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Old 12-02-2011, 09:50 AM   #51 (permalink)
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aw, I didn't find it long at all. yay for hating Zacharias Smith! PAMS
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Hey Harita, very nice. I liked the length of the post. I don't think it was long at all. I have to say that this bit;is one of my favorite parts of the post. I love Parvati's wit and humor.
And here is another favorite spot. I always wanted to see how they felt about practicing on their friends.
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“ready?” I asked her and she merely nodded
‘Merlin! I have never raised wand against my best friend’
You did a great job with just those few words telling me how she felt about it.

It was a great post Harita, I'll be watching for your next.
Thanks Connie... I am trying to get in every bit of Parvati's character that we have seen or have perceived all the way through, through the series...
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Chapter 15




Hermione opened the door and we all walked in. The atmosphere in the room was slightly different then what it had been on the previous class. We looked at each other Lavender and I.

“hey what’s wrong?” Lavender asked
“um, nothing. We have no idea.” Dean whispered back.
We were actually the ones who were late today for the session. We both went and stood in the corner of the group.

“So everybody’s here?” asked Harry, his hands clasped and we nodded
“good, alright then. Today” he began taking a deep breath he continued “we will be sort of revising one of our third year DADA class” he said. No one reacted in anyway and just waited for him to continue.
“However it would be new for our younger students” he said looking at Nigel and Dennis.
There was something wrong about him. He looked slightly nervous today.

“hey you alright mate?” asked Lee. Harry looked up and gave a weak smile and nodded
“yeah” and continued “well, today’s class is about facing your inner fears” he said and we all looked at each other.
“can anyone tell me what are we going to do?” he asked and I saw in the corner of my eye that Hermione had stopped herself from raising her hand.

“The Boggart?” said Terry Boot, his voice sounded slightly ridiculous.
‘That boy, is turning into Zacharias’ and I think Padma did step on his feet to shut him up.

Harry looked back at him, his eyes sort of boring within him and nodded
“The Boggart”
“The Boggart” he started in a slightly high pitched voice “is a shape shifter. It takes the shape of the thing that we most fear”*
“there is no curse or a hex that can finish off a Boggart but a simple spell” he said looking at Nigel and Dennis Creevy the two second year students and they nodded their heads enthusiastically.
“what really finishes the Boggart is laughter and it has a very simple spell RIDDIKULUS” he continued.

And there was a shudder in the cupboard behind him and Ron who was sort of the nearest to it jumped making a couple of us chuckle and Harry smiled merely.
“So this is how you are to move your wand” and he showed the movement and we all nodded.
“you all get it?”
“yeah” we all chorused in and he nodded
“so, ready for today’s lesson?”
“think about the thing that you fear the most and then spell out the incantation and let’s see how your fear can make you laugh” he said. We all nodded.

“everybody one by one” Ron called out “starting from the youngest kid”. Harry stood aside and saw us getting ready for the practice. First was Nigel. We all looked at him and nodded encouragingly. He was paler than his usual self. He gulped. He faced the cupboard and shuddered as the cupboard shook.
“it’s alright, Nige. You can do it” Hermione said patting his back standing right behind him.
“Come on Nige!” called out Lee and we all cheered the little guy up. He blushed and smiled a little.
“you ready, Nigel?” asked Harry. He looked up and then nodded. He gulped again and then asked Harry to come by his side. Harry walked ahead. Nigel stood on his toes and whispered something into his ears and Harry’s face lightened up like a huge lantern.
“Nigel, you can do all that you want."
"As long as you see it we will see it”* he said and walked away from Nigel and stood aside.
Nigel nodded. His wand raised he nodded for Harry to open the door. And as the door opened there was a

“hem hem” and we all stood stock still. Few of us heaved a sigh of relief as it was just a boggart, few smirked but few of them were standing ramrod still. She was walking towards Nigel slowly with that sugary sweet smile of hers.
“you know what that smile can cause anyone diabetes” said Lavender
“cause what?” and she shook her head and mouthed ‘later’.
Sometimes I don’t get her muggle words. I turned my attention to Nigel
“Come on Nigel” Ron egged on

“RIDDIKULUS!” and there she was puff and then “croak croak, croak, croak” we looked around to know what happened to Umbridge only to see her transfigured into a

“PINK TOAD!” there was a whole lot of laughter. We laughed till our stitches hurt.

“you are mind blowing my boy!” Lee called out.

“best transfiguration to date” Padma said chuckling while Hermione looked around disapprovingly at the noise that our laughter had created.

“way to go buddy” George called out

“officially an intern at WWW” Fred called out as we all continued to laugh. Dennis came ahead amidst the laughter and performed well. Making us laugh even harder. Then soon it was the time for the fourth years. Colin came ahead and soon the boggart turned into a huge snake.

“what’s that thing?” murmured somebody.
“Basalisk” uttered Dennis, Colin’s younger brother nervously. There were gasps all around the room. Hermione and Ron looked over at Harry frantically. Harry hurried by Colin’s side.
“wand at the ready Colin, wand at the ready” *
Colin was so shocked that he had forgotten about his wand.

In the corner of my eye I saw Ginny clutch Michael’s hand and he patted it comfortingly. Well, she was the one taken to the Chamber of Secrets in her very first year.
Colin stuttered “RIDI… RIDDIKULUS” but it didn’t have an effect it was slithering towards him its huge body seemed to have wrapped around our perimeter. We all shuddered at the sight.
“firmly Colin, firmly” Harry egged him his wand ready just in case if Colin couldn’t.
“RIDDIKULUS” Colin called out loudly and clearly and then suddenly the hissing Basalisk stopped short at its place. Its body began to jerk as if it was a jelly fish. It looked disgusting but funny enough for us to crack up and laugh. The Basalisk’s body was stuck to the floor with the help of sticky loads of chewing gum on the underside of its body.

“That’s the least I could do” Colin said his shoulder’s slumping.
“you did well mate, you did well” said Ron who himself was ash faced. The practice continued though Colin was asked to sit out for sometime because he looked quite shaken up. It was soon my chance just after seeing Hermione worry about her OWL marks. I walked ahead gulping. I knew what my fear is. I am scared of mummies. I don’t know why. Maybe it’s something of repressed of sorts. I had been to Egypt when I was a kid and touring the mummy caves and pyramids wasn’t really fun for me.

