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Old 11-10-2010, 05:18 PM   #201 (permalink)
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fortunately...somehow my laptop's working today so i am posting it before anything else happens to it...

Here you all go...

DINNER...




“Bye…have nice fun” called out Ginny as she and Hermione were standing waving back to Sara who walked out of the fence of the Burrow and joined Shaun who was standing there and talking to Harry and Ron.


“what do you think should we set up a date for these idiots often?” asked Hermione
“yeah, they should realize that they need some color in their grey lives?” said Ginny smirking
And as the girls were discussing the various ways to get the two of them together for a date the guys walked towards them.
“and that way we can get them together” said Ginny which both the guys heard.
“why I am smelling some trouble brewing here?” said Ron standing behind the girls and they jumped up
“go get your nose checked then brother, no trouble here” Ginny said cheekily and both the girls walked away from the boys and leaving them looking at each other shrugging.




Shaun and Sara apparated right on a huge clearing. It was getting dark already and the moon was rising up and sounds of the nocturnal insects could be heard. Sara checked her watch and it was around eight.
“where are we going?” she asked
“surprise” he said and taking hold of her hand they walked ahead till they came to a huge wrought iron gate. Taking his wand out he sent a patronus and the gate opened for them. They walked hand in hand through the path with a huge lawn on both their sides and with lights lit up all through their path to the front door.
“this is beautiful” she said softly. As they reached the porch Shaun knocked the door and waited for it to be opened and just then Sara turned and asked Shaun
“is this is your ancestral home?”
And just then the door opened and her question was answered as she saw Mrs. Macmillan standing in front of her
“Mrs. Macmillan” said Sara and her face supported a bright smile as she got to meet another person from her place which made her heart swell with happiness
“Sara dear” she called out and hugged her tightly
“I am just so glad to see you.” she said as she continued to hug.
“this is such a surprise for me” said Sara her voice chocking.
“seriously Melissa, you have made that girl cry” came a voice from behind and Sara opened her slightly watered eyes to see Shaun’s dad walk out to meet them. Both the women moved away and wiped off their tears
“how are you doing honey?” asked Henry
“good, Mr. Macmillan, really great to see you” she said and hugged him
“really glad to see you too, come in now” he said hugging her and taking her inside with his arm around her shoulder in a fatherly manner, while Melissa hugged her son before they stepped in and closed the door behind them.


The dinner went on well with Melissa coaxing Sara to take another round of serving every time she finished with her previous one
“mum, relax. you will make her bloat by the end of the dinner” said Shaun
“oh shut it Shaun”
“Mrs. Macmillan, really thank you but I am full already” said Sara politely spooning in the last bite of her dessert.
“Your pies are, as always very tasty Mrs. Macmillan” complimented Sara
“thank you dear. I knew its your favorite”
“thanks Mrs. Macmillan”
“exactly, the minute I told her today morning that you will be coming for dinner tonight she has been completely excited about it and ended up making all the dishes that you like and none that I like!” Shaun complained
“hey you get to eat your favorite every time you come here” said his dad
“yeah, yeah. Even you team up with mum and her now” spoke Shaun like a kid
“Willi? Willi?”
“yes master Shaun?” came in the voice of the little elf from the two feet above the ground
“you will make my favorite dinner the next Saturday I come” he ordered in a childish way
“oh come on Shaun, don’t be a kid and mind your tone Hermione wont like it if you talk to Willi like that” said Sara laughing
“are you talking of Miss Granger, Miss Mehera?” he asked interested
“yes, she is a real good friend of ours” she said
“I never believed when Master Shaun said that to me” he said and everybody laughed and Shaun sulked
“great, now even you don’t believe me. I thought I could trust you Willi” he said pouting. Laughing Sara spoke
“yeah, she is his friend too”
“So is it also right that she is going to make some amendments for us?” he asked genuinely happy of the prospect
“yes, Willi. It seems when she was as young as 14 she had started this organization for welfare of elves and she is working hard on it side by side for it even now. And she is just waiting for the right time to take that step for you all” Sara said smiling and Willi squeaked happily.
“I would certainly want to meet her someday Miss Mehera” he said happily
“Willi” said Henry in a fake angry voice
“you are behaving as if we ill treat you” continuing in the same tone
And Willi shivered as he looked at his master
“no, no sir…you have never ill treated me, my master. Never, its my mistake. I am sorry, I am sorry” he said and bowed deep down with every time he said I am sorry
“Herny!” exclaimed Melissa as she hit him hard on his hand.
“oh don’t do that Willi, you know your master. He jokes and fools around. don’t worry he aint angry with you” she said kindly and made him stop his bowing.
“now Willi if you could take these things away we are done with the dinner” she asked kindly
“sure, Madam” he said bowing and began working as they all got up from the table and walked into the living room.

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Hello Harita. What a pleasant surprise for Sara. That was really sweet of Shaun to take her there. The buisness with Willi was too cute. I guess Hermione is still passionate about her Elf treatment reform. They are grossly taken advantage of.
Well, this was very nicely written Harita. And I'm glad your lap top worked for you. Maybe it's problem has taken care of its self. I'll be watching for your next post.
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hello...there everybody...posting after a long time...laptop problem...wouldnt bore you guys with the trouble though so here's the new post...


NOSTALGIA



There was laughter ringing from the floor above theirs and the Macmillan parents had a huge smile on their faces.
“really happy to see that girl here” said Melissa
“it was such a surprise when he told us she was here” she continued.
“yeah, she hasn’t changed much though, just the same old smart girl” said Henry
“yeah, and I am really glad that I am getting to hear Shaun laugh like that. When was the last time did he ever laugh like that after coming here?” asked Melissa
“not until now, I am sure. But he has moved on, Mel. He has made good friends just like he had Rahul and Sara. but now with Sara back here I think it will only be better for him hereon” Shaun’s dad said
“yeah, to have someone from your own place, gives immense pleasure and strength” said Melissa



