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ZodiacGirl 05-19-2008 04:58 PM

Lily Evans’ Only Weakness - Sa9+
 
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot, and maybe Lily did have a weakness early on of Defence Against The Dark Arts, but I've not done my research, I only wrote this in the 30 minutes of discussion time I have in school with other years/grades in my school.

Summary: This is a fluffy Sev/Lily friendship fic, Severus helps Lily with her weakness.

Lily Evans’ Only Weakness

Severus Snape watched his friend, Lily Evans tackle her recent Defence Against The Dark Arts Essay.

“I‘ll never get this annoying essay done,” she muttered to herself.

He rolled his eyes and moved next to her, taking her by surprise. She looked at him, frustration showing darkly in her emerald eyes.

“Come here,” he took the parchment for her before she could object. He took the book and highlighted the paragraphs she needed with a highlighting charm, and handed it back to her, smirking.

She glared at him for a moment, clearly defiant on not wanting help, and her expression softened, she was smiling and she went back to her work.

When she had finished, she turned to him, asking, “What‘s the title of the essay?”

Dear, sweet Lily, so unable to manage a little bit of fourth year Defence. Severus thought. He took the highlighting charm off before the aged Librarian Madame Pince cut at them for vandalising a precious book.

“Effects of a werewolf bite, and how to be wary of a werewolf.” Severus smirked, watching her write the title, put the lid on her ink pot, she dropped her things into her bag and stood up.

He led her out of the library for dinner in the Great Hall, wondering, out of everything she is good at, why Lily’s only weakness was Defence Against The Dark Arts.

Finite

Yaya 05-21-2008 01:01 AM

hey

wow...

I just loved it...

it is really great...

I just wonder too...

Lol

nice work

ashsun 05-21-2008 02:13 AM

2nd Reader Hurray

Cool story

I think it fits Lily well

Her only weakness being Defense

I LOVE THE STORY

~Ashy~

ZodiacGirl 05-21-2008 05:19 AM

thanks guys

Ladybug 05-21-2008 07:08 AM

New reader!!! wow i love it and im totally hooked. Lol!!!

Im sooo subscribing to this thread.

I cant believe Lilys only weekness is DADA. Wow!!!! She's such a bright student.

Cant wait for more

luv ya

xXEvangelineXx

hermione03 05-21-2008 07:14 AM

Silly Lily! I found it very curious...though I'm wondering...if perhaps in the future James'll help her out? or no?
PAMS
Siobhan O'Toole

ZodiacGirl 05-21-2008 07:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evangeline Hermione (Post 6661036)
New reader!!! wow i love it and im totally hooked. Lol!!!

Im sooo subscribing to this thread.

I cant believe Lilys only weekness is DADA. Wow!!!! She's such a bright student.

Cant wait for more

luv ya

xXEvangelineXx

Quote:

Originally Posted by hermione03 (Post 6661060)
Silly Lily! I found it very curious...though I'm wondering...if perhaps in the future James'll help her out? or no?
PAMS
Siobhan O'Toole

sorry guys, it's a finished fic

but thanks :D glad you liked it

hermione03 05-21-2008 07:41 AM

im confused :/ as in u won't tell us any secrets or as in you can't continue with it?

Sabrina_Snape 05-21-2008 08:24 AM

No :no: it was a one shot wasn't it? :cry:

Oh well, it was a very good one shot! Well done! :glomp: Can't wait till you write another one!

Jemma
xxx

ZodiacGirl 05-21-2008 08:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hermione03 (Post 6661134)
im confused :/ as in u won't tell us any secrets or as in you can't continue with it?

as in i can't continue with it, it was just a 30 minute spur of the moment thing :)

draco*malfoy*lover 05-21-2008 02:44 PM

that was pretty amazing!

i loved it.

Ladybug 05-21-2008 02:54 PM

I confused!!!! Well it was a very good one shot, but it wasn't really telling us much.

Well anyway cant wait for another story you may write. Bye

luv ya

xXEvangelineXx

ZodiacGirl 05-21-2008 03:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evangeline Hermione (Post 6662119)
I confused!!!! Well it was a very good one shot, but it wasn't really telling us much.

Well anyway cant wait for another story you may write. Bye

luv ya

xXEvangelineXx

what are you confused about?

Cassie1011 05-25-2008 08:29 PM

This is good its just like how JKR writes

ZodiacGirl 05-26-2008 08:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cassie1011 (Post 6682037)
This is good its just like how JKR writes

aww thanks :woot: ^_^ :glomp:

lillypotter.7 05-30-2008 08:02 AM

ooh i cant wait for more please post as soon as possiable

ZodiacGirl 05-30-2008 10:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lillypotter.7 (Post 6706015)
ooh i cant wait for more please post as soon as possiable

it's a one-shot, sorry


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