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Old 01-01-2011, 06:58 PM   #1 (permalink)
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"I never met my father..."

Hogwarts: October 9, 1984

A man with greasy, black hair sat at his desk- eyes closed. His office was mostly bare, but for two leather chairs in front of the mahogany desk, long dark green curtains, and a tall bookshelf shoved behind the desk. A rap came at the door before it was forced open. "Severus?" Professor McGonagall asked. The man's eyes opened. "You have a visitor." There was a short pause as he took in a breath and nodded. "Send them in."

McGonagall exited, soon replaced by a woman in a hooded, black cloak carrying a bundle of blankets. The air was still, electric, for several moments before the woman pulled back the hood on her cloak, revealing a pale face with grey eyes surrounded by flowing black hair. "Asha." he breathed.

"Severus." the woman answered plainly. "Your daughter," she gestured to the bundle in her arms. "She is to come to Hogwarts when she turns eleven, am I correct?"

He nodded solemnly. "Yes. She will come here." He glanced over at the child in yearning, attempting to get a look at her.

The woman set her eyes in a cold stare. "And no one is to know that she is your daughter?"

He shook his head. "No. No one will know." He gazed back at the baby in the woman's arms. "May I- may I see her?"

"No." The woman gave him a last cold look before putting her hood back up. She exited the room, closing the door softly behind her.

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Hmmmm, very interesting start. I love it! Your writing is very well done as I can see so far and I love how you put the dialogue in a different colour, makes it that much easier to read!

Quick note, was the asterik after Snape said Asha's name meant to be there? If so, what for?
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OOOOHHH!!! Hannah, this is fantastic!!! *sets up camp, ready to stalk the next chapter*

Normally, I don't like these whole "Daddy!Snape" FF's.... but I like how you started this. It's nice and sneaky. I think you're going to do really well with this one.
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Okay. CHAPTER TWO!

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Hogwarts Express: September 1, 1995


On the platform, Asha Pierce hugged a dark haired eleven year old to her chest. She pulled the tiny girl back to look at her face. The mother gazed into her daughter's dark eyes and smiled.

"You be a good girl now Ava." She warned.

The girl rolled her eyes, giving her mother the 'are-you-serious' face. "Mum. You're the one who's supposed to be at the hospital right now!" she exclaimed.

"Drat, you don't suppose they've noticed I'm missing do you?" Asha asked, checking her watch.

Ava rolled her eyes again, letting out a sigh. "Mum. I'll be fine. Get back to St. Mungo's before they start tracking you down."

Her mother smiled, and gave her daughter a quick kiss on the cheek. "Alright love, hurry on now before you miss the train." she turned as though about to apparate before adding, "Oh! And don't be giving Professor Dumbledore a hard time!"

"Mum. I won't, now go!" She said hurriedly.

The mother smiled and gave a quick wave. "Alright, good bye love." she said, and apparated back to the hospital.

Ava rolled her eyes, smiling to herself at her mother's foolishness. She dragged her trunk to the train, stepping on board. Making her way down the row, she finally found an empty compartment towards the back and took a seat. The tiny girl stepped up on the seat in a feeble attempt to heave her trunk into the rack, with no such luck. The compartment doors opened and in stepped a teenage boy with blond hair.

The boy gave a small smile before lifting her trunk into the rack for her. "There you are." Ava smiled back before thanking him. The older boy looked back to the hallway where two other boys were standing. "Do you mind if we sit here with you?" he asked.

She shook her head. "Not at all." The other two boys stepped in and took their seats- the boy with the blond hair taking the seat next to her.

A small smirk formed on his lips as he introduced himself. "My name is Draco Malfoy."
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OOOOOH. New chapter. Hehe. This was awesome. I love how they're nice and short... (It's something I can't do when writing. bahaha.)

I would suggest one thing though, and that's putting links to each chapter in the top post, so that new readers will be able to find the posts through other comments.
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I'll admit I'm not a fan of Snape being a Daddy nad all that but this seems different. Maybe it's the fact that you're actually a good writer and can get your ideas through

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Hogwarts Express: September 1, 1995


Ava spent the rest of the ride with the three boys and a girl that entered their compartment not too soon after she met the boys.