“Have you come across any of our house team mates before you left?” asked Sara sitting on his bed as they were going through their old school Quidditch Team photographs.
“not everyone, but met Mehernaz. Before leaving” he said
“how’s she doing?”
“like everyone else” he said shrugging
“she was thinking of leaving the country just like we did” he said and Sara just nodded and continued to look through the pictures
“hey do you remember this year?” he asked as he showed her the fourth year Quidditch group photos.
“yeah, I do” she said
“and do you remember this guy?” he asked showing her another picture where he was pointing at some guy in the background
“is that Colin?” she asked looking at him
“you are confirming your boyfriend’s face!” Shaun spoke in a fake aghast tone
“oh shut up!” she said and looked at the picture again. it was a picture in the middle of the market place in a town outside the school, where everyone would go for weekends, just like Hogsmeade
“and he is my ex, better remember that!” she added
“missing him?” Shaun asked looking through different pictures from the box.
“oh yeah terribly” she said in sarcastic tone. Shaun looked up smiling “you hate him don’t you?” he asked
“to the core!” she said keeping the picture away and looking through the much younger pictures of theirs
“but you should thank him for one thing”
“and what is that?” she asked
“he gave you your first kiss” he said smirking and Sara picked up the pillow and hit him right on his face and continued hit him
“alright, alright, I am sorry” he said between breaths as she continued to hit him
“sorry, sorry”
“better be” she huffed and sat down and looked at the picture again
“god! how did I even like that idiot and make him my boyfriend!” she said out aloud and Shaun laughed and put his arm around her
“calm down, honey. Its ok. Everyone makes mistakes” he said
“like you did” said Sara and showed him a picture that she found just then and he turned red
“oh my god! that Deepika girl still has that effect on you?” asked Sara
“wha-what effect?” asked Shaun looking away
“blushing and all” said Sara nudging him
“I am not blushing! I am embarrassed” he declared
“oh sure you are” she said smirking
“oh, Shaun, I really do like you, I have never met anyone as good looking and charming as you” Sara started in his ex-girl friend’s voice
And Shaun looked at her horrified and Sara laughed off.
“she never spoke to me like that” he said
“oh but she did make you look like some cute little charming teddy bear whom she could hug and snog all the time” said Sara “when you were hardly ever cute!” she continued smirking.
“one doesn’t snog a teddy bear Sara!” he said
“she probably did, all throughout our 6th year” she reminded him and he didn’t say anything and shook his head. As they were going through the pictures again she came across a certain picture. It was their 5th year picture on the Victorian Terminal Station with Rahul, Shaun, her brother and Juhi.
“Hey, this is Karan’s first year picture with us” she said and he peeked in
“yeah and you are still having that infamous walk man in your hand” he said.
“I mean, even after getting detention because of that in your first year you used to carry that every year!” he said as he was keeping everything back in the box
“yeah thanks to you and Rahul, for nosing around” she said
“that was my only way to pass my time when I hardly knew you people” and Shaun rolled his eyes.
“had you people not bothered to complain I wouldn’t have been in trouble with detention!” she said
“hey we were kids”
“whatever”
“but anyways, it was through that detention that we got to know each other, better” he added and got up to keep the huge box away.
“yeah,” she said and looking at the picture with such fondness that it made Shaun smile and shake his head
‘trust Sara never to change’ he thought.
“mind if I keep the picture with me, I somehow like it” she asked.
“sure”
Shaun walked towards his cupboard to keep the pictures box back and then turning he said
“but you know I haven’t forgotten those cherry pjs of yours that you used to wear in your first year, you even came down to get your walkman in those that night when we got you your walkman back” he said smirking
“oh those, those were my favorite” she said smiling in nostalgia.
“yeah, you looked like round red cherry in it” he said and she picked up the nearby pillows and threw them at him again and laughter rung through the corridor of the Macmillan Mansion…

Hope you all liked it...
Have A Nice Day:-)

And i will be having my exams soon...so i wont get to post much...

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Hello Harita. This was a very nice chapter. I really enjoyed reading it. It's always nice going through old pictures. I went through 3 photo albums of mine, wedding, kids, family, last night. Brought back very good memories.
I love how close Shaun and Sara are. And I really want them to get together, but, I worry about that Catherine, and what she's up to.
Great post Harita. Don't worry about us while you do your tests. Study hard, and do well. We'll catch up when you can write without jeapordizing your schoolwork.
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thanks Connie...yeah even i love going through old pictures...i even had made a collage of pictures for 2 of my friends for Friendhip's day and gifted it to them......

and well...i am back...finished with my exams...but i cant post today...because this is my brother's laptop and i have to fix my laptop so next post will take sometime...and by the way HAPPY HOLIDAYS TO ALL ON SS!!!
hope all your christmas preparations are going on in full swing...
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Hello...new post at last...sorry for the delay...still using my brother's laptop...

JUST ANOTHER DAY


The girls woke up to see Sara in deep sleep. Though they wanted to know what happened last night but they didn’t disturb her sleep.
It wasn’t till 10 in the morning that both of them didn’t get up. Molly and Arthur were at the kitchen table sitting and talking as Molly was preparing for the lunch when Sara walked in and followed a bit later by Shaun who was still looking sleepy
“had a good sleep kids?” asked Molly
“yeah, but still sleepy” said Sara and went into the kitchen to make some tea for herself and Arthur and Shaun.
As she sat with her tea she asked Molly
“where is everyone else?”
“oh they are outside near the lake,” she said and Sara nodded. After finishing their tea both of them got out and walked towards the lake but didn’t find anyone there. The two of them were searching for these four and just then the four of them swished by them on their brooms from behind.
“bloody idiots!” shouted Shaun
“you could have murdered us!” exclaimed Sara as she fell to the ground ducking and all they could her was sounds of their laughter. The four of them landed and then went back to where the other two were getting up. The girls reached Sara first and began to pull her away from the guys towards the Burrow.
“come on you got to tell us what happened at the dinner and everything, everything” said Ginny excitedly.
Confused Sara allowed them to drag her into the house and the guys watched amused at the way Ginny and Hermione were behaving.

As they reached the girl’s room Hermione and Ginny plopped on their beds and asked
“so where did you go for dinner?”
“what was this surprising place?”
“calm down will you both of you?” said Sara
“alright, alright”
“sorry”
“we went to his ancestral house, his parents house” she said “met his parents”
“what!” both the girls exclaimed.
“what? What’s so startling about that?” asked Sara
“I have known them for seven years. I can go to their house. Its not that I don’t know them or he is introducing me to them for the first time. What’s so shocking about that?” asked Sara crossing her hands.
“oh, oh no, nothing. Just that we weren’t expecting that” said Hermione slightly stuttering.
“anyways” said Sara offhandedly.
“we had a nice dinner with Mr. and Mrs. Macmillan and then got a tour of his mansion. Its pretty huge. Seriously. I mean I had no idea he had such a huge place here in England. I remember him telling me and Rahul once that they had a ancestral house here, but had no idea it would be huge” she said really amazed as she was speaking of it.
“and then met their house elf who, Miss Granger is a huge fan of yours already” said Sara and Hermione looked amazed
“I guess Shaun does talk highly of his friends” Sara said smiling
“he wishes to meet you someday”
“oh, that’s so sweet. You wait for Ron to listen this” said Hermione
And Ginny laughed
“yeah, he has a competition from an elf” said Ginny chuckling and Sara joined her
“no I mean, he always thinks that S.P.E.W is waste of time, even now” said Hermione her tone slightly hurt.
“oh come on Hermione, forget about it” said Sara
“yeah, he is a git” said Ginny and Hermione smiled
“yeah so you were saying?” said Hermione asking Sara to continue.
“we just talked and saw our old photos and we were just recollecting the memories that’s it. nothing cheesy or gossipy for you girls” Sara continued but she was smiling remembering the nice time she had with her friend
“yeah, yeah no gossip for us. Its because you are hiding things from us. Look at that smile of yours” said Ginny
“rubbish” said Sara and got up from her place to set her bed when the door was knocked. Ginny went and opened the door
“come on in” she said and the guys came in and settled down
“I just came in to tell you people that I will be going out for sometime but will be back by evening” said Shaun looking at the girls
“where are you going?” asked Hermione as Sara just looked up listening to Shaun’s voice
“um…well…actually Catherine talked to me last night. She has some work with me. So I need to go” he said and Hermione just nodded
“sure, go ahead. Anyways you wont be missing much except for the wonderful ideas that we all will come up with for your last punishment” said Sara smirking
“yeah, yeah. I just cant wait” he said sarcastically and rolling eyes.
“alright then, see you later guys” he said and left the room and Sara went back to cleaning her bed and the others went back to their talk except Ginny who had become quiet suddenly.