I stepped ahead and soon the Boggart changed in to a mummy walking towards me, its hands stretched ahead as if it is coming to get me. I stepped back.
“Parv, come on” I heard my sister’s voice
“RIDDIKULUS” and just then the mummy fell over one of its own loosely tied bandages that made us all erupt into laughter. I was followed by Ron whose fear for spider was on display only to be diminished by our laughter when the spider suddenly went out of balance due to skates being tied to it. Many students followed later but I saw Harry moving away and away from the boggart.

‘what’s gotten into him?’
I don’t know if anyone realized that maybe of course Hermione and Ron. Is that he doesn't want to face his fear? Or maybe he is scared that he will scare us off with his
fear on display. Last time it was the dementors, but. But then it could change I guess. And just as the clock chimed completion of an hour we stopped and Harry didn’t face his inner fear.
“alright, all of you have done very well. You guys were fantastic” he said facing all of us now.
“the next sess”
“care to demonstrate your fear Harry” said a voice. Harry seemed to have ignored his comment. I was feeling the same old tension that rose in the Hogs Head and that rose in the Common Room the first night we were back.
“why didn’t you face the boggart?” demanded the inevitable voice.
The snob, arrogant, twit of a boy Zacharias Smith.
Harry sighed. He looked down scratched the back of his head.
“don’t tell me you were” and Harry looked up at him angrily.

“I’ll tell you what. You don’t shut that ruddy hell of your mouth ZACHARIAS SMITH you are going to get kicked out!” Ron yelled. He had turned red. He was breathing heavily. Hermione was standing next to him holding his arm tightly to prevent him from pouncing on the guy. Zacharias’ Hufflepuff friends were shooting infuriating glances at him and so were we.

“don’t worry Ronnie, we will deal with him” Fred said and the twins walked towards him.
“guys, stop!” Harry shouted and the twins stopped in their tracks.

Slowly walking towards Smith Harry said
“he is right. I should have cared to demonstrate my fear” he said stressing on Smith’s words glaring back at him. He stood just at some distance from Smith. Hermione and Ron looked worried. I looked at my friends around. We all could see Harry was certainly, very much angry with Smith.
“what do you want me to demonstrate?” his voice low and cold with anger and we all could hear it because it seemed to look like we all had held our breath and there was not a single sound in the room; just his mutterings to Zacharias.
“that I see Cedric’s dead body,” I heard Cho choke but I couldn’t look at her but in the corner of my eye I saw Padma and Marietta holding each of her hand comfortingly.
“that I see my friends dead bodies, that I see my dead parents, that I see Lord Voldemort looming in my head” his voice was still a whisper but we felt the words cut through the steely silence sharply like a knife making us shudder.

“Do you want to see how Voldemort looks?”

I couldn’t understand what made the whole scene so frightening, the mention of Dark Lord’s name at which we almost dropped our wands out of fear or whispers of Harry which were just laced with pure anger and hatred? We had never seen Harry so riled up, so angry…

“Harry, Harry” Hermione rushed to him her hand strongly holding his shoulder. Harry was breathing heavily.
“calm down. You don’t need to explain yourself” she murmured. Ron I could see was boiling with rage and anger. Neville and Dean were quickly by his side to calm him down.

“I am sorry” Zacharias voiced.
“excuse me?” Hermione snapped at him. I couldn’t see her face as it was blocked by her bushy hair but I knew she was equally angry as Ron was. Well, we all were very angry with that idiot of a boy!

“I said, I am sorry” he murmured again.
“a little louder my pretty boy. We can’t hear you” George said irritated.
“I am sorry” Zacharias said loudly. Harry looked back at him and then nodded and then turned to go back and stand near the window nearby.

We all watched him leave the group. There was pin drop silence. Ron went by Harry’s side.
Hermione looking worried turned to us and spoke
“Fred, George could you guys just pull up some pumpkin juice for all of us, let’s jus-just calm down before we leave. Anyways we are way beyond the curfew time. We need to plan how we all go” she said and the twins plus Lee quickly obliged.


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Hey Harita, I loved the chapter! My favorite part was how well you made me sit on the edge of my seat while reading it. I loved the atmosphere you created and especially the part where Harry had to make his feelings known to Smith. It felt like the temperature dipped below freezing when Harry spoke.
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Harry has always been very careful about the people around him. He never wanted to hurt them or scare them in anyway...he always felt it was his responsibility to keep his problems to himself...very heroic isn't he?

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I looked at my watch and quickly walked past the corridors leading from the school library to the seventh floor where we were to meet again for the next session of DA. I checked my watch again. I would reach just in time. I quickened my pace. Well, not just because I was about to get late but also that I had one very weird encounter that has set my heart and pulse racing. I need to talk to Hermione as soon as possible. Taking a left I reached just in time to see Dean and Neville going behind the door.

“Ah! There you are” called Lavender who just saw me entering.
“yeah, here I am” I said breathing hard. I walked in further to be just amazed as the surroundings changed once again today for the class.
“are we going to play quidditch today Harry?” asked Dennis and Angelina smirked.

Harry smiled and shook his head. Lavender and I sat down on the green grass covered floor just like the rest of them were sitting scattered all through the room.
“then what are these quaffles floating in the air for?” asked Lee
“well, today we are going to learn about Impediment jinx” Harry began
“and it was Hermione’s idea to have a theme for our practice today.”
“cool, Hermione. Since when were you so interested in Quidditch?” asked Fred.
“well, it just makes learning interesting. I thought” Hermione replied with a shrug.

“so starting with our day's lesson” Harry said “Impediment jinx slows or stops the target or object and effectively immobilizes it to a halt for a certain period of time” he said
“when cast powerfully it can knock your target off”

“just like casting disarming spell on a wandless person?” said Susan Bones and Harry nodded in agreement

“exactly the same way” he said “so the incantation for this jinx is Impedimenta and this is how your wand should be moved” and we all nodded as he showed us the wand movement.