"And this is Crabbe and Goyle." Draco rushed, rolling his eyes. He leaned down and whispered in her ear, "Really, they're quite stupid, so you don't need to pay any mind to them. Easy to boss around though, only thing that makes them useful." He told her with a wink. "So who're you?" he asked, now talking at a normal volume.

Before Ava could answer, the door opened and a girl Draco's age walked in. The girl raised an eyebrow. "Well hello. And who is this, might I ask?" The girl glanced at Draco, then back at Ava.

"Ava Pierce, you are?" she asked, imitating the girl's expression- much to the amusement of Draco, who had to pass his snicker off as a cough.

"Pansy Parkinson." she snapped. She looked back at Draco and crossed her arms over her chest. "And why, are we sitting with an eleven year old?"

He shrugged. "She was already in our compartment so I figured I'd just let her stay. Besides, she looks like she'd make a good snake." He glanced back at Ava. "You a pureblood kid?" He asked. She nodded enthusiastically in reply. "See? What did I tell you?"

Pansy sighed and rolled her eyes. "Fine. The kid can stay." She squeezed in on the other side of Draco and sighed in acceptance.
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Hogwarts Express: September 1, 1995


For the remainder of the train ride Pansy continued to sulk as Ava basked in the boys' attention, occasionally grasping at the spotlight by throwing out a line such as "Did you see the Weasley kid gawking at Granger earlier? I swear, it's bad enough that they go to our school already, but the fact that a mudblood and a blood-traitor are practically snogging every five seconds is absolutely repulsive!" To which Draco would dismiss irritably and continue questioning his newfound mini-me.

"So look," he started, as they approached the Hogwarts Platform, "usually I don't associated with first years. However," he said with a small smirk, "I'll be willing to make an exception if you make it into Slytherin." Though it was evident on his face that he was referring to when she made it into Slytherin.

Draco shoved open the compartment door and stepped in stride with the girl. He stopped, a look of disgust on his face as a girl with bushy brown hair and a boy with violently red hair exited the compartment in front of them, murmuring amongst themselves.

"And avoid those two at all costs," Draco pointed out, talking in a much louder tone of voice than actually necessary. The redhead whirled around, a look of anger on his face.

"What was that Malfoy?!" he cried, his wand now drawn. He looked down at Ava, eyes narrowing. "Oh and I suppose this is your new apprentice? Taught her to slaughter muggleborns yet?" the boy spat. Ava glared at the boy, opening her mouth to speak. She was interrupted however, as Draco put a calm hand on her shoulder and spoke for the both of them.

"I suppose you could say that," he stated, leading the girl away. "But I'll have you know we've got big things planned Weasley. This year's going to be much, much different." And at that the two turned, walking away from the awestruck faces of Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger.

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Hogwarts: September 1, 1995


The two exited the train side by side, only splitting as they came to the platform. The calls of a man of beastly size beckoned over Ava among the other first years, while Pansy's croons gathered Draco at the carriages. He gave a groan and rolled his eyes, obnoxiously pushing past fellow students and taking special care to lodge his shoulder in the large man's elbow upon passing- to which he took no notice.

Ava gazed up at the man, slightly overwhelmed by his monstrous size, as well as the increasing number of first years. She put on a brave face, sucking in a deep breath. "Alrigh'! Gather 'round, gather 'round! All firs' years over here!" the man bellowed. A few straggling students joined the crowd before he continued. "My name's Rubeus Hagrid," he called over the din, "Groundskeeper here at Hogwarts, as well as your Care of Magical Creatures professor. Now, we're going to be crossing the lake up ahead, I suggest you take great care not to fall in," he paused for a breath, scanning the faces to make sure everybody understood. "Alrigh' now, four to a boat- two front, two back. No more or I will be docking house points," he shouted, though something in the strain of his voice and the twinkle of his eyes said he wouldn't be.

As Mr. Hagrid finished, there was a scramble for the boats. After five or so minutes they were sorted into a some-what orderly fashion, readily boarding the boats. Some pushed past others in order to keep up with their friends, however most ended up separated in the jumble of students.

Ava was one of the last to board, seated facing the castle next to a sallow faced boy with a wiry tangle of blonde hair. Two identical girls sat in front of her, each with the same long, dark hair, and wide brown eyes. The boat gave a lurch as it set for the castle, everyone inside clutching the seats for balance. The boats eased the rest of the way out, its passengers relaxing their grip on the sides.