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Hello Harita. It's so good to see you here! Loved your new post and can't wait till you post more! I didn't get the notice that you posted yet, I just happened to be checking and you did post!
Love how you incorporated their House Elf into the story. It is one of my very favorite places of this post.
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“and then met their house elf who, Miss Granger is a huge fan of yours already” said Sara and Hermione looked amazed
“I guess Shaun does talk highly of his friends” Sara said smiling
“he wishes to meet you someday”
“oh, that’s so sweet. You wait for Ron to listen this” said Hermione
You wrote it so believable.
I can't wait to see what the last punishment is!
And Hermione acts as though it's ok? Does she only know her from the one time after the quidditch game, or does she know her from some other way? I just don't trust that Catherine.

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“alright then, see you later guys” he said and left the room and Sara went back to cleaning her bed and the others went back to their talk except Ginny who had become quiet suddenly.
What's up with Ginny? Is she thinking something strange is going on also?

Great post Harita. Can't wait till you post again.

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oh thank you so much Connie...i edited that part...my mistake...
and about Hermione,well she doesnt care much.she is fine with Shaun and Catherine just as Harry is .But Ginny well she had seen Catherine at Hogsmeade and she hadnt liked they both hanging around so you know how it is......
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Hello another post...

OVER AT LAST...


It was late evening when Shaun returned back to his apartment. He had checked in the Burrow and saw no one was there.
As he entered the apartment he heard the familiar voices of his friends.
“ah! Here he comes” said Ron
“hello people” said Shaun and sat down heavily on the couch
“why didn’t you guys tell me that you all are here. Would have saved my time” he said
“when you vanish away from the face of the earth, how are we supposed to let you know” said Ginny and Shaun rolled his eyes.
“hum…what am I hearing Shaun?” started Sara
“what?” he asked turning to look at Sara.
“you have a girlfriend?” she said with a smirk and her hands across her chest. Shaun gave Ron a look and then turned to talk to Sara
“I don’t have any girlfriend Sara, and I don’t know who keeps on telling you all this” he said looking back at Ron
“hm…So who is Catherine you went to meet?” she asked sipping her drink.
“well...” he started but stopped and looked at Sara for sometime and then said
“you are having firewhiskey?!” exclaimed Shaun
“I am very well allowed to Shaun” she said dryly
“yeah, but…anyways…yeah so I was saying…yeah, Catherine is a friend of mine. She works in the Ministry and ”
“and they have been going out together since February” said Harry and Sara choked.
“they are kidding Sara” said Shaun in a tone higher than normal to make her listen to him and not them. She looked at Harry and Ron and then back at Shaun. The other two were smirking while Shaun was glaring at them. She turned to look at Hermione who mouthed
“I have no idea” and Sara just shrugged and spoke
“I am not going to duel you to death if you both are going out Shaun,” she said shrugging and finishing her drink
“so finished with whatever work she had?” asked Ginny in an indifferent tone but it really looked like it mattered to her.
“yeah, she had some issues with the owner of the apartment which she took for rent” he said shrugging as he got up to fix a drink for himself.
“why don’t we all start with the dinner, you can have your drinks there guys. No fun in eating cold food” Hermione said getting up from her place. And they all agreed getting up from their places.
“but I would like if you would keep me posted on your developments, just like the old times” she whispered winking with a naughty smile at Shaun as they all followed into the kitchen.



The girls had prepared a brilliant dinner and all six of them enjoyed it thoroughly.
“you know we should do this often” said Hermione
“what, you people cooking for us?” said Ron “you are most welcome” and he got a kick from under the table from Hermione
“no, meeting and having dinner together just the six of us at least once in a week or two” said Ginny
“yeah, its not necessary we have only dinner, we could all go out to a restaurant or go to a muggle place like a movie and then dinner out, or for a change you guys can cook for us” added in Sara as she forked in the dinner.
“yeah, and that time Shaun will be allowed only for preparing deserts” said Ron and Ginny smacked Ron’s head.


As the dinner was over and the six of them settled in the living room with their drinks Ginny stood up and clinked her glass with her wand to get attention
“hmm…and now for Shaun’s last punishment” she said and Harry raised his eyebrows
“what, I hope you guys didn’t forget about that now, did you?” she asked and then looked at Shaun who shook his head
“I was very well prepared Ginny” he said
“good, I like the spirit” she said and continued “so today’s punishment for you is that you have to sing a song for us. It can be any song, I for sometime thought that the song should be dedicated to Sara because you are doing her punishments” Ginny said and Sara who was in shock went into a shade of red and shook her head
“but then I let that go and allow you to sing any song you want” Ginny said
“I think looking at Sara’s face it doesn’t look like it was her idea at all” said Shaun but he laughed it off. Because he knew that she was well aware of his singing talent.
“now deal with it Sara” he said and got up from the couch and walked in the middle of the room with his friends cheering for him.



He started with the song “Summer of 69” and Hermione cheered him all the way through helping him with lyrics and tunes in between and Sara who was in the beginning embarrassed was now fine, smiling and herself singing along with Hermione and Shaun while Ron, Ginny and Harry cheered along.
As the song ended Ron demanded Sara to sing a song for all of them and she was reluctant but then as usual Hermione came to her rescue and played a song which was very popular muggle song and fortunately all the three girls favorite.

‘Every night in my dreams,
I see you, I feel you…
That is how I know you,
Go on…’
Sara started along with the song playing on the gramophone
‘Far across the distance and spaces between us…
You have come to show us go on…’ Ginny sang along…
‘Near…far…wherever you are,
I believe that my heart does go on….
Once more you open the door ’
Hermione joined them looking at her girl friends and smiling all the way through and guys raised their eyebrows listening to the song…


Singing Ginny got up from her place and walked towards Harry and held out a hand for him to take it and they both began to dance along with the song. Soon Ginny stopped singing and just concentrated on the dance and the music as they both swayed along. Looking at his sister and his best friend and then at his own girlfriend who was busy smiling looking at the other two. He gathered the courage and asked her to dance wordlessly as Hermione continued to sing.
Seeing all the lovey-dovey scene Sara shook her head and silently listened to the music as it played on.
She continued humming the song and walked around. She turned and saw that Shaun had stood up and just signaled if she would like to dance and she shrugged and joined the rest of the group waltzing around the small living room. The song ended and soon a very loud disco music started playing and the four Hogwarts students freaked out as they remembered this famous song of ‘Do dance like a Hippogriff’ of Weird Sister's band leaving the other two Phoenixonians stunned…
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DISCLAIMER: The song mentioned in this post completely is the work of Bryan Adams and Jim Vallance and produced by Bob Clearmountain and Bryan Adams. The next song in this post is work of Celine Dion and was featured as the theme song for the movie Titanic(1997). The song Dance Like A Hippogriff mentioned at the end is a part of Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire movie directed by Mike Newell and produced by David Heyman and copyright by Warner Brothers and music by Patrick Doyle and contributing artists Weird Sisters.

