Draco said happily.


“Don’t talk to her Draco, she’s not worth it.’ Rosalie said putting her emerald green cloak on and walking out the door.

“Don’t listen to her Lily.” Lucius said feeling sorry for Lily.

“I don’t listen to her anyway.” Lily said smiling at him. Lucius smiled back and closed the door.

“Hi again Lily!” Draco said looking all go, go gaga over her. Lily giggled because of the way his faced looked. They both laughed.

“Wow you’re gorgeous.” Draco said staring at her bright blues eyes she inherited from her grandma Rosetta Alderton.

“Snap out of it Draco.” Lily demanded. Lily pushed him and he hit the hard wood floor with a thud.

“Oh sorry, lets go see what the muggles are up to.”he said getting up from the ground and pulling her arm.

They walked out the door into the bright sunlight. It had to be nearly twenty-six degrees celcius. Lily and Draco walked down the street to the park. A few times Draco tried to hold Lily’s hand.

“Lily,Lily,Lily!” Lily’s best friend Katliyn Rendi said running up to her. “Hey!!” Lily said happily hugging her best friend.

”I see your evil step-mother let you out of the house.”Katliyn said.

“Why are you talking to this muggle?” Draco asked rudely.

“ I am not a muggle.” Katliyn said her brown eyes glaring at him.

“Do you even know what that word means?” Draco asked her.

“Yes I do and you’re a Malfoy. You’re a greaty little farret. “Katliyn said angerly.

“I need to talk to you Lily it’s really important.” She said walking away from Draco with Lily following her.

“Um….Lily I’m moving.” Katliyn said holding back the tears.

“But we’ll see each other at Hogwarts.”Lily said.

“No…I’m sorry I’m moving out of the Country.”she said tearfully.

” But………….no..no you’re my best friend. You can’t.”Lily responded holding back the tears.

Before Katliyn could say anything else Lily ran back to her house crying. Lily got up to her room with red walls and Gryffinsor signs it was the only place in the house that didn’t have Slytherin colors. Lily sat on her bed for what felt like three days and wouldn’t talk to anyone not even Draco. Finnally Lily accepted that Katliyn was gone and not coming back anytime soon.

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Lily R. Potter Year 6: Chapter 3 Part 1: 1 Year Later: Late July + Late August + Early September of 1991


In the past year Draco and I became best friends. But I've never liked the way he treats muggles Both Draco and I are excited to go to Hogwarts.

"Happy Birthday Lily!" I heard a voice that sounded like Draco's.

"I'm trying to sleep here." I mummbled. I hate it when he does this it's stupid. But what can I say I love my best friend.

"LILY WAKE UP NOW!" His voice got angerier. He walked over to my bed and pushed me off. I made a loud thud on the ground, I got up fast to make sure Rosalie wouldn't hear. But something was different she wasn't here. I wondered what was going on.

"First don't ever do that again do that to me again or the I'll kill you when I get my wand, if I ever do." I sighed. I have a feel that I will never get to use my magic because that her. I walked downstairs with Draco following me. I got to the green kitchen. All of a sudden a grey owl with bright green eyes flew through the open glass doors. He ploped a letter on the silver and black marble counter. He stoped for a second and stared into my bright electric blue eyes and I stared into his eyes bright green eyes that reminded me of my Aunt Lily's that I saw in a picture once.

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