“so what will we be up to today is, these quaffles are charmed and have a string attached to them and the quaffle will move periodically towards you with some speed and all you have to do is try and stop the quaffle coming too close to you”
“don’t worry, each has his or her own quaffle to practice so no other quaffle will come and hurt the others”
And we all nodded “and well, if I am busy with someone else and you just can’t stop the quaffle by yourself you can always duck down” he said and we all laughed

Harry looked at a certain third year Hufflepuff who seemed to be thinking about something deeply.
“but don’t worry by the time you will have to face the something in motion out there you would have very well practiced to know how to use this spell. You won’t be ducking then” Harry said and a few of them chuckled but the boy blushed and nodded

“alright so let’s get going”

We all jumped on our feet and stood where we had the quaffles ready for us. Hermione flicked her wand and the quaffles began to move like the pendulum in the grandfather’s clock. But they moved only when we raised our wand so at least we could buy sometime before we actually started practicing.

In the middle of the session Harry called for a halt and said
“the one who will be successful with the quaffles will have to face the bludgers next” and the second years paled while we all nervously laughed.

The only two excited students were of course our dear beater twins!
“well, if our wand doesn’t work, we can always have our bats” Fred said and soon in the corner of the room we saw the beater bats appearing. I really couldn’t believe the working of this magical room.

Most of us ducked the whole time not able to stop the moving quaffle. It took almost the entire session to slow the quaffle a little but it wasn’t going to help me much. I had to practice a lot.
By the end of the session it was only Hermione and Ron who had mastered the jinx to the extent of stopping the quaffle to move. But the rest of them were still struggling. Calling for a halt Harry looked at the watch and we were soon packing up to leave the Room as we were reaching the curfew time.

“hey where are you going?” asked Lavender
“you go ahead, Lav I will be right back”
“you sure?”
“yeah, yeah. Go ahead with Neville and Dean I will be right behind” I said. She looked at me and then shrugged and left.
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The room had cleared. Hermione, Harry and Ron were huddled in a group.
“Hermione” I called out
They turned to look at me
“yes?”
“um, well I just wanted to ask you that is there any possible chance of knowing if someone has spoken something about DA to the outsiders?”

She looked at me and then the other two and then back at me and said
“yeah, I would come to know if anyone has spoken about us or to be precise leaked information about us”

‘alright, then this could just have been a coincidence. But you are talking about ’

“what’s the matter?” asked Harry. I looked at him and then spoke
“as I was returning back from library to come here today I came across Professor Dumbledore” and their eyebrows shot up.
“well, he just asked how I was doing and all but then he asked me how were my studies and other activities going on?”
“I sort of panicked. There couldn’t be any chance that professor knows about these secret meetings in here?” I asked them. I saw Hermione and the other two looking at each other.
“but then I asked him what he meant by other activities and then he said Healer’s Club and then I pointed out that my sister’s in that club who is Ravenclaw and I am not. So he was like oh my bad. I am getting old you see. Confused the two of you twins”

Ron gave a nervous chuckle

“but you know what, I have a feeling that he knows. Even at this age his mind is really very sharp to just mix things up like this” and Hermione just nodded slightly concerned now.

“that’s why I wanted to tell that maybe Professor has a hunch.
“Is there any way that someone must have said something and we might not know” and Harry shook his head
“no, I don’t think anyone must have said anything” he said
“Listen, Parvati. Professor Dumbledore is sort of...” he struggled to get a word
“omnipresent..” Hermione helped out
“Yeah, even with him not being around he knows things about this school that most of the teachers don’t know”
“I think we might hide things from Umbridge and Professor McGonagall but we can’t hide things from Dumbledore” he continued.
“and besides we are not breaking his rules of the school” Ron said “if you say he has a hunch about these meetings then he can easily understand why we are doing this”
“and this is not about breaking school rules but about breaking Umbridge’s rules” I added softly and they all nodded

“its alright Parvati. But thanks you got it to our notice. And as far as breaking school rules are concerned let’s stick to the curfew timings as much as possible at least initially. Roaming around late might get us into trouble from Professor McGonagall and I don’t think we would want to upset Dumbledore’s establishment” Hermione said and I nodded.

Harry nodded in agreement. Then later he took an old parchment out and tapped it murmuring something and soon a huge map came up on the parchment. He had used this parchment before last time but I just didn’t know how amazingly detailed it was.
“is this”
“Hogwarts” Harry said looking down at the map
“entire, in detail” Ron added proudly
“alright Hermione, Parvati. You two take the left. The corridor is clear for you guys. You can carry on taking the staircase and head back to the Tower.”
We both nodded and immediately left the Room of Requirement.


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It was already three meetings on and we were working hard, on our studies and on our defensive spells as well. Finishing my homework I looked up to see Lavender, Nev and Dean getting ready. They were all keeping their books away. I did the same and packed my things and left with my friends.

Hermione had planned an ingenious way of communicating. She had given us a fake a galleon with a Protean Charm. It was really impressive piece of magic. I swear my sister was impressed and slightly jealous too. But I haven’t got enough time yet to tease her about that. Anyways, the coin burned up in my robe pockets just before we reached for breakfast today.

So here we were standing in front of the wall opposite the Barnabas tapestry. The door opened and we walked in.
Ron followed us inside the room and we saw Harry and Hermione discussing
“So what are we going to learn today?” asked Dean
“the Reductor curse” Hermione said excitedly and I nodded eagerly. We waited till everyone came around and then started.
“alright today we are going to learn the Reductor curse” Harry began standing at the center and all of us standing in a circle. For a huge circle of twenty seven students the room was really pretty big. Was it that big when we first came in? Anyways.

“the reductor curse is a powerful curse.” Harry began.
“It destroys the object to bits when cast on it. It is the most commonly used curse while dueling” Harry continued and began walking amongst us.
“However, out of my experience I have learnt that this curse has an effect only on solid objects because I remember trying this spell last year in the maze on cloud of mist thinking it will clear away from my path but it didn’t” he said continuing.
“so any solid thing and it will break into pieces?” asked Nigel
“anything” Harry said smiling.
“cool” Nigel the second year breathed.
“but will it work on people as such?” asked Justin and Harry looked at him and then thought for a while and said
“yes, it works” Harry began
“we have bones mate” Lee said.
“alright so the wand movement has to be like this” and he showed us how it has to be done. It wasn’t something like a jab but it was something like as Lavender said a teacher threatening a student with a scale action.