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Herllo Harita. I hope you had a Merry Christmas. Did you get to go home for the holidays? Be safe traveling to and fro. Your post was wonderful. I still love your story as much as I did when I started reading it. I love how persistent Ron is, and I hope he has to come forward with what's going on with him and Catherine.
I'm sorry Harita, I can't do anymore commenting tonight. Please don't think that I've lost interest in your story, I haven't. It's still one of my favorites, and I really do look forward to reading it. Hopefully things will get back to normal for me soon. I'll send you a PM when I can about what's going on with me. Right now, I need to go to bed.
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Thank you Connie. i hope you had good Christmas too. Take care of yourself. everything will be fine. Will catch up over PM.Have A Goodnight...

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BEGIN A NEW CHASE?


It was the middle of a busy week when Arthur received an owl at his department. Opening and scanning through the letter he looked up slightly apprehensive and then continued reading…


The guys were having their dinner when the door knocked.
“who is it now?” said Shaun as he got up from middle of the dinner and walked out
“wont be surprised to see Cathy” Ron teased
“shut it” he heard Shaun call out and then “Mr. Weasley, nice to see you sir”


Arthur came in and sat down with the three guys after they finished with their dinner.
“I got an owl today from the Ministry at my office and I was called to talk to both the heads again and I discussed the point with your dad too” he said looking at Shaun
“I have been in touch with him since the time you have told me about the confidential issue” and Shaun nodded
“and he has been a real help, although the issue will take time to settle, we both talked to the heads and they as expected are asking to prove the authenticity of that letter and the content in it” and the three of them looked at each other slightly apprehensive to where this all was going.
“they are very doubtful about it because Sara herself had stated that the deceased is her friend and it will be very difficult now to return to the grave to prove it wrong, if that is what you are believing in” said Arthur and Shaun looked at him.
“I hope you are understanding what this all is up to, right?” said Arthur and Shaun nodded and so did Harry but Ron was feeling that his dad wasn’t doing enough but he kept silent.
“alright, Mr.Weasley, what did dad say about all this?”
“um…well…he couldn’t do much either but somehow has tried to influence them enough to allow us to talk and listen to us” and Shaun sighed helplessly.
“what do they, the heads say Mr.Weasley?” asked Harry
“well, they are very reluctant to go back to the ground level and look into the death of that guy who Sara mistook it for her friend but then even if it ends up being true they wouldn’t be able to keep it confidential for much long”
“why?” asked Ron
“because she isn’t from our country. She is like a visitor to this place so they will be in no position to deny information about her when someone comes knocking their door for her” said Arthur
“alright, what do you suggest we do for them not to come and ask for her?” asked Shaun
“go into hiding?” suggested Ron
“no, I guess she should though keep her identity as closed as possible but stay here and work here and gain her experience so that she can be a citizen and when she becomes that the Ministry will have no way to turn down her request” said Harry
“that is possible isn’t it, Mr. Weasley?” asked Shaun and Arthur nodded
“but to be a citizen a person has to have at least five years of residence in this country”
“and that’s a long call, what if they track her down way before that” said Ron
“yeah, we know. all we can hope is that Juhi and Rahul should have done a good job there trying to make them believe that Sara is dead and gone” said Shaun leaning behind into the couch and ran his hands through his hair.
“yeah till then I guess to be on a run would be the only answer” said Arthur
“but that doesn’t guarantee her that they would keep her identity confidential. She will just be on a run for like forever” said Harry and they continued to discuss on various possibilities but in vain…

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Hello Harita. I'm always happy to get to read another post from you Harita. It picks me up, no matter what you write about. I love how persistent Ron is:
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He wants to find out more about Catherine and so do I. You write a lot the same way Thomas Kincaid paints. There is always a bright spot somewhere on his picture. It doesn't have to be that way, but, it adds so much to the picture. You write the same way. I love it.

So, I'm wondering what's going to be done about Sara's protection, and also, if they're going to be able to exhume the body to make a positive idea.

Great post Harita. I'll be watching for your next.
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A DECISION MADE


Another busy week went by and Ginny was already busy planning for Harry’s 19th birthday party and Angelina, Fleur and Sara were helping her out while Hermione still hadn’t returned back from office.

It was late evening when Hermione followed by the three guys, Arthur and more surprisingly Mr. Macmillan dropped by. The five men after a cordial greeting and meeting with the ladies walked into the living room and asked Sara to join them. The very appearance of Henry there did brightened her up but she was having a hunch about what was going to happen.

She sat down taking a seat between Harry and Ron while Shaun continued to stand and look at his father with a certain degree of disapproval. Arthur started to speak and then told Sara of the problem that they are facing and what solutions they are expecting that would work for her. She silently listened to them and nodded and as Arthur and Henry finished she got up excused herself walked back to her room and returned in few minutes with an envelope containing a letter and handed it over to Arthur.


Surprised at Sara’s behavior Shaun walked ahead and read the letter from Arthur’s shoulder as did Henry.


“I had written to them a month before my exams. They have accepted my request and are ready make the arrangements” she said when she got a questioning look from Shaun.
“what are you talking about? Who has accepted your, what request?” asked Ron
“I am going to France, Ron” she said looking at him and it came as a huge shock to him and so did for Harry
“France…”
“but why all of a sudden”
“well…I have to do something for my living. I don’t know when I will be able to get back to my country. Till then I will need to take care of my living, which certainly needs me to work and I am going to France to get trained to be a teacher” she said
And that information completely bowled the guys over.
“alright” said Henry as his tone suggested her to continue
“I will leave for France and my course is for two years. I will be there under a different name and identity and I have been in touch with them from the beginning and they have accepted my request. Though they will know my original name and where I came from, that is England they wont write that information down in their record books and registers and they also have the facility to keep the information confidential because the institute is also a place where loads of dark magic practitioners and researchers are there just because they cant do that in open with their Ministry breathing down their necks. So I am sort of safe there” she said
“so, I will sort of be away from this place for sometime and that will be as good as I am on a run and I will learn something side by side which will help me get a job back here. so I can come back and work and get the citizenship or whatever the issue is” she said as if all this sounded so very easy.
“how can you trust complete strangers!” demanded Shaun getting angry about being kept in dark about it all this while.
“and why didn’t you tell us about this?” demanded Ron
“I just got the letter today, Ron”
“even then, before posting you should have told us about it” he continued in same tone.
“what Ron means is dear, that we really could have helped you out on tracking information about this institute of yours and its reliability” said Arthur while Henry nodded
“Mr. Weasley I did that all. Your friend and room mate, Neville Longbottom, Luna’s boyfriend is a student there.” She said turning to Ron and Harry “I haven’t met him yet but have been in touch with him courtesy Ginny and Luna and though I have not told him anything about me he has helped out enough in getting all this information about the institute without asking too many questions” she continued and Harry shook his head and then looked up at Arthur and Henry.
“I guess then its alright Mr. Weasley, Mr. Macmillan. I know Neville very well and we have been in touch with him. If he has suggested her this institute then it should be safe, though it doesn’t sound so convincingly but I guess we need to take some action and I think Sara has already decided over here” he said. She knew this decision of hers wouldn’t be taken very well by everyone especially by Shaun and how right she was when she saw him almost immediately turn around and walk out of the living room and the Burrow.