"Some view, huh?" the boy asked quietly. The girls looked up in surprise. Up ahead was the castle. Huge, bright, and an oddly comforting sight. As though they were approaching an old friend's house, not a school.

"Yeah," one of the twin girls agreed. But besides that, no one else spoke for the rest of their painfully long voyage across the lake, making all four of them greatly relieved when the boat jerked once again, this time letting them off to enter the doors of the castle.

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This is soooo good! (I kinda hope she becomes the Lion, not the snake though! And like, disses Malfoy...)

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Great Hall: September 1, 1995


At the very front of the hall was the staff table, nearly every chair filled- including one with a rather unwanted guest, seated to the immediate right of Professor Severus Snape. That unwanted guest would be correctly entitled 'Dolores Umbridge'. The new designation of a rather haughty ministry worker did absolutely nothing to lift the man's spirits. Once again, somebody had stepped up to take his rightful place as this year's Defense Against the Dark Arts instructor. The fact that it was a ministry employee only soured his mood even further.

As the returning students filed in, Dolores put on an encouraging smile and beamed out at the students. Severus slumped in his chair, silently taking note of his returning Slytherins. Malfoy's boy was there obviously, along with his usual troupe of Crabbe, Goyle, and the latest addition of Miss Parkinson. Dolores continued beaming out at the students, though she missed the dramatic act Malfoy put on of rather blatantly insulting her. At this he had to smirk. Draco was a git. But he was crafty, and entertaining to watch. "Well," Umbridge stated, not bothering to turn away from her business of startling the students with her obscure smiling, "while it is good to see that something is causing you joy, I do insist you control what I presume are your students."

The smirk vanished, leaving only the cold hard stare in his eyes. "If they've done anything wrong then I have yet to notice," Severus replied cooly, refusing to make eye contact with the woman. She was about to respond, but was cut off as the doors burst open revealing Professor McGonagall, immediately followed by this year's round of first years. The man smiled smugly to himself, as the scroll of names was unrolled and the sorting hat began its song.

By the time it finished, he was nearly bored out of his wits already and the actual sorting still had yet to take place. A man could only watch so many of these things. Professor McGonagall took her stance by the hat and read off the first name, "Atkins, Beatrice." A girl with dark, straight hair stepped out of the line and walked to the stool, an aura of confidence seeming to radiate from her. She sat on the stool, the hat barely touching her head before screaming out "SLYTHERIN!" in that rather obnoxious tone of its.

Severus clapped along with the others of his house as the girl hurried over to take her seat. "Atkins, Roxanna." McGonagall called. An identical girl to the one before her stepped up to the stool.

"Slytherin!" Great. He had twins to deal with. He would be keeping an eye on them, especially if they were anything like the Weasley boys. Just the thought made him shudder.

The sorting continued on as usual, boring. Severus clapped along with everyone else as each child was placed, only tuning in to listen as the occasional shouts of, "SLYTHERIN!" were made. Nearly half way through he slumped back in his chair, ready for this dreadful thing to be over. "Pierce, Ava." Professor McGonagall called. Severus froze. He looked up from his seat, struggling to achieve the same bored expression as before. How...? He counted back the years. No, it couldn't be. But there it was. Almost eleven already, and there was no denying it. That was his daughter.

He watched as she timidly pushed out from the crowd and walked towards the stool. She had her mother's eyes, brown and wide, like the eyes of a deer. And her mother's narrow face and small frame. But the hair, the hair was his- dark and pin straight, barely skimming over her shoulders. And... her nose. It was small and dainty looking, though crooked slightly, as though it had been broken and never healed quite right. His nose. That one distinguishing feature. And in that instance he felt all the need to tell her who he was, and how sorry he was for never being there. But of course, he couldn't do that.