“So do you want to see how it works?” Harry asked and we all nodded. He stood in front of a table, his wand raised and with the right amount of hand movement
“REDUCTO!” and with a loud explosion the table was gone. Its fragments lay on the ground. Amazed, we all clapped hard. Harry smiled, well may be a smug smile. But he deserves the appreciation

“alright, so it’s time for you guys to earn the applause” he said.
“each and every one of you have a table, a desk and many such things as targets for you to try your reductor curse. With right amount of hand movement” and he showed the hand movement again “you should be able to cast the curse properly” and we all nodded.

Standing in a huge circle I had Lavender standing to my right and my sister standing to my left. I had a huge table full of Sneckoscopes as my target while Lav and Padma had a desk and a high stool. Everybody started off with the incantation being called out loudly. Taking a deep breath I raised my wand and remembering how the hand is to be moved I called out
“REDUCTO” and to my surprise the table got cracks already. Lavender and Padma looked at me appreciatively. I nodded Padma flicked her wand and the cracks got resealed again for me to practice.
Both Padma and Lavender began with their curse. And after half an hour or so of constant practice I was able to crack the table sometimes and then turn them into bits successfully, but somehow I felt something more could be done. Taking a deep breath I raised my wand again and with all my energy I called out the incantation

“REDUCTO”

with the proper way of wand movement and “BLAST”. I quickly put my hand up to protect myself from getting hurt from the flying fragments.
‘Oh dear…what have I done?’
The noise resounded through the room and a puff of dust arose and everybody around me started to cough and sneeze. I looked around through the dust and found that there was a lot of sound on my side of the huge circle but on the other side where Harry was just showing Justin how to go about the wand movement just a minute ago, there was pin drop silence. And as the dust cleared off the space in front of me did I realize the reason for half of the group’s silence. My table full of sneckoscopes was reduced to mere

“dust?” Lee and Katie murmured stunned. I looked up slightly stunned myself, a bit unhinged and then there it was the shocked whisperings changing into a huge sound. Had I not seen what everybody was doing I couldn’t have believed my eyes. They were all clapping, clapping hard. The applause from a room full of twenty seven people was sound more than one could imagine. I saw Harry striding up to me with a huge beaming smile and stood in front of me

“ah, I think we need to get you another table full of sneckoscopes” he said and I chuckled. He stuck out his hand for me to shake it. I shook his hand firm and confident. I liked the feel of it. Felt as if I was in control.
“well done, very well done Parvati” he said and nodded and I beamed as the applause continued…


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I walked to the last class of the day Herbology with Lavender with last night’s event still fresh in my mind. Almost everyone had congratulated me for the spell as we left the room last night. I couldn’t have felt much proud of myself. I swear my sister had hugged me so tight after Harry left that I couldn’t breathe. Well, it wasn’t that I had never done the other spells that were taught before well. But this one seemed really special, maybe because I was a bit ahead of everyone else.

Walking into the green house 7 Lavender and I set our bag on the table and stood there waiting for the rest of the class join in. It was beginning to get dark outside the clouds were drawing in. And as everybody settled in, our class began. Wearing our dragon hide gloves we began removing the pods of some pathetic looking plant.

After careful but yet struggling class we all set our dragon hides aside, noted down the questions to be answered as a part of our homework and then set out of the greenhouse. All the time while working on the plant Lavender kept giving me these looks. I have no idea what she was meaning. Guess I’ll have to ask her soon.
“I am dead tired and so hungry” Lavender complained
“yeah, me too. But I think I will go and change first” I said
“you are?” Lavender asked and I nodded. She shrugged and then followed me to the North Tower where we went back, changed and were on our way for a very heavy dinner.

“I feel like I can gobble down an entire chicken” Lavender said and I chuckled
“well, I could do the same but I wouldn’t like to sound like that though” and she giggled. And just as we were entering the Great Hall I heard a voice
“I didn’t get to congratulate you for yesterday” and I turned back to look who it was.
‘Ernie Mcmillan?’ I looked at Lavender who was giggling again. What’s wrong with her? She has been doing that quite a lot lately, giving looks all throughout the Herbology class then smirking at times and now giggling.

“for what?” I asked as he reached where we stood. Well I knew very well, for what he was congratulating but I asked nonetheless.
“oh come on Parvati, you know it” he said putting up a charming nice smile.
And I shrugged “what can I say? Just thanks”
Lavender was looking at me and then at him and then at me. It was getting annoying.
Never mind.

“you did really very well, I mean reducing it to dust” he whispered because we weren’t supposed to talk too loudly about DA now are we?
“oh come on. You practice and you will learn it too” I said off handedly.
“well, yeah I might but you know. Last night it looked like that would be your signature move” he said with certain sense of appreciation and awe. My heart fluttered. This was the second time in the day that I was congratulated and told about the signature move the first being Dean Thomas early at breakfast.

Dean and I hadn’t talked much after the end of the session yesterday since all of us were so tired and just went to our dorm and retired for the day or in his words that I was thronged around by so many admirers of my curse that he thought he wouldn’t get a chance at all to talk to me.

And I told him that it was a whole lot of dragon dung talk and he laughed.

“but seriously Parvati, it was one great wand work but I have one doubt” he said and I nodded for him to carry on

“what will happen if you cast that on an actual death eater?” he asked.

Well, was it supposed to be a joke to pull my leg or was it a real question I had no idea but I shrugged and answered

“well, I think looking at what happened to my table they will lose their bones to extent that no mediwizard or healer could cure them” I whispered back

“ooo that doesn’t look good to me” he replied but then had a smirk.

“curses aren’t supposed to look good Dean and certainly not good for the death eaters” I said and with a feeling of disgust at the name of death eaters itself .He smirked.

“you do know you sound like our ex-Professor Mad Eye Moody, don’t you?” he said bending ahead and whispering and I turned red at his compliment.

Beaming I sat up straighter proudly and said “well, my dad’s a hit wizard”

He raised his eyebrows in surprise

“Well it can very well be your signature move you know” he said leaning back and continued eating his cereal.


‘Signature move’

I went red again. I just shrugged and smiled a bit but I am sure it might have turned into a smug smile. There was some silence and then just then, my dear, very favorite, my only best friend, my roommate exactly at that very moment decided to turn and leave us alone, making the silence even more awkward.