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Hello Harita. Happy New Year. I can't believe Sara is going to France! And why didn't she confide in Shaun? And why is Ron so upset? Does he not even knowing this himself have feelings for Sarah? I'm anxious for your next post Harita. Wonderful job writing. I always look forward to your posts.
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A Very Happy New Year to All my friends and readers from SS. Hope you all had a great time celebrating the arrival of 2011! May all your dreams and wishes come true! have a great year ahead...

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THE 19th BIRTHDAY!




The music was surrounded and had almost engulfed the entire Grimmauld Place on the occasion of Harry’s 19th birthday. If only it hadn’t been protected with various magical charms the adjoining buildings could have easily heard all that was going on in the building and would have led the youngsters into serious trouble. But that obviously didn’t happen given the thorough magical security that the Grimmauld Place was protected with for decades.


Harry was blindfolded by George and what seemed after a very long journey did they reach the Place and that certainly was not through Floo powder Harry had known. He would have realized if they would have traveled that way, he could have felt the slight claustrophobic feeling while standing in the fireplace the feeling of the green flames over his body not that he could see the green flames with blindfold on him but he was well aware of the Floo network connection for more than 8 years of his life as a wizard.

And soon as he stepped in and was walked through the corridor of some sort and suddenly the blindfold was removed and there was huge fireworks crackling in the air of the Grimmauld Place’s high ceiling. His eyes took time to adjust to the sudden light because it felt as if there wasn’t any lights prior to his entry too. And as the others adjusting to the bright firecrackers they went on cheering for Harry and of course who could forget the Weasley Products!

A huge smile brightened his face as he walked and hugged Mr. and Mrs. Weasley later followed by the others who whished him and hugged him. At last moving away from Ron and Hermione he walked up to Ginny and she engulfed him with a huge hug which certainly made him go off the balance but he managed to stand still and take the hug and the sweet kiss from his lovely girlfriend in deep blue evening dress and her flaming red hair…



The entire evening was a laughter riot. George, Jimmy and Ritchie who Demelza considers as her new team’s George and Fred had made the guests laugh so hard that by the end everyone was holding on to their stomachs and faces for no one had laughed and giggled and enjoyed so much ever. Lee with his antics of imitation hadn’t spared anyone. Not a single soul that he knew was spared from Professor McGonagall to Arthur Weasley, from Percy to Ron, he even imitated the girls the funniest being Hermione even with Fleur being in competition with her. But according to Lee he enjoyed imitating Mione the most because she was always the uptight and law and rule abiding girl of the lot at least till the time he was a part of Hogwarts.
“no offense Hermione dear” called out a slightly high and hysterical Lee
“I love you” he said and Ron stiffened
“I mean we all love you for what you are but seriously you were our favorite person to imitate” he said in his stupor.
Shaun who hadn’t missed Ron’s stiffness spoke out loud
“Lee, good you corrected yourself my boy or else you would have had to deal with the Weasley King about that little love line of yours” he said grinning and Sara shook her head trying to bite back her laughter as Lee and the rest chuckled which left Ron and Hermione blushing beet red.
And the imitation continued and so did the rest of the fun as the moon went up high above into the dark sky and the stars began to twinkle the guests began to slowly get tired but nonetheless exhilarated by the birthday party; the kind of party they hadn’t had since the re-union.
As the last of the guests piled out from the Grimauld Place’s fireplace Sara and the rest of her friends stayed back to clean up the living room, the dining room and the kitchen.
“Ginny why don’t you go and spend time with Harry, we will take care of all this” said Hermione but Ginny brushed the topic off and continued to help till Harry came back from the front of the house where he had gone to see of Luna, Derek and Fiona who wanted to have a walk back to their home.

“phew…that was quite some party guys” Harry said digging his hands deep in his pockets and Ron grinned
“you are welcome” he said cheekily and everybody laughed
“yeah…thanks” said Harry with a side smile. Smiling he looked up at Ginny and walked to her and began helping her with the cleaning which made the girls smile but made Ron roll his eyes
“Mione told her to go and be with Harry, why do they have to be so cheesy” said Ron looking at his sister and his best friend work together and Shaun bit back his laughter
“look whose talking about being cheesy” said Sara softly who just heard Ron speak. Looking away from Ron, she looked at Shaun who was still smiling trying not to laugh. As soon he saw Sara looking at him his smile faltered and he looked away and walked into the living room to get the rest of the empty wine and firewhiskey bottles.
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Hello Harita. So sweet this post with all the3 different emotions flying around the room. And you blended them all perfectly to make the chapter very enjoyable to read. Isn't it so nice Harry finally gets to have a birthday party that wasn't interrupted by one thing or another. It seems like even at the Weasley's his birthday was always shared with another occasion or Scrimenger (sp?) the last year. But, now, he is having a real birthday party. Certainly a new experience for him being the center of attention rather than Dudley. It is so good to see him living a real life.
I love how you write the unspoken dialogue between your characters in appropriate moments. Like when Harry's eyes meet Ginny's and although nothing is spoken, they both understand each other. And when Harry looks at Ginny and smiles and starts helping Ginny and Hermione clean up. They didn't have to say anything. Soooo very nice. And I especially liked how Sara's eyes went to Shaun's eyes and he turned away. So many unspoken words there, but the pain was felt as if sharp words had been yelled. Neither one would have spoken words like that, but it is in the eyes. Especially averted eyes.
I hope Shaun and Sara work things out. I can't help thinking that Sarah is making a mistake. She needs to listen to Shaun. And hopefully Shaun can speak rationally to her so she'll listen and not get upset and just turn from him in disgust and humiliation.
Great post Harita. I'll be watching for your next.
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Thank you for such a long comment...i love reading your point of views and explanations. its really is encouraging...here's a new post...

DON'T GO...