Ava slid gracefully onto the stool, pushing off the floor with the tips of her toes. McGonagall held the hat on the girl's head, never quite letting go, for if she did it would slip down past her ears. The hat was on her head, and for the longest time they just sat there. She was up there longer than anyone else. Silence stabbed through the air like pins and needles, catching on each breath he took. The hat never took this long, never. Which only spoke one thing in the mind of Severus Snape- his daughter was arguing with the sorting hat. Silently, of course, but there was no other possible way for it to take as long as it did. Even Dumbledore seemed concerned by now. And after sitting for what seemed like an eternity, the hat spoke one word. "Gryffindor."
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Hogwarts: September 1, 1995


One word echoed through the mind of Ava Pierce as the hall erupted in noise. No. This wasn't happening. She couldn't be a... no. She couldn't even think the word. From the Slytherin table, disgruntled shouts and echoing protest came from all directions. From the opposite table- her table- came shouts of joy. The other two house tables seemed at a loss for words. What the heck was going on?

Obviously, word had gotten around that she was affiliated closely with Malfoy. It was no wonder they were confused, seeing as it had been almost guaranteed that Miss Pierce was a snake. But they had been wrong. As the girl clambered from the stool, head down in shame, she had no idea where to turn. Obviously she was intended to sit with the Gryffindors. But there was no way she could bring herself to do it. A shout of protest came from the left-most table. "Professor Dumbledore! There's been a mistake!" The girl whirled around.

"Sit down Malfoy," a man hissed. He had been sitting up at the staff table with the other professors at the beginning of the sorting, but was now on his feet, trying to calm the mass uproar. He must have been the head of house.

Blinking back tears, Ava pushed her way through the crowd, taking a seat at the farthest chair from the front- all the way at the table's end. There had indeed been a mistake.

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That night, she snuck out of the dorm. Quiet as a mouse, she crept down the staircase- careful not to disturb the portraits. It took some time to find, but finally, after what must have been over half an hour, she arrived at the headmaster's study, the staircase already available and the office door ajar.

Carefully, Ava slipped up the stairs. Peering in through a slight crack between the door and the wall, she spotted the Headmaster and the same dark haired man from before. "I don't know what to say Severus," Professor Dumbledore whispered, "I have no explanation other than it was not meant to be." he paused, eyes flickering over to her hiding spot, then back at the man.

"It doesn't make sense. You don't think-" the man stopped. He glanced over at something beyond her view of the room before looking back at Dumbledore. "-I believe we have a visitor." The girl saw a smile play on the headmaster's lips.

"Indeed we do."
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Headmaster's Office: September 1, 1995


Severus watched as the timid frame of his daughter pushed open the office door. He clutched the edge of his seat, knuckles going white. "Miss Pierce," Dumbledore stated. "It's a bit late perhaps, it would not be wise to be wandering the castle at this hour. Especially seeing as you only just arrived." He gave her a soft smile and motioned the fidgeting girl to the chair in front of him, the chair immediately next to her father. "Tell me what is on your mind."

Ava did as instructed, scooting up into the large armchair. "Now," the headmaster started again, "what is it that has you up at such an hour?" She fidgeted, twisting her fingers in her lap and refusing to make eye contact. Beside her, Severus watched her carefully, agitatedly thrumming his fingers on the arm rest. Finally, the girl spoke.

"Sir," she started, "I was wondering if... if the sorting hat ever makes mistakes." The air hung still, silent. Dumbledore leaned back in his chair.

"The sorting hat does not make mistakes," he said cautiously, "though I suppose one might believe he or she belongs to another house. The sorting hat does not usually take the student's preferences into consideration," he paused, "however I do believe that an exception was made to that guideline this evening."

At that, they both had to stare. "But sir, it didn't," Ava confirmed. The Headmaster gave a knowing glance in the Potions Master's direction before continuing.

"Then I suppose it doesn't afterall."


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After his daughter had headed back off to bed, Severus stood and began to pace. "So you're saying the hat did take her opinion into consideration?" he asked. Professor Dumbledore gave a chuckle.

"Yes, in fact, I'm nearly positive." Professor Snape gave him a confused glance. The Headmaster continued. "I believe that she was up there for such a long period of time because she was arguing about her placement. Thus the hat took her strong will into consideration and placed her in Gryffindor," he smiled, eyes gleaming behind his spectacles.

The Potions Master sighed, running a hand through his hair. His daughter was on the road to becoming a self-absorbed troublemaker. Not that he had any say on the matter, she didn't even know her father was alive.

Severus stopped his pacing, sitting back down in his chair. Dumbledore reached across the desk, patting him on the shoulder. "She looks exactly like you." And at that, he had to smile.
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