‘Where are you going!’ My eyes followed her to the Gryffindor table.
And she didn’t do it on purpose? Oh don’t kid me! She is one wicked mind I know that. Even if she has her back to me I can see how wickedly her eyes are glinting with mischief and how her face has a sly smirk plastered on it!

“er…I guess I should get going too” I said as I turned back to look at Ernie. And at just that moment I saw Hanna Abbot looking at us, sort of waiting for him at the Hufflepuff table.
He turned to look at the Hufflepuff and nodded

“yeah, sure. I got to go too” he said “see you soon” he said turned and walked away.
I turned on my heel and walked towards the table.

‘Lavender Brown, you are in for a serious, serious trouble!’


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It was two days prior to the Quidditch match and we all were gearing up for the first ever match of this year’s Quidditch season. And well, it has to be the best match ever. Why? Because it’s Slytherin against Gryffindor match!

Angelina was getting all worried sick as she entered the Room of Requirement. Looking at our team members I felt it would be better if they were left alone today.

“alright, today we are not learning anything new. We will just practice the old spells that we learned” and everybody nodded. I saw Katie and Alicia sigh. Harry was fine. He seemed to be taking the pressure of the game as best as he could just like the Weasley twins who were joking around. But it was the first time Captain, Angelina Johnson and first time Keeper, Ron who were having a real tough time.

“alright everyone just form a group of five or so and each of you will be practicing a different spell. After you feel you have done well enough with that spell you can carry on to do the next spell alright. And you guys don’t need telling that whoever is getting better in their work can go ahead and help others in your group” and we all nodded
Lavender, Neville, Dean, Hermione and I were in one group. We first began with Expelliarmus. Practicing to disarm each other for about fifteen minutes it had sort of become a fun battle of sorts in our group. Who would be the quickest to disarm the other?

After sometime Lav and Dean were facing each other but Neville was finding it difficult.
“Nev, you are flicking it way too much” I said
“Neville, it’s just this much” Hermione said.
“and the incantation is Expelliarmus. Be clear Neville and you will get it” she corrected him. Neville tried it again. His wrist movement was proper but his incantation was wrong again.
“Neville it’s armus not amus” Hermione said. He was getting tensed up again

He sighed and shook his head. Patting his back I coaxed him to take another shot.
“Nev, relax. You are doing the wand movement right” I encouraged.
Taking a deep breath
“EXPELLIARMUS!” he said and Hermione’s wand popped out of her hand

“yes!” both Hermione and I shouted hugging Neville who had turned as red as beetroot and the entire class burst out laughing. Harry who had been seeing Neville work hard so long came ahead and hugged him.

“now, let’s give Hermione and Parvati a break from disarming. You can practice with me” he said to Neville who excitedly nodded his head
“Alright, now Neville. You have to aim at disarming me to the extent that my wand gets out of my hand and comes to you. What do you say, interesting?” and Neville smiled a bright smile and said
“very”

Laughing, Hermione and I went ahead to do the other spells. I was back facing my fear and then “RIDDIKULUS”. This went on for some more time and just then

“IMPEDIMENTA!” and I turned around just in time to see Colin cast the jinx so powerfully that the bludger which was coming his way forced itself to the other side smashing the mirror on the wall.
There was pin drop silence and Colin turned around with a huge beaming but slightly guilty smile and said “sorry for that” and we all burst out laughing. All of us had forgotten what we were doing and were busy cheering for Colin. Fred and George even hoisted him up on their shoulders and took a round around the Room with all of us still laughing and clapping for the chap. Out of all of us, Colin had shown tremendous improvement past all the sessions we had here.

After minutes later we were all back to doing our own thing.
“REDUCTO” Lavender and I called out together and her table was lying there in fragments and mine again in dust and the other members of our group started laughing.
Lavender just smiled as she finally could at least bring the small pieces down to fragments. But we both were still struggling with the Impediment jinx. Almost everybody was now proficient in the four spells we learned all this while. And we all couldn’t be much happier about it. And Harry was no doubt beaming up at us by the end of the session.
I however, still have to work over the Impediment jinx. I get it properly but the jinx doesn’t stay long enough. More practice…


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Today’s Saturday and the day of first Quidditch match of the season. It’s Gryffindor versus Slytherin and the hype and the animosity is at the peak today. Yesterday a group of Slytherins attacked Katie Bell. Fortunately she should be able to play today. As Lav and I entered the Great Hall today we were hearing some song being sung at the Slytherin table. Slightly curious about what we were hearing I tried to concentrate. It had a Weasley in it.

“want to hear our new song Parvati” called out Pansy and she began singing

“Weasley is our King,
He was born in a bin,
He lets the quaffle in, Weasley will make us win!”
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‘This is bad.’ I was holding on tight to Lavender’s hand because she seemed to be a bit too ready to attack the greenbacks.

I smiled a tight smile.
“very, interesting poem Pansy” I said
“quite entertaining actually. But you know the game’s just not about Weasley, is it?”
“let’s see who has the last laugh” I said testily. I somehow couldn’t get any witty lines to put her in place. My mind was so very full of anger.

“Hadn’t she done enough this year to irritate me?” I murmured but then Lavender spoke
“I don’t know. Think about Ron” and I just nodded.

We went and sat at the table. Soon we saw Ron and Harry walk over the table. We could see how nervous he was. As everybody got up to leave for the pitch so did we. Harry, Ron and Hermione were still sitting trying to calm Ron down.

“I hope he doesn’t unintentionally please the Slytherins” I said.
“hope so” said Lavender and we both made our way to the Quidditch pitch. Almost down to the pitch I heard

“hey Parvati, want to bet on who is going to win” and I turned around to see all the Hufflepuffs sporting green color scarves and gloves and silver snakes.
I looked up to see who spoke
“Ernie? I thought you guys would be supporting Gryffindor”
“nah, that’s us” said a voice behind and I saw my sister, Cho Chang, her friend Marietta.