As September 1st came around the corner there was an increase in movement around the house and the atmosphere charged up. Molly had seen more than 10 years of such frantic movement in her house. It first began when Bill had entered Hogwarts and continued till Ginny got over with it and today yet again she was up early to help Sara in her packing as she was to leave for France in about a week and the atmosphere in the house was yet again as if one of the children was still left with schooling.

The only difference this time round was Fleur was dropping in almost every other day to help Sara with shopping and packing and in process enlightening Sara about her country.
“you will love it there Sara” she gushed over the breakfast table where all the women of the house sat down for a leisure cup of tea.
“Sara how far is Paris from your place?” asked Ginny excitedly
“no idea, I mean I never asked Neville about it” Sara said shrugging and Ginny slapped her head.
“Sara, that is the most romantic place in the world!” exclaimed Fleur
“I am aware of its popularity amongst the couples Fleur” Sara said shaking her head and drained the last of her tea and got up to put it back in sink and walked back to join the discussion.

By afternoon Sara was slightly getting restless and was sort of going into a shell and responding in monosyllables.
“Sara, you alright?” asked Hermione as the women were preparing the Sunday lunch and then Sara turned and hugged Hermione tightly which surprised Ginny and Molly.
Hermione hugged her back and patted her hair.
“its alright, Sara. Its alright” she murmured.
Ginny could see Sara had paled and had shut her eyes tightly. Molly walked ahead patted her head and Sara opened her eyes to see the caring look of a mother. Moving away from Hermione Sara went and hugged Molly
“I am going to terribly miss you Mrs. Weasley, terribly miss you” she said as she hugged and Molly mutely nodded her throat chocking.
“we’ll keep in touch honey, we will keep in touch. Don’t worry, you will be fine” Molly spoke in her soothing motherly tone. Ginny walked ahead and placed her hand on Sara’s shoulder and she turned to face her friend.
Though Sara wasn’t crying the sadness and the pain of going away from her friends was evident in her eyes. Hugging Ginny Sara wished she didn’t have to leave any of her friends. It was just like leaving her family again. Leaving dad, Karan, Juhi, Rahul and Shaun…Shaun, she would be leaving him again.
"don't go Sara, don't. you don't need to" she heard Ginny whispering as she hugged Sara but in the back of her mind she felt like those words had been repeated from her past and Sara saw her brother and Shaun's face coming in front of her mind's eye as she hugged Ginny tightly.

hope you liked it...have a nice day...:-)

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Hello Harita. Oh my goodness! Such sorrow! I just don't understand why Sara thinks she needs to go away for her studies. She'll have nobody to help her, but, Neville. Is Luna over there too? I forget. Anyway, I just keep remembering when she left her home and came to Rosemerta's, she was barely alive. I'm so afraid it will happen again. I hope she changes her mind and stays there. Great post Harita.
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You're welcome then. I always want to encourage, but I'm afraid I get a little long winded sometimes. I'll be watching for your next.
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Thanks for the comment Connie...here's the new post...hope you will like it...and well,i wasnt getting any good chapter name for it...so i just left it there...but if anyone has an idea what it should be called let me know...

SUBTERFUGE


Looking up from his file Shaun rubbed his eyes and placed his head in his hands trying to concentrate hard on the paper but failed every time and had a throbbing headache if he concentrated for more than 10 minutes at a stretch. His mind hardly registering what the tutor from the Auror department was trying say.
“Shaun, what’s wrong?” asked Rebecca.
Shaun looked up and merely shook his head. Harry looked up from his papers and saw Shaun looking slightly flustered.
As it was time for break the trainees collected their books and papers and walked out of the room leaving the two friends behind. Rebecca had a lunch date with her new boyfriend so she left, rather reluctantly.
“thinking about September 1st mate?” asked Harry sitting next to Shaun and thumping his back and Shaun just tried to ignore it and looked rather busy in gathering his things from his desk.
Harry observed Shaun and kept quiet and silently walked along with him to the Ministry canteen for lunch only to come face to face with
“Catherine, having a good day?” asked Harry making Shaun snapping his head in the direction where Catherine appeared.
“oh yeah, a bit busy but very good day” she said smiling
“how about you guys?” she asked smiling at Shaun and he just shrugged and smiled a small smile.
“you guys were heading for lunch, you can join me if you want” she said shrugging
“um…” Harry somehow couldn’t decide and he looked at Shaun who was ready with his answer
“um, no Cathe, I guess you go ahead with your friends” he said looking behind her head
“ah, don’t bother, we can get another table, if you want” she said off-handedly
“no, actually we both have some work things to discuss so” he said shrugging.
Catherine looked at him and then at Harry who looked at her for a second and then away.
“alright, no problem” she said smiling but she had feeling somewhere down that something was up.
“thanks” he said and came ahead and kissed her cheek “I’ll see you around” Shaun said and walked past her along with Harry who was slightly amused by his friend’s action walked along with him but didn’t say a word. ‘Maybe some other time’ he thought.
“um, Shaun?” Catherine called back and Shaun stopped to turn around and look
“can I have a word with you?” she asked “just a couple of minutes” she said looking at him with the eyes which were clearly apprehensive and slightly worried.
“yeah, yeah sure” he said and turned back to Harry who nodded and walked away to catch a table for both of them.


Walking in the corner of the Canteen, Catherine turned to take a good look at Shaun. Minutes passed by and Shaun looked at Catherine looking at him
“Cathe? What are you looking at?” he asked his hand on her shoulder trying to shake her out of some kind of revere.
“Looking at you” she said softly
“sorry?”
Shaking her head Catherine spoke
“Shaun, I have been watching you the last couple of weeks you are not the same easy going Shaun I had known for so many months” she said
“what’s going on? What are you thinking all the time?” she asked
“Come on, Cathe, its nothing. You know I get a bit serious sometimes, that’s it” he said shrugging trying not to give too much importance.
“Serious, yes, sometimes but not for weeks together, Shaun” she said her hand over his arm
“when was the last time that you saw yourself in mirror?” she asked her hands crossed across her chest and Shaun jerked his head to the side and cocking his eyebrows.
“answer, Shaun”
“today, morning, Catherine”
“and yet I feel you haven’t made out the change that your face shows” she said and Shaun looked at her and then away scanning through the canteen catching Harry’s eye who looked up and nodded and went back to reading the Prophet.
He sighed, and Catherine stepped ahead looking up at him
“what is it that is troubling you Shaun?” her eyes and voice earnest and sincere with worry.
“you know, you used to talk it out with your friends with any trouble you had” she said and Shaun nodded.
“you have Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny and even Rebecca to talk to if you want. You used to talk to me too Shaun. And you only know how better you feel after you have talked things out then why is it troubling you whatever it is? Why haven’t you talked to anyone of them? why aren’t you talking to me about it?” she asked her eyes not leaving his face with every question she posed.
Shaun looked at her not knowing how to answer but just nodded and spoke
“I will talk to Harry and Ron. I swear” he said and taking her hand and giving it a slight squeeze he left.