Well looks like given a chance even now, Marietta would jump up and support Slytherins.
Cho and her friend waved off to us and walked ahead. Padma stayed with me. Michael with Ginny walked past us followed by Terry and Anthony all sporting red all grinning and shooting furious looks at the Hufflepuffs.
“thanks, that’s a relief” Lavender said
“so, what do you say. Let’s bet on who will win the match” Ernie said
“I am sorry. I don’t bet” I said shortly.
“oh, come on Parvati. Be a sport.”
“I would never bet when Slytherins are playing”
“why you think they can’t be defeated at all. Scared that you will lose your bet” said Smith who joined them.
“No, because they aren’t even worth betting on” I said snappishly
“oh, come on Parv” Ernie
“excuse me?”
“Parvati. See how does this sound, you win I will buy you a treat at Three Broomsticks and if I win you will buy me one” Ernie said and I heard the Hufflepuffs guys behind him snigger.

I narrowed my eyes. I knew what he wanted. I smirked. The very day when he looked at me disarm my friend in the first session he was always around. Appreciating, praising and trying to start up a conversation. I soon realized why Lavender was giggling that day at the Great Hall entrance. Through my extensive networking and source and of course common sense, I came to know he wanted me to go out with him.
‘you think I don’t get your game McMillan? You want to date me. You ask me out’

“Ernie. You are a coward, aren’t you?” I said and walked out from there. Lavender and Padma hurried after me.
“what was that?” Lavender asked.
“As far as I know he wanted to ask her out for quite some time now. So betting was just a way” Padma said
“and what, Parvati had to pay for the date?” Lavender asked ridiculously. “Because, come what may. Gryffindor’s going to win”
“he knows that. Either way it’s a win-win situation for him” I said. “And I didn’t want to give him that satisfaction.”
“I don’t-” Lav began

But after a while she spoke.
“So you mean if you put up a bet and win. He buys you a treat. So the treat is just a ruse…for a date…” she said as she realized what I meant and I nodded.
“and even if you lose?” she continued
“he would be the gentleman and wouldn’t let me pay. So it would end up not as a treat for losing the bet but it would end up”
“something like a date” Lavender said as we made our way through the seats.
“but what makes you think he will be a gentleman and not let you pay?” asked Lavender with a smirk.

Just then “I got to get going. I’ll catch you guys later and all the best” Padma said with a thumbs up.
“same to you too. Cheer for us till the end”
“you doubt?” she said waving she left for the Ravenclaw stand which was very much like the Gryffindor now with all the Ravenclaws coming in full support for the Gryffindor.

“Lavender, he doesn’t care about winning and losing. All he cares about is asking me out. And you know it that it’s the guy who pays for a date not the girl. Even if the girl’s willing to pay” I said going back to her question as we sat down on our seats and Lav just nodded.
“so if he wants to ask me out. He better man up and do” and Lavender shook her head
“but don’t you think he was doing just that?”
“huh? No, he wasn’t. This bet is a pretext” I told her.
“and besides I don’t think I would go out with him.” I said after a while as the students began to fill in the stands
“Not just yet” I said.
Lavender looked at me. I did sort of sound hopeful of something.
Lavender knew that I was talking about Emmanuel and she gave me a smile and hugged and said
“hope he feels the same”
“I hope” I said

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We cheered till our throats and voices were hoarse. We were winning. We were so close. Our team members were doing wonderfully. Well, of course except Ron. But he is just this bunch of nerves. Anyways, as long as we win I am fine. And just then Draco flew by in front us and on the opposite direction we saw Harry speed up towards something. Well, the snitch is so small and tiny that we barely can see it except of course our seekers. Harry was almost near the snitch.

“yes!” Dean shouted pumping his hand and there was an instant cheer. I looked at him excited
“he caught it!” I asked my voice expectant as well as jubilant but just then there was a shrill whistle

“hey!” Neville and Seamus shouted just then with the rest of the crowd. I was too engrossed and happy that the snitch was caught but then right in front of us we saw Harry falling
“FOUL”

“FOUL”

“CHEATING”

“SOUR LOSERS!!!!” were the chants going on through the crowd. Why?

Because that gorilla of Goyle hit Harry with bludger after he had caught the snitch…
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Back in the Gryffindor Common Room it was celebration time. There were butterbeer, pumpkin juice, food everywhere. We all were discussing the match excitedly. The captain was slightly worried though. Harry and George had got into a fight with Draco because apparently Malfoy junior couldn’t take the defeat too well and insulted the Weasleys and Harry.

Well, the word of mouth always spreads like a fire but hands down muggle combat just makes the news spread faster…

But I am sure Professor McGonagall won’t punish them hard. They are her best team members and she wants the Quidditch Cup more than us in her study. She won’t do anything harsh.

Sitting in the corner we were drinking pumpkin juice when Colin came up clicking pictures of the whole crowd.
“Colin! Could we see the pictures?” Lavender asked
“sure, when I develop them” he said
“hey why don’t I take your pictures?” he asked and we beamed
“sure” we chimed. Our faces painted in Gryffindor colors of red and gold wearing our red jersey with the gold lion in the center and pumpkin juice glass in our hand we were quite some sight. But who cares? We are enjoying our first win of the quidditch season!

“Hey Colin come over here. We’ll take a picture of the three. Can we do that?” I asked and he nodded. Setting the camera and then placing it on the mantel piece for support he came and stood between us our hands around his shoulder.
“Say cheessseeee” he said and we ended up laughing as the flash went off.

Still laughing we parted and sat down on the couch.
“this is going to be one good picture” Colin said and we nodded. But just then I saw a certain girl with blonde pig tails looking at us disapprovingly?

No, scowling.

Laughing I looked at Colin and asked “hey Cols you have a girlfriend?”
He blushed “if I had she would be coming with me to the DA” he whispered
“oh because I saw a certain blonde girl scowling at us” I said sipping my juice casually. Colin turned around and saw that the girl who I was talking about was still there but had turned away as soon as he saw her.
“oh, her” he said
“yes, her” Lav said
“er…well…I…don’t know. I mean”
“what do you mean, Cols?” we asked and he blushed again
“she is Cecilia Rogers” he murmured
“and?” Lavender prodded on.
“and…I…I sort of like her”
“and looks like even she sorts of likes you” I pointed out and he blushed again.
“I’ll get you your picture soon” he said and turned to leave.
“hey, go get a picture with her. She will like it” I said and winked. He chuckled nervously.
“I’ll try” he said and we laughed
“good luck, pretty boy” Lavender said before he vanished into the crowd.

And just a few minutes later we heard the portrait door open and in came Harry and George silently.
We saw Ange going and talking too them worriedly. Over the noise we could hardly hear what was being said and then slowly the room began to fall silent our Quidditch members were arguing heatedly. Lavender and I walked towards the whole fifth year group that was surrounding the Quidditch team who were sitting on the couches near the fireplace.

“but McGonagall can’t do that” said one of the first years sitting nearby.
“it isn’t Professor McGonagall who banned them for life…its Umbridge” Angelina said and we were shocked.
“what!”
“but how can Umbridge do that? She doesn’t have the power to give out punishments like that”
“apparently she has” Harry said “she didn’t like it that Professor McGonagall took up the case of Gryffindor team reformation to Professor Dumbledore. So she went to Fudge to get a new decree in where Umbridge will have the right to rule and give in punishments”*

There was angry disapproval everywhere heard in the room. We were all so very upset. Suddenly the celebratory mood had vanished. It didn’t feel we had won the match at all.
“this is just pathetic” I said. We sat there silently hardly moving, cursing Umbridge under our breath. Slowly as time went by everybody began to go back to their dorms. Lavender and I got up and left the Common Room.

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Chapter 21 Part One



It was Sunday morning the next day and we were at the breakfast table. My mood was slightly better than yesterday and much better than the rest of my friends. Dean and Seamus were still very angry at the unjust ruling by Umbridge. As soon as I was done with my breakfast I saw owls flying in our Hall and to my surprise a great owl swooped down in front of me and held out its leg. My heart was beating fast. It was about time. It had been so many weeks since I was expecting a reply. Quickly relieving the owl of the letter I clutched in my hand and got up from the table.

“hey where ever are you going?” asked Lavender and I smiled.
“I’ll be up in the Common Room” I said and walked away from the table.
‘as if you don’t know Lav’ I thought and smiled.

Reaching the last staircase leading to the landing of the Gryffindor Common Room I opened the letter. It was from Em.
He wrote:
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It’s so nice to hear from you again. I thought school would have made you too busy to even write to me.


‘hey it’s you who have got too busy. You send me the letter now’ but I went on reading.

Well you must think sending a reply to you after so long, I have forgotten you. But you know I have been just so very busy. But let me give you good news. Didn’t I tell you I wanted to be in the sports department for the Ministry? Well, guess what I got it! Well, my credentials were just about perfect.

I rolled my eyes.

And my interview was really great too. I joined the department about half a month ago. Settling to the new office and the first few weeks have been really draining and exhausting. But I am enjoying my work. I am really happy here. I made a quite a few friends here.

‘oh, I know you would. Put up that charming smile on your face and you will have everybody as your friend’

And speaking of friends I haven’t really forgotten how we became friends over the Triwizard Cup. The Yule Ball, remember?

‘I couldn’t forget for life’

Well, it’s the best time I have had any place outside school, Parvati seriously. And Hogsmeade, I sort of miss that place dearly. You remember Three Broomsticks, how we spent time there?

‘I go to Three Broomsticks even now, Em’

I know you will get jealous but I still haven’t forgotten Madam Rosemerta.

I snorted. Git!

Didn’t you just snort? I know you did, at least scowled or cursed under your breath.

I laughed out.

“Do you want to come in or not?”
I looked up and saw Fat Lady getting irritated.
“Uh…no…I am sorry” I said turning I went down the stairs closing the letter putting in my robe pocket and reached the Great Hall area and then out in the court yard. I wanted some peace when I read. Soon Lavender will come over and I won’t get to read properly. I just know a perfect place.
Walking through the Covered Bridge I reached the Stone Circle and then walked towards the lake. Sitting on the log near the bank of the tree in a quiet corner I opened the letter again and began reading from where I stopped.

Well, we have wonderful places here in Paris too. You should come over here sometime. You will love this place.

I smiled almost beaming.

Parvati, I wanted to tell you something for quite some while. I don’t know how to let you know this.

Suddenly the mood of the letter had changed. I could feel it.

Well, the time I had with you in Hogwarts was great, you write back to me so often and I love to read your letters. I was instead surprised when I got your mail the first time. Thought you wouldn’t really care to write to me. But I know you are such a lovely person. That I hadn’t made a wrong choice even dating you for even a short while that I was in Hogwarts.

I don’t like this. My heart’s beating the double the time. Has Em written this?

Well, we haven’t talked about this much while we kept up our correspondence through the summer. I mean, the day I left Hogwarts we promised to stay in touch but I hope you know that it will be difficult for us to keep up dating because we live so far. I mean, I don’t know what your thoughts about this are but I felt through the summer that we were still sort of dating. But I don’t think it’s possible now. I mean you are still in school and I have a job now. The lives we live are really demanding in their own right. You have your major exams this year

‘I don’t care’

And I have just joined my new job.

I don’t know. I wish we had talked about this more often during the summer at least we would have known where we stand. This is difficult to even write it down in words. All I hope is during our correspondence last summer I didn’t give you any sorts of hopes about us. I mean neither of us asked about us being a couple right?
I must sound insensitive but I am just too confused. Parvati I just want to know what you think about all this.
Please send me a reply.
And whatever be your reply about us I want to tell you that I wish and hope that we remain real good friends forever…
Yours,
Em.


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Alright, that makes sense.

Wonderful post! I truly loved it, though I would hate to be Parvati. I can't imagine what is going through her mind... nevermind, scratch that, I can imagine, just never experienced myself. Anyways... back on topic... Great post! Can't wait for more!
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I too haven't experienced anything like that, so it was really very difficult for me to write this down. I didn't want it to be very dramatic at the same time, i wanted that broken feeling in there too...So i really don't if i have managed this new post well...

Chapter 21 Part Two


LAVENDER'S POV

Writing through my huge ten inch essay for Transfiguration I looked up. I rolled my head over my neck. It was nearing lunch time already. I was feeling hungry again.
‘ouch this hurts horribly’

I looked back at my work. I still have to add the conclusion and then I can go and have my lunch. And before I do that I have to go search for my love sick best friend. She has just vanished from the face of the school! She told me she would be there in the Common Room but she is neither here nor in the dorm.