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Hello Harita. Loving your work here. Of course maybe you don't know this, but I except this as a challenge.
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i wasn't getting any good chapter name for it...so i just left it there...but if anyone has an idea what it should be called let me know...
After reading this, I think just off the top of my head you could call it, 'Subterfuge'. Shaun is definitely hiding something. And I don't trust Catherine, even though she seems genuine. Why did she wait til Shaun and Harry walked away from her to call Shaun back. She made it like she just happened to think of something she needed to ask him about or something. When all along, she's been wanting to get something out of him. What is her secret I wonder. And will Shaun talk to Harry when he gets to get away from Catherine? He used him and Harry having to talk about work. Will he finally talk to him? Anxious to find out all these goings on. So anyway, that is the reason I think the title could be Subterfuge.
Great post Harita. I'll be watching for your next.
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well...thanks Connie...yeah you could have taken it up as a challenge...well...
i think somehow i feel i cant make myself clear with few of my posts through my writing...and this is one of them because in this post, Harry asks Shaun about September 1st and that is when Sara is about to leave (this was indicated in the post previous to the above post...) and Harry was right that Shaun was thinking about her but only that Shaun was avoiding his question.
and as of Catherine i wanted her to be genuine and i think i was successful in that...
i wanted to clear this off because somehow i wouldn't be able to clear it out in the form of another chapter in the story...
However Connie, thanks for the comment because it helps me realize whether my readers are really getting along the same lines as the post or whether they are drawing out a different conclusion...
The next post will come up in sometime...Have A Nice Day...:-)
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Hello Harita. I'm so sorry that you think you didn't communicate the story plot the way you wanted. YOU DID! It's me who didn't make clear what I was saying.
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Harry asks Shaun about September 1st and that is when Sara is about to leave (this was indicated in the post previous to the above post...) and Harry was right that Shaun was thinking about her but only that Shaun was avoiding his question.
See I understood this completely, even when it was indicated previously. I was saying that Shaun wasn't sharing what was on his mind, which we knew it was about Sara leaving. This is why Harry flat out asking him. But still Shaun was acting as though it was nothing.
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Here he is trying to hide his thoughts when Harry asked him specifically. Getting his desk in order was subterfuge.
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You did write her as being genuine. I agreed by saying;
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You wrote her being genuine. I was just saying she seemed to be hiding her own agenda by waiting till they had walked away from her to call Shaun back, and talk to him without Harry there. That is the subterfuge with her. She is genuine, but, I think she has her own agenda.
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No, don't worry about it. I get it just fine. There is no need for further clarification. I understood it the way you wrote it.
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Harita. I am going on the same line of the plot. I'm just being suspicious of Catherine. And it doesn't matter if I drew my conclusion about her from the way you wrote it or not. It is just up to the reader when reading a story to see if there is something else going on with a character other than what the writer has said. A perfect example of this is the last HP movie. Lots of people think that the writer is trying to make like Harry and Hermione are falling in love. They aren't, but it is up to the viewer to draw that conclusion. But, when the next and last movie will be made, they will see that they were wrong, and they'll have an abundance of either happiness they were wrong, or sadness that they were wrong. It will be the same when we find all about Catherine. I will be happy either way, if she had a hidden agenda, or not, but I will have enjoyed the time spent speculating up to that point.
So, please just keep writing as wonderfully as you have been doing it, because I'm on the same train, understanding it all the way. You see, even when I draw conclusions about something other than what the writer is saying, I still have it in my mind that way, so I don't get lost in it, when my theory is thrown a curve. You're doing great, and by the way... it is doing this that makes a writer's story so enjoyable to read.
I'm anxious to read your next post, and am hoping it will be soon. Although of course real life takes priority, so do your studies and all.
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Thank you so much for clearing off the little misunderstanding i had there...it was really nice of you to explain how differently a reader sometimes can draw the conclusion apart from the one the author wishes them to draw just so that the, reader themselves feel challenged and be thrown off the curve with what the author has to provide in the next post...this really helped me to get a different point of view about reading...thank you so much and i am glad that you enjoy reading my ficition...

Here's my new post...

THE DAWN OF DEPARTURE...


The morning of the first day of September dawned and Sara got up from her bed, her bed spread and blanket hardly crumpled as she hardly moved throughout the night looking at the ceiling of the room. Getting up she slowly walked past the room and collected her things to get ready. It was almost six in the morning. with great deliberation she came out of the bathroom ready for the day hoping that the time never passed and she never would have to go through the moment of leaving this house. Clutching her old clothes and towel as she got fully dressed she walked the corridors slowly looking through almost every part of the corridor as if trying to keep every nook and corner in her mind’s eye and never to forget about it. As she reached the bedroom door she stepped in quietly and locked the door
“ready, already?” asked a voice
And Sara turned to see both her friends up, their eyes just as red as hers. Sara nodded and walked to her trunk
“don’t tell me you are taking those old clothes which aren’t washed properly” Ginny said and walked up and taking Sara’s last night’s pjs from her
“leave it here mum will get it washed” and Sara merely nodded. The clock ticked by and the girls heard a slight knock on the door and in stepped Ron
“oh morning Ron” said Hermione as she got up and walked ahead to give him quick kiss and he smiled.
“mum’s says breakfast’s ready”
“she says that every time” Ginny said and the rest of them smiled. Both the girls walked out of the room and as Sara walked towards the door where Ron stood she stopped and gave a small smile.
“ready, huh?” he asked not looking at her but at her packed trunk behind near her bed.
“not bringing it down?” he asked now looking at her and she shook her head.
“maybe when its actually the time to bring it down” she said softly and Ron nodded and smiled and surprised her engulfing in a hug and she hugged him back.
“I’ll miss you” he muttered
“so will I” she said her face buried in his chest and voice chocking but she had decided she wont cry, not any more. It would be difficult but she would brave it up as she did it last time.



The breakfast time spent at the Burrow was a wonderfully warm and cozy. Even with dark grey clouds of September looming around in the sky and atmosphere slightly breezy the atmosphere in the Burrow was a as warm as a summer sunshine.
For breakfast there was a lot of bread and milk for everybody to gauge down which they all did happily amongst the chatter and clatter. Sara savored her favorite French toast which Molly made it deliciously.
“I will miss this” Sara said as she took in a bite of the toast.
“don’t worry, if they don’t provide you with French toast we’ll send you a parcel. Hopefully it will stay that long” said Fleur
“and hopefully the Post Collecting Officials of France don’t hog them before they give it to you” George spoke and everybody looked at him
“Exactly, our candy samples ended up empty before it reached our Paris branch!” George said ridiculously at the mystery of missing candies and everybody chuckled.
Time passed by when Shaun stepped in from the fireplace at the Burrow.
“ah…there you are Mister” said Molly and he walked in “slightly late” he muttered
“very, in fact” Bill added and the others agreed.
“yeah, sort of, actually was in the Ministry just wanted to know which fireplace has been connected to the institute” he said
“oh you checked that already, good, good. Saves us lot of time” Arthur said getting up from his place and Shaun shrugged, smiling. He looked at Sara who nodded with a smile and mouthed ‘thank you’ and he nodded back.

the next part will be posted soon...
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Old 01-10-2011, 07:03 AM   #224 (permalink)
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Hello Harita. I can't even hardly comment I'm so sad and scared Sara will leave, and the things that haven't been said won't get said. I want Shaun so badly to ask Sara not to leave because he needs her. I want Sara to not be able to keep from showing Shaun how she feels about him. I want Harry to come through the door after apparating (sp?) there, and saying that the floo networks have been shut down because of some unforeseen problem, and can't be opened back up for transportation until further notice. But, of course that is just what I would love to see happen. I'm sure I will love what you have in store for us, even if she does really leave. Not that I want her to leave, but it's just you have a way of presenting your story so well, and I will except anything you write. I know you love your characters and you want to have a great story for them. I think that's one of the reasons I love your story so much. Well, I think I'm rambling. Sorry Great post Harita. I'll be watching for my email notice saying you posted.
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Thanks Connie......and you aren't rambling...here's the new post...

LIFE BEYOND BRITAIN



As the clock in the Burrow struck 11 everybody gathered in the living room near the fireplace. Arthur had strictly said no to everybody ending up at the Ministry to see Sara off. Ginny and even Fleur protested but they had to listen to their dad.
Now as Sara was to leave Molly came ahead and gave her a big hug
“take care, honey. Keep in touch” she said and patting her cheek
“I will, Mrs. Weasley” she said “and thanks for the French Toast” she said smiling and moved ahead to meet Bill and George who each gave her a hug almost a bone crushing one.
“guys, let her breathe” Ginny said and Sara chuckled
“what’s with the Weasleys and the bone crushing hug!” she said rolling her eyes
“you are one of them, fair maiden, remember that” said her dad smiling.
“for not too long” Sara muttered making sure no one heard except Hermione as she walked ahead and hugged her who chuckled hugging Sara back
“true, very true” she said winking “take care and any help let us know, alright. Don’t hesitate” she said and Sara chuckled
“yes, mother”
“Sara, any help and you cant get any one of us or you wish to stay somewhere else you know you can call my parents, right” said Fleur as Sara walked in front of Fleur. Sara was not very comfortable with the idea which both of them were toying with for quite few days now had opened her mouth in protest
“Sara, my parents wont question. You are my friend. That is all they know and need to know alright. I have talked to them” she said patting her shoulder and kissing her cheek as she hugged and Sara just nodded
“Bye, Vicky” she said and kissed Fleur’s daughter and Vicky waved her hand and mouthed wordlessly. Walking near the fireplace she saw Ginny standing staring at the fire crate, she turned as Sara walked near her and she hugged her eyes slightly watering.
“Ginny, shhhshhh…you aren’t a kid, girl. Come on. I swear I will keep in touch and if I fail to, come to France and Bat Bogey me” Sara said and Ginny chuckled
“ah, she wont miss that, now would you, Ginny?” George said walking ahead and putting his arms around both the girls and Ginny nodded and wiping her eyes with her shirt sleeves.
“come on girls we got to go” Arthur spoke and Sara nodded looking at George and Ginny and she turned to take her trunk and waved to everybody in the Hall and stepped in the fireplace next to Arthur and then just before Arthur Flooed them she blew an air kiss looking at the sweet little Victoria Weasley and laughed at the reaction she got before she vanished from fireplace.
“hey who was that for Vicky or me?” asked George and Ginny chuckled and boxed her brother in his stomach
“Vicky, not you Georgie. Hard luck” she said hugging her brother tightly sideways.


“what are you laughing about?” asked Ron as he waited by the fireplace in the Ministry and helped taking the trunk from the fireplace as Arthur and Sara stepped out.
“nothing, something happened back there before leaving” she said shaking head and smiling. Walking behind Arthur and along with Ron Sara crossed the domestic fireplace area into the International Floo Transportation Arena. Reaching the fireplace where Shaun and Harry were standing they stopped. Arthur checked his watch
“Have around 7 minutes” he said and walked around the young guys to talk to the person who checks the transportation time at the Fireplace number 7.
“all set” Harry asked
“sort of” she said suddenly her heart beating mad, her hands turning cold and breathing slightly uneven. She looked around
“you’ll be fine Sara” he said and hugged her and she nodded.
Arthur turned around as he was having a couple of words with the young man next to the Fireplace to see Sara’s face pale. Excusing himself he walked towards them.
“we should be good to go in sometime” he said and Sara nodded
“you fine kid?” he asked and she nodded again but then hugged him tightly a small tear escaping “thank you for everything Mr. Weasley” she said.
“oh, you are welcome honey” he said pulling away slightly to look at Sara and she wiped the tear away.

Shaun stood near the railing keeping the distance between the fireplace and waiting area taking in the happenings and looked away into the empty fireplace waiting for the time of departure but his mind in constant reel of thoughts. It was happening again, the paling of face, the good byes, the small but sad smiles, it was happening. He sighed and he couldn’t stop it again.Why? why couldn't he stop it again?Last time he couldn't because she had bound herself the task of searching for her friend. But what about now, this time?Why is she doing this and why in the name of Merlin was he allowing her to do this? He felt a movement and saw her coming towards him. he stood up straight.
“good to go?” he asked after quite a bit of silence and she nodded but didn’t say anything. A slight knot forming in her chest and body tensed her hands that she clasped colder than ever.
“feels like de javu, isn’t it?” he asked looking away, his hands in his pockets.
“except that it happened really then and it is happening really now” she said looking at him. He looked at her silently agreed with her.
“so up for another adventure?”
“no one knows better then you, that I hate adventures. I always was a part of them because of you guys”
“but the last one and this one, it was your choice” he reminded her
“yeah” she said looking down and then at Harry, Ron and Arthur who were talking amongst each other.
They stood in silence looking at each other and then away. As Sara stared into the fireplace he looked at her and sighed. She turned to look at him and he indicated to give her a hug. Smiling she came forward and hugged him.
“take care” he said as they stood there.
“will miss you, terribly” he said pulling away.
“me too” came her reply as she pulled away.
And after a moment of silence and thought she said “but I hope you will be able to sleep peacefully now” and just then turned as the young man called them to gather with Arthur, Harry and Ron.
But Shaun stood stock still at the words she said.
What did she mean? You can sleep peacefully? Does she know about the dream? How does she know? Did they tell her? his mind running with questions which were going to go un-answered and he walked quickly as she was walking past the railings towards the fireplace but he couldn’t form words to ask her.
She turned to wave at the men before stepping in the fireplace. As she stepped and turned, their eyes locked. His questioning expression asking it all and a small nod and sweet smile answering it all before she threw the Floo Powder and vanished to begin a new adventure…


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