Just as I was going back to writing I heard the portrait door open and soon saw my best friend walk in. But something’s wrong. There was no blushing smile on her face; there was no excitement on her face. She had cried herself out! But before I could open my mouth she left the room to the dorm.

“I’ll be back” I said to no one in particular and got up to make my way to the dorm.

Walking towards the door I heard sniffs.

‘I don’t like this’ Turning the door knob slightly and tip toeing in quietly I saw her head bent over the desk. She was wiping off a tear from her cheek and dipping her quill in the ink pot and writing something.

“Parv?” I saw her stiffen a bit.
“you alright?” I asked
“yeah, just a bit cold. I have been out all morning. It’s already sort of getting cold outside. And it’s barely November” she said

‘she is terribly upset. She is lying…’
“Parv, what’s wrong? I know it’s not the cold”
“is it Em?” and I heard her sniff again.

I reached behind her chair. I saw her writing a letter, her hand covering the addresser’s name. The letter was blotched with tear drops. I looked just above to see Em’s letter lying there. I reached to take it. She didn’t stop me. I took the letter and read it. Stunned at what was written I looked up at my best friend, I knelt down as she continued to write ignoring me next to her. Writing she tried to joke.

“don’t worry. You will be my friend forever Lav” she said and I slapped her shoulder
“you are upset and all you think of is to joke around?” I said. She looked up at me her eyes watery.
“Lav” she just murmured. I could never see Parvati upset. It really pained me to see her like this.
“But, he is such a jerk!” I said as if the injustice was done to me rather than her. She didn’t say anything and just looked at me and then shook her head and turned back to writing the letter.

“Parvati talk to me!” I urged her to speak out.
“what should I say Lavender?” she said her voice full of hurt anger. I flinched.
“I feel terrible at this moment. I am trying to send him a reply and I can’t form any words here. I have never been so upset before”
“I don’t know what to write to him. This is just so difficult! I wish I could speak to him”
“you want to speak to him even after this?” I asked her showing the letter I was holding.
“yes, it’s better than writing down all that I feel right now in the letter” she looked at her half finished letter “which is so very difficult”

“what are you writing back to him?” I asked
She shook her head.
“What?” I asked
She took a deep breath and spoke “Lav, it was me who was being silly. As he said he never gave any hint about us. All this summer we just talked random stuffs and we somehow just enjoyed that. And we were too happy to care about anything else. Even about where all the letter writing was going to lead us to”
“But Parv”
“Lavender, and he is right neither did he ask me to be his girlfriend nor did I ask where we stood together. I didn’t even ask him if he thought we could be a couple then how did I expect that we could carry on dating or seeing each other.”
“and besides I always knew a day like this would come. In the back of my mind I always knew this wasn’t possible but yet I fuelled my wishes with those day dreams”
“…I was just being so stupid!” she cried.

Wiping off her tears after a while she spoke her voice still quivering “But you know I am still feeling so sad even when I knew that this won’t happen. The very fact that I clarified that day on the breakfast table that he hadn’t asked me to be his girlfriend shows that I knew it way back then that this isn’t possible”
“but even then I don’t know why I am feeling so low” she said her hands on the side of her head.
“you know I am just as confused as he is now”
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Hey, wonderful post!
It was a perfect amount of emotion. I could really tell how much she was confused. It was perfectly conveyed.
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Hey Harita, don't fall off your chair from the shock of me finally commenting. I read the last two chapters that you wrote since I last read your ff and I must say I'm still very much loving your ff. All the chapters are developing the story so well, and I'm pleased you have been able to keep focused on the plot of your ff and not get side tracked on other issues that would take away from the story. For example when JK delved into Hermione's outrage over Elf treatment and rights. I seen the point she was making but to me making her so obsessed with it at crucial points of the story for other matters kind of ruined the book for me. I still loved it for the plot that was going on, but I got to whenever she started into Elf rights I read through without letting it sink in. Anyway; I hope I haven't confused you with my rant, but I just wanted to let you know you are doing a tremendous job with the right amount of everything you're writing about. And also I love the emotion you put in your characters. My heart is breaking for Parvati. Maybe Em is wondering if Parvati might not want to pursue a boyfriend girlfriend relationship and is being the gentleman in letting it be her decision if they continue or not. I hope it can be worked out for them. (I'll be happy with whatever you write, it's just my thinking out loud to Parvati if I could be a soothing friend like Lav.) Great work Harita, I'll be watching for your next.
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Hey, wonderful post!
It was a perfect amount of emotion. I could really tell how much she was confused. It was perfectly conveyed.
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Thank you Rachel...
I am glad you liked it...

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Finally! I was beginning to think that you forgot me......just kidding
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Thank you Connie, I am glad that you have liked it so far. It helps me to know that I am doing justice to the character and the situation through which i am putting them in.
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This is a short post...

Chapter 22


It’s been two days since I sent Emmanuel the letter. Though I try to kid myself out thinking I am not waiting for his reply but I am I really am. And apart from that nothing else is going on well on the class front. Professor Grubly Plank is replaced by Hagrid. I saw him at the breakfast table and we soon were walking down to the ground to attend his first lecture.

Professor Hagrid seemed to be very excited about something.
“Bet he has something interesting up his sleeve” I said
“yeah and for him interesting equals dangerous to us” Lavender said as we walked towards his hut. I couldn’t agree less with her.

We all gathered around and followed professor into the forest.
And soon he began to explain about some ‘interesting’ creature which was clearly invisible to me and basically to everyone. And then he threw a piece of meat at the corner where he said that invisible thing stood.
“what’s eating that meat?” I asked
“Thestrals” said professor.
I gasped
“but-but they are supposed to be unlucky. Professor Trelawney told us that”
“oh that’s all bunch of rubbish superstitions. They are really useful. They pull the school carriages, Dumbledore takes them for long journeys”

I was standing by the tree when I felt something passed by my sides.
“I-I feel something” and pushed myself to the tree
“oh, don’t worry, they won’t harm yeh” professor said rather impatiently. He went on to ask a question when Umbridge showed her pretty toad face, ready to take on Professor Hagrid today with clip board with a parchment and quill in her hand.

“here’s professor’s dooms day” I murmured to Lavender who nodded her head and we tried concentrating all throughout the lecture trying to block away Malfoy and Pansy’s irritating laughter